Kentashi Uchiha(remake)

General Information:

Name: Kentashi Uchiha

Nickname/Alias: The Dark Lightning

Weight: 50.9 kg

Height: 166 cm

Age:14

Gender: Male

Looks:
Personality: Always reading books about Science

Weapon:
Name: Kusanagi (Grasscutter)
History:The legendary sword Kusanagi is the personal weapon of the Sannin Orochimaru. When unneeded the sword is kept within Orochimaru's body. When he wishes to utilize it, he will open his mouth wide and have it extend from his chest cavity through his throat

Clan Information

Clan Name: Uchiha

Kekei Genkai:

Clan Symbol:

Clan History: Uchiha clan

The Uchiha clan (うちは一族, Uchiha Ichizoku; Literally meaning "Uchiha family") was once considered to be one of the most powerful clans in Konohagakure, now almost extinct from the events of the Uchiha Clan Massacre, with only two known living members remaining, both being missing-nin.

The Uchiha were infamous for their especially strong and natural aptitude for anything combat-related, highly powerful chakra, and their proficiency in fire jutsu, having created several and using them more skilfully than any other. Their signature jutsu was the Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique. Clan members are not recognized as adults by the rest of the clan until they can successfully use this.

The Uchiha clan were also most famous for their powerful Sharingan, a Kekkei Genkai which gives them the ability to see the "colors" of chakra and copy their opponent's skills, among other benefits like: enhanced visual perception, the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu, and Ninjutsu. They are most respected and feared for implementing hypnosis (Eye Genjutsus), which can trap a person inside an illusion through direct eye contact. Only a select handful of clan members were capable of accessing this power.

Uchiha is another way of pronouncing "uchiwa," a paper fan, which is the Uchiha clan's symbol. Uchiwa can be used to fan flames, making the flame hotter — referring to the fact that the Uchiha is a clan of fire-jutsu users.

It is said that one of the ancestors of the Uchiha clan founded the Konoha Military Police, and the organization itself largely consisted of members of the Uchiha clan until recently. However, based on Madara's story, the Second Hokage founded the organization as a sign of trust, but was really a method of keeping the Uchiha in check and out of Konoha's governing affairs.
The Uchiha Clan before the founding of Konoha
The Uchiha Clan before the founding of Konoha

Currently, there are only two known surviving members of the clan: Sasuke Uchiha and Akatsuki mastermind Madara Uchiha, who is the clan founder himself. After obtaining the Mangekyo Sharingan by killing his best friend Shisui Uchiha, Itachi proceeded to slaughter the rest of the clan. Of his family, Itachi only spared Sasuke, claiming to feel that he was not worth killing. However, this was merely a facade, as the real reason to this is because Itachi cared for his brother too much. Madara Uchiha later states that all Itachi has done was to protect Sasuke. Although all the details have not been revealed, he explains that the Uchiha Clan was beginning to get rebellious and was planning a coup d'etat against Konoha. This suspicion was supported by the fact that Uchiha members, particularly those that have the Sharingan, can control the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox. To assure such suspicions, the Third Hokage and the elders decided to station a spy among them. The spy was Itachi. By doing this, the Third was able to keep tabs on the clan and when things were soon getting out of hand, Itachi sought help from Madara in assisting him in slaying the rest of his clan members. Sasuke was the only one spared from the massacre. Itachi has told Sasuke that the Uchiha clan's Sharingan has some special and seemingly dark, ultimate purpose. When Itachi died from his illness, only two members of the clan remain.




Rank Information:

Rank: still chuunin

Village: Leaf

Skill Information: Curse Seal,the skin turns into Blue and have to big dragon wings.

Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Weaponry.

Elemental Affinity:
Main:Lightning
Sub: Fire

Special Characteristics:His Phoenix blood makes him manipulate fire


Jutsus:

BL:

Name: Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique
Type: Offensive, Short range (0-5m)
Rank: B
Description: This jutsu sends multiple balls of fire at a target. It is also possible to hide shuriken within the fireballs, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. For the most part, however, this jutsu is used as a distraction.

Name:Fire Release Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Type: C-rank, Offensive, Close range (0-5m)
Element: Fire
Multiple balls of fire are sent at the target. It is also possible to hide shurikens within the fireballs, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack.

