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Kenkei Kasumi

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PostSubject: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeMon 03 May 2010, 7:50 pm

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Name:
Al Sama, Keats

Nickname/Alias: Aliases: Kenkei Kasumi, Zaquri Kenpachi

Weight: 132lbs

Height: 5'9"

Age: 24

Gender: Male

Appearance:
Spoiler:

Clothing:
His attire doesn't stretch farther from what is seen in the picture. Aside from the Short puppet beside him which is rigged as a Bomb itself and hidden blades inside the sleeve and two Chutes on his back in which Kenkei's Wind chakra can be Extracted.

Personality:
There are few things that could be said about Zaquri. None of them are uninteresting.
He is stubborn, Sexist, Racist, Rude and all the while he remains
focused on getting results. Some could say that's his weakness in
almost any situation. He is not ever without focus when he deems something
or rather anything to be fit for his attention. It was known to
Zaquri at a very young age that everyone was born to die. Growing up and
pacing closer to death tormented his mind to the point where he felt
that the only way to achieve peace and tranquility within himself, was
to become a God. While most people who claim to know Zaquri are intimidated
by his will and intelligence, others find it as amusing
since
Zaquri makes serious and dire situations humorous with his Creativity
and his stubbornness. He is very subtle when it comes to doing
things discretely, yet because he has proclaimed himself a future god;
He doesn't need to watch how or where he treads. Surely with such
arrogance he has alot to back it up. He doesn't needlessly boast and
posture himself with such a title because he dreams of achieving it, but
because he already thinks that he has achieved it already. His mindset
restricts him from reacting to pain and from reacting surprised or as
though he was caught off guard at any moment thanks to how he feels he
achieved the title of an ascended one.

Zaquri is a Compulsive
strategist. If he is faced with a problem he doesn't immediately have a
solution to he will make up strategies for the said problem until he
feels he has found enough sufficient ways of solving the problem.
Luckily for him he spends most of his days reading and playing Shogi
with other members of the Kido corps. Zaquri may seem like a nice, kind
and caring male, well mannered because of how he was raised, a very
particular kind of Etiquette but because he is a hit-man whose existence
is well known yet no one has met him, he is without sympathy or
Emotion and shows sometimes that he is a firm believer in the
concept of there being life after death. Around colleagues,
Strangers, and even people he respects, he doesn't really show how
he is feeling or any sign of what he is thinking and even people who
have known him for long periods of time feel he is an
unpredictable
type of man. Zaquri does speak with many people but he loves
competing with other Shinigami though he does use Conversation as a last
resort or When it is truly necessary. Zaquri has the weirdest way of
finding himself in troublesome situations. Zaquri isn't exactly the
calmest person in the world either. But without Dame's constant
undermining words Zaquri easily gets aggravated, when pushed a little he
tries to make the pusher uncomfortable in any way possible, he resorts
to violence only when he has to except when he is ordered or payed to
kill someone. He doesn't mind a debate or people having their own
opinions, he just hates when people act like an ass towards him without
reason and tells them off without fear of getting his hands dirty. Which
also means that he is brutally honest. At this point in his life if he
is given a good reason to protect something. . . He doesn't. He lost all
hope and reason for saving anything precious to or not to him after his
fathers death. Zaquri has a habbit of doing things the hard way and he
is always in it for the long run, he picks out one weakness in his
opponent in any way possible (it doesn't matter if it is either a sport,
a fight, a game etc.) and he picks at it until his opponent is rendered
useless before him and continues to do so in a cold demeanor. Zaquri is
extremely stubborn, so stubborn to the point where it will cause her to
not back down from a challenge No matter how demeaning it is, even if
it means to lose the game/challenge/fight it would be his death. The
concept of death being something that puts your mind to sleep
permanently makes Zaquri sometimes eager to experience it, or at least
that was the case before he learned about shinigami.

Zaquri shows
that he is quite an optimistic person which is one of the many
strengths of his personality. Another strength is his control over what
he does Besides being easily angered by anything and cunning in battle
situations not dropping focus from his initial targets. Zaquri can
easily be influenced by anyone else interested and willing to speak
about the Human anatomy. The fact that the hardest part in killing a
human is actually killing a human (Because Human's are structurally
built to last) filled Zaquris head up long ago with questions about what
created Humans/Shinigami/Hollows etc.. Another strength in his
personality is being his own type of Genius. Once in a while, Zaquri
see's someone who does something so well in a way he cannot possibly
fathom, and the fact that him being one of those type's of people is
what makes him interested in living a bit longer to see how far his mind
can go. His ability to read people (Persona wise) is astounding though
he himself fails to realize how astounding it is, he think's that anyone
can easily read a person just by watching their movements for a few
seconds. He also has this picture perfect memory, he can never forget a
face, place or object he crossed before.
~Rank/Village Information~

Classification:
Genin

Letter
Rank:
. . . C (?)

Village: Sunagakure, It his his current place of residence but Outside the shinobi countries in Germany is where he was born.

~Clan
Information~


Clan Name: I don't have one.

Kekei Genkai: I don't have one.

Clan Symbol: I don't have one.

Clan
History:
I don't have one.

Ability
Summary:
I don't have a summary.

~Skill
Information~


Skill Specialty:
Ninjutsu, Puppet Jutsu.

Elemental
Affinity:
Wind.

