Al'Lan Deregon

~General Information~

Name: Al'lan Deregon

Nickname/Alias: N/A

Weight: 185 lbs.

Height: 6'6

Age: 25

Gender: Male

Appearance: Face:and Hair: Lan has dark black hair that can be seen sometimes hanging below his hat in small triangluar strands. His face is only able to be seen in generalities however under the oranage glasses that he wears constantly and even to bed he has a very deeply black eyes partially due to the sunglasses but his eyes were black to begin with even in his human life. He just has 2 giant black dots for eyes. He see's in a very particular way because of this however it translates the same as normal vision. He sometimes in the heat of combat if he is suprised will move his somewhat small nose down a small bit by an adjustment of his skin to reveal one eye to look at you so you can know that he is taking you seriously. His har under his hat is a matted mess of black hair that spirals around wildly and is at the will of whatever he is doing at the moment.

Torso: . His torso is covered in the scars of combat and training under the ranking shinobi system before he was there and fate hating him and giving him the worst luck possible. The major scars on his body is a striaght slash that goes from right above his heart hollow hole directly down to where his stomach begins and then juts across straight to his other side and then down to his hip. He calls this his jigsaw piece because of its meaning when he got this scar. His other major scar is on his back that goes from his neck down to his asshole literally. It has quite a long story behind it that he always had the option of healing but he never did so he would remember his life before he was an espada so he would never lose his humanity and nature of the normal man.

Lower Body: His Lower legs are marked with scars as well but in a different way. His lower legs are covered with small scars and cuts however they are always covered by his black pants and his red suit as well so no one really see's them. His main scars here on his legs are a scar starting at the bottom of his foot and working its way up to about his calf muscle. He had the option of healing this as well but he did not. This is on both of his legs. His other lower body scar is on the back of his knees which like his other scars he kept from being healed for the memories it is a staight line across the backs of his knee's where he was very badly ripped and at the time had his lower half of his legs cut off from his body.

Clothing:
Pants and Shirt: Lan wears a dark grey shirt above a white T shirt. The reason he wears the T shirt is to really throw that he is the white triangle into the mix. Only the V shows above his grey shirt and this is right above the white triangle he keeps on his body. It is another mark of his ex status as a feared force. His pants are black just as his top appearance was going to be before. However with a change of heart after the war he made only his pants black. Lan is still feared to those who know his name and knew who he was before the war.

Boots: Lan's boots to what a suprise are also custom made by the same people who made everything else that he wears other than his pants and shirt. His boots are made dark black with very precisely made for his feet precautions. Inside of them is the most comphortable possible silkish feel. The outside is made of a black heavily polished and labored over steel like substance that if used with enough force has the ability to do some real damage. The boots were made for durability first and then for comphort. The comphort is immense so one could only imagine how durable these are.

Hat: His hat is tie to an exact size by the links on the exact part of his hat where the top part begins and the actual circular structure of the hat across his forehead is ends. This ties it exactly off where Lan can put the hat on and take the hat off with absolute comphort and ease. The entire hat is a deep blood red color however the part where the circle of the hat meets the rising top is dark because of the shadow cast by the top. The inside of the hat is made of a smooth feeling silkish material. It is a very nice feel that is partially the reason Lan doesn't leave without his hat.

Glasses: The glasses are a shade of orange to offset the red idea. The red suit red hat and red glasses...almost working. The shades are orange in a bright sense however they gleam in the sun very well but the material is built to only let in so much light being as custom made and as timely and of the same quality as his hat. The glasses don't let in enough light to blind him they act as sunglasses to incredibly high amounts of light. The orange and the material however is built on a light reflecting system causing the light to go the other way so if shined with a flashlight or something to that effect you are basically shining yourself with the flashlight. Lan loves to mess with people using these glasses.

Suit: The suit is made of a red material similar to the hat. Red on the outside and gray on the inside. The inside is a silky material similar to the hat but the outside of the red material on the suit is not of the same stuff. The outside material on the suit is made of the same color as the hat but that is the only similarity. The suit is designed to feel rough. Small almost invisible ridges are made in the suit to cause anyone who would rub their hands against it to be sliced and cut. The reason for the suit being blood red is to hide all the blood that is caught inside of its rigid pricks. The suit was custom made by the same group that made the hat and glasses however the suit was the epitome of the craftsmenship of this organization and soon after they were not making anything anymore because of Lan's decree.

Personality: Lan is accustomed and afflicted with constant swings in his personality which leads to the following:

Lan is one of the most mysterious people in the world, this is shown with his heavy use of sarcasm and mocking politeness which makes it very difficult to discern his thoughts. Many find his demeanor rather unsettling and there are very few who were willing to trust him even. Lan seems to be fully aware of the effect he has on others and more often than not he is toying with people's emotional states for his own amusement. Some people even who are weak in the heart and/or mind usually are afraid to even talk to him directly or indirectly. When he has free time, typically Lan would go on walks around whatever was near. Although his hobby seens to be people-watching, he actually usually is hunting around and searching for an opportunity to create mischief with some poor victim.

