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Yuna Enriendo
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| ~General Information~Name: Yuna Enriendo
Nickname/Alias: The Blind Maiden
Weight:119
Height:5'7
Age:21
Gender:Female
Appearance:
-Clothing: Yuna wears a common swordswoman purple garb that is enchanted. There are four larger black latches that stabilize the garbs blade closures. When a latch is released a huge blade is released. Yuna carries four enchanted blades and in her 10 purple smaller latches contains about an assortment of two blades per latch and in her 30 pink latches on her garb's brim. Each pink latch contains hundreds of kunai, shuriken, and other throwing weapons.
-Physical appearance:Yuna has a very distinctive appearance. She has pure white eyes, pretty much the smae eyes as the Hyuuga clan, just not the same Doujutsu. She is blind, but her eyes can see once she opens up her Enriendo dimension. She has beautiful ivory colored skin, with little to no blemishes. She has never had acne, and has never had any skin problems. She paints her nails purple and her lips are always rouged with black lipstick over red, but comes out beautifully, not smudgy or gross. Yuna's body is quite beautiful and is luscious with it all. She has the body size of 5 feet 6 inches. Her hair color is a deep violet purple. Personality:~Clan Information~Clan Name:Enriendo Kekei Genkai:Within each and every one of the Enriedo is their own world, each one different. For the clan was cursed with having the potential of paradise within them, but only when they were already content - eliminating the need. Each and every member is born with the base, a flat expanse of white land. From birth to the age of fifteen, this landscape is constantly changing, fluctuating with new experiences and adapting to their personality and mood. Only when they become fifteen years of age does the concept set itself in place, and this can only be changed by memory loss or extreme emotional trauma. However, mood still effects this world, for better or for worse.
The base is a small island, centered by a tower that reaches to the heavens. If the Enriedo is filled with hatred, the trees will be scarred by fire and the tower run down and crumbling. If the Enriedo is filled with joy and love, the trees will have disappeared into a field of thornless roses with a the massive tower painted magnificent colours and extending to it's full height.
This world is a dream that can be entered at will, at it's base. An archive in the mind of the senses soaked with a chakra that reeks of spiritual presence to those who can sense chakra or souls, though the spirit is long gone. This chakra has lanced into all areas of the brain, so it seems a mystery as to why the mind isn't in the state all the time, waking or sleeping. The truth is... it is. The reason that the clansmen do not stay still, lucid, dreaming, is the Enriedo's doujutsu, which was evolved to pierce through the dream into reality. This is the Mezamegan, which shall be addressed momentarily. All of the Enriedo have the ability to enter one another's dreams through the connection they all have through the Kami of Sleep and the Great Dreaming, which the Enriedo perceive as the connection between all dreams, innate like theirs or sporadic like the normal person's. Within the inner world, the Enriedo is king of existence. Though they cannot create anything until they have totally mastered their own dream, they can manipulate what they are supplied with - be it a withered tree or a volcano. This is useless in battle until later levels, seeing as the world is all to their own... until others can be forcibly pulled into the dream. --------------------- The Mezamegan was a creation of necessity after the curse, a device needed so that one could survive outside of their own mind. This doujutsu is awakened a few weeks after birth, and from then is active throughout life. It has no additional abilities besides allowing one to see, hear, feel, taste, and smell things beyond the illusion of the ever-constant dream that they are connected to. That is, until one's Inner World has become static, easing up slightly on the strain on the Mezamegan and allowing it to branch off into other abilities that can be developed by the Enriedo. The most significant of these is the Ichimu Dokusha, or Dream Reader. This allows one to, by staring at someone and entering a daydream-like state, to cycle through dreams that they have experienced. There are time limits however, depending mostly on what is recalled by the target... nightmares or recurrent dreams can be detected even outside of the estimated rank ranges, due to their relative severity.
[Genin - Can read dreams two nights old, takes four posts to read.] [Chuunin - Can read dreams four nights old, takes two posts to read.] [Jounin - Can read dreams a week old, dreams are read instantaneously.] [S - Can read dreams a week and a half old, dreams are read instantaneously.]
'Reading' dreams is experiencing them - that is, delving into the memories of a target's dreams and integrating them into themselves. This allows the Enriedo to relive the dreams at an accelerated pace while still retaining all of the information. This is highly impractical in battle, however, and is best used in plot-related circumstances.
Whenever one wishes to delve back into the dream, they simply deactivate the Mezamegan. -------------------------------------- The Negan was developed as the anti-doujutsu to the Mezamegan, and all that it has awakened in have become shinobi. The Negan allows one to amplify their dream world to encompass a certain area, creating an illusion of an illusion. Or, the reverse, the ultimate technique of the Enriedo: tearing a person from reality and dragging them into one's own dream. This is associated with the bulk of the techniques of the Enriedo, and like all other techniques, is divided into power levels depending on ranks. Within the dream world, one has total control over visual and auditory illusion, creating a sort of 'Utakata Zone' in which they can throw around any genjutsu. However, this is limited in the fact that one can only manipulate what is present in the dream - eg, if one has the World Tree Yggdrasil, they can extend roots to entangle the target to make them feel trapped. Pain cannot be felt until chuunin level.
