Evolving Jutsus

Name: Great Bullet
Rank: B
Element: Water
Description: Using whatever water source is nearby, the user will be covered by a orb of water. The water is then shifted into smaller and smaller sizes until it appears to be the size of a rasengan. Once this happens the orb will be able to to be inhaled. Then when it is breathed in, a spiraling orb of water, about the size of a Semi-Truck, spirals outward taking everything in its path with it as it continues you forward. Then on command it will implode killing whatever is inside of the orb. Or maiming it depending on the circumstance.

Name: Devil Spiraling Great Bullet
Rank: S
Element: Water
Description: Needing no water source, a small orb of water is formed into the palm of the users hand. The water is then shifted into smaller and smaller sizes until it appears to be the size of a hack sack. Once this happens the orb will be able to to be inhaled. Then when it is breathed in, four spiraling orbs of water, about the sizes of a Semi-Trucks, spirals outward in the four basic directions around the user, taking everything in its path with it as it continues you forward. Then on command it will implode killing whatever is inside of the orb. Or maiming it depending on the circumstance.

Name: Devil Spiraling Bullet
Rank: A
Element: Water
Description: Using whatever water source is nearby, the user will be covered by a orb of water. The water is then shifted into smaller and smaller sizes until it appears to be the size of a rasengan. Once this happens the orb will be able to to be inhaled. Then when it is breathed in, three a spiraling orb of water, about the sizes of a Semi-Truck, spirals outward taking everything in its path with it as it continues you forward. Then on command it will implode killing whatever is inside of the orb. Or maiming it depending on the circumstance.

Name: Devil Spiraling Great Bullet
Rank: S
Element: Water
Description: Needing no water source, a small orb of water is formed into the palm of the users hand. The water is then shifted into smaller and smaller sizes until it appears to be the size of a hack sack. Once this happens the orb will be able to to be inhaled. Then when it is breathed in, four spiraling orbs of water, about the sizes of a Semi-Trucks, spirals outward in the four basic directions around the user, taking everything in its path with it as it continues you forward. Then on command it will implode killing whatever is inside of the orb. Or maiming it depending on the circumstance.

Remove this, you already have 3-SRanks.





About the two jutsus, those are really chakra consuming jutsus. Well because of its size, but SINCE your taking advantage of your insanely large chakra pools in your apps. It'll be like using a couple of C-Ranks.

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]Name: Devil Spiraling Bullet
Rank: A
Element: Water
Description: Using whatever water source is nearby, the user will be covered by a orb of water. The water is then shifted into smaller and smaller sizes until it appears to be the size of a rasengan. Once this happens the orb will be able to to be inhaled. Then when it is breathed in, three a spiraling orb of water, about the sizes of a Semi-Truck, spirals outward taking everything in its path with it as it continues you forward. Then on command it will implode killing whatever is inside of the orb. Or maiming it depending on the circumstance.[/spoiler]

This can kill many people instantly . It seems more like an S-Rank, either delete it, (because you can't have anymore S-Ranks) or reduce the power of the jutsu .