Hachi

General Information:

Name: Hachi

Nickname/Alias: The Mechanized Angel

Weight: 120lbs

Height: 5 feet

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Looks:

Spoiler:

Hachi almost always wears an outfit designed and crafted by his mother that was a panda outfit that looked much like kankuros outfit. The ears were a top the head just like a normal panda the outfit covering the whole body in the white and black fashion of a panda fur. Hachi obtained this outfit at a young age and never changed his outfit just because he liked it even at a young age. Hachi has also has large mechanical wings attached to nerves in his body allowing him to actually fly with them. Each wing is about the same size as hachi's body and are very hard to break. Being a hyuga his eyes are white but they seem to have a blackish tent to them if they are looked into very closely. When he activates his byakugan the black undertone is much more visible then normal making his eyes seem almost gray. His hair is rather long going down to his feet almost large and spiked (like super saiyan 3), Hachi loves his long hair mostly because it is naturally spiky like it is and also because he has been growing it since he was a small child. Hachi hides his long hair in his panda outfit it hardly ever being seen.

Personality: Barbecued Pork Bun Obsession: Hachi has been obsessed with barbecued pork buns since he was a small child. These delicious steamed buns where once his favorite thing to eat but they have turned into his only meal but he has a very fast metabolism allowing him to eat as many as he wants and still stay very slim. He also somehow has stayed very healthy even though he has eaten a large amount of these buns. Hachi even carries them along with him where ever he is going even when he just traveling short distances. He at first just bought them in bulk and kept them but that began to get boring and disgusting being that if he didn't eat them soon they would become very mushy and old so he had to find a perfect recipe for them. After traveling around from village to village trying the ones that had barbecued pork buns. Hachi actually did come across a very incredibly nice tasting bun but it seemed different which was when he found out it had beef in it. He payed for the recipe and held on to it while he continued to look for all pork recipes. He came across someone who sold very nice pork buns and decided to mix recipes. He finally found created a perfect recipe and it has became his only food and he has actually created his own farm with pigs and cows so that he could make the barbecued steamed buns.

Battle Attitude: During battle hachi loves to torture and have fun with this enemies. Using his large amount of knowledge about the human body he can find the spot that causes enemies most pain and continually attack that area for his own amusement. Hachi prefers to toy with his enemies before he kills them just to keep him amused some battle becoming so boring to him that he left leaves fights which is why he has been held back from advancing in some ranks even though he had the skill. Hachi is very skilled at setting trapped and also is a skilled stealth fighter even though his clan is mostly close range he prefers to fight at long range.

Out of Battle Attitude: Hachi loves to argue and laugh at people when they are hurt or falls even when it isn't funny. Hachi prefers to be on his own but he has actually been able to make friends that are just like him. Hachi does has a soft side when talking about some subjects or when he is very close to the person he is talking to he can sound like a softy but there is a thin line between anger and kind and politeness for him.

Clan Information

The Hyuga clan (日向一族, Hyūga Ichizoku; Literally meaning "Hyūga family") is one of the oldest and most powerful clans in Konohagakure. All members born into the family possess the Byakugan, a kekkei genkai that gives them extended fields of vision and the ability to see chakra. The Uchiha clan's Sharingan is believed to be descended from the Byakugan.

The clan is separated into two parts, the main house (宗家, Sōke) and the branch house (分家, Bunke), a system that protects the secrets of the Byakugan from outsiders. The main house runs the family while the branch house protects it. The members of the branch house are branded with a cursed seal. This seal gives the main house members absolute control over the branch members, because they can destroy the branch members' brains with a simple hand gesture, or cause them great pain to punish them. This seal also makes sure the secret of the Hyuga's Byakugan is safe, because it seals the Byakugan after the wearer of the seal dies. Because they are essentially servants, simply because of their birth order or heritage, some branch house members are hostile to those of the main house. After the Chunin exams, the two houses have managed to at least start working out their differences. In Part II, they finally brought the two Houses together as a family, which they showed when the Hyuga battled Pain in a show of family unity.