Al'Lan Deregon Is from a family that used to be quite prestigious among the forest dwellers. As such he sometimes acts in an aristocratic manner — he seems always serene and apathetic towards other people, even when even when he himself is deeply conflicted. He is also extremely calm, even in battle, and is very seldom surprised by even the most drastic of actions. He generally acts indifferent, bordering on arrogance, to most situations that he is faced with as seen from how he rarely views his opponent worth his time. Despite this trait, Lan is a very perceptive man and is fully aware of the limits of his abilities and usually anything he states in comparison to an opponent is justified.

Although he is usually seen as a laid-back, jovial fellow, though showing other traits that may not reflect it it is true that Lan is very laid back in actual encounters though showing other traits of superiority at the same time. Lan also shows a deceptively-different, cunning, and serious side of his personality when the situation demands for it. He commonly uses idle conversation and outward concern as an act to distract his opponents from his true intentions.Despite his care-free attitude, he always speaks politely, but is sometimes sarcastic. Lan can usually be found near the scene of an important event, either showing up in time or being a little late, but rarely steps in to intervene, preferring to be in the sidelines. He often tends to know more information about most of the people he's in contact with. Although being a major player, he usually portrays himself as only the catalyst, having others do the work for him. He also likes building large areas underground this implies more that he doesn't like people which is true. As well as it brings up the point that he doesn't like to be disturbed while doing his work.

Lan is a surprisingly polite, soft-spoken intellectual, often addressing his subordinates by their given names. He rarely shows any sign of alarm or distress and often has entire situations planned out well in advance. Whenever confronted, Lan is casual and uncaring, attempting to draw out a conversion and make small talk, which often infuriates the one he is talking to. As a fairly controlling type to most people that he deals with Lan controls his new minions either through acquired respect or fear. In history when he has been in a position of power his minions and servants have been incredible afraid of him at all times for his heartless nature as well as his aura that seemed to demand that he was in charge. For more unruly and agressive individuals that he deals with, he keeps them in line through intimidation and mind games. Most people follow Lan for reasons unique to themselves. To date, only someone equally manipulative and that has proven to be only a single person who has seen through his manipulative nature as well as his demanding aura of power.

Finally Lan is a man of few words,but when he speaks he tends to say something of importance to somebody.He carries a philosophy that all life is sacred and important, whether it be for doing something to change the world or becoming his next meal. Lan likes to drag out fights in order to get to know the person he's fighting, he finds people's life stories fascinating. Especially those of shinobi ,they have so much to tell of such a short amount of years. If Lan isn't happy, then he's thinking about something. But on the few occasions where he gets mad,he becomes a beast out for blood. He believes that to disrupt someone's peace is punishable by death, unless that person can't kill you. Thereby justifying his own habits.


~Clan Information~

Clan Name: Artificial Kekegenkai Number-H0ge0Q

Kekei Genkai: Blood-Induced Matter Transportation: To facilitate his ability he has to cut himself, shedding his own blood. Lanis able to transport matter with the blood acting as a catalyst. When he snaps his fingers, anywhere his blood has landed has the effect of disintegrating anything it touches. The explosive and acidic nature of this kekegenaki are activated through Lan's digits snapping. The limits of this ability include that if Lan loses enough blood [30%] He will pass out 5 minutes later. If he loses enough beyond that [55%] He will die on the spot. A small wrist slit will cause 2% a large gash 5% and this continues every post until/unless it is closed up. As far as its maximum power it can eat through anything eventually. Alloys will take 2 posts and metals will take 3. As for its explosive power it does the equivelant of 1 pound of C4 for 2% of blood.

Clan Symbol:

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Clan History: This is a manufacture bloodline. It was created with the H0ge0Q expiriment from Kitaro. He had been working on many things and he had decided to work with nano technology. He extracted his own blood and added in bots that were extremely parasitic. At the beginning in the first few tests the blood cells added with bots upon leaving the safety of a warm body-like substance they would not stop eating and destroyed too much and required a special salve to be put on in order to stop the destruction of everything. However eventually it was worked out that it would dissolve throught the first thing it touched and then moved on to daectivated and eating up the blood so that the technology can't be taken. This was then injected completely through Laninto his heart and other parts of main blood distrubution and transfer.

Ability Summary: Lan has acidic/explosive blood activated by his fingers snapping through a chakra link.

~Rank/Village Information~

Classification: Missing Ninja

Letter Rank: A

Village: Ex Kirigakure Ex Konohagakure

~Skill Information~

Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu/Genjutsu

Elemental Affinity: Water/Earth

Special Characteristics:Master Swordsmanship Specialist: Despite his appearance, Lanis an extremely skilled fighter, using a combination of powerful attacks and cunning deceptions. His abilities have been considered highly dangerous by even Kage's of villiages. While formally being part of the unarmed-combat specializing Anbu Black Ops Kitaro's preferred style of combat seems to be swordsmanship. Despite this, he is also highly adept in combining his hand-to-hand skills with his swordsmanship. While fighting, his preferred methods of attack are to take advantage of his great agility, striking from various angles to confuse his opponent. His skills in combat have been repeatedly proven as very high, as he was able to keep a swordsman of the mist constantly on his toes during their training session despite his much bigger blade. His skills also allows him to rarely ever rely on more than his taijutsu as shown when fighting squads of ninja sent to retrieve things by force from him.