Name: Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Type: Offensive, Mid-range (5-10m)[
Rank: C
Description:The user breathes fire along a cord or any other type of long object. While the technique is shown in the anime to be even larger and more devastating than Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique (and being able to melt rock)

Name: Sōfūshasan no Tachi, 操風車三ノ大刀, literally "Manipulating Windmill Triple Blades"
Type: C-rank, Offensive, Mid-range (5-10m)
Element: Fire
Kenzaki learns it from Sasuke. Utilizing the abilities of the Sharingan, the user is able to control three Windmill Shuriken which have wire cords attached to them (two held with the hands and one with the mouth) and manipulate their paths to tie the opponent to a nearby large object, binding them.

Name : Mythical Burning Flame
Rank: B
Description : The tomoe spins as the uchiha does handsigns and releases a spiralling flame of firefrom the mouth that causes major damage


Name: Shadow Shuriken Technique
Type: Chuunin, Offensive, Mid to long range (5+m)
Element: None
Description:he user of this technique throws multiple large shuriken in such a way that the first shuriken hides the subsequent ones by blocking the line of sight. To the target, it appears as if only one shuriken was thrown


My Sharingan:

Sharingan Effects:
Boosts major speed
Can see major speed
Can see handseals
Can copy higher ninjutsus
Can make bodyflicker

Sharingan Jutsus:

Name:Copy Wheel Eye
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Description:The Sharingan is a special type of pupil that naturally occurs in all members of the Uchiha clan, though not all of them ever discover it. The Sharingan allegedly evolved from the Byakugan and grants the user a number of abilities. It is a dōjutsu (pupil technique). The Sharingan's first and most well known ability is to memorize any technique that it is a witness to. It can memorize ninjutsu (ninja techniques), genjutsu (illusionary techniques), and taijutsu (hand-to-hand techniques) with perfect accuracy and allow the user to use the techniques, as long as they have the necessary resources to do so. Second, it is capable of a unique brand of hypnosis that involves suggesting actions and thoughts to the opponent. Third, it can see through genjutsu, the level of which is possibly dependent on the user's skill. Fourth, it has the ability to predict (and copy) an opponent's movement as well as allowing sight of fast moving objects with great clarity.

The weakness of the Sharingan, in Kakashi's case, is that it drains chakra quickly. In order to copy a jutsu, one has to have the physical ability to perform the technique. For example, they have to have the needed amount of chakra, stamina, agility, and/or strength in order to perform said technique. In addition to physical skill, the Sharingan cannot copy any other bloodline abilities or summon a creature the user has not made a contract with because the user of the sharingan has to have the same blood of the other summoning user. In Itachi's and Sasuke's case, their chakra is still drained, but incredibly more slowly, due to the fact that they have the actual Kekkei genkai of the Uchiha clan.

The Sharingan does not automatically appear from birth in a user; instead, it will usually appear when the user is in a life threatening situation, where the power of the Sharingan will save the user. After this first appearance, the user can then call up the Sharingan any time he or she pleases. (Due to its unique nature, Kakashi's Sharingan seems to be "permanently on", and thus he covers it except during heated battles, to conserve chakra.) The power of the Sharingan is judged through the number of tomoe in the person's eye. It is not unheard of for a Sharingan user to have different amounts of tomoe in each eye. For example, Sasuke's Sharingan initially had two tomoe in one eye and one in the other. Eventually his Sharingan evolved to two tomoe in each eye, then three. An "adult" and fully matured Sharingan has three tomoe in each eye.

Genjutsu:

Name: Mirror Heaven - Earth Change
Description: [Performed with the eyes] It reflects an low leveled genjutsu used on the user back at the opponent.

Name : Past Encounter
Rank: B
Requirements: Tomoe 3 Sharingan
Description : A unique genjutsu that where the user can show their memories to another person , can be used to give information to another person or torment them if used in the correct way

Name : Spiked Torture
Rank: Unknown
Requirements: Tomoe 3 Sharingan
Description : A genjutsu where the user makes it seem like 5 small spiked rock pillars come out of nowhere and stab the user deeply , of course no psychical damage is done but causes a large amount of mental strain


Fire Jutsus:

Name : Will Of Fire
Rank : B
Requirements : must be part of the leaf village
Description : THe user first does handsigns and focuses fire chakra to their mouth, they then release the fire as hundreds of leaf shaped blasts, these leaf shaped fire blasts causes severe burns

Shadow string Hand jutsu
Rank: B
Descriptoin: Makes strings from hand in different purposes. We can make a very hard strings the blade cant cut. And we can make as many as we can.


