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Zento
Posts : 189 Points : 369 Join date : 2009-09-11 Age : 29
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: S rank Village: Cloud
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Mon 15 Feb 2010, 9:17 pm | |
| Appearance: - Spoiler:
Name:great white shark Rank:A Type:
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Description: the Great white shark is a puppet made out of metal and it's skin shaves the opponent when it hits them. (like kisame's blade) the skin is vary strong and hard to break and the teeth of the puppet are strong. most of the power the puppet has is in it's head so when it bites it can shatter bone with no problem. It's tail and fins are made out of vary sharp blades and the shark can move at a vary fast speed when under water but when he's on land the puppet can't move that fast Weapons: Where are the weapons stored in this puppet?
- Arms poison blades - Legs - Torso - Head teeth and more power to make the bite stronger - Other tail with blades and poison
Jutsu: If this puppet has any special jutsu, put em' here!)
Last edited by Zento on Fri 19 Feb 2010, 7:23 pm; edited 3 times in total | |
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Lkitty Kazekage
Posts : 2512 Points : 999 Join date : 2008-09-04 Location : ...Flying?...
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: X Rank Village: Sunagakure
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Tue 16 Feb 2010, 9:05 am | |
| Name:Blood seek Rank:B Description:This jutsu can be used when a person is bleeding in the water and the puppet is in the water. When the blood hits he picks up the blood and can find out were they are
The puppet has no life, there's no way he can sense something or someone. | |
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Zento
Posts : 189 Points : 369 Join date : 2009-09-11 Age : 29
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: S rank Village: Cloud
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Tue 16 Feb 2010, 5:19 pm | |
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Nocturne Missing-Nin
Posts : 465 Points : 153 Join date : 2009-12-29 Age : 30
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: A Rank Village: N/A
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Tue 16 Feb 2010, 6:08 pm | |
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Lkitty Kazekage
Posts : 2512 Points : 999 Join date : 2008-09-04 Location : ...Flying?...
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: X Rank Village: Sunagakure
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Tue 16 Feb 2010, 6:21 pm | |
| Wait can it move even at land?
And remove the moves at very fast, its obviously large therefore taking a toll on its speed.
Unapproved for a while. | |
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Zento
Posts : 189 Points : 369 Join date : 2009-09-11 Age : 29
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: S rank Village: Cloud
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Tue 16 Feb 2010, 6:50 pm | |
| - BlackFramedGlasses wrote:
- Wait can it move even at land?
And remove the moves at very fast, its obviously large therefore taking a toll on its speed.
Unapproved for a while. well first he's not big. He's the size of a normal shark and yes he can because puppets fly in the air. | |
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Lkitty Kazekage
Posts : 2512 Points : 999 Join date : 2008-09-04 Location : ...Flying?...
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: X Rank Village: Sunagakure
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Wed 17 Feb 2010, 9:12 am | |
| Puppets doenst fly, only if they have wings. And Sharks are big sized, | |
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Zento
Posts : 189 Points : 369 Join date : 2009-09-11 Age : 29
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: S rank Village: Cloud
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Wed 17 Feb 2010, 7:32 pm | |
| yeah they do. crow and chiyo's puppets are in the air when fighting and moving around | |
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Lkitty Kazekage
Posts : 2512 Points : 999 Join date : 2008-09-04 Location : ...Flying?...
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: X Rank Village: Sunagakure
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Thu 18 Feb 2010, 12:44 am | |
| They were gliding in the air not literally flying. Plus, sharks are much more larger than those puppets allowing Chiyo to lift them in the air, not fly. | |
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Satsu Genin
Posts : 158 Points : 250 Join date : 2009-10-11 Location : ~Eating a poptart~ Scarey isnt it XD
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: Village:
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Thu 18 Feb 2010, 1:25 am | |
| Most puppets are also made ou of a lighter wood, not metal.
Take away the flying, or make the material lighter.
Even if this thing were to even get off the ground it would take a good amount of chakra, and it would move terribley slow. Fix those changes or else this puppet is UNAPROVABLE | |
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Zento
Posts : 189 Points : 369 Join date : 2009-09-11 Age : 29
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: S rank Village: Cloud
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Thu 18 Feb 2010, 6:59 pm | |
| well forget about the shark for now i have this one
Appearance: pic
Name: Grimm Reaper Rank:A Type:
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Description:This puppet was a gift to Zento by the great and powerful Bob Kingwe. He has a mask on his face and a long black robe that covers the puppets hole body. This puppet is made out of wood and has some metal parts around it's arms. The puppet dose not have any other weapons on it other then it's scythe. He did not add any weapons to it because that would be saying that the puppet Bob Kingwe made was not good enough for Zento. The puppet has most of it's power in it's arms and because if it not haveing any weapons on it, this puppet is the fastest puppet Zento has ever seen. The sythe has a poison on it that is fast acting but dose not kill. What the poison dose is (after 15 posts of it being inside of you) it slows down the blood and heart rate of the persone. After the poison is done (20 posts) the persone will pass out and give off the looks of being dead until a injected with some adrenalin shot.
Weapons: Where are the weapons stored in this puppet?
- Arms scythe - Legs - Torso -Head Mask made out of the strongest metal - Other... (If any)
Jutsu: If this puppet has any special jutsu, put em' here!)
Last edited by Zento on Fri 19 Feb 2010, 6:45 pm; edited 2 times in total | |
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Kiero Uchiha Jounin
Posts : 67 Points : 55 Join date : 2010-02-02
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: S rank Village: Kumogakure
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Thu 18 Feb 2010, 7:24 pm | |
| Too fast effect of the Poison. Slow it down. | |
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Zento
Posts : 189 Points : 369 Join date : 2009-09-11 Age : 29
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: S rank Village: Cloud
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Thu 18 Feb 2010, 7:38 pm | |
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Kaze Daizaemon
Posts : 37 Points : 85 Join date : 2009-12-25
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: Village: Yotobi
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Thu 18 Feb 2010, 9:48 pm | |
| Well considering its all fixed finally I will approve this. | |
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Lkitty Kazekage
Posts : 2512 Points : 999 Join date : 2008-09-04 Location : ...Flying?...
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: X Rank Village: Sunagakure
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Fri 19 Feb 2010, 6:35 pm | |
| UNAPPROVED
That is still too fast. Make it about 15 and 20 for the after effects. The reason is, once this takes effect you win, so this is very OP for a very fast duration. | |
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Zento
Posts : 189 Points : 369 Join date : 2009-09-11 Age : 29
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: S rank Village: Cloud
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Fri 19 Feb 2010, 6:45 pm | |
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Lkitty Kazekage
Posts : 2512 Points : 999 Join date : 2008-09-04 Location : ...Flying?...
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: X Rank Village: Sunagakure
| Subject: Re: Zento's puppets Fri 19 Feb 2010, 6:46 pm | |
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