Master Hand-to-Hand Combatant: As the former corps commander of the Detention Unit of the Anbu, he was not allowed to use weapons so he was required to become highly proficient in hand-to-hand combat. His skills in this area have been seen great enough to force even the likes of current holders of his old rank to fight seriously as shown from one of their regular sparing sessions. During his days as an anbu, Though only holding this title and rank for a short time he was able to defeat people who had been at that level for years because of his natural talent.

Speed/Agility Master: As the former Anbu of the Leaf Detention unit and Kirigakure Special Forces unit commander, Lanhas an exceptional understanding and skill in the use agility and speed even being so fast that an opponent does not notice when he replaces himself with other objects even if they are as high ranked as anbu level ninja.

Master Strategist & Tactician: Despite his aloof and unkempt appearance, Lan has repeatedly shown throughout history, himself to be a very insightful and cunning man. He also possesses great intuition, able to quickly become aware of any incoming danger and react to it in time. Lan has an undeniable talent for thinking things well in advance as well, make decisive and accurate decisions quickly in battle, and able to perceive any situation at hand. Military tacticians on the highest level admit that Lan's intellect even surpasses their own in every subject and type.He generally has shown himself to also be a crafty tactician from how easily he can deceive both allies and enemies. He has also shown to be a very perceptive and analytical man from how quickly he can analyze an opponent's power and attack patterns to ultimately make them useless against him.

Enhanced Strength: Lan's physical prowess has been shown to go beyond flashy skills. During his time as commander of the Detention Unit, he amazed everyone when he was able to effortlessly stop a punch from a giant of a man with a single hand. During his training with Ichigo, his strikes showed enough power to create rather large craters and easily launch the younger fighter several meters and through solid rock.

Master Assassin: As a former high-ranking member of the Special Forces, Lan has high mastery in the art of assassination. He has repeatedly shown impressive skill in staying hidden and unseen while maneuvering to his target. Even the likes of the perceptive and intuitive other Anbu forces were easily caught by surprise while fighting Lan.

~Jutsu~

All E rank Jutsu are known to Lan

Name: False place Technique
Rank: C
Element: None
Description:Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object

Name: Infinate Darkness Jutsu
Rank: A
Element: None
Description:Kokuangyou no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the ninja's opponent to be enveloped in total darkness. While in the black void, the ninja will be unable to see any incoming attack or threat.

Name: Sly Mind technique
Rank: C
Element: None
Description:Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.

Name: Tree Binding Death
Rank: B
Element: None
Description: Magen • Jubaku Satsu is a Genjutsu technique utilized by the Leaf Jounin Yuuhi Kurenai. After forming the needed hand seals, Kurenai will disappear and approach her target. Once near her target, a tree will grow at their feet and its branches will bind them so they can no longer move. Once the illusion makes them believe they are captured, Kurenai will appear from the tree itself and stab her target with a kunai.

Name: Hell Viewing Technique
Rank: D
Element: None
Description:Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.

Name: Temple Of Nirvanha
Rank: A
Element: None
Description:Nehan Shouja no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that allows the caster to place a large body of people into a unconscious state. The target can avoid the spell by forming and using the dispel skill.

Name: Bursting Collission Waves
Rank: B
Element: Suiton
Description:Suiton • Baku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Kisame will expel water from his gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water. Being from the Water Country, Kisame is at home with this type of jutsu. He can control the water by riding on top of the waves.

Name: Clone Explosion
Rank: A
Element: None
Description: Bunshin Bakuha is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha Itachi. At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but Itachi can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.

Name: Grand Waterfall
Rank: A
Element: Suiton
Description:Suiton • Daibakufu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.

Name: Underground Submarine Voyage
Rank: C
Element: Doton
Description:Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Kisame can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth. By extending his Samehada above ground, he gives off the appearance of a shark travelling underground.

Name: Earth Spear
Rank: B
Element: Doton
Description:Doton • Domu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Akatsuki member Kakuzu. After forming the needed Snake handseal, Kakuzu will harden his body using the Earth Element. This provides greater defense against attack and will also strengthen his arm to increase his striking ability. Like other Doton based jutsu, it is weak against Raiton attacks.

Name: Masoleum Earth Dumpling
Rank: B
Element: Doton
Description:Doton • Doryou Dango is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with his hands, Jiroubou is able to overturn the earth into a large dumpling shape chunk of earth the size of a mausoleum. Using his immense strength, he can lift up the ball and hurl it at his opponent, flatening all in its path.

Name: Earth Style Split
Rank: B
Element: Doton
Description:Doton • Doryuu Katsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals, then place their hand to the ground. This will cause the earth to rise up and split apart. Once the ninja removes their hand from the ground, the earth parting will end.

Name: Doton Doryuu Taiga
Rank: D
Element: Earth
Description:A skill where from the user, it creates this rushing river of mud. This river of mud trips up the opponent and is actually deep enough to swim in. Making it so the opponent is trapped and open for attack.

Name: Doton Tsuchi Kikaku no jutsu
Rank: D
Element: Earth
Description: A skill where the user performs their hand seals and presses their hand onto some form of earth, from that form of earth it launches off projectiles made of earth. These projectiles are shaped much like kunai.