Taijutsu Moves:

Name: Shishi Rendan, 獅子連弾, literally "Lion Combo"
Type: C-rank, Offensive, Close range (0-5m)
Description:The result of Uchiha Sasuke copying Rock Lee's similar combo. While not able to completely emulate Rock Lee's agility and power, the Sharingan allowed him to gain the ability to push himself to achieve a similar effect, and the result was a copied Kage Buyo followed by a back of the hand strike to the face, a powerful punch to the stomach, finishing off with a spin-around kick that lands the left heel on the center of the opponent. It clearly isn't as powerful or devasting as Lee's Lotus techniques, but also isn't nearly as dangerous to perform, and is quite effective against most targets.

Name:Hayabusa Otoshi - Peregrine Falcon Drop
Rank: Unknown
Type:Close (0m ~ 5m),Attack
Description: While at an elevated position, Sasuke will grab his opponent from behind. Firmly locking himself to their back, he will lock his ankles to their neck to get their body rigid. He will then plant them head first into the ground. Essentially a belly to back piledriver, the move can provide a great concussion to his opponent's head.

Name: Konoha Dai Senpuu - Leaf Great Whirlwind
Rank:B
Description: Konoha Dai Senpuu is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Leaf ninja Rock Lee. Like the normal Senpuu, Lee uses his quickness and agility to deliver a series powerful spinning kicks to his opponent.

Name: Birth Of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Attack
The user in this mode , first starts running around the opponent the speed being so great that lightning appears and forms a lightning tornado around the opponent , the opponent then rushes and strikes the opponent into the air, the user appearing to be a flash of light from the extreme speed , each strike also electrocutes the opponent from the lightning being created by the users speed, the user continuously strikes the opponent before striking them one final time into the ground with lightning tornado collapsing onto the opponent delivering the final electrocution

Other Techniques:

Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
Rank: B
Type:Supplementary
Description:yatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them.

Name: Fire Replacement Jutsu
Rank: unknown
Type: Supplementary
Description: User turns into a flame. This jutsu is best at scaping.

Name:Kuchiyose • Raikou Kenka - Summoning • Lightning Blade Creation
Rank: B
Type:Supplementary
Description: Ninjutsu summoning technique utilized by Uchiha Sasuke. Before going into battle, Sasuke placed two summoning marks on his wrists. From these wrists he could quickly summon multiple bladed weapons, including various forms of shuriken.

Name:Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Description:Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name:Soushuriken no Jutsu - Manipulate Shuriken Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Description: After hurling his giant shuriken,the user can control their path and movements by using wires which run from the shuriken itself back to his arm. Because his opponent will think they are normal shuriken, they will be off guard about their ability to redirect themselves.

Im fiinished!!

Just one thing, post your name under the Active Sign-up Sheet under Anouncements so we can inform you when we are starting some reconstruction and so we can save your app. and such.

Looks- Picture and paragraph please... detail is key.
More detail in personality.
More in History. It should be in Arcs, Acad/Genin/Chuunin.

You can't have three specialties, take one out.

Ranks are E-S not Acad-Kage. So please change them from Chuunin to a letter

This is an exapmle of why I don't usually approve things. I always miss something(s).

Haha.
I'm an app nazi, it's okay. I just have no life so I have the time to read over everything individually.

Lightning Jutsus:

Name: Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: B
Description: a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes lightning to create a Kage Bunshin clone. Because it is a Kage Bunshin, the Raiton version shares the ability to interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Raiton Kage Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into its natural lightning state. Like in other Lightning Element attacks, should the target come into contact with the electricity, they will be momentarily stunned.

Name: Lightning Strike Armor
Rank: B
Description: a Ninjutsu technique many lightning based jutsu, this technique is used in conjunction with his katana. Drawing his katana together,user a spin the blades to generate a disk of lightning which will then pour down to cover his body and his katana. This electricity will envelope is body in a protective armor which will harm anyone who dares strike him directly.