[Genin - Can extend their dream over a ten meter radius, can be held for three posts. Two closest people are caught, rest are unaffected.] [Chuunin - Can extend their dream over a twenty meter radius, can be held for five posts. Four closest people are caught, rest are unaffected.] [Jounin - Can extend their dream over a thirty meter radius, can be held for seven posts. Foes can be pulled into the Dream. Six closest people are caught, rest are unaffected.] [S - Can extend their dream over a forty meter radius, can be held for nine posts. Foes can be pulled into the Dream. Nine closest people are caught, rest are unaffected, but can be drawn in if they walk into the radius extended.] Clan Symbol: Three Eyes Clan History: The history of the dreamers is, unfortunately, lost. All of the scriptures were lost in a massive fire in the clan complex, which was located in the village of Mugakure, or the Village Hidden in Nothing. A towering city sheathed in a constantly-shifting illusion located on a small island off the coast of Tea Country, the fire ravaged the clan. The few survivors managed to find their way to the Land of Tea. Little was known besides what was passed by word of mouth, which, unfortunately, deteriorates. Apparently the Enriedo came from the far east and settled on the island, creating projections of the dreams present within them - apparently granted by Utakatagami, the god of transience, when the elder sacrificed his life to allow the clan to escape from the Eastlands that they immigrated from. However, he also struck them with a weakness, deciding to watch these 'feeble little humans' adapt, as he had heard that they could do from the more attention-paying spirits of nature. To the god's delight, they freed themselves from the delusion while harnessing it as a weapon - so he granted them passage across the ocean.
After the fire, the clan spread across the continent, gaining a particularly strong foothold in the Land of Tea and the Land of Grass. Ability Summary: look ^ ~Rank/Village Information~Classification: Legendary Swordsman of the Mist
Letter Rank:A
Village: Mist ~Skill Information~
Skill Specialty:
Main: Kenjutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity:Wind and WaterSpecial Characteristics:- Increased Chakra Pools - High Stamina - High Agility - Tactical - Abnormal Reflexes (Super quick responses) - Abnormal Hearing - Great concentration and focus - Very Psychological - Extremely Intellectual - IQ rating of 268
Yuna being an Enriendo clan member, her brain power has to be advanced higher and pushed further in limits than normal. She took strategy classes and rose to the top. She loves to read (brale) and write stories (every typing key is completely memorized). Throughout the ninja work Yuna is a renown author. She also had to learn the workings and fuctions of the brain and understanding emmotions, fears, weakenesses, strengths,limitations and much more. Obviously Yuna is one of the brighter bulbs in the ninja world. Intellect is born with a child and also is the inscribed I.Q score of the child. One's I.Q can not go up or down it is basiclly the way a person is able to break down data and understand and respond to questions faster. Being this, Yuna has an I.Q of 268. Because Yuna was blind she gained some stats that are not normal to average people. Her hearing levels are high, she can literally hear a pin drop in a yard of grass about half a mile away (Yuna has mastered the flow of chakra and is able to concentrate it in a flowing circle around her ears and constantly hears most everything in the areas radius). Yuna is able to tune out noises to find what she is searching for. Yuna also has a very focused mind and is always concentrated, pretty much in a permanent state of meditation. Yuna spends a lot of time training with ot without people, making her highly capable of enduring harsh scenarios. ~History/RP Sample~History/Background Story:Psychological Training: *finishing last* Yuna was born into the Enriendo clan, the people who entered dreams. Her first living years were spent in intellectual training such as learning how to read, write, and to form and solve complex puzzles. These lessons trained her up for the next level of classes that were all psychological based and helped her in her understanding of the human brain. Every class that Yuna took was extremely long and vigorous amounts of effort had to be poured into each of them. For Yuna, each class was fun to take and each class had its own special meaning. During her school years Yuna also took related arts classes, such as engineering, tool and weapon making, and the great big bang boom class of explosions. For each class Yuna took she was the top student. Yuna also graduated far earlier than any member should have been allowed to, but she was way too much of a genius.
Soon after graduating, Yuna was approached by her clan leader. Since the Enriendo clan was a neutral party found in the grass country, each graduating member was allowed to become a member of a village of their choosing, that is if the Kage wants to accept them in.
Genin:[/color] After Yuna chose her country to pledge fealty to, she waited until her clan leader had written out her request to the Mizukage. Time had flown by until and bird flew back into the watch tower. The bird held a message stating that Yuna would be accepted into the ranks of the mist ninja once she reports to the kage's office. Yuna being very ecstatic and feeling glorified left to go do some long adventuring. She left and went to see the villages that went through the route to her next home village. These sights and images left permanent impressions into her mind. She saw many things that would hopefully help her inside of her future. Many people met her that were nice and a few were extremely cruel and tried robbing, killing, and kidnapping her. All the bad actions were canceled out do to Yuna's trickery and high psychological abilities. Yuna only thought of these situations as minor training. After a month of traveling, Yuna found her way into the Hidden Mist Village.
