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PostSubject: Kaleb Barbrey-Kal   Kaleb Barbrey-Kal Icon_minitimeSun 28 Jun 2009, 5:33 am

General Information:
Name:Kaleb Barbrey

Nickname/Alias: Kal
Weight: 135 Pounds

Height: 6"3

Age: 19

Gender:Male

Looks: Like Avatar
Personality: He acts like he dont care what happens to people

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Clan Name: (What is your clan's name?)

Kekei Genkai: (What is your clan's kekei genkai?)

Clan Symbol: (If your clan has a symbol post a picture here)

Clan History: (Write down our clan's history. Add as much detail as possible!)


Rank Information:
Rank:Missing nin

Village: Akatsuki

Skill Information:
Skill Specialty:Ninjutsu/Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity:Lightning/Fire

Special Characteristics:Large Chakra Reserves,Master of body flickering,Master with a Ninjato
Jutsu
Lightning Ninjato
No Rank
Lightning
Kaleb flows his Lightning based chakrai Current through a katana in a manner similar to the Flying Swallow technique. The radiating and Screaming blade can easily cut through steel. Furthermore, the body of the person cut by the sword their chakra goes crazy.
The sword is 45" long and weighs 4 pounds and i is a ninja word used by the samurais in the old days.
it is a double edged stright blade with a red tint o the dlade the handle is a foot long which is kinda black with silver markings on it which indicates it caould only be held bykaleb,but when hit with the blade they use the ability to control their chakra which cuts them off from tecniques for 10 minutes


Body Flicker Technique
D Rank
No Element
This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and their intended destination. Shisui Uchiha was feared as "Shisui of the Body Flicker" (瞬身のシスイ, Shunshin no Shisui), likely referring to this techni

Raiton:lightning overcombustion
S Rank
Lightning
A variation on a regular Raiton move developed by Kaleb during his two-and-a-half year training of Lightning, this jutsu allows the user to generate focused electrically charged chakra from his body, instead of concentrating it in his hand. Because the electricity is focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead only makes them lose control of their chakra. By sending the current into the weapons Kaleb can makes opponents lose their control of their chakra from a touch of the weapon. Kaleb can also channel the electricity through metallic weapons like his Ninjato sword, increasing their cutting power, as well as making body parts cut by them forcing charka to go crazy.

Lightning Release Shadow Clone
Unknown
Lightning
This technique allows the user to make a shadow clone infused with lightning. Because it is a shadow clone, it is able to perform jutsu and interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. If the clone is injured, it will revert to its natural lightning-state, at the same time electrocuting whatever it is touching.

Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
C-rank
After performing the necessary hand seals, a ninja inhales air via their mouth and, utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally (as evidenced by Kakashi Hatake's ability to use the jutsu without burning his mask). The Uchiha clan uses the technique as a "coming of age" technique. This technique apparently requires more than average chakra reserves and most Genin should not be able to do this technique.

Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
B-rank
Fire
The user to fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent. The technique appears to require a lot of chakra to use, as Sasuke had to activate level two of his cursed seal to use the technique. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, which Sasuke does to perform Kirin,by sending the fire up in the sjy the clouds heat up and turns it into a lightning storm by the fire and water making lightning

Kirin
s-Rank
Lightning
Kirin is an extremely powerful, one-shot lightning technique that strikes in the blink of an eye. The user draws lightning directly from thunder clouds to supplement the power of his or her strike, and controls it with chakra. Because the technique uses natural lightning as opposed to elemental chakra, its power easily outmatches all other Lightning Releases. However, the extreme preparation time required also decreases the technique's efficiency. This technique in the absence of active thunder clouds requires Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique or other such techniques to produce the necessary storm conditions to initiate it.

Lightning Destruction
Unknown rank
lightning
The user places his hands to the ground after converting their chakra to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of lightning that cuts through the ground towards the target. The shape of the bolt is a triangular figure with the base in front of the user and the tip headed towards the opponent. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates with enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.

Yellow Flash Speed Burst
B-Rank
Kaleb dashes toward his enemy with such high speed that he looks like a blur and hits them as he passes them. Then, he stops behind them and slashes them on the back with his lightning ninjato.

Yellow Flash Super Spiral
B-Rank
Kaleb dashes toward his enemy and kicks them in the stomach. He then slides behind them and kicks them again in such a way that they fly into the air.then kaleb body flickers behind him and slices them wiht his lightning ninjato

Triple Dynamic Entry
Offensive
Kaleb uses Dynamic Entry on the opponent and then appears behind them to use it again. They are blasted into the air where kaleb uses a third Dynamic Entry to knock the enemy to the ground with great force and speed.then landing on them and slicing them with the lightning ninjato.