Name:Raging Thunder (Raijingu Sandaa)
Rank: B
Description: Raging Thunder is a technique which uses the power stone to create a powerful barrier around user and his katana. This barrier allows user to take an attack directly and in turn use the Gelel power to overwhelm his oncoming foe and attack them back.

Name: Kuchiyose • Raikou Kenka - Summoning • Lightning Blade Creation
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
Description:. Before going into battle,user placed two summoning marks on his wrists. From these wrists he could quickly summon multiple bladed weapons, including various forms of shuriken.

Name: Unamed Lightning Weapon Manipulation
Rank: Unknown
Type: supplementary
Description: Uses weapon are equipped with lightning.

Name:Lightning Screen Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Offense,Lightning
After performing a row of hand-seals, the user places his hands on the ground and in front of him a large and powerful field of lightning erupts from the ground and lasts for a few seconds before dissipating. This field not only shocks anyone unlucky enough to touch it, it also does a good job of deflecting lightning techniques, not to mention anything involving metal.

Name:Static Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
After a row of hand-seals, several electrical fields erupt from the user's hands and form into vaguely humanoid shapes. A simple genjutsu is used to then make the fields look like the user or anyone else the user chooses. Although the clones can't exert any physical force, if an opponent comes into contact with it, it dissipates and heavily shocks the him or her.

Name:Blade of the Lightning God
rank: B
Type: Offensive
The user focuses chakra into either arm and collects ambient electricity into a tight lattice around the forearm and hand. By compressing the electricity and chakra together, the user forms a single-use electrical blade. While the blade has no real substance and thus cannot block or parry, its side-effect more than makes up for it - the area around that which is struck by the blade will be instantly shocked numb.

Name: Flying Thunder God Technique
Type: C, Supplementary, All ranges
Description: To activate this jutsu, the user needs a special seal or "jutsu formula" (術式, jutsu-shiki) to mark the destination. After this is done, the user enters a dimensional void that almost instantaneously transport himself to the location of the seal. Kenzaki applied the formula in advance to weapons such as kunai. By giving one such kunai to a person, he can immediately teleport to that person at any time. He can also apply the mark to a touched area, such as his opponent or some other surrounding feature.

I will not approve an Uchiha with such little detail in their application, no matter the rank.

More detail in personality,Likes, Dislikes, how he treats the other gender, how he treats the same gender. Is he respectful? Quiet? Loyal? etc.

More detail in History. In Arcs with at least a paragraph each. Childhood/Academy/Genin/Chuunin.

Also, explain how you obtained your level sharingan, your curse seal, and how you survived the Uchiha Massacre in the history.

History/Background Story:

Kentashi's Parents: There was an Uchiha named Uchiha Matsuda who left Leaf village before the Uchiha massacre. This person is a member of the Red Crow Ninjas,a group of missing-nin who has a goal to kill all strong ninjas in different countries. This person is a master of fire and earth jutsus. Uchiha Matsuda was assigned in an operation to kill a jounin named Senju Raijira. At his mission,a woman named Hiwatari Hikari,a skillful ninja who has a job for searching Red Crow members. Matsuda refused to fight the woman and continue to his mission but the woman really wants to fight Matsuda.At that moment,a missing-nin named Rouga located them. Rouga is one of the person who killed a thousand lives and wanted to all countries. They fought the missing-nin together and they succed. Matsuda and Hikari fall in love at each other. Until Uchiha Matsuda decided to have a new life and leave the group. The leader of the Red Crow Group found it out so he command some of the ninjas to kill Matsuda and Hikari. When Matsuda found it by an honest partner from Red Crow,he decided to send his wife and child to a far country and he decided to fight the Red Crow members. Hikari arrived at the country called Konoha and she borne his healthy boy child in a house of two old couples. Unfortunately, Hikari didnt made it. Before her death,she said "Treat my son as your own,give him a beautiful life and name him as Uchiha Kentash"i. Same as his wife,Matsuda died fighting the two Red Crow members. Few months later,the Red Crow Hideout was destroyed by a group of Jounin of Konoha and their leader,Nightmare commited suicide when he realize he cant make it anymore.

Who is Kentashi??
Kentashi never play along at his neighbor instead he reads at his books. He liked reading books than listening to his own teacher. He is always alone and care to train himself. At free times,he is composing songs and making comics. He always hate household chores but he loves to reseach some things in a his library. Kentashi grew up lazy but smart. Kentashi always train everytime finishes eating.