Yuna liked the cool look to the mist village compared to the quaint grassy land of Kusagakure. The watery elements were amazing to Yuna, for she had already known her base chakra elements were Water styled and Wind styled. With these qualities at hand, Yuna knew that she would thrive here in this land. After walking the city's misty land she found her way to the mist village's command area, the place where the Mizukage did business, and walked through the front doors. Yuna was confronted by two Jounin level ninjas who stopped Yuna in her place and said that civilian children could not go past them and further into the building. Yuna took out her letter from the Mizukage stating her approval to become a member of the mist ninja and the ninja who had blocked her earlier let her by. Walking further into the building she found the place she needed to go to the Kage's office. She knocked on the door and awaited her entrance. The door was opened by the Mizukage's assistant and greeted her to to the Kage's desk. The Mizukage looked at Yuna with annoyance. Yuna following with a statement of gratitude. The Mizukage was now confused, for he had forgotten about the Enriendo girl, and asked why she was here. Yuna then held out her letter of acceptance to the Mizukage and then he remembered. Many events followed this rendezvous like Yuna's coronation to ninja and such.
Yuna completed many missions with absolute perfection and always with grace. Be her missions low or high for Genin level. Power and intelligence were two of Yuna's major gifts. But Yuna's skills with the blade were unbelievable for her level. Yuna's squad leader was majorly impressed with Yuna's talents and favored her over the others with obvious knowledge that she would succeed more in life than any of the others in the squad. Growing evermore, she entered the international Chuunin exams that took place in the Sand Village. The written examination was the easy part, but the final battles became a little tough. The area surrounding Yuna had a very limited supply of water and her main chakra source was water based. This lead to her bringing an old family heirloom; a blade that has gone through many ninja wars and its strength, speed, and beauty is only reflected and shown through high mental powers (its an Enriendo blade). With the sub element of wind, Yuna was able to improve her speed and grace on the battle field. That had a huge help in the maneuvering of her sword. AT the end, Yuna was the victor of the Chuunin exams and behind her two others gained the title of Chuunin. Chuunin Ark:The moment Yuna became a chuunin, she felt glorified. Knowing that another exam was coming near at the end of the year, the Jounin exams, because of this she spent a lot of time training and doing missions. Everyone of Yuna's new found friends supported her, they even trained with her until they could not even move their mouths from exhaustion. Yuna was very determined to become a Jounin and prove herself worthy of that title. Beauty, power, and intelligence grew every minute for Yuna in her growing life. She knew that everything she accomplished would be her beacon or denial to Jounin-ship. Jounin Ark:Swordsman Acceptance Arc:Roleplay Sample:- Spoiler:
Seven years before the fall of the Lich King, upon a cold, breezy, summer night, a small gathering of men meet; a conglomeration of individuals packed into the halls of one building, into one room. Within the halls of Gilneas’ Town center, the walls tremble from the grand commands of a great man, of a King. Two men, led by King Greymane, Ruler of the Gilneas Nation, assemble items necessary for a trip of overwhelming proportions; a venture worthy of Greymane himself.
But it is what stirs the blood of the King’s veins that motivates this departure. It is what strangles his sanity that drives this expedition. It is what curses his heart that brings impatience…and anxiety…
“This is not right!” My heavy feet clank against the thick, wooden floors. “Stop wasting time!”
“My lord,” Captain Kowl gawks uselessly across the room. “My lord, why the haste?”
Rage grips my arm as it slams into the table, “Do not question me!” I control myself, lowering my voice the best one can. “Just do it…”
My servant, Grin “Gin” Jhok, scampers across the room, carrying within his arms a mesh of miscellaneous items. He throws it upon the table before wrapping all it within a thick, brown, leather cloth.
A toothbrush slips from his grip, slamming onto the old, dusty floor. He ceases all activity to stare awkwardly upon this tiny instrument. His body quivers gently as he glances to me and then to his hygienic tool. Pick it up, Gin. Pick it up, or leave it.
He hesitates for a moment longer, letting precious time slip through his wrinkled, aged fingers. Pick it up…or leave it!
Finally he flinches, reaching to the floor. Annoyingly, he rolls it between his fingers as he gazes disgustingly upon the wooden item. Charcoals churn within my chest, fueling a torrent of heated rage throughout my body.
“Pick it up, Gin!” Uncontrollably I shout, “Pick it up, and finish your damned work!”
Instantly, he whips upright, fear spreading across his old face. Shaking eyes dance within the hollowed sockets of his skull. A tongue quivers within the damp, dark orifice that is his mouth. Hands quake wildly.
