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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
Posts : 225 Points : 413 Join date : 2009-08-31
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: A rank Village:
| Subject: New jutsu Sun 08 Nov 2009, 2:11 pm | |
| Name: Ultimate protection Rank: B Element: Earth Requirements: Just like a summoning requirement, hachi must shed blood. Description: A giant wall covers up any certain area hachi wishes, with no holes or weaknesses. When ever the enemy comes close to the wall earth spikes come out but doesent shoot out just comes out 20 feet. Though withought holes there is no oxygen, so Null must destroy the wall before oxygen runs out which can either last for a long time or a short time depending on how big the wall is.
Name: Mud Wall Rank: C Element: Earth Description: After preforming a string of handsigns hachi summons a wall made of very sticky mud in front of himself that traps anyone who touches it.
Name: Earth Armor Rank: B Element: Earth Description: After preforming a string of handsigns hachi's body becomes covered in a thick armor of rocks. This protects him from almost any incoming attack but it also makes him much slower make it much harder for him to attack.
Name: Cyclone Orb Rank: C Element: Wind Description: After preforming a string of handsigns hachi takes a deep breath and exhales a large orb that seems to be spinning rapidly and moving at a high speed. Once this jutsu hits a person body it explodes into a giant raging cyclone cutting up any enemy trapped in it.
Name: Sharp Wind Rank: C Element: Wind Description: After preforming a string of handsigsn hachi takes a deep breath and blasts a powerful gust of wind that leaves a series of cuts on anyone caught in the blast.
Name: Razor Wind Rank: B Element: Wind Description: After preforming a string of handsigsn hachi blasts a powerful gust of wind from his mouth that causes multiple cuts a gashes when caught in the blast.
Name: Scythe Blades Rank: A Element: Wind Description: After preforming a string of handsigns hachi blasts multiple gusts of winds that looks like scythe. The scythes move at a very high speed and are able to cut off limbs if anyone is caught in the attack.
Name: Stone Trap Rank: B Element: Earth Description: After preforming a string of handsigsn earth begins to form a square platform under the enemies feet. And once stepped on large thick stone pillars will appear around the platform with a large platform on top. The trap can only be activated when someone steps on it and is rather large bing able to hold 4-5 people. After any enemy is trapped the trap will begin to close in and trap enemy in and crush them if they do not escape.
Name: Bug Armor Rank: C Element: N/A Description: Hachi commands his armored bugs to crawl on his body and protect him from incoming attacks.
Name: Ant Formation: Dragon Rank: A Element: N/A Description: Hachi uses this jutsu to command his ants to form a large dragon the punchers working as the teeth for the dragon it can also blast a stream of ants almostr as if its breathing fire.
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Hakaisha Akatsuki
Posts : 253 Points : 299 Join date : 2009-08-30 Location : O_O
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Sun 08 Nov 2009, 3:48 pm | |
| Everything looks alright Approved unless someone else says different.. | |
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Sun 08 Nov 2009, 3:59 pm | |
| Name: Recycling Rank: C Element: Wind Description: Hachi preforms a single handsigns allowing carbon dioxide in the air or water into oxygen allowing him to breath in tight sealed areas and underwater for what seems like forever.
How exactly do you plan on changing the molecular structure of something?
Name: Earth Armor Rank: B Element: Earth Description: After preforming a string of handsigns hachi's body becomes covered in a thick armor of rocks. This protects him from almost any incoming attack but it also makes him much slower make it much harder for him to attack.
Like any other defensive jutsu, I expect that a jutsu of a higher rank will beat it, correct?
Name: Stone Trap Rank: C Element: Earth Description: After preforming a string of handsigsn earth begins to form at the enemies feet and forms a large cage around the enemy and slowly begins to close in on the enemy eventually curshing them if they can't get out.
This seems much higher than C-ranked
Name: Ant Formation: Dragon Rank: C Element: N/A Description: Hachi uses this jutsu to command his ants to form a large dragon the punchers working as the teeth for the dragon it can also blast a stream of ants almostr as if its breathing fire.
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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Sun 08 Nov 2009, 4:46 pm | |
| edited recycling
yes earth armor only works on B or lower jutsu
edited stone trap
all hachi does in the ant formation jutsu is use his chakra to instruct the insects to form into a dragon and from their they do the work themselves why would it be a B+ rank | |
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Kozakura Miyazaki Genin
Posts : 43 Points : 87 Join date : 2009-10-18
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Tue 10 Nov 2009, 5:45 pm | |
| Name: Recycling Rank: C Element: Wind Description: Hachi preforms a single handsigns allowing him to continually flow wind chakra through his lungs and instead of him breathing out carbon dioxide he breaths out wind chakra..
That would do nothing for you, since you still need to breathe in oxygen. In fact, it would be bad for you, since you aren't getting rid of that waste.