Name: Mizu Soushi no jutsu
Rank: A
Element: Suiton
Description:This is a highly advanced water jutsu on which the user spits out a huge amount of water from which he can perform any other kind of water jutsu.

Name: Kirigakure No Jutsu
Rank: D
Element: Water
Description:The user creates a thick mist in the air, which makes it impossible for anyone (even the user) to see anything. The user must then use his superior assassin skills to kill the enemy. This jutsu requires water around.

Name: Doton Suruiyondo no Jutsu
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: Using a source of earth, the ninja can create a huge earth-made dragon, which will strike at the enemy with an incredible power. This jutsu requires earth around.

Name: Doton Tsuchi Nigiri no Jutsu
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: A technique where the user gathers chakra into the ground, causing an earth-made hand to rise and grip at the opponent. The arms can go out normally approximately two feet. Once grapping onto the opponent the arm stiffens to immobilize the opponent.

Name: Doton Yomi Numa
Rank: A
Element: Earth
Description: After forming the needed hand seals, a vast swamp can appear beneath the target to sink the enemy.

Name: Doton Kekkai Doruodomu
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: A skill on which the ninja uses the surrounding earth in order to capture the nearby enemies within a prison. The prison is infused with chakra, so that when it it attacked the chakra instantly begins to repair the earth through materialization. Within the dome, all chakra used becomes unfocused. Making pure chakra techniques, and the ability to create other elements useless. However, techniques where chakra is charged internally can be used. Used by Jirobo in the anime/manga.

Name: Doton Doroku Gaerraki
Rank: A
Element: Earth
Description: This move is the improvement of Doton Doroku Gaeshi. It is a skill where the user slams there hands onto the ground, channelling large amounts of chakra to create a consecutive line of 5meters wide by 20meters high of thick stone; capable of deflecting lightning, fire and metal like a wall, around in a circular perimeter.

Name: Doton Doryuu Heki
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: This is a defensive Ninjutsu utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack.

Name: Doton Hakabashi Suna no Jutsu
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: A skill where chakra is sent through the ground, as it is diffused it weakens the ground below the opponent. Creating a sinking whirlpool of sand to pull down the opponent into the ground. Enabling the user to use another jutsu during this hectic state.

Name: Doton Retsudo Tenshou
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: A skill where chakra is flowed through the ground diffusing outwards, in which in bursts large towers forms of rock emerge surrounding the opponent. Effectively can be used to trap an opponent from going anywhere and gaining the high ground.

Name: Doton Doroku Gaeshi
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: A skill where the user slams there hands onto the ground, flipping up an area of earth to form a wall able to protect him from incoming attacks. Capable of deflecting metallic objects and various jutsu.

Name: Suiton Daibakufu no jutsu
Rank: A
Element: Water
Description:The user creates a water vortex, but instead of rising up like in Mizu no Tatsumaki, this vortex will move forward trampling the opponent and carrying him in the vortex until the jutsu stops or it founds an obstacle.

Name: Mizu no Tatsumaki
Rank: B
Element: Water
Description: A defensive water jutsu which will make a water vortex around the user, protecting him from not only Taijutsu, but also form some Ninjutsu. This jutsu requires water around

Name: Suiryuudan No Jutsu
Rank: B
Element: Water
Description: Using a water source, the ninja can create a huge water-made dragon, which will strike at the enemy with an incredible power. This jutsu requires water around.

Name: Shuugou No Jutsu
Rank: C
Element: Water
Description:This jutsu allows the user to gather water from the environment around him, like from the air, soil, etc. However, if in dry lands, this jutsu is useless.

Name: Headhunter Jutsu
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: The user will confuse the opponent by traveling underground below them. The user, whose whereabouts are unknown, will surprise their target and pull them through the ground. The enemy, now underground, will not be able to move.

~History/RP Sample~

History/Background Story: Beginning an oddity with an oddity: At the beginning and even before the beginning was a man named WFL. No one knew what the initials stood for but he was renowned as a ninja of great intelligence and great ability. One day he met a young girl on an anbu black ops mission who tried to kill him at night and due to his high charisma WFL managed to convince her not only to stop trying to kill him but to sleep with him that night and the next night and the next and even one more night after that before he finally got bored of her kinky assassin bed skills. She came with him and temporarily joined and helped his Anbu squad assassinate the fuedal lord that was an enemy of the villiage hidden in the leaves. In the end it was her who did the actual killing move on the man slitting his throat upon his awakening one day. They returned to the villiage hidden in the leaves and the anbu squad was paid except for the girl who assumed she would live with the man who had gotten her pregnant though that knowledge was unknown to both of them. About 8 months later she did but the man wouldn't even see her let alone care that she was pregnant. However now the villiage whom the fuedal lord had been killed had sent a squad of executioners over to the hidden leaf and demanded that the killer of the ex fuedal lord would be taken back to their villiage and killed. It was only fair of course and the entire leaf villiage pointed their fingers at the woman. She wept and cried but eventually was dragged out by a few Jounin level ninja and she was handed into the custody of the executioners who made her a deal. If she slept with each of them she would be taken back to the villiage and put in jail and executed at the normal wait time of someone who had killed a dignitary so about 2 weeks after arriving and about 1 week to get there. So she agreed and arrived at the villiage about a week later. She was held in a cell not 2 weeks but 4. They forgot about her until the cries of a baby could be heard coming from the prison and the guards came in and found that she had given birth and cut the chord of the baby and patted him into crying herself. She had also been breast feeding it and now rememberin that old contract of one kill for one kill she was taken and killed in front of everyone including the baby who would never remember the event but know he was there later on. The baby was then named Lan because no one knew what the woman would have named him. Having no idea what his last name or middle name would be they named him the day he was born. November Eleven.