After a brief, delayed moment, he throws the item into his pile, completing his duty as properly told. Old Gin, he is a good man – a tall, good man. A thick, white blanket of white hair covers his folding scalp. Gray, aged eyes match the wrinkles that one could once call flesh. He is a strong man, a very strong man, indeed. But even I, the mighty Greymane, bring the man to his knee.
Yes, many men find themselves within the very situation that Gin is pitted in now; my strength and power are overwhelming to the greatest of man!
But, sadly, modesty grips me currently, forcing my own humble thoughts from my mind. A task is at hand, and it must be completed.
“I have finished, Lord.” Gin scoops the bag into a large pack and rests both upon a heavy, wooden chair.
A smirk forms upon his face, and, as a king will do, I nod to keep it plastered firmly there. He is a diligent worker. That is why I have kept him since my own birth. My parents knew a great, hard man when they saw him. And I know a worker when I see him.
“My lord, I have my property properly gathered as well.” The Captain throws a heavy sack upon his shoulders, bracing for the move, as a good soldier should.
In response, Gin hurriedly places his mound of assorted goods upon his back. Both of them are prepared, so it is time for their grand leader, their grand Greymane, to guide them down our glorious path.
Swiftly, I shift and march steadily towards the door. Heavy, hulking boots crack upon the wooden floor. My large, wide, tree-trunk arm extends outwards, fingers wrapping around the metallic knob.
With a firm twist, it opens, and I swing it open. I rush forward…wait! My lumbering form spins, knocking back both of my loyal companions. They should have not trailed so closely!
I motion to them, directing them outside. My large, bear like hand latches to the side of the door until both escape outside, and I throw it shut. Promptly, I pivot, facing towards a small container behind me. Gently, softly, King, take the contents from within.
Bulking, oversized fingers curl around the small edges of the wooden construct. A small, unsealed latch bounces against the side as I drag the lid up. Without hesitation, I reach, grab wrapped object within, and…
“My Lord?” The Captain startles me.
Swiftly, I shove the mummified item into my thick trench coat and spin, “Captain! Mind your interruptions, you fool!”
Kowl flinches and steps from the door as I approach him, “Apologizes, my lord.”
I dart across the room, letting the interloping man close the door behind me. My hands pat my chest, ensuring that the item rests where it should.
“No worries, Captain, I am a forgiving man. All wrongs have been overlooked.”
He nods a few times, but I grow tired of watching him. Swiftly, I march forward, leading the other two forcefully and properly. Within seconds, we round a small bend, enter another hallway and aim for a large, curling staircase before us.
Our feet ring weak echoes through the narrow, hollow halls. Packs jingle with useless items as my two followers heave themselves onward. Wooden planks creak as we near the edge of the floor and begin our descent.
Cold, wooden railings glide beneath my giant paw. Dull thuds radiate from the strong, well-constructed steps -- built of my very hand. Padding upon the stairs absorb the bulk of the sound, and the gleam as moonlight glistens upon…
Moonlight…
Adrenaline fills my chest. Veins turn to ice, matching the temperature of the chilly banisters. My eyes divert upwards, and I stop. Peering through the large window is a circular disc.
Black blotches cover the vast surface of the white nuisance. Gray grooves nestle with the ominous horror. Black clouds tickle the edges of the monstrously, but do nothing to hide it from sight and mind. The Moon…
“King? Why have we stopped?” Gin speaks to my quietly.
Yes, why have you stopped, great king? Do not let that sinister sphere distract you. Stay strong; get to the bottom of these steps!
Swiftly, I jettison down the now screeching steps. Wood bends and buckles to my lumbering trot. Winding railings creak and shake as sweaty palms shake them. In seconds, I feel my thick, leathery soles slap the stone floor of the main living area.
Ahead of us rests a large, wooden door. Perfectly carved windows rest in the center of each door, but their sleek surfaces blur all reality and sight. Darkness creeps across the room, exposing the night as the true, silent stalker that it is.
My bulky arm shoots forward, fingers wrapping the metal handle. With a great force, I rip the door upon, letting a freezing, stinging breeze waft across my gentle flesh. The thick beard of mine shakes and drags back as the wind catches its steel fibers.
A thick, heavy leg drags from beneath the elongated coat of mine. It slaps into the large, rectangular slab of stone, followed quickly by the second. I shuffle forward a bit, positioning myself at the edge of the hobble street.
To my left is a long, straight path. Buildings are aligned against the pathway, but are dormant in the dark. My eyes follow the path until all that remains are distant blocks, and needling bends. That direction leads to the dock, and the sea beyond.
The moonlight that once blared brightly now rests dull behind the thick, gray clouds. All the land appears as dark as the vast cover overhead. All except for the random gray streaks that shift between Gilneas’ buildings, and nestle within folds of clouds.