Members of the clan are instructed in the use of the Gentle Fist style, which uses the Byakugan to view the opponent's Chakra Pathway System and deal precise blows to disable and impede the flow of chakra. Due to training in this style, Hyuga clan members tend to have excellent chakra control. This is emphasized in jutsu that utilize this chakra control, as well as the nuances of the Gentle Fist style. The clan's strongest techniques, like the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms, are only allowed to be taught to members of the main house. Neji Hyuga, however, has bypassed this restriction by learning them on his own, earning a reputation as a "genius" in the clan

Rank: Chunin

Village: Mist Village

Skill Information:

Skill Specialty: Medical/Taijutsu
Elemental Affinity: Main: Water Sub: Lightning

Special Characteristics: Super human strength

History/RP Sample:

History/Background Story:

Childhood Arc: Hachi was born in the mist village and grew up a normal child both his mother and father being former konoha shinobi but moving to the mist village because they found it more interesting. Both his mother and father were very skilled jounin and went on many missions together working as a two person team. When hachi was age 6 and just beginning to learn the jutsu of the hyuga and beginning to practice his own elements his parents died on a mission leaving him a lone with no other family being that they were all in the konoha village and hachi's mother and father being when they left the konoha village to the rest of the hyuga clan hachi had no one to train him as he grew up until a lady wandering the village saw the young boy on the street wearing dirty clothes and seemed to be starving. The women took him under her wing and train him and actually turned out to be a missing hyuga shinobi.

Genin Arc: The lady bought a house and train hachi during the academy years which he quickly went through. As she trained hachi she began to tell him about a very skilled exiled ninja that he might be interested in noticing his attitude and fighting style and since she had already fought the exiled ninja barely escaping with her life she knew that hachi would go looking for her. After training and making it to the genin rank being a special jounin in the village the women requested hachi be trained by her and have no other team. The kage accept and hachi was able to train exclusively until the chunin exams which allowed him to pass them without much trouble. After making it to the rank of chunin hachi left the village in order to go search for the legendary exiled ninja hoping that she would train him and allow him to become her prodigy.

Rp Sample: I use the same one every time do i always have to put it?

Normal Jutsu/Clan Jutsu

Dynamic • Entry (Dainamikku • Entorii)
Rank: D
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Dynamic Entry is a taijutsu technique used by Maito Gai. Gai will throw a kunai to distract his targets attention, he will then use his speed and agility to quickly approach and attack his opponent from their blind side.

Dynamic • Action (Dainamikku • Akushon)
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Dynamic Action is a taijutsu technique used by Maito Gai. Gai will launch himself at his opponent and then use a barrage of strikes and kicks.

Hakke Hasangeki - Eight Divination Signs Destructive Mountain Fist
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Hakke Hasangeki is a Taijutsu technique utilized by Hyuuga Neji. Extending chakra from his body, Neji will thrust his palm into his target. This will send out a wave of chakra that will knock his opponent backwards into nearby rock to cause further damage. It is unknown if this wave can also collapse his target's tenketsu points.

Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou - Eight Divination Signs, One-Hundred and Twenty-Eight Palms of the Hand
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou is a variation of Hakke Rokujuuyonshou, a technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to make nearly double the normal 126 strikes, striking 254 times against their individual foe or opponents. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32, 64 and finally 128 times.

Hakke Kuushou - Eight Divination Signs Air Palm
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Hakke Kuushou is a ranged Taijutsu technique utilized by Hyuuga Neji. Extending chakra from his body, Neji will thrust his palm at his target. This will send out an invisible wave of chakra that can knock his opponent back. It is unknown if this wave can also collapse his target's tenketsu points.

Hakke Rokujuuyonshou - Eight Divination Signs, Sixty-Four Palms of the Hand
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a special technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to see the inner chakra coils system. Using the Jyuuken style, they can force their chakra through their hands into the tenketsu of the opponent's body through 126 strikes. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32 and finally 64. This damage forceably closes 64 tenketsu, stopping the chakra flow of the opponent. This then limits their opponents ability to use jutsu

Hakkeshou Kaiten - Eight Divination Palms of the Hand, Heavenly Spin
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Defense
Hakkeshou Kaiten is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline using the Jyuuken. Kaiten is a special technique passed down through the main family line. Kaiten takes advantage of several of the unique abilities of the Byakugan eye. Byakugan gives the clan member an almost complete 360 degree view of their surroundings. This allows the member to see all angles of attack.