Ninja Academy: At the age of 4 Lan had shown so much progress that he was permitted into the Ninja Academy. The other students gave him shit about being so young but the grades and tests proved that not only was he smarter than every other student in the room without studying but he was faster than all of them without practice and had a more developed chakra network than all of the students that had ever been in the Mist villiage. So he continued to progress at that rate and so when he was the age of 5 and the others were all the age of 10 he was put into the genin exam. Where you had to kill other academy students in order to pass the exams. Military society had to be the best ninja ever made. So Lan did what he did best he outsmarted people. Watched the people who were flashy and fought and killed the set amount of ninja that they had to in order to pass and when they were tired and had killed them all Lan would swoop in from the shadows and plant a kunai between their ribs and through their heart. After he had done this a few times there were running out of people for him to do this to. He had to take manners into his own hands with his own combat ability in order to continue and pass the genin exams. So he used his fundamental low level of ninjutsu and genjutsu to surprise larger opponents and knock them down and immediatly after he would jump on them and stab the shit out of them until there was 0% chance they were alive. Better to get a litle bloody than having a man get up half dead and crush your face in while you thought you had killed him. Some of them lived much longer than anyone thought they could let alone would. This was the defining moment for all mist ninja. So in the end Lan was pitted up against the last person left. It was against someone neither of them knew well. Lan heaved up his kunai knives in each hand and the man got his hands ready. Lan was quick and dashed at him rolling along the floor to dodge a shooting searing blast of water as fog began to cover the area from what seemed to be the tip of his fingers. Lan wouldn't fall for the hidden mist technique and continued moving while the fog was getting thicker knowing that the guy wasn't moving from his position and Lan threw a knife seeing the fog stop growing then he jumped and dove for that spot missing his mark by inches and falling to stab his foot. Lan then swept his legs across and forward and knocked him down punching him in the face during his fall causing his head to break in the back on the concrete. Lan then slit his throat with a kunai knife and walked out of the arena walking out of the arena now being hailed as the youngest genin of the mist ever.

Genin life as a prodigy: Lan as a genin was put with a few odd people. A woman who could manipulate ice as well as had a very excellent talent for healing others and could do so with only 1 working finger. The best of the genin medical ninja was paired with the youngest genin ever who technically got the worst score of the passing genin. The other was the one who had gotten the best score. Evaded Lan wavering kunai knife and almost broke his arm when they were fighting in the genin exams. Their sensei was quite powerful as well. A man known as Javo. Since the teams were based on technicality this team ended up with the three best genin. They were never sent on a D rank mission and never would do so as a team. The first mission they were sent on was C rank mission. The defense of a certain point. It was not expected to be attacked but it was to be held for a long time and it was in the middle of the woods and in the middle of many nations. The objective was to keep it under watch and record all shinobi and citzens of all nations that came by and so much as got within 100 feet of it. Javo took the all night watch while the three genin took the all day watch. Javo was a light sleeper so if he was needed he would be awake in an instant during the day so it was a good plan. They recorded everything with perfect precision and a week later they returned to the mist villiage mission completed. No hitch. With such a perfect success rate they were put on more and more complicated missions. C rank C rank C rank C rank C rank C rank C rank C rank C rank C rank C rank C rank. Finally they changed the tune of C C C C C C it was starting to rub on all three of them. Finally they were put on a B rank mission. It was a high level B rank mission at that. Not one of the easier ones it was an offensive mission to take a base security tower from the enemy. They figured that if Javo was with them any team of ragtag wannabe's could do it. Not to mention justt that but the three best genin would better be very powerful and do it very easily. Which was true upon getting there Javo ran to the top of the tower up the wall and disarmed the distress beacon and dispatched all the guards off the tower. Meanwhile the three genin ran up the tower triple teaming all who came to kill them and then Javo made rounds to kill all those hiding while the three genin kept guard to make sure no one was coming. They then called in and told the Mizukage that the mission was completed. They were held as the best genin out there and no one was contended to be able to beat them. They were heros for being that good and everyone in the hidden mist knew their names.

Chunin Exams: Due to Javo keeping himself out of the missions as much as he possibly could and the missions still have a 100% chance of success the team knew how to work with eachother very well. So the first mission was a test of knowledge. All members of the team were smart enough to get enough questions right to pass the first exam. [Common misconception that exams are all meant to be cheated which is not true. Only Ibiki's test was meant for the members to cheat. In actuality the only rule for the chunin exams exam number 1 is intelligence testing.] The next exam was intelligence gathering/maintaining/survival in extreme conditions. Otherwise known as the forest of death scroll test. Team Javo was given a heaven scroll. The 6 year old Lan was the youngest person in the exam still. The healer stuck with a constant guard of either Lan or the other man in the squad. Lan was the one selected to search for other squads because Lan was not good at leading for he got nervous and then things got bad. This was proved on multiple occassions. So Lan went and found a genin team from Amegakure who was flashing around their scroll and was noisy. That meant they didn't know what they were doing. Lan followed them and when they got somewhat near his own team he told them about the group. With a surprise attack from the two males in Lan's team they killed one member of the enemy squad and incapacitated the other. The third ran and the other male of Lan's squad followed him while Lan searched the two already there and found the scroll. They waited and for the other male to return which he did saying he defeated the other memeber of their team and they went and turned in the scrolls in almost record time. Almost. The rest is just a series of people getting their asses handed to them by team Javo.