Name: Earth Armor Rank: B Element: Earth Description: After preforming a string of handsigns hachi's body becomes covered in a thick armor of rocks. This protects him from almost any incoming attack but it also makes him much slower make it much harder for him to attack.
APPROVED
Name: Stone Trap Rank: C Element: Earth Description: After preforming a string of handsigsn earth begins to form a square platform under the enemies feet. And once stepped on large thick stone pillars will appear around the platform with a large platform on top. The trap can only be activated when someone steps on it and is rather large bing able to hold 4-5 people. After any enemy is trapped the trap will begin to close in and trap enemy in and crush them if they do not escape.
You didn't fix anything, the complexity of the chakra trap still makes it above C-rank.
Name: Ant Formation: Dragon Rank: C Element: N/A Description: Hachi uses this jutsu to command his ants to form a large dragon the punchers working as the teeth for the dragon it can also blast a stream of ants almostr as if its breathing fire.
It's a complex command. Considering the fact that making insects spin in a circle around you to make a dome is B-ranked, this is above C-rank. It's more complicated than just giving them a picture to follow. You'd need to give them commands while in this form while keeping them in a solid mass, as well as the breathing out ants thing, which implies that there are a hella' lot of ants which would mean even more chakra used to control a larger amount. | |
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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Tue 10 Nov 2009, 9:10 pm | |
| removed recycling and edited the other two | |
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Tue 10 Nov 2009, 9:12 pm | |
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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Tue 10 Nov 2009, 9:25 pm | |
| Name: Armored Bug Dome Rank: B Element: N/A Description: Using his armored bugs hachi makes a giant dome made of flying bugs to protect him for incoming attacks.
Name: Amor Enhancement Rank: - Element: N/A Description: All of hachi's bugs that comes from the nest he creates has a much tougher endurance and a mouch tougher exoskeleton keeping them from being crushed by a persons foot and being cut my bost weapons but this makes them highly flamable.
Name: Roach Formation: Shield Rank: B Element: N/A Description: This jutsu allows hachi to command his roaches to crawl close together and create a shield to protect hachi from attacks.
Name: Ant Formation: Dagger Rank: C Element: N/A Description: Hachi commands his ants to form into a tagger their pincers being the blades allowing them to inject their toxins when he slashes an enemy.
Name: Color Funnel Rank: B Element: N/A Description: This is a genjutsu triggered when hachi sends one color kolediscope moth at his enemy and then preforms a string of handsigns this causes the moth to looks like hundreds and fly around the enemy then turn from moths into a pure funnel of color disorienting the enemy in the funnel. | |
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Satsu Genin
Posts : 158 Points : 250 Join date : 2009-10-11 Location : ~Eating a poptart~ Scarey isnt it XD
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Tue 10 Nov 2009, 9:32 pm | |
| APPROVED, till further notice. | |
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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Tue 10 Nov 2009, 9:48 pm | |
| Name: Gale Rank: C Element: Wind Description: Hachi preforms a string of handsigns and shoots a midly strong gust of wind most used to knock charging people off their feet or to deflect weapons.
Name: Mud Dune Rank: B Element: Earth Description: Hachi preforms a string of handsigns a creates a large mount of mud from the ground that blocks incoming attacks. The mount can also be pushed wit ha blast of chakra to send the sticky mud dune flying at the enemy.
Name:Stoneshock Aura Rank: A Element: Earth Description: An earth technique that covers hachi's hands and feet in stone that allow him to send small seismic waves around him when he stomps or punches the ground. These seismic waves do nothing more then throw people off of their feet.
Name: Spine Sweep Rank: B Element: Earth Description: This jutsu requires hachi to preform a basic sweep with his foot. When he does so three foot spines of earth appear just seconds after he moves his leg. This jutsu allows for a very swift kill if someone attacks him at a close range.
Name: Dragon Stomp Rank: B Element: Earth Description: Hachi sends a surge of chakra through his leg as he slams his foot down sending a powerful blast in front of him launching a large row of spikes right after the blast.
Name: Tornado Winds Rank: B Element: Wind Description: When hachi preforms the handsigns for this jutsu he punches and sends a powerful gust of wind at the enemy. It is able to knock the wind out of the enemy or trip them if aimed at the feet.
