Takasu Uchuzaki

General Information:

Name: Takasu Uchuzaki

Nickname/Alias: The White Flame

Weight: 64 kg

Height: 178 cm

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Looks:

Personality:Takasu is a cool, collected, and solitary person, who is quite mysterious. Only few people knows his real background and the bloodline where he came from. He is portrayed as being somewhere between being merely stoic and matter-of-fact, rarely ever smiling or showing emotion at all. As he started to get close to others, he also began to risk his own life to save them, even though his death. He does everything for his friends who showed him that he still have a hope. Takasu was the sort of unenthusiastic kid who liked to watch clouds. He preferred not to get involved in "troublesome" activities, pretending to be busy to avoid responsibility. Sometimes, Takasu seems to become a spy. This is his common personality which he hides at dark places and hear people talking. He seemed to use techniques just to spy on people. However when duty calls,Taka has a strong moral compass and sense of commitment to his comrades. Even though, by his own testimony, he lacks bravery, he will sacrifice himself and face almost certain death for the sake of his friends or villagers without a second thought. Besides this attitude, he has expressed a notably mature interest in marriage and raising a family; on the subject, he hopes to

Clan Information

Clan Name: Vongola Clan

Kekei Genkai:

Death Operation Flames:
Different flames are within one's bloodline, so a type of flame could be shared and/or inherited within one's family.There are seven different flames that match the title of Guardians of the Vongola Clan: Sky, Storm, Rain, Sun, Cloud, Lightning, and Mist. Each flame is identified by one of the colors of the rainbow and possesses a unique characteristic. Dying Will flames are the source of power used to activate the Box Weapons, and can cover weapons, like swords, to strengthen and reinforce them. It's a overly dense version of aura. However, unlike aura, the dying will flame is a real flame that can melt, burn, and even burn up the oxygen in the air. A dying will flame is super condensed energy, unlike any aura. The purer the flame is the more powerful it is and the greater it demonstrates its characteristic.

7 kinds of Flame:

Spoiler:

Clan Symbol:

Clan History:
The Vongola family has long since been the most powerful Mafia family in all of the ninja world. They have had several other Mafia families serving them, including a few members from the infamous Arcobaleno the possesor of different kinds of flames. They also possess the Vongola Rings, which have been around since the founding of the Mafia underworld, and are usually in possession of the main Vongola members. Those who inherit the The Vongola family bloodline have certain unique traits like Hyper intuition. The Vongola family is represented by the Dying Will Flame. Each of the Vongola Bosses could produce a sky dying will flames of their own and possessed the Vongola Sky ring, so at times possessing this type of flame is proof of being apart of the Vongola bloodline. It has been revealed by Reborn that the Vongola Family was formerly a group of vigilantes that fought on to protect the people.
Rank Information:

Rank: Anbu

Village: Sunagakure No Sato (Sand Village)

Skill Information:

Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu,Kenjutsu

Elemental Affinity: Flame with different colors

Special Characteristics: --
History/RP Sample:

History/Background Story:

Academy Student Arc:

Takasu was born into a normal family with traditional ninja values. The Zanbadarou clan is a long forgotten important clan first originating in Rock. The clan was nearly destroyed in a battle that took place hundreds of years ago and now only a handful of Zanbadarou are still alive. From his early days as an Academy Student he was trained in the ways of his clan, as a way to pass down the legacy. Through hours of meditation and hard training he became able to use hi muscles relatively easy, although he had particular trouble with the easy academy jutsus and had failed the test several times because of it. He always kept his chin up knowing that he had more skill then others anticipated. He has never shown anyone any of his strength in case he needs to surprise someone some day. Before taking his final academy test his father had taken him to the clans new village in Suna. The entire village was small and had a little shrine that led underground. In the shrine were the remains of the founded of the Zanbadarou clan as well as multiple pieces of history dating back way before the wars.