Genin/Childhood life:
The people who adopt Kentashi was afraid to name him as an Uchiha because the clan massacre. So they named the boy Hitomi Kentashi. This boy is an intellegent kid. He learns to speak and read at three years old. He controls chakra at four years old,and he knows throwing shuriken at four too. At five,he began to read books about ninjas and how to perform basic techniques. At six,he learned a fireball jutsu which impress his neighbors and his poster parents. at six years old,he learned taijutsu at reading books and he knew how to handle kunai. At seven,he became Genin,when he had a special training,his sensei discovered his Sharingan. His sensei was very surprised at looking at his eyes. His sensei,Shugo Mikatzu remembered the Uchiha clan massacre. Mikatzu decided not to tell Kentashi about his eyes instead he talked to his parents. He said not to worry about Kentashi and changed his surname to Uchiha. Mikatzu explained everything to Kentashi and the kid acted like he doesnt care but deep inside he wanted to find his real parents. At ten years old Kentashi left the Konoha by finding his own parents.

Away from Konoha:
Kentashi was expert on many types of fireball not by training but by reading books. He always believe that he can ive on his own in short,he overestimated himself. At his journey,he met two Akatsuki memebes named Rin and Yubasa that is finding Jinchuurikis. Rin, the vampire wanted to bite the kid for blood purpose. Kentashi activated his Sharingan. But Yubasa act like doesnt care. A fast lightning sparks appear who saved Kentashi. the kid was so amazed. The two asked,"Who the hell are you??". The person said "Im Uchiha Sasuke". The strange guy killed the two Akatsuki. Suddenly,the guy looked at Kentashi's eyes."Sharingan??". Uchiha Sasuke ask so many questions to the kid like how did he survived the massacre and who is his parents. But Kentashi didnt know the answeres all the guy asked. Sasuke suggested to trained Kentashi and the kid cant believe it and said "YEs!!". The Uchiha trained Kentashi and teached many fire and lightning jutsus. Until Kentashi reached the Tomoe 3 sharingan and mastered katana handling in three years of training. Uchiha Sasuke gave his Grasscutter (Kusanagi) to Kentashi and said "Be strong because your an Uchiha,I cant train you forever for Im not a good person. Someday you will obtain the Mangekyou-Sharingan that will proove that Uchiha is the strongest clan in the world. Be strong and defeat me. Go back now to the place where someone is thinking of you, and thats your home,the Konoha." Kentashi smiled and said "I promise,Uchiha Sasuke". Sasuke returned to Konoha with full courage. He was 13 when he returned Konoha. He take the Chuunin exam after two days of his return.

The Dark Seal: Kentashi was on his way to Konoha. Orochimaru was revived by Yakushi Kabuto at a very secret hideout. Orochimaru wanted a plan for his revenge to Konoha and to the person who killed him,Uchiha Sasuke. The two was on their way to different country,finding some strong ninjas for their next attack. Theyve met Kentashi along the way. Kentashi seen his face and said "Your Orochimaru!! The past Sannin of Konoha!! For believing at his abilities,he attacked the two but Kabuto blocked and fight the kid. He activated his Sharingan. Orochimaru was impressed and said "An Uchiha! I never knew theres an Uchiha at my sight". Orochimaru laughed and said"Another Vessel!!". Kabuto get backed and said "His master at Taijutsu,Lord Orochimaru!!". Orochimaru gaved Kentashi a cursed seal. "I know you will return at me!!". The two left Kentashi at the way.When Kentashi waked up. He continue his way to Konoha.

Chuunin: Kentashi became Chuunin and a squad captain. He defeated three Akatsuki on his three years service as a Chuunin. The Akatsuki, bandits and other evil person known him as the DARK LIGHTNING. Now,he has a very high price at he Bounty station. He was recruited to Akatsuki four times but he always refused it. Now,he was duscouraged at his idol when he knew that his idol,Uchiha Sasuke became a popular member of the Akatsuki.Now,his ready to became a Jounin to do the promise.

Your CS info looks like level two...is tone it down to simply boosting your stats and maybe having symbols across your skin.

finished!!

In the opinion(not trying to be rude), Orichimaru is still dead and until the show says he is alive, you'll probably have to think of a diffrent way to explain how you got the curse seal.