If an attack is near, the clan member will release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu. The member then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify almost any attack.

Name: Chakra Scalpel
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: When Hachi puts his fingers in sets of two a small chakra point forms on his finger that is very sharp allowing him to pierce through the skin very easily if he hits anyone at close range.

Name: Chakra Sword
Rank: B
Element: -
Description: Using the same technique as the chakra scalpel Hachi creates two large chakra swords on his hands when he puts all his fingers together. The chakra sword are very sharp and both are up to 8 feet tall.

Name: Chakra Needles
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: Hachi is able to create a large amount of senbon like needles out of chakra that are stronger then normal senbon

Name: Acupuncture
Rank: -
Element: -
Description: Hachi has learned a technique using needles to soothe the body and relax the person that he is working on or cause them intense and excruciating pain using needles and stabbing them in specific areas. Poking the wrong spot while using the soothing type of acupuncture can kill someone to preforming this in a good way to be trained for a long time.

Name: Enhanced Vision
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: This jutsu temporarily gives hachi the ability to see the bones and organs in a persons body allowing him to see the damaged organs to know where to heal or to know where he needs to hit the person.

Name: Kidney Shot
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: By sending a very close range and powerful kick to the kidneys hachi can send even the largest person the ground with this powerful kick.

Name: Viper's Bite
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: A fighting style using his knowledge of organs. When hachi uses this fighting style and hits a person in the chest area he can twist his fingers or even have the chakra scalpels on his fingers allowing to hit an organ and cause internal bleeding. The internal bleeding is not bad at first but as he continued to hit the body and create more wounds it begins to get worse.

Name: Bone Cruncher
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: By hitting the joint of where two bones connect hachi can easily snap someones bone in half. This does require very precise movements and even being slightly off can make this jutsu useless.

Water Jutsu

Name: Healing Saliva
Rank: -
Element: Water
Description: Hachi Saliva is not like most shinobis being that he is a medical ninja he found a special herb to eat that has permanently changed his saliva to be able to heal wounds. The herb was very strong allowing him to spit into small wounds and they heal up almost instantly. But larger wounds that are spit in don't usually heal in 2 or more posts. Of course hachi can not use this saliva to heal wounds like missing limbs but he can use this sticky liquid to cover the wound and stop it from bleeding.

Name: Gatling Gun
Rank: B
Element: Water
Description: Hachi created a rapid fire version of the water bullet jutsu that he learned before. With this he can fire hundreds of water bullets using less handsigns and chakra then if he would use the normal bullet jutsu.

Name: Mist Body
Rank: C
Element: Water
Description: By preforming a single handsign this jutsu is active turning his body into pure mist. This jutsu allows him to dodge almost every attack but at the same time he cant retaliate when he uses this mist body technique it only allowing him to get a safe distance away from the enemy before his body re solidifies.

Name: Mist Form
Rank: C
Element: Water
Description: By preforming a string of handsigns hachi's body becomes almost transparent and he begins to heal both chakra and physical whounds while in the mist. This jutsu can only be activated and stay active while in mist. If the jutsu if activated and his mist disappears then his body automatically returns normal. In this form he is still able to attack the enemy.

Name: Water Jets
Rank: C
Element: Water
Description: Preforming a string of handsigns hachi's feet begin to shoot water out of the bottom allowing him to move much more swiftly and move much more silently then normal.

Lightning Jutsu

Name: Lightning Strike
Rank: C
Element: Lightning
Description: By focusing lightning chakra into his fingers or sword tip and aiming it will shoot a single bolt of lightning or multiple bolts at the enemy.

Name: Friction Reflex: Zap Spear
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: Hachi will rub his, chakra 'charged' hands together, generating friction. After creating large chakra sparks with the hands, the user will pull back his/her arm and spring forth a compressed burst of electricity. The electricity will be so compressed that, while combined with gravity, air, and speed will take on a shape that looks much like a spear. The spear, whilst hitting anything, will instantly burn through it in a flash of lightning and chakra

Name: Lightning Clone
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: Hachi creates a clone of himself made of lightning that sends a bolt of lightning at whoever destroys it.