Genin Arc:
When he was just 5 his mother and younger brother were accidently killed a freak accident when during a bad lightning storm a tree was struck down and landed on both of them. Dante mourned for a solid month before he was able to get back to training with a new found determination. It wasn’t till after his mother and brother died before he became extremely determined and began learning new jutsus with his father’s help. It was also his father who trained him to climb trees and walk on water, even though it took months to accomplish. Because of his bad academy records and failed tests he was put on wait to be on a team. Dantes genin years eventually improved as he was finally assigned to a team where he was awarded the honor of become the team captain, of the other two genin of course. Takasu’s team was sent on multiple dangerous missions, dangerous to genin anyways. In one particular mission Dante was finally forced to use his muscles as he fought and defeated 5 rogue ninja by himself. His Jounin teacher surprised by this and learned to put Dante’s skills to use. In the chuunin exams his entire team had nearly made it when they were ambushed by Mist ninja. A dense fog had been put up and his two teammates were unfortunately killed by the opposing genin. Dante never let this slip his mind and waited till the genin settled down before he attacked again by literally tearing them apart. From there Dante travelled safely to the tower where he had become one of the few genin to become a chuunin.

Chunin Arc:

After Takasu had become a chuunin for Kumo he was assigned to one of the many patrol groups because of his unique skill set at finding enemies. About after a year of being a chuunin his dad died, severing all ties with his bloodline. Takasu mourned for days befo re he picked himself back up and set out to do his duty. A week later he had his opportunity to finally take out his pain and frustration on something physical. It was on one of the few boarder towns in Suna where a gang of raiders planning to take control of the little town. Takasu had been patrolling the area when the report came through and as such he was the first on the scene. Takasu after about an hour’s long of fighting achieved victory over the some odd hundred raiders. Takasu had also been close to his clan’s new village and decided to pay a visit and pay his final respects to his dad who was buried there. After a couple of days of being there the elder of the village handed Takasu a large Zanpatou that was used by the founder of the clan. A few more days passed and Takasu returned back to Kumo and reported to the on how he had protected the little village from an invasion for this accomplishment in the field of battle Dante was awarded the title of Jounin.

Jounin Arc:

Jounin by the age of 20 was a significant accomplishment, at least to Dante it was. He was finally proud with his abilities as a ninja but still sought to advance them to stages ones could only imagine. As his time of teaching approached he grew oddly nervous when he remembered when he was a Jounin at one point, it also made him smile to see the genin make the same mistakes he once did. Unfortunately once his team became chuunins he never really saw them again, and not long after he learned of their deaths. Apparently his students had died on a patrolling mission to find missing ninja. Times were growing cold and dark for Dante as he still sought companionship among fellow ninjas but got little in return. He knew who he could trust and who he couldn’t and in this day and age that was all he needed to know. During his time as a Jounin he had accomplished many missions and had executed a few known missing ninja letting his rank improve once more to ANBU as well as S rank.

ANBU Arc:

To Be Added...

Rp Sample:

(Medium Quality)

Twenty five minutes had passed since he had issued the challenge to the Jounin from his village. Dante was again sitting on the ground facing the opposite direction of where the Jounin should be coming from. The area was a large circle of grass outlines by thick trees and the wind was gently blowing causing the grass to flow during the midday hours. The Academy Student thought to himself, wondering why in the world he had challenged a Jounin with the biggest ego he could find. He wouldn’t go back on his decision now, he had made a choice and he planned on seeing it through to the end.

He couldn’t stand it, the Jounin and other ninja of the village were there to symbolize years of hard work and dedication, as well as an outline for any young ninja to become. He just didn’t understand why this one ninja had lost that mentality. He wanted to know why and a part of him maybe wanted to help. He didn’t challenge her because he hated her or despised the way she viewed things. Everyone had their own opinion and goals and he respected that. All Dante wanted was to prove that he WAS going to become a powerful ninja one day and that he WASN’T a nobody and that he WOULD amount to more than nothing.

The breeze blew through his hair lightly lifting up the blue strands and moving them in every direction. He hoped he had some sort of advantage that he could use. What he figured his biggest strength was his speed and his Taijutsu. He just hoped the Jounin would try to make it a hand-to-hand combat fight rather than ninjutsu because he didn’t know many that worked at a distance. Dante was also big for his age, most people figured him to be sixteen or seventeen, but his entire family had grown quicker than most. Right now Dante stood at a max height of 5ft 8in tall and weighed a good 210lbs of muscle from his years of training.

Thirty minutes had now passed and he expected her any second now. He also wondered if any other Academy Students, Genin, or even Chuunin would show up to watch, and if they did he had to ignore them and keep concentration on his opponent at all times, it wasn’t like he was fighting another kid is age but this time a twenty year old konouchi, and he would definitely have his hands full.