Why dont you try to read it all??

The Dark Seal: Kentashi was on his way to Konoha. Orochimaru was revived by Yakushi Kabuto at a very secret hideout. Orochimaru wanted a plan for his revenge to Konoha and to the person who killed him,Uchiha Sasuke. The two was on their way to different country,finding some strong ninjas for their next attack. Theyve met Kentashi along the way. Kentashi seen his face and said "Your Orochimaru!! The past Sannin of Konoha!! For believing at his abilities,he attacked the two but Kabuto blocked and fight the kid. He activated his Sharingan. Orochimaru was impressed and said "An Uchiha! I never knew theres an Uchiha at my sight". Orochimaru laughed and said"Another Vessel!!". Kabuto get backed and said "His master at Taijutsu,Lord Orochimaru!!". Orochimaru gaved Kentashi a cursed seal. "I know you will return at me!!". The two left Kentashi at the way.When Kentashi waked up. He continue his way to Konoha.

It says that he was revived by Yakushi Kabuto..

You can't do that though.
There is no intelligence stating that Kabuto knew the Resurrection jutsu, or Chiyo's technique. You can't simply create new abilities for cannon characters your aren't RP'ing as. Nor can you bring cannon characters into your history in a way that would change their own history.

Hahahah..Sorry for mistakes..Hehe..I guess Im not good at putting Biographies but Im really trying. Hahahah..
I think Ill just change it again. Heheheh.

Any Questions again?????????

Name: Flying Thunder God Technique
Type: C, Supplementary, All ranges
Description: To activate this jutsu, the user needs a special seal or "jutsu formula" (術式, jutsu-shiki) to mark the destination. After this is done, the user enters a dimensional void that almost instantaneously transport himself to the location of the seal. Kenzaki applied the formula in advance to weapons such as kunai. By giving one such kunai to a person, he can immediately teleport to that person at any time. He can also apply the mark to a touched area, such as his opponent or some other surrounding feature.


4th Hokage's technique too OP .

Kensaki....
Lets start with something simple..
If u want your app to be good & fine...& want it to be approved by the mods..

Just remember two things:
-you are a chunnin...you cant have OP Jutsus & stuff..
-dont make your app indicating that you godmode!

If you understand these two main things..you can have your app approved in no time..
Just review your app and remove all the wierd and OP stuff..the other mods mentioned!!

P.S:- I just didn't want to be rude....that's why i made this look simple...:)
Please Fix your app, dude!

Kitsuke Maru wrote:

Name: Flying Thunder God Technique
Type: C, Supplementary, All ranges
Description: To activate this jutsu, the user needs a special seal or "jutsu formula" (術式, jutsu-shiki) to mark the destination. After this is done, the user enters a dimensional void that almost instantaneously transport himself to the location of the seal. Kenzaki applied the formula in advance to weapons such as kunai. By giving one such kunai to a person, he can immediately teleport to that person at any time. He can also apply the mark to a touched area, such as his opponent or some other surrounding feature.


4th Hokage's technique too OP .

Not to mention that its an S-rank...>.>

Hahaha..tnx..for corrections guys!! Im trying..Just tell the things that should be corrected.

Im finished... Just correct me at my mistakes..dudez..

Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Weaponry.


Too many skill specialty you can only have 2. But you can have more in RP, you need to learn the other 2 so pick what will stay.

Finished!!

Name : Past Encounter
Rank: B
Requirements: Tomoe 3 Sharingan
Description : A unique genjutsu that where the user can show their memories to another person , can be used to give information to another person or torment them if used in the correct way

Name : Spiked Torture
Rank: Unknown
Requirements: Tomoe 3 Sharingan
Description : A genjutsu where the user makes it seem like 5 small spiked rock pillars come out of nowhere and stab the user deeply , of course no psychical damage is done but causes a large amount of mental strain


Because you removed your specialty Genjutsu, you won't be able to use C-rank and up Genjutsus. But since your an Uchiha you can use C and below. The second genjutsu is categorized as B-Rank or A-Rank. So you'll have to remove those.


Name: Fire Replacement Jutsu
Rank: unknown
Type: Supplementary
Description: User turns into a flame. This jutsu is best at scaping.

I know this would be OVERUSED at escaping anything anytime.