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Satsu Genin
Posts : 158 Points : 250 Join date : 2009-10-11 Location : ~Eating a poptart~ Scarey isnt it XD
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Tue 10 Nov 2009, 9:56 pm | |
| All APPROVED besides spine sweep, how big, and make sure there dodgeable.. | |
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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Wed 11 Nov 2009, 1:40 pm | |
| edited it and it can be dodged if your not within range or you can jump lol | |
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Requiem Jounin
Posts : 693 Points : 489 Join date : 2008-04-11 Age : 30 Location : Ontario, Canada. With Mitch. <3
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: X Rank Village: Thai Underworld .
| Subject: Re: New jutsu Wed 11 Nov 2009, 9:35 pm | |
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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Fri 20 Nov 2009, 9:38 pm | |
| Name: Thundering Eaters Species: Locust Rank: A Description: These massive locusts are used to destroy the remains of bodies or anything else non leaving. The locusts have amazingly strong teeth and each making a very loud buzzing sound as their wings scratch together. The only thing that the locusts are un able to eat are metals but have the ability to break down poison and venoms in specific materials with ease keeping them alive
Name: C4 stick ants Species: ant Rank: A Description: These small ants are almost like dots but has chemicals in their body that mix and cause explosive equal to C4 explosives. The bugs also have a incredibly sticky liquid on their legs allowing them to stick to even the most slip resistant materials with no problem. Hachi can only use 1-5 of these ants at a time.
Name: Fire bugs Species: Beetle Rank: B Description: These small beetles are about a third of the size of the finger nail of a persons pinky but the insects have the ability to absorb fire chakra that is shot from the enemy a sacrifice themselves completely absorbing the fire instead of letting other bugs take the hits.
Name: Zenzi fly Species: Fly Rank: C Description: These flies look just like any other fly but have wings that make no sound at all allowing them to be much more stealthy then a normal fly. These flys have a stinger inside of their mouths that allow them to insect a quick acting venom that puts the enemy to sleep for two posts if bitten.
Name: Bog fly Species: Fly Rank: B Description: These large flys store a acid like substance from their stomach that is corrosive enough to break down even the strongest metals. The corrosive acid is so strong that the flys have to actually constantly spit it up as they touch objects to prevent them from burning a hole through their own stomachs. The flys can spew the acid from a great distance and in multiple blasts instead of just one stream.
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Lkitty Kazekage
Posts : 2512 Points : 999 Join date : 2008-09-04 Location : ...Flying?...
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: X Rank Village: Sunagakure
| Subject: Re: New jutsu Fri 20 Nov 2009, 9:45 pm | |
| Jutsu without ranks?
Plus please starting now, use the sites own jutsu template
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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Sat 21 Nov 2009, 12:07 am | |
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Revy Izumi Missing-Nin
Posts : 1364 Points : 1849 Join date : 2009-07-27
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Sat 21 Nov 2009, 12:21 am | |
| All approved except
C4 stick ants
Ants are small, and normally can travel by the dozens, so Unapproved for godmod, or powermod complaints
Fire bugs
You cant eat fire, youd burn, especially if its by another persons chakra | |
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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Sat 21 Nov 2009, 12:27 am | |
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Revy Izumi Missing-Nin
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Sat 21 Nov 2009, 12:29 am | |
| All Approved, just don't over use the fire absorbing bugs | |
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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Fri 27 Nov 2009, 12:16 am | |
| Name: Double Suicide Rank: S Element: N/A Description: A jutsu that hachi uses only as a last resort. Hachi commands multiple C4 ants and explosive bugs to fill up in the nest before exploding with the power equal to a C0 explosion causing massive damage to anyone within a two mile radius. The jutsu completely destroys the nest making it impossible for hachi to summon in that area again and destroys any of his bugs that survives the explosion automatically. | |
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Satsu Genin
Posts : 158 Points : 250 Join date : 2009-10-11 Location : ~Eating a poptart~ Scarey isnt it XD
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Fri 27 Nov 2009, 12:34 am | |
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Naiko Aburame Chuunin
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Fri 27 Nov 2009, 7:15 am | |
| - The Moth man wrote:
- Name: Double Suicide
Rank: S Element: N/A Description: A jutsu that hachi uses only as a last resort. Hachi commands multiple C4 ants and explosive bugs to fill up in the nest before exploding with the power equal to a C0 explosion causing massive damage to anyone within a two mile radius. The jutsu completely destroys the nest making it impossible for hachi to summon in that area again and destroys any of his bugs that survives the explosion automatically. UNAPPROVED until talked about. A suicide technique is usually approved because it also kills the user. | |
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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Fri 27 Nov 2009, 9:22 am | |
| i just named it double suicide because it explodes my nest a long with anything around it. Its just a name i can change it if you like | |
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Naiko Aburame Chuunin
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Fri 27 Nov 2009, 10:20 am | |
| The name isnt a problem,
Does this jutsu also kills you? because that is why its called a last resort jutsu, that means... you must have done anything and this is the last thing to do.
If yes, I'll approve.
But if not then denied, because this will be just used as an easily killing jutsu. | |
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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
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| Subject: Re: New jutsu Fri 27 Nov 2009, 10:32 am | |
| its only a 2 mile radius and if someone has a strong defense and blocks the explosion i would be un able to use my bugs again un less i preform my bug summoning jutsu again but if i am caught in the 2 mile radius then yes i will die. | |
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