(High Quality)

It was a cold night, only the soft wind and the music playing crickets could be heard for the lonely miles. The area was a seemingly plain valley with ankle high grass and trees scattered on the boarder of the windy valley. The wind swayed the grass and the trees making them blow like the gentle waves of the ocean washing up upon the sandy shore. The cherry blossom trees swayed under the lighting of the moon, releasing it’s blossoms like a gift to the very mother that created it. A stream ran parallel to the valley just beyond the cherry blossom trees, fish jumping in and out of the water as they skimmed the foot of water.

In the very center of the valley was a group of people sitting in a circle gagged and blindfolded each with a henchman holding the civilians arms. The civilians were obviously distressed and trying to break free but the henchman held onto them strongly making sure they didn’t budge from their spot. The henchman were in standard ninja gear but wore white masks all with black tears falling from the eyes of the masks. One man stood in the center of the hostage situation, one with an Akatsuki cloak on like a jacket and a white mask that had tears and a painted blood mask splattered across it. He gave a wave of his hand and the henchman ripped the blindfolds off the civilians.

“Ladies and gentlemen.” Dameon said through his mask as he began walking around the inner section of the circle gazing into all of the victims eyes as he walked by, observing his lab rats in this god awful experiment.

“You are here to take part in my little..game if you will. This game will determine those who have survival instincts and those who do not.” He said stopping and placing his bare hand against the side of a young ladies face and pushing her head to the slid slightly letting her sweat get on his hand before wiping it on his vest.

“Each of you have a knife in your right pocket. You will all kill each other and the last person alive simply...lives, and they can go off happily into the sunrise like a bat flying toward its cave.” He said taking out an identical knife from his waist and showing them in as he lowered himself and cut the side of one of the mans face dripping blood onto the knife.

“I have my money on him very mean looking very just…grrr.” He said growling slightly and flexing his biceps a bit as he slid the knife back onto his belt but not after wiping the blood onto his hands to clean the knife.

“If you try to group up and attack one or all of us rest assured, you will die and I will be terribly disappointed in our game and I will have to return to your village and grab more rats. Now for your sake and your villages sake. Do your best…and have FUN!” he said waving as he walked off out of the circle and the henchmen released the civilians and the bloody battle started. Dameon turned around to watch savoring the chaos.

The civilians though confused at first realized how serious the situation was and were soon fueled by the will to survive and they began to grab the knives from their pockets and attack their fellow villagers slitting their throats and stabbing them all over the body before the attacker was attacked and killed. In the end the only survivor stood up and walked out of the circle and all of them just watched as the murderer wandered toward the village miles away.

Dameon frowned as he watched the man he wanted to win died and he kicked his corpse afterward then threw his hands up by his side then back down as he shuffled through his pockets and brought out money and handed them to one of his henchman who gladly put it in his pocket. As he walked by the henchman he pointed his finger behind him and launched an ice bullet into the back of the henchman’s head before walking off the survivor dying shortly from stabs to lethal spots on his body.

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Raikengan (Eye of Divinity): The Raikegan is the main ability of the Zanbadarou Clan. A white flame will be appeared on their forehead when activating this ability. The user's eyes will also become pure white as a symbol of power and peace. When activating the Raikegan, user will be completely calm, changing his personality into a calm, fearless, smart and powerful person. He has the ability to use his vision abilities to penetrate the walls or other solid objects to view a wider world. User's vision is also able to locate and track others by sensing chakra, pick up chakra from long distances, and notice changes in an individual's chakra. It is also able to sense how many of them are present. User's vision has heightened perception and analytical powers, meaning user can comprehend any details he sees to predict the opponent's next move and this ability is used to track fast moving objects.

Make wthin a specific range like around a 1-75 meter radius

Yoshidou (Flames of Peace): The Yoshidou represents peace/light/frendship/purity of the owner. These flames can't be distinguished by any amount of water or any seal but it will automatically dispersed after an hour. These flames are proved offensive because it can burn anything in a long period of time and the heat of the flames is like the heat of the boiling lava. The user with a high ranking Raikengan can manipulate the flames depending on their ability. The flames can also counter Bijuu chakra or any rampaging organism. It can turn them back into their original chakra form.