Special
Characteristics:

Zaquri has an impressive handling on Puppetry, Able to Control 4 limbs of his puppet at a time and depending on the limbs he is controlling, the better the effectiveness of Tactics displayed while battling with the said Unique skill.

~Jutsu~

N/A For now.

~History/RP
Sample~


History/Background Story:

Birth Ark: Zaquri was born in Germany, Outside of the shinobi countries in a Village of Famine and torture. His family was poor and without shelter but they were only immigrants from Sunagakure which was at that time called Village of the red sands because of how horrible they were towards shinobi countries both allied and not. Zaquri's mother was a whore who was once married to the Kazekage but was killed by sand sweepers who figurd otu she was planning on assassinating the Kage so that she could escape with her lover Zaquri's father who wasn't the Kage. Zaquri's father took them and Migrated to Germany because him and his sister were the only thing that Zaquri's father had left in this world that mattered to him and they were all fugitives in the Kages eyes. With no jurisdiction in Germany, the Kage could no longer follow them and dissolved his grudge. After many months stranded in such a pityful world, Finally Zaquri and his family caught rumor that the Sand village changed their ways and they went back so that Zaquri could train in his untapped potential with using Chakra strings to control objects.

Genin Ark: Without needing to Join the Academy, Zaquri was placed with the Rank of Genin because of his abilities with the puppet.


Roleplay Sample: Al walks a little, decides to stop, then continues onward for the sheer enjoyment of the trip.


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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeMon 03 May 2010, 7:54 pm

Approved in my eyes.

If any other Mod or Admin could give his/her opinion, please.
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Revy Izumi
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeMon 03 May 2010, 8:56 pm

A few things need to be fixed.

1. A genin can only have 1 element.
2. A genin is the average age of 9-14, but idk if anyone else minds a 24 yr old Genin.
3. The ability to control 10 different parts of a puppet at once is far past a Genins experience.
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeMon 03 May 2010, 8:58 pm

Are you sure?

10 different parts of one puppet? It's basically saying That the ten lines that manifest as my Chakra attach themselves to my Puppets limbs can be controlled which seems more than fair Especially given its size. . Kankuro, As a Genin, Had even more experience.

Other than that I'll fix my Element.
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeMon 03 May 2010, 9:00 pm

Double post;

Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeMon 03 May 2010, 9:09 pm

If your a Genin your skill with a puppet is still very low, meaning more of those chakra strings would have to be used for each part of the puppet. If you want a stomach full of bombs or something like that, until your a higher rank and are more skilled, you would probably need like 2-3 strings for that part. Thats just an example.
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeMon 03 May 2010, 9:10 pm

Well, your elaboration is confusing indeed but I get the jest of what you're trying to say.

Fine, I will edit the part in my App that enables me to control Different parts.
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeMon 03 May 2010, 9:11 pm

Where's the clan info?

Plus RP Sample is must, whether you feel it or not it is a must.
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeMon 03 May 2010, 9:12 pm

Clan info isn't needed because I belong to no Clan. I am a normal Shinobi, nothing special about me.

RP Samples are must? Fine, I will edit that about my App as well.
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeMon 03 May 2010, 9:14 pm

Edited once again.
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeMon 03 May 2010, 9:19 pm

A sentence of RP sample. Does that mean your average posts is 1 sentence? because RP sample determines your average posts.

Plus regardless if your in a clan or not, add that info. Just put N/A for each part. It is in the Sites Character template so it is also a must.
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeMon 03 May 2010, 9:22 pm

My Average post is what I make it in the RP, It of course will Vary on both my mood and the setting. Which is why I find it tedious to place the RP sample in my Template when in fact it doesn't matter what the RP sample says, all that matters is what is placed on my posts. But that last bit is just me,

I'll add the Clan factor back and make sure it all says N/A.
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeMon 03 May 2010, 9:24 pm

Double post; Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeMon 03 May 2010, 9:32 pm

Pfft, that RP sample was the most beautiful thing I've ever read. You have my approval =D
Now you just need a real staff member to approve you xD
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeMon 03 May 2010, 9:33 pm

No One of Consequence wrote:
Pfft, that RP sample was the most beautiful thing I've ever read. You have my approval =D
Now you just need a real staff member to approve you xD

Why thank you, weird one. ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeMon 03 May 2010, 9:35 pm

Luckily for him he spends most of his days reading and playing Shogi
with other members of the Kido corps

type of man. Zaquri does speak with many people but he loves
competing with other Shinigami though he does use

Zaquri sometimes eager to experience it, or at least
that was the case before he learned about shinigami.

In your personality, you have these sentences that perseive your character as a shinigami off of bleach. Also your'e having trouble describing your character as its actual gender and sometimes call it a she. It is to this assumption that you copied this from another site (probrably bleach) and pasted onto our site. if the application is yours from the bleach site then its fine, just clean these parts up. also, the descriptions in your personality are contradictory. You say that he's obnoxious and treads wherever he wants, though you also say he's a pessimistic strategist. If your character was obnoxious, wouldn't he not care about strategy? = ='''
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeTue 04 May 2010, 9:02 pm

APPROVED

Someone move this please?
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeTue 04 May 2010, 9:07 pm

Not yet, there are still some parts that says something about bleach.
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PostSubject: Re: Impossible Logic.   Impossible Logic. Icon_minitimeTue 04 May 2010, 9:28 pm

I was just ignoring those, I'll wait, though.
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