Name: Lightning Current
Rank: C
Element: Lightning
Description: Hachi opens his mouth sending a bolt of lightning at the enemy and if it hits continually jolts the enemy's body.

Name: Lightning Needles
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: Preforming the required handsigns lightning chakra begins to gather around him. The chakra then turns to needles and fires rapidly at the enemy each needle sending a jolt into the body.

Name: Blinding Flash
Rank: C
Element: Lightning
Description: Hachi preforms the required handsigns and shoots an incredibly bright bolt of lightning at the enemy even if it does not hit if looked at will blind the enemy for two posts.

Name: Lightning Creation
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: Using his lightning chakra hachi can create objects or coat objects in the chakra. Using this he can create almost anything. Any person to come in contact with the objects besides hachi will be shocked.

Styles

Juuken Ryuu - Gentle Fist Style
Rank: C
Juuken is fighting style utilized by Hyuuga clan members, it is the strongest style of Konoha. The Byakugan has a penetrating ability to see the tenketsu, the internal chakra coils system 361 pressure points. The clan member can use their fingers or palms to emit chakra to flow into their opponents body's at these precise points. When the hand draws close enough to strke, the clan member can stop or increase their opponents chakra flow. The internal chakra coils which spread throughout the body also wrap around the internal chakra producing organs. So if the internal coils are attacked, it also damages these internal organs. Because a ninja can not train their internal body, such damage can be a critical hit for even a highly skilled ninja.

Suiken Ryuu - Drunken Fist Style
Rank: C
Suiken is fighting style utilizing alcohol to loosen the body's muscles and the unstructured movements make the users attacks harder to predict. By being in this drunken state, the user can take more damage without feeling the pain, gain higher agility and provide a natural fluidity to their movements.

Gracious Crane Style
Rank: C
A taijutsu fighting style that requires a swift a nimble body. This fighter style uses a large amount of flips, bend, and acrobatic moves. Almost all of the attacks in this style are a mix of both defense and attack making it much harder to defeat enemies using this style.

Cautois Turtle Style
Rank: B
A more defensive taijutsu fighting style that requires a large amount of physical training before actually being able to use it. Shinobi that use this style have been known to have skin is the strength of steel allowing them to be able to block sword with their barehands. Also by putting chakra into the flesh making the shinobi have a slightly blue tent they are also much less likely to actually be stopped by powerful attacks or be burned and shocked easily being that the chakra acts like a shield.

Furocious Tiger Style
Rank: B
A taijutsu style that relys purely on attack to hurt the enemy. By putting chakra into the fists or by using weapons the shinobi in using this style can cause massive damage and it can be internal and external. This clan also has very high endurance being able to take hits and not budge being train at a young age to be able to ignore pain.

Lightning Palm Style
Rank: B
A powerful technique that allows a shinobi to cover their palms with chakra allowing them to send massive shocks through the enemies body which can cause heart attacks or hit the enemy to stun them. This style requires a large amount of chakra control to be able to keep the lightning chakra focused into their palm.

Divine Finger Style
Rank: B
A taijutsu fighting style that uses only two fingers on each hand to fight. This style is only for shinobi that have immense knowledge of the human body and have memorized the position of each organ. This jutsu allows them to stab certian spots with the two fingers and send chakra into that point causing excrusiating pain to the enemy or even knock them out. Used by a shinobi with a large amount of skill they can kill almost anyone in only three strikes.

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Name: Static Cling
Rank: D
Element: Lightning
Description: After preforming the required handsigns mezu's body will become statically charged attracting almost all metals to his body.


REMOVE- that's magnetism, achievable via KKG


Suiken Ryuu - Drunken Fist Style
Rank: C
Suiken is fighting style utilizing alcohol to loosen the body's muscles and the unstructured movements make the users attacks harder to predict. By being in this drunken state, the user can take more damage without feeling the pain, gain higher agility and provide a natural fluidity to their movements.

Gracious Crane Style
Rank: C
A taijutsu fighting style that requires a swift a nimble body. This fighter style uses a large amount of flips, bend, and acrobatic moves. Almost all of the attacks in this style are a mix of both defense and attack making it much harder to defeat enemies using this style.