These are unacceptable, allow to be extinguisghed by something because this would be a blatant rip of Amaterasu for the most part. Also, something like this needs a drawback.

Name: Raikengan Activation (Eye of Divinity)
Rank: N/A
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Description: When activating the Raikengan,an amount of white flame chakra will be burst from the user. A white flame will appear in the on their forehead and their eyeball will be completely white. When activating the Raikegan, user will be completely calm, changing his personality into a calm, fearless, smart and powerful person. There would be some unknown abilities while this eye is active.

Approved

Name: Yoshidou Release: The Hungry Flames
Rank: S
Description: By using the flames of Yoshidou,it is believed that the flames is 100x hotter than the Yoshidou. This flames burns everything within user's wide field of vision to cinders with a white powerful flame, to the degree of being able to burn an entire forest or village with it. It can even smother regular flames easily. Cleansing everything in its path.

Unnaproved, lessen power and add side effect

Name: Yoshidou Release: Protectors of Novus
Rank: A
Description: By using the indistinguishible flames of Yoshidou,the user shapes it into spikes that both shield the user as well as burn and pierce the opponent if they touch them.the technique is controlled by the user's right eye.

When Yoshidou is approved, this will be as well

Name: Yoshidou Release: Shield of Ragna
Rank: N/A
Description: By using the Ring of Ragna,the user can use the spirit of the Hundred Ragna Knights to protect the user. A powerful light will cover the user absorbing all incoming attacks without harming the user. The shield of light can almost protect the user from most powerful attacks. The jutsu can also be used thrice a battle.

Make for protected up to A ranked attacks and I assume you mean twice

Name: Divine Angel Mode (Stage One)
Rank: N/A
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Description: This is one of the Raikengan's powerful mode. When the Raikengan is active, he would gain speed, power, strength and will power and his white flame on the forehead would grow larger. A blanket of white flame aura aura would flow on his body. Any weapon that the user will possess,it will be channeled by white flame chakra. The user can blast some amount of white flame chakra through the air. The white flame aura can be also used to extend the user's attack range.

Approved

Name: Divine Angel Mode (Stage Two)
Rank: N/A
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Description: The second stage of the Divine Angel mode enlarges the flame of the user's forehead. There would be medium-sized chakra wings that would let the user fly through the air increase speed twice faster than the first stage. In this stage,any attack from the user will create impacts and destructible damages. The user may also create more powerful chakra blast and has longer range. In this power of chakra,it can break some genjutsus.

Approved

Name: Divine Angel Mode (Stage Three)
Rank: N/A
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Description: The third stage of the Divine Angel Mode will expand the user's wing's size increasing user's speed,agility,power and strength than the first stage. The flames in the forehead may also expand and the chakra will be more destructive than the stage two. He will have the ability of absorbing other kinds of flames and convert it into his own chakra. In this mode, the user may send powerful amount of power into the enemy in any attacks.

Up to rank A this can absorb fire based attacks, and add post limit to be in this stage

---This jutsus has the affinities of Yoshidou flame (white flame)

Name: White Lightning: Surging Waves
Rank: C
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of white electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

approved

Name: White Lightning: Sparkling Arrows
Rank: B
Description: From using white lightning chakra,the user is able to shape the chakra into surging arrows that can be noticeable by the opponent. But if the arrows will contact to anything on may land on something,it will burst powerful electricity that will lead the enemy to numb.

Approved, but please reword

Name: White Lightning: Cloud Spears
Rank: A
Description: By using white lightning,user shoots a spear of lightning in a long ranged method. This flames can create another lightning to strike the opponent. The another lightning can also create another lightning spear forming multiple zigzag pattern making it hard to dodge.

Where do you get flames from this?

Name: White Lightning: Sparkling Needles
Rank: A
Description: User is able to create countless amount of lightning needles in just a wave. This senbons can strike through multiple targets and different vital organs of the body. It can also turn the person into calm being,transforming chakra into original form.

I don't understand its effect, if the person is calm already, then what?

Name: White Lightning: Sparkling Swords
Rank: A
Description: The user can create a white lightning sword and shoots it into the victim. While in the air,the swords will be duplicated up to fifty swords that can stab through multiple targets.