Matching the daunting, dreary nature of the visage, is the overpowering silence; it caresses the mind, tempting it to wander aimlessly. Even the wind is overwhelming through the piercing void of sound.
Where is he?
Then, as if on cue, a dull thudding echoes across the tranquil skies. Rhythmic drumming clanks louder and louder. Hard, hollow objects slam heavily against properly aligned streets.
Swiftly, my gaze diverts to my right. Second by second the thuds turn to loud clomping stomps, revealing what I have so anticipated for. Emerging over the turn of the gently, rolling hill is a horse. Quickly following is a heavy, black carriage.
The hurried ride pulls up along side us, stopping with the door perfectly aligned for our entry. Instantly ,the side door bursts open, exposing a shadowy, dark compartment suited just for a man of my grand stature.
Before I can reach for the frame, the rider shouts to us, “Lord Greymane, the master apologizes for his tardiness.” Black, heavy robes shift as the man lifts cloth-covered hands back at the body of the carriage, “Do make yourself comfortable.”
The stagecoach shakes as my large foot stomps the light, metal step. Reins shuffle in the hands of the cloaked, hooded driver, but I pay no heed to the peasant. Instead, I climb into the carriage, and shuffle to the seat on my right side. The ride shakes again as I flop into my position.
Gin clumsily squeezes past my legs, placing himself to my right. The Captain throws his pack forward, before promptly sitting to my left. He closes the door behind him, and the small, interior space grows silent. Across from the three of us is a pitch-black wall. All light seems to flee from the opposite end of this carriage. However, a red, plush seat can be made out from here, and, if my eyes play me right, I do believe I see legs wrapped behind a thick robe...
“Master Greymane, pleasure to see you are…commanding as ever.” A voice barrels through the shadowy cover of other seat.
I squint, hoping to break through the heavy covering, but it is too dark. Quickly, I smirk, hiding any sign of confusion or alarm.
“Lord, marvelous to see you as…withdrawn as ever.”
A heavy hand shifts through the shadows, lifting to the wall of the carriage. RAP, RAP, RAP. Dull drums roll from a curled fist as the man rattles the walls of the carriage.
Instantly, the sounds of whipping reins ring, and jerking wood shifts us forward. Sounds of trotting hooves return, but are drawn to the background. Shifting forward, a figure, head hidden in hood, body lost in robe, appears from the shadowy seat.
His right arm braces his leg, while returning moonlight, breaking through the side window, exposes his chin, mouth, and nose.
“So, Greymane, what say you on current pleas of your fellow allies?” The deep, crackling voice of the man slips past his straight lips.
I grunt loudly, “Allies? They are gnats amongst my grand shadow!” My voice projects forcefully, “King Menethil demands I send aid against the rising threat. He dares commands an answer from a man holding his weapon!”
I lean forward, rage fully exposed, “The Alliance will have my answer. I will not be viewed weak by pointy-eared elves, nor pitied by Lorderon’s feeble ruler!”
My eyes narrow as I continue, “But I do not believe we came here for politics, did we, Lord?”
Eyes ripple through his dark cover. Red, burning coals light strangely at the back of his eyes. The flares quickly fade into two, gray pupils. That was rather odd. The light is playing tricks on me. No, no…my mind is doing all the witchery here. My nerves are rattling my normal strength. Do not let it overwhelm you, Greymane.
As my introvert moment comes to an end, the man leans back into his chair, but remains visible, “No, that we did not, Greymane.”
There is a brief silence as his eyes sweep my body.
“Did you bring it?”
My eyes sweep him. My lips curl downward as my hand shifts into my pocket. Quickly, I draw the wrapped object from my jacket, letting the man see it clearly.
“Almost insulting you even had to ask, Lord.”
He drags forward again, eyes locked on the small, tan item.
“Must make sure my investments are worthwhile, King. No offense intended, but one must ask.”
He shifts across the chair, eyes never breaking from the object. His hands lift up and rock, letting his robe slide down his arms. Fingers curl slightly as both palms draw to the sides of the tiny package. Lips quiver gently, while foam eagerly coats their edges.
I snatch my arm back, shoving the object back into the same heaven near my own beating heart.
“My end of the bargain is exactly where it belongs, Lord.” He glares, frustrated at me, “You will retrieve it when you fulfill your end.”
As he scoots back into his chair, he frowns, “Always the businessman, my friend.” He emits a weak chuckle, “Just would not be Greymane the Great without strings attached.”
I make to speak, but a sudden jerk of the carriage, and with a heavy rocking motion, we begin to slow. Reins whip again, but this time we come to a stop. The wooden door flies open, letting the freezing, cold wind feed into the tiny room.
Swiftly, the Lord stands up, makes for the door, and carefully departs the vehicle. Without hesitation, I jump after him, exiting the carriage just as he moves from its side. I hear the other two scurry from behind, but I am distracted.