Strong Fist
Unknown rank
Strong Fist is kaleb's characteristic fighting style, the purpose of which is to cause external damage and break bones. which he mixes with lightning based chakra to hit harder


Kaleb stands there looking out into an open field"Where could it be,Imust find that flower for my mother"s grave"Kaleb look's down,Thinking he will not find the flower he need's,Then Kaleb teleports into the left half of the feild searching the ground.After two hours of looking he finnaly found The Blue rose he was looking for,so he teleports back to his mothers grave in the village he's not allowed to be in and sets the flower down on the grave and looked up and sees three anbu ninja coming towards him."damn why can't they leave me alone"the ninja finnaly got to him and tried to kill kaleb but instead it happened the other way after 30 second he killed the anbu captain and two lower rank ninjas"im glad i killed you three you see im not the one to take lightly"kaleb then diisapears into the mist heading for The akastuki base which he calls home..


[b]kid arc:when kaleb was three his parents was killed by rogue ninja from the leaf village,which he felt very srong willed towards his family so there ownout he made a packt to himself to evenge their deaths,so he trained by hisself becuase no one really wanted to talk to him because he was so gloomy and quiet they thought he was a freak..then he started Acaemy school....

Acaemy arc:Kaleb entered the Academy only on luck he failed every test he took but every test that involved fighting he passed with the highest grades so in the second year of the academy he devolped his own thinking skills which made him one of the strongest kids in the school.but still no one liked him because of his atitude towards people,and when it was come to pass to become a Genin he proved all of them wrong,the said he would not pass and yet he was the highest scorer in the academy...

Genin arc:afetr kaleb became a genin he gained some respect from other genin and jounin ninjas so there on out he sarted training with jounins to up his skill after he defeated 3 jounin that tried to ambush hi in a forest from sound he thought it would be a good idea to train harder to become a genin so after that he talked to anko about becomeing a chuunin she said he would have to take the chuunin exam so he did and he went un defeated all the way through it so from there on out he was known as the mist strongest chuunin....

chuunin arc:Kaleb was now ne of the most strongest ninja in his village and was friends with most people and he started training with weapons and the body flicker move so he mastered weapond and the body flicker technique and finnalay was ready to take on the jounin role after three years of training he was ready but got put in jail because someone said something about his family who died and he fliped out and put the man in the hospital so after he got out of jail he had to wait another year before trien to be jounin,so instead of taking the jounin test he went straight up ti the mizukage and was granted Jounin rank...

Jounin arc:after Kaleb became jounin he was ready to go to the leaf to find the three ninja who killed his family so after that he got all of his stuff togehter to leave and the mizukage stopped him sayying that if i didnt go he would make him anbu kaleb refused and was threw back into jail which there he met some good pople and they taught each other some jutsu and oher need to know stuff about this world so when got out he went into a a tournament to prove to veryone he was still the strongest in the village then the mizukage had gotten mad at kalebs atitude and requested for anbu to kill him but they didnt t follow through they just dided instead so kaleb told the mizukage if he wanted him dead to do it hisself and he was exiled from the village and now he is looking for the akatsuki to join them to take reveng on the two villages


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PostSubject: Re: Kaleb Barbrey-Kal   Kaleb Barbrey-Kal Icon_minitimeSun 28 Jun 2009, 4:35 pm

DECLINED for now, add a little more history and it would probably be best if you added a second element instead of just lightning
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PostSubject: Re: Kaleb Barbrey-Kal   Kaleb Barbrey-Kal Icon_minitimeSun 28 Jun 2009, 4:36 pm

you can't have th Kusanagi sword, it belongs to Sasuke.

overcombustion it to powerful, you cannot paralyze people through the ground, if you were to put electricity into the ground it would dissipate harmlessly

and we don not allow teleportation, so to say on the site. body flicker jutsu is allowed, but please remove "Master of teleportation"

also, please describe ninjato
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PostSubject: Re: Kaleb Barbrey-Kal   Kaleb Barbrey-Kal Icon_minitimeSun 28 Jun 2009, 4:45 pm

remove "Master of teleportation" and the Kusanagi sword. explaing how long overcombustion will paralyze the person, and explain what a ninjato is
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PostSubject: Re: Kaleb Barbrey-Kal   Kaleb Barbrey-Kal Icon_minitimeSun 28 Jun 2009, 4:47 pm

ninjato is a ninja sword
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PostSubject: Re: Kaleb Barbrey-Kal   Kaleb Barbrey-Kal Icon_minitimeSun 28 Jun 2009, 4:48 pm

i know that, but not everyone else does, please put a short description, what it is, how long it is, roughtly how much it weighs, that kind of info
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PostSubject: Re: Kaleb Barbrey-Kal   Kaleb Barbrey-Kal Icon_minitimeSun 28 Jun 2009, 6:12 pm

please put your description under "special characteristics" and add in a little more description, such as is it a curved blade, straight, double edged, etc. and if you can please add in a picture of one.

your jutsu seem fine, but for overcombustion, please add in for how long it disrupts the targets chakra and to what extent it is disrupted, such as are jutsu weakened or can the not use their chakra at all. also, all s-rank jutsu have some drawback, such as a negative effect on the user, so please add in something.

also, we like a longer history. such as one paragraph for each part of your ninja life. one for genin, one for chunnin, and one for jounin
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