Add a two use limit on this

Name: Summoning: White Lightning Clouds
Rank: A
Description: Takasu is able to summon a number of white clouds (up to 20). Each cloud can make one copy of itself it will be attacked by any kind of ninjutsu. The clouds can shoot long spears of white lightning into the target. It can attack synchronize or out of tempo. These clouds can also protect the user from any attacks. The clouds will be dispersed after 5 posts.

This entire jutsu is horribly wrote, re write it. As far as what it does, I don't even understand how you summon clouds. The fact that you say it will be attacked by any type of jutsu adds further confusion, redo this.

Name: White Lightning: Shadow Lightning Blast
Rank: S
Description: The user stomps the ground under him, sending a great amount of white lightning chakra underground, whilst the earth is a conductor, the lightning travels very quick to the enemy, once the user takes his foot off the ground the lightning underground blasts, creating an explosion in a circular area of approx 10 square meters.The blast goes up 20 meters in the sky, and it can completely turn the enemy into ash if completely hit.

Add a two use limit to this


((These jutsu were not well written and makes it hard for mods and admins to make a decision on you app son. I will wait until you make modifications to finish with this to lessen you current work load on this.))

Just want to add,

Sunagakure no Sato isnt cloud.

Cloud is Kumogakure no Sato.

Only Genin, and Academy Students are available .
Ranks are being cut short due to so much higher ranks .

To make this statement with you sounding mean, this is an app with the length needed for a higher ranked shinobi and the wording of an academy student. Being that you wouldn't be approved to be an anbu, I'd really suggest you keep the idea of this character and make him as an academy student.

I don't understand .. When I checked the Rank Availability,there were vacant for Anbu because some Anbu are inactive for long time like the Aburame .. I don't think I can take being a Genin or a student .. And as I see, Kyoshiro Aburame, Kakashi Hatake and Neji Hyuuga from the Anbu are inactive.

Jutsus- fixed

Please use our Jutsu Template for your jutsus

Here is for normal ones:


Name:
Rank:
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Clan jutsus template:


Name:
Rank:
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Done ..

Actually you are allowed to have 2 S-Ranks, fix that and you will be approved.

Done ..

Approved.

Ok, this app was approved without further reading, might as well correct some parts.

Bold words are my words.

Yoshidou (Flames of Peace): The Yoshidou represents peace/light/frendship/purity of the owner.These flames are proved offensive because it can burn anything in a long period of time and the heat of the flames is like the heat of the boiling lava. The user with a high ranking Raikengan can manipulate the flames depending on their ability. The flames can also counter Bijuu chakra or any rampaging organism. It can turn them
back into their original chakra form.



Explain how can the flames counter Bijuu chakra?.. in the NaruVerse, only the first Hokage Senju and currently Yamato are the only person who can turn back jinchuuriki into their human form. And they must endure a lot of hardship to pull that one off. And how can you can just do that in a single snap using a flame. You must remove this part of your kekkai genkai. This is a complete counter to Jinchuuriki's.


Name: Divine Angel Mode (Stage Three)
Rank: --
Element: --
Clan: Uchuzaki
Description: The third stage of the Divine Angel Mode will expand the user's wing's size increasing user's speed,agility,power and strength than the first stage. The flames in the forehead may also expand and the chakra will be more destructive than the stage two. He will have the ability of absorbing other kinds of flames and convert it into his own chakra. In this mode, the user may send powerful amount of power into the enemy in any attacks. At this stage,user's chakra will be like the Rokubi. 10 posts


User's chakra is like Rokubi's?, you just made a jinchuuriki without a bijuu level chakra. Remove that part, the bijuu's chakra are a ton times than a normal shinobi's chakra. Your kekkai genkai (which I see as a complete Rip-off of Sharingan + Amaterasu) makes up for your abilities. Its like your making a Sasuke/Itachi (both are very powerful shinobi) combined with a jinchuuriki. Again, remove that part that your chakra goes like Rokubi's, you may say that it doubles or triples, but not as large as Rokubi's.


Name: Yoshidou Release: Shield of Ragna
Rank: --
Element: --
Clan: Uchuzaki
Description: By using the Ring of Ragna,the user can use the spirit of the Hundred Ragna Knights to protect the user. A powerful light will cover the user absorbing all incoming attacks without harming the user. The shield of light can almost protect the user from most powerful attacks. The jutsu can also be used thrice a battle.