The four man Team: Lan, Javo, Sakiae and Oshi. That was the four man team that was formed after the chunin exams. The four of them commonly worked with the two youngest males [Oshi and Lan] and the medical nin with the oldest male [Javo and Sakiae]. This team became famous and renowned as the best 4 man team in the mist. As far as normal shinobi went. They were given A rank missions constantly. No S rank missions simply beacuse the three youngest were too young for that kind of thing. Javo sometimes was seperated from the group and the old three man team got back together. Javo went on S rank missions because technically he was still an active part of the mist villiage Anbu Black Ops unit. A rank after A rank went by without a hitch. These four became well known through the whole world because of their success. Until the mission that ended their success rate. A rank mission to spy on the Konoha villiage. When they ran into an anbu black op team of two. Javo wasn't with them and so the fight was difficult. Oshi sacrificed himself by taking a fireball to the chest and a kunai with a paper bomb attached to the head. It detonated after that. He did this to save his love Sakiae. Lan grabbed her up in his arms now himself being only 10 years old and her being almost 17 now. Lan however knew he had to get her away they had only killed one of the elite anbu and the other was only mildly injured. Without Oshi they didn't have the offensive power to keep both of them alive. So they left and never found Oshi's body. Though Sakiae constantly went back to find it and never forgave the people of Konoha even though soon after mist and leaf signed a well made truce.

Jounin: Sakiae was left as a Chunin and Javo was off more and more on Anbu duty and so privately a small exam combat test with the mizukage got Lan promoted to jounin by himself. As a jounin though he almost begged the mizukage not to give him a team of genin because he was a terrible leader. Though the mizukage didn't give a damn and made him continue anyways. He was given a team of genin of medium skill for genin. they trained together and Lan taught them. He knew how to train and how to do things and how to work with them but when it came to missions he left it pretty much up to the genin themselves seeing as he was only a couple years older than them they didn't respect him much unless he was testing their combat skills or in other words beating them up so they don't mutiny on him. He was so skilled at fighting he could beat the shit out of these 10 year olds with ninja powers easy even though he was only 12 years old. Finally he passed them onto the Chunin exams and the Mizukage called him on a special solo mission. A very special thing lied before that to. Promotion to the Anbu Black Ops Detention unit.

Detention Officer: As an officer of the Detention unit Lan saw Sakiae less and less and Javo more and more. Javo it turned out was the leader of the elite Anbu black Ops unit. Lan was just a member of the Anbu Detention unit. Moving along and doing his thing in that as a 13 year old kid was hard to do but at least here no one gave him shit for being so young. THey knew to get here you had to be skilled and that was all they cared about. However Lan hitting puberty constantly was trying to fuck the female Anbu. He succeeded a lot because most of them thought they wouldn't be coming back and looked for earthly thrills. This pleased Lan. Though going on missions with random people to track down members of his own villiage and killing people that used to belong to the same place that he did now was something that he really wished he never would have to do. Though after about a year of that he was promoted to one of the three Detention head officers. He led every mission and after a bit of practice and heavy intense training on everything he could ever need he was a skilled leader. More talented at commanding squads of people than any of the other anbu except for maybe Javo. The anbu commander. Then he got another call from the Mizukage. He was to undergo heavy training from the Mizukage in combat skills. Javo in practical skills and the Detention commander in interrogation and anti interrogative skills. This continued for an entire year and Lan was made into a super soldier as well as being promoted toe Black Ops unit. Instead of a normal black ops however he was a unit commander coming straight from a different branch his methods were different but that kept the enemy on their toes. Just what the mist villiage was looking for.