Ahead, rests rows of long, wooden docks. They jut in all directions, forming sharp bends and hook shapes for a vast fleet. A vast array of ships litters the harbor, but it is one that draws my attention.
Stationed nearest to us is a large, black vessel. Two, thick masts elevate high into the air. Ropes dangle and drag from the side wooden pillars as crewman work diligently upon the deck. Standard, curved railings give the fine rolling curve of the ship, as well as hold cannons.
The outside almost appears glazed, as if coated with a fine, reflective material. Black planks build the walls perfectly, like scales to a dragon. Speaking of which, at the bow rests a large, curling head of a black serpent’s head. Masterfully crafted teeth are exposed within the opened mouth, while thin, hefty ears protrude backwards. Spikes line down the spine and back of the skull before ending at the deck.
“My vessel, Greymane.” The lord slaps my arm forcefully; “Let your men make themselves at home. It is going to be a long voyage.”
I nod weakly, but shout firmly, “Gin, Captain, go aboard the ship.”
The Lord nods, “Yes, have the Skipper find you your stations. He should be the large, angry fellow shouting orders.”
Gin and Kowl throw nods to us, sound off properly, and quickly scamper to the boat like children to a carnival. The two of us stand silently, both gawking at the grand design before us.
Sadly, as I watch, the sinister, always watching sphere appears in the top corner of my vision. Again, the white wrinkles ruin all sense of joy, or feeling of strength. The one, lone crater stares down upon me, calling to me and my…curse.
My lips smack, and I speak softly, “Lord, can your source truly give me a cure?”
He lets go of my shoulder, shuffling forward quickly. Irritated, I follow after him. We near the ship quickly, but my anger grows as his ignorance wears on me. My lips part, but do not let a word loose.
“Greymane,” he stops, turning to me before me step upon the ramp that leads to the ship, “You almost insult me.”
A spiteful smirk forms on his lips, “He can do more than simply heal what ails you, King. He can do much, much more.”
Turning from me, he steps onto the thick, wooden slope and begins his ascension. A weak sense of relief nestles within my core, but does not truly envelop the harsh scratching within.
I make after him, but my eyes divert to the ominous orb overhead. It still breaks the sky, letting its unforgiving, unyielding rays burn my very flesh. It still breaks the sky, harassing my very sanity with each passing second.
“Lord Prestor,” I speak to the man as we near the top, and make for the deck of the ship, “I have trusted you for quite some time…”
He turns, staring up at me. Again, I take sight of brief, burning embers within his eyes. Such strength and fury within his very glance. It almost feels as if fiery damnation reins from his very being; as if he can melt you with sight alone…
“And I have you, Greymane.” He nods heavily, “I, Lord Daval Prestor, am a man of my word, aspect of…honesty.” He turns from me, “In the end, King, we will both be very, very pleased.”
At that, he makes across the deck, leaving me to stand alone. Looking down, I take in all the active crew. Men all of all sorts hurry across the cold, hard deck. They stir up torrent of sounds, but are hidden from the world. My two loyal soldiers, Daval, and myself, are the only ones that know of what is happening this day.
Of course, I do let out what haunts my dreams, what curses my veins. How can I? I am Greymane, and the world looks up to me. I am Greymane the Great, ruler of the strongest nation on this planet. I am Greymane…and I fear no man.
My eyes shift up, letting the malicious, distant planet fill my sight. And soon, I shall not fear you.
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| | | Revy Izumi Missing-Nin
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| Subject: Re: Dreamless~wip~ Thu 31 Dec 2009, 12:05 pm | |
| -5% chakra regen. per post
how exactly does that work? | |
| | | Lkitty Kazekage
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| Subject: Re: Dreamless~wip~ Thu 31 Dec 2009, 12:25 pm | |
| I think that means his chakra gets decreased by 5% per post. | |
| | | Yuna Enriendo
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| Subject: Re: Dreamless~wip~ Thu 31 Dec 2009, 1:04 pm | |
| ~Jutsu~Name:Air Pressure Clone Rank:Wind Release, B-Rank, Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary Element:Wind Description:This technique allows the user to create solid cloness out of concentrated air that can perform tasks that the user is unwilling or unable to do. Unlike some clone techniques, air pressure clones are formed with a very specific amount of the users chakra. The amount of chakra used for the creation of the clone is directly proportional with the air that is concentrated into the clones solid form. As an added benefit these clones explode with a powerful gust of wind when they are destroyed. The precise chakra regulation of the technique allows the user of technique to create a clone just strong enough for the task at hand regulates the force that the clone releases when destroyed. It should be noted that since this technique explodes upon destruction it can be dangerous when used in range of allies. Name:Wind Pressurized Rank:Wind Release, A-Rank, Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary, Short to Mid-range. Element:wind Description:Yuna (had to switch names) employs this technique to manipulate the air pressure of a chosen area. It is thought that he developed this technique in order to combat Fire Release users. It is thought that this technique could also be used to decrease the amount of air resistance for movement as well as projectiles, subsequently increasing their velocity. Name:Vacuum Step Rank:Wind Release, A-Rank, Supplemental, All Ranges Element:Wind Description:This