Naizu already said that lower the protecting abilities of this, plus please put a rank (and the way I see it, its another S-rank.)


Name: White Lightning: Sparkling Needles
Rank: A
Element: Lightning (white)
Description: User is able to create countless amount of lightning needles in just a wave. This senbons can strike through multiple targets and different vital organs of the body. It can also calm an organism's chakra, transforming chakra into original form/movement .

Again another ability that only the first Hokage and Yamato had pull off with so much effort, and its not even related to lightning remove the part that says it will transform someone into human form again.


Name: Lightning Chakra Affinity
Rank: C-S
Description: Having a affinity for fire allows a person to utilize raiton techniques with greater ease then someone who doesn't. Takira has discovered the when circulating Raiton chakra threw her chakra circulatory system that he is more resistant to electricity attacks. This in turn gives her some what of a natural immunity to lightning and electricity from techniques weaker then him. This skill ranges with many ranks, the more adept one is to raiton the more resistant they have with fire. This is a passive technique that Takasu has.
C = Immune to D- burns from raiton techniques
B = Immune to C- burns from raiton techniques
A = Immune to B- burns from raiton techniques
S = Immune to A- burns from raiton techniques


Understand that this jutsu only allows you to be immune to BURNS.


Name: White Flame: Droplets of Peace
Rank: A
Element: Yoshidou Flame
Description: The jutsu is used in a middle of rain or rainstorm. By concentration,the user is able to transform each droplet into white flame. Making it hit and burn all things under 360 degrees. Only Takasu is immune on the jutsu for the white flames are part of Takasu's body. The rain will ignore any defense because it can melt any solid defenses and can pass through water. The jutsu stops at user's will or when the rain stops.

You cannot say that this jutsu can pass every defenses in the way, because not everything is solid.
And another thing about this jutsu, its an S-Rank jutsu with its power plus this takes a lot of chakra.



One last thing, you have way too many S-Ranks, you may need to remove some because as you can only have one S-rank jutsus.

List of S-ranks you have.


Name: Sword Ability: Angelic Flame Sword
Rank: B-S
Element: Yoshidou Flame
Description: By using the white flame chakra with a sword,the sword will be covered by white flame chakra that will increase its length and density of the blade from several feet out the sword's physical blade range. This is accomplished to use the white flame chakra as an extension of the blade. The flame enhanced the blade to increase sharpness to cut through large rock or iron steel. If the sword will have a contact with the enemy,it will burn them ferociously by the effect of the Yoshidou.


Name: Yoshidou Release: The Hungry Flames
Rank: S
Element: Yoshidou Flame
Rank: Uchuzaki
Description: By using the flames of Yoshidou,it is believed that the flames is 50x hotter than the boiling lava. This flames burns everything within user's wide field of vision to cinders with a white powerful flame, to the degree of being able to burn an entire forest or village with it. It can even smother regular flames easily. Cleansing everything in its path. The jutsu can only be used twice a battle. In one usage, it will weaken the white flame on the user's forehead.


Name: White Lightning: Shadow Lightning Blast
Rank: S
Description: The user stomps the ground under him, sending a great amount of white lightning chakra underground, whilst the earth is a conductor, the lightning travels very quick to the enemy, once the user takes his foot off the ground the lightning underground blasts, creating an explosion in a circular area of approx 10 square meters.The blast goes up 20 meters in the sky, and it can completely turn the enemy into ash if completely hit. Can be used twice a battle.

Name: Lightning Chakra Affinity
Rank: C-S
Description: Having a affinity for fire allows a person to utilize raiton techniques with greater ease then someone who doesn't. Takira has discovered the when circulating Raiton chakra threw her chakra circulatory system that he is more resistant to electricity attacks. This in turn gives her some what of a natural immunity to lightning and electricity from techniques weaker then him. This skill ranges with many ranks, the more adept one is to raiton the more resistant they have with fire. This is a passive technique that Takasu has.
C = Immune to D- burns from raiton techniques
B = Immune to C- burns from raiton techniques
A = Immune to B- burns from raiton techniques
S = Immune to A- burns from raiton techniques


You have 4, remove 3.

Since your a Jounin, remove 2

And another thing, some of your jutsus dont have ranks, put ranks unto them.