Black Ops Commander: It was here that Lan began to learn Fuuinjutsu. Here that he began practice into the world of sealing. He was taught simple sealings at first like the written things and how to seal paper bombs. He continued down this road learnning more and more Fuuinjutsu as well as increasing his art with Genjutsu. Never stopping his training in speed/agility/strength. At the age of 15 he now had a lot of things to keep on his mind. Fighting his way around the world and doing missions with random anbu that the mizukage assigned to his squad. He became desensitized to seeing his partners in battle die. That is what the Mizukage wanted though. On and on S rank after S rank. Every once in a while running into the one person that he knew was a friend of his no matter what. Javo. His sensei and trainer since the beginning. One day during his isolated existance as a memebr of the black ops held up in the prison of the mist known as the black ops barracks he heard that Sakiae had become a jounin rank ninja and that little bit of knowledge kept him going day after day. The small bits of info he heard from the outside world made him very happy. Until he finally heard that on a mission Sakiae was jumped by rogue ninja and killed. Lan was furius and his mission success rate dropped by about 5% which is incredibly noticeable and he was almost fired and killed by execution for that kind of drop from 99% to 94% in a month. That made people angry. The worst anbu in his position and he became the laughing stock of the whole villiage. Made fun of by the villiage and in turn the Mizukage's decision to promote someone so young into the anbu ranks was a mistake at this point. So the Mizukage under political distress ordered Lan on a solo mission outside of the villiag to assault a package coming by. However this was a trap. Javo and his unit had been sent to assassinate Lan. Javo knew who he was fighting but Lan never did. When Javo jumped him Lan took some hits on his body and didn't fight back because they bore the marks of the mist anbu. He figured they had gone rogue so he ran. But when they caught up to him in the woods one of them [Not Javo who Lan would have recognized by voice.] announced that Lan had been wanted for public treason and endangering the lives of shinobi and that he was to be killed on site and considered dangerous and rogue. Orders from the Mizukage himself. So Lan immediatly charged the announcer and with all he had attacked him. Killing him. Javo then detained Lan and bound him. Lan was dragged back to the villiage and paraded through the streets as a POW. Then put in prison to be executed in 1 week. Ktiaro tried to escape but he was fed nothing and was never unbound. Finally though hope came.

A change of heart: Javo knew what he was doing was wrong. So he came down to "check" on the prisoner and opened the door and took a kunai knife from his waist and told Lan stab him after he had cut the bonds on Lan and released the chakra bonds that stopped his chakra flow. Lan knew that if he didn't Javo would be remembered as a shame to the villiage. He had to be killed in combat or he would be a shame and a disgrace for letting a prisoner escape especially if they figured out that he "LET" a prisoner go. So Lan grabbed the knife and nodded to his sensei and stabbed him as hard and as fast as he could while putting his hand over his mouth and snapping his neck after the stab had been completed. It had to look as real as possible. The mist looked into these things because legacy meant everything to them. So then Lan took a piece of his physical bond cloth. Took a brush from Javo's belongings and sealed paper bomb writting on it placed it on the wall and upon the explosion Lan ran as fast as he could escaping the prison and the villiage. Entering the woods and living there until finally an anbu from Konoha found him and approached him. They talked and he convinced Lan to come back to Konoha with him after a test of his skills proved that the 17 year old Lan was much more skilled and powerful than the Konoha anbu that had found him. He was going to either be kicked out as a threat to the villiage of promoted to a jounin/anbu level ninja in the leaf villiage. It was worth a shot and Lan liked the guy that found him.

Konoha test: So Lan was taken back to Konohagakure. A 17 year old ex anbu who had been through so much was no in the leaf villiage and was taken in front of the Hokage. There he stood and was examined by many anbu ninja who took his weapons from him. He was tested by being forced to fight against the anbu who searched him. He had no weapons and they did. Lan beat down all three of them with ease. The Hokage was impressed and gave him a job as a jounin. He could not be trusted as an anbu ranked ninja but he could be trusted to train genin well. He seemed to be without a home after all who would he turn on and tell? No one. So he became a jounin and taught indivizual lessons to people. It was fair and Lan accepted it. Why would he not. It was here that he learned his first few medical tricks and knowledge of human anatomy which was standardized in the leaf villiage elite corp. LIke Jounin and Anbu rank ninja.

A meeting in the woods. No homo: Lan began on patrol duty and on one of his patrols in the woods right outside of the Konoha villiage he found a man. A man who had sharingan eyes that of the Uchia clan. Lan had figured they were all extinct. However this would give him valuable information. The man was suffering painful things and so Lan told him to wait there. He went off and dug up a dead Uchia. He then took the eyes to a powerful healer he met during his time in the woods who reinstated their ability. Lan used his newly gained Konoha elite medical knowledge to remove the eyes of the man that he met and then put in the new eyes. Apparently the man's new eyes were more powerful than the ones he already had. Lan just put the eyes in a pouch of his and proceeded to move on. He was never one to like Doujutsu kind of things. Though maybe on the black market he could sell them for some heavy cash. That would be fairly pleasent. Anyways Lan put his new pair of eyes in a pouch and stored in his woodland home that would later become known as the one and only ninja shop for the elite and pro. Jutsu training and weapons whatever you need all down at the shop. The man was only 15. So young while Lan himself was 22. So long spent in the leaf Jounin unit.

Missing: Lan eventually at the age of 25 was bored of his life in the leaf villiage and packed up everything he could. Spent all that remained of his money buying materials and wood and building supplies as well as hiring a few workers and a cleaning crew and went out into the woods in the exact middle of the shinobi world. It was here that Kitaro renounced everything from the world and decided to become a missing ninja the life of freedom had pulled him into the nice world.