technique utilizes of the air pressure manipulation of Wind Pressurized in order to create a vacuum in front of the user. Doing this allows the user to move at incredible speeds and since its is performed in a vacuum the user isn't damaged by the extreme inertia and friction of taking off and stopping at inhuman speeds. Using this technique for extended periods of time will put a drain on a users chakra. As such this technique should be used with caution. Name:Wind Palm (風掌, Fushou) Rank:Wind Release, C-Rank, Offensive, Defensive, Short to Mid-range. Element:Wind Description:Yuna extends her palm in the desired direction and releases a concentrated bust of air. This technique has been shown to deflect projectile weapons, like kunai, with little effort. This technique seems to have the ability to add an explosive quality to fire due to it being composed of wind chakra. The method Yuna uses to perform this technique is unknown, since it was completed without the use of handseals, thus it is unable to be reproduced at this time. Name:Wind Release: Beast Wave Strike Rank:B-Rank, Offensive, Mid to long Range (5-10m+) Element:Wind Description:A powerful jutsu that uses large amounts of wind nature chakra that can cut and slash through anything material. Sora activates it by summoning chakra in his right hand, and then swipes a slicing chakra wave which appears to be controlled by Sora's will and thoughts. Sora first uses it in his fight with Naruto and again with Furido. Name:Wind Release: Breath of Innocence Rank:B-Rank offensive Long Range Element:Wind Description:The user inhales a small amount of air combines it with wind and a bit of fire chakra and then exhales it out with the force of a small hurricane. Basically the wind equivalent to Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique and works very well on those with evil in their hearts or those of evil essence. Name:Wind Release: Chaotic Maelstrom Rank:A Element:Wind Description:Chaotic Maelstrom requires a body of water to be present. It recquires wind and water styled chakra. Wind moved in a circular motion in the water to begin the current, as more and more wind force is applied, the stronger the current becomes. The current is powerful and those who get entered into the field Name:Wind Release: Falling Petal Dance Rank:C/B/A Element:Wind Description:This jutsu allows the user to summon a cyclone of petals to attack their opponent. The user can remain in one spot for the use of the jutsu, because he or she can direct it anywhere they desire. Therefore, the user can control the direction and power of the technique to the max as a last resort. Name:Wind Release: Full-Body Tornado Rank:B Element:Wind Description:The user spins around in a ballerina-like pirouette, while focusing their energy outside of their body. This creates a protective circle of whirling wind around them. Anything caught in the winds will be swept and swung around until the user stops spinning. If the stop is abrupt, the target will be tossed away like a rag doll. Name:Wind Release: Great Hurricane Shield Rank:B Element:Wind Description:While similar to Hurricane Shield, this jutsu spins the winds around the user much faster, making it much more difficult for an enemy to land a hit, because the winds throw their attacks off target. A few down sides of this are that if someone uses a fire technique on this jutsu, and the user doesn't cancel it quickly enough, that user is likely to get severely burned, as the hurricane whips the fire up to great strength. Another downside is that because of the speed of the winds, it is easy to tell when someone is using this technique. Name:Wind Release: Hurricane Shield Rank:C Element:Wind Description:Spins winds around user just fast enough to knock aside all aerial attacks, most elemental attacks, and mess up the aim of some physical attacks. As this is made up of wind, it is nearly invisible, making it a very helpful defense. A more advanced version of this is Ko Shippuu Toku (Great Hurricane Shield). Name:Wind Release: Great Spinning Breakthrough Rank:C Element:Wind Description:Wind Release: Great Spinning Breakthrough (風遁・大回突破, Fuuton: Daikaitoppa) is a Wind Release type ninjutsu. To use this jutsu, the user must first start spinning around and then release wind natured chakra around him, resulting a whilwind around the user. This jutsu severs and damages whatever comes in the range of it because the wind chakra is manipulated into the form of numerous tiny blades. It can be used for both defence and offence. Name:Fuuton: Hyaku Bureido no Jutsu (Wind Style: Hundred Blade Techique) Rank:B Element:Wind Description:When this jutsu is used, a strong wind will first be felt around Yuna and the opponent. The wind around Yuna will form into "Wind" Blades, infused into the wind from Yuna's chakra, similar to how Temari puts chakra into her wind from her fans. Then the attack will basically be shot toward the opponent. The blades can also only take a single-direct path, but can be controlled enough for each blade to be launched one at a time or simultaneously. ♥~Enriendo Clan Specific Jutsu~♥ Name:Crucifixion Rank: A Element: Dream Description: While the enemy is inside Yuna's dream world, five floating crosses appear. Each cross radiates divine and blinding light. Name: Haunt Rank: A Element:Description:Name: Lost Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:Name: Pain Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:Name: Suffering Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:Name: Puppetry Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:Name: Greed Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:Name: Lust Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:Inside the mind of the target becomes tainted to the point of assuming a self-indulgent character; craving for sexual intimacy and yearning of the soul; desire for the flesh, drugs and of the lower appetite contrary to reason. With these feelings unsatisfied he will begin to want to kill himself, but before he kills himself he has the choice of going through a red void or a blue void. The red void leads to the hellish pits below the temple where he can torture himself for painful pleasures as long as he wants before death. If he/ she enters the blue void, he will survive entirely by entering the platform of Yuna, located in the heavens, the top level or roof of the tower. Name: Gluttony Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:Inside the mind of the target becomes tainted to consistently want something without never achieving gratification. Name: Envy Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:Name: Acedia Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:
[b]Name: Despair Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:Name: Sloth Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:Name: Wrath Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:Name: Pride Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:Name: Vainglory Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:Name: Acedia Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:Name: Acedia Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:Name: Acedia Rank:[/b [b]Element:Description:
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| | | Yuna Enriendo
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| Subject: Re: Dreamless~wip~ Thu 31 Dec 2009, 1:06 pm | |
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| | | Revy Izumi Missing-Nin
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| Subject: Re: Dreamless~wip~ Thu 31 Dec 2009, 1:20 pm | |
| yes, which you need to explain on how you can do that | |
| | | Lord Vizer Retired
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| Subject: Re: Dreamless~wip~ Thu 31 Dec 2009, 5:37 pm | |
| Phff..my ass..you want increased chakra pools and chakra regeneration..better explain that as a KKG..because Shinobi cannot do that. Also have to many high ranking characters already. Either Academy or Genin. Chuunin is an unsure. But I won't approve of it. We have enough of them as we speak. | |
| | | Ichimaru Ryuken
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| Subject: Re: Dreamless~wip~ Thu 31 Dec 2009, 7:06 pm | |
| Your not the Kazekage thats not in your hands Vizer. Thats up to the Kazekage himself if this app is good eough to become a Jounin. Also, If this app fails to reach limit to being a jounin lv Goryu I well strip the app of Jounin and make it Chuunin if it good. Whitch this app is still aloud to join Goryu But the app well need a sensei to teach it How to be an Anbu. So it can be a Goryu. | |
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| Subject: Re: Dreamless~wip~ Thu 31 Dec 2009, 7:59 pm | |
| Well thats the thing. We're discussing rather should Kages be in charge of the ranking of an app. No rule states that, or I must have missed it somewhere. Though the rules do say not to accept over Genin. Unless permission wise. | |
| | | Ichimaru Ryuken
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| Subject: Re: Dreamless~wip~ Fri 29 Jan 2010, 2:49 am | |
| If your going to have 10 Special Characterists please explain them all. As in Tell me how did you get each and everyone of them. I won't 6 - 7 lines of detail explaing how you got it, For all of them. | |
| | | Satsu Genin
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| Subject: Re: Dreamless~wip~ Fri 29 Jan 2010, 8:56 am | |
| 6-7 lines is a little over the top, i think if it hasat least 3 sentences and is well detailed it should be fine, but only a 3 line minimum. If the lines do not explain the special characteristics well enough then it will need to be boosted up.
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| Subject: Re: Dreamless~wip~ Fri 29 Jan 2010, 11:18 am | |
| - Lord Vizer wrote:
- Well thats the thing. We're discussing rather should Kages be in charge of the ranking of an app. No rule states that, or I must have missed it somewhere. Though the rules do say not to accept over Genin. Unless permission wise.
It's not about rules, it's a professional courtesy. Applications above the normally accepted rank are handed off to the Leader of whatever faction they are becoming loyal to, because it is a courteous and respectful thing to do. It is just the same for Akatsuki apps, which can never really be within the limitations, considering the fact that they are always A-S rank. I understand that you are no longer accepting Aka apps from newcomers, but you were and no one stopped you, we let you decide, because it was something that you just do. |
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| Subject: Re: Dreamless~wip~ Fri 29 Jan 2010, 11:21 am | |
| For the fact that hmm Neko..it was only me at the time of an ORG with no members. So yea. Makes sense right to accept. | |
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| Subject: Re: Dreamless~wip~ Fri 29 Jan 2010, 11:23 am | |
| Your reasons don't matter in the situation. All that matters is that it's your faction, and because of that we give you control over applications that involve it. Again, it's called courtesy. |
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| Subject: Re: Dreamless~wip~ Fri 29 Jan 2010, 11:25 am | |
| Aye whatever. Not going to argue with you, I stated what I said already so ok. | |
| | | Yuna Enriendo
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| Subject: Re: Dreamless~wip~ Thu 11 Feb 2010, 1:38 pm | |
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| | | Yuna Enriendo
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| Subject: Re: Dreamless~wip~ Sat 27 Mar 2010, 2:25 pm | |
| please approve or disapprove my jutsu while i am working on my app. | |
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