Cautois Turtle Style
Rank: B
A more defensive taijutsu fighting style that requires a large amount of physical training before actually being able to use it. Shinobi that use this style have been known to have skin is the strength of steel allowing them to be able to block sword with their barehands. Also by putting chakra into the flesh making the shinobi have a slightly blue tent they are also much less likely to actually be stopped by powerful attacks or be burned and shocked easily being that the chakra acts like a shield.

Furocious Tiger Style
Rank: B
A taijutsu style that relys purely on attack to hurt the enemy. By putting chakra into the fists or by using weapons the shinobi in using this style can cause massive damage and it can be internal and external. This clan also has very high endurance being able to take hits and not budge being train at a young age to be able to ignore pain.

Lightning Palm Style
Rank: B
A powerful technique that allows a shinobi to cover their palms with chakra allowing them to send massive shocks through the enemies body which can cause heart attacks or hit the enemy to stun them. This style requires a large amount of chakra control to be able to keep the lightning chakra focused into their palm.

Divine Finger Style
Rank: B
A taijutsu fighting style that uses only two fingers on each hand to fight. This style is only for shinobi that have immense knowledge of the human body and have memorized the position of each organ. This jutsu allows them to stab certian spots with the two fingers and send chakra into that point causing excrusiating pain to the enemy or even knock them out. Used by a shinobi with a large amount of skill they can kill almost anyone in only three strikes.



Erubou - (Elbow) Heavy Style Violence
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Erubou is a Taijutsu technique utilized by Raikage. After charging his body with his lightning current, Raikage will deliver an elbow strike against his opponent. The attack can be avoided with the use of the Sharingan

Girochin Doroppu - (Guillotine Drop) Righteous Thundering Fall Furious Lightning Ax
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Girochin Doroppu is a Taijutsu technique utilized by Raikage. After charging his body with his lightning current, Raikage will first knock his opponent to the ground. He will then launch himself into the air, and deliver a downwards leg drop onto his vulnerable opponent.

Remove all of this- Taijutsu is not your specialty




Name: Mist Body
Rank: -
Element: Water
Description: By preforming a single handsign this jutsu is active turning his body into pure mist. This jutsu allows him to dodge almost every attack but at the same time he cant retaliate when he uses this mist body technique it only allowing him to get a safe distance away from the enemy before his body re solidifies.

Name: Mist Form
Rank: -
Element: Water
Description: By preforming a string of handsigns hachi's body becomes almost transparent and he begins to heal both chakra and physical whounds while in the mist. This jutsu can only be activated and stay active while in mist. If the jutsu if activated and his mist disappears then his body automatically returns normal. In this form he is still able to attack the enemy.


Add some drawbacks- like for example water is weak against earth, so any earth element jutsu will still damage you. And a lightning attack can disrupt your forms.




And another thing, add more info on the looks. AND PLEASE PUT YOUR HISTORY in ARCS, add some more details on that, I wont approve a chuunin rank with this quality of app. Just like what others said, if you want a high rank, you need to work for it.


And you do understand that without Taijutsu as your specialty, you lose the ability to use your KKG.

Also add ranks to some of your jutsus..alot of them don't have them.

edited kitsuke the mist body makes him suddenly burst into mist like the water replacement jutsu making him impossible to hit but at the same time he can't attack he has to reform at a distance. And for the mist form he is still prone to all the normal attack he is just hard to see and heals in the mist and since im already in the mist why would i have to state in obvious drawback?

And kyogi the reason i didn't add ranks to certian jutsu is because they dont use chakra

Well they all should require chakra.

That's the point kid, you'll just overuse the MIST BODY technique by using it to run from a fight.

listen kid i'e had the mist body jutsu before and i know how to use it without going OP with it but since you think every else is so stupid that they don't even know how to use their own jutsui added a rank.

Just for that I should lock this topic, make sure you don't get approved, and ban you for two days. Respect your moderators and administrators or leave. I don't have time for your shit. Seriously, why the hell would you argue over something as stupid as a fucking jutsu? Is it so important that you would rather not be approved than have to take it away? Grow the fuck up.

First of all if he didn't call me a kid i wouldn't have had to say that so don't just say it like im the only one to blame and kitsuke is an angel and i have already had this jutsu on my other character and i know how to not abuse my jutsu so why is he even bothering me about this crap?

I warned you kid.

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