Roleplay Sample:

Sample from his history:

In the days Lan was a Kirigakure Jounin

Lan stood on top of the small hill that he had become home with. It overlooked water and was usually covered with fog. The perfect spot to be ambushed but also the perfect spot to ambush someone. It was his home territory and he would expect an ambush here. Though if an enemy were here they would expect an ambush everywhere because of the lingering fog and not particular spots like this one. That would be important later Lan was sure. IF not then it would have been a just in case idea that just adds some security to Lan's constant worry that an invasion is coming to Kirigakure which of course he would be well prepared for. So Lan felt his weapons and made sure everything he needed was on him. Kunai knives would play a big part of this jutsu training here. It was going to be an all out or nothing training here. He would either get it figured out or be really maimed or dead forever. So Lan took the knife and stabbed it into a non vital part of his torso and then began his training while bleeding and in pain. It was a healing technique he heard about that existed. It was called Secret injury healing destruction. It was kind of sounding like an attack technique but in the end it wasn't it was a move designed to make it so that when you took damage you could justt continue as if it was nothing. Thats the theory anyways. So Lan focused his chakra around his hand. He didn't use water chakra but normal chakra beacuse he knew that elemental chakra was bad for putting on wounds. Didn't want to get all messed up. So he did this and tried to focus on the body fixing itself. But that didn't work out to well. Too much cost not enough result. So Lan sat down and took his training shirt off and ripped the arm with his strong level of strength and then wrapped it around his wound. He then put his hands back on it and tried again focusing his chakra in a different way this time and this tim being successful but still with a lot of cost. No more wound though. Lan would like the cost to go down but oh well he supposed. He tried again. He didn't even need two hands. That would be helpful later using only one hand to heal himself. The key was to not focus on the actual chakra movement and the actual wound being healed. The key was to make the cells repair the body around the wound. In doing this the chakra could work its magic on the indivizual cells and then spread through the body and the injury with incredible speed. Enhancing the repairing cells and the rest was simple practice. Eventually he would be able to recover from most wounds easily without much difficutly and with only one hand. He could be considered partially a medical nin for mastering a medical ninjutsu of this level and with that kind of ability. Continuing his training he severed the tendons in his hand with a kunai knife. He did on his left hand in case he was attacked he would still be ready to fight. One handed or not he would be able to heal it in combat situations. He was on guard and put his right hand on his left hand. That second the jutsu began to work the chakra flowing through from hand to hand focusing and using the right hand as a chanelling point to move his chakra into his other hand and then using that he used his chakra to target indivizual cells with incredible precision of a medical ninja and a practiced anatomist. Speed is the next issue in this jutsu. It still requires the hand to remain over the wound. It would be great if the hand only had to pass over the wound. That would make him a perfect soldier. Able to continue going no matter what was required of him by his lord Mizukage. So he practiced over and over again the ability to pass chakra off his body. This would be very effective for future jutsu and not this one. It just kept getting better with this training. It was amazing. by repitition he learned how to pass his chakra through the air and move it onto his body that way and then from that he could still control it because it came from him and by doing that he could make his body focus in on the chakra points around that area and from that draw all the power which by this point in the training was not much at all and from that he could heal himself to the full ability of the jutsu power.

So there Lan began his next training technique. He decided to continue on the same kind of training that he originally had begun working on. Chakra control. So Lan continued his training by working on at first building his chakra in his own silence on the mountain. From his mind he could feel the power of his chakra network flowing in his body and so he continued to sit there waiting for his network to be a complete network set up in his body. So then he stopped the focusing and walked over to the three prisoners he had been given by the lord Mizukage who were dead men walking. They had been removed of their arms and of one leg as well as hindered in motor skills by incredibly skilled medical ninja in the hidden mist villiage. Lan walked up to the first prisoner and knocked him over flat on his back. Without a word he put his hand on his chest and transferred his chakra into the man's body and pulled back with his own chakra. It didn't work out to well and he got his chakra back with only a little of the enemies back. So he took a kunai knife and slit that man's throat. Moving on to the next prisoner. He put his hand on that man's chest and then imagined hooks. Hooks that go in and then grab and have a harder time coming back out. He did this and roughly when his chakra was coming back out, of course after the same process of knocking the man down and then putting his hand on his chest and putting his own chakra into him, he changed his chakra around and spread it out grabbing into and around chakra points or what Lan found to have more chakra than other areas and then when he pulled his own chakra back out of the man's body pulling with him his spiritual [Chakra] strength as well as his physical will to do anything. This satisfied Lan more than the first for sure. So he moved onto the third man. While he was standing up and trying to walk away Lan put his hand near his chest and then pulled his chakra and physically energy out. Laughing Lan then took his kunai knife and stabbed the man through the eyes and immediatly afterwards fell on the second man he tested this on and beheaded him with the same kunai knife. happily.

Moving on to continue chakra training and training with chakra related techniques Lan next took on the task of using his chakra to form outward chakra and then forcing it into a weapon that can cut chakra off. This would be used to slice blood vessles easily from the outside without leaving a mark or to cut off the muscles of a body with the same effect of no one being able to tell. It would be interesting. So he had a dead body. Dead human body. Hung up from a tree on a rope by the neck. It had everything about it healthy so Lan could tell what he was cutting. First he focused his chakra into both of his hands and then slashed with them in the spots that he focused most of his chakra but it only broke the bones because of force and breaking bones was not the goal of this technique. So Lan rethought his strategy for the technique and reestablish his pLan for this kind of technique. It had to come out of his body so it was like going through chakra absorbtion but half way and stopping and then holding it. So Lan did this and could see outside of his body small chakra like scalpels which would reflect the name of this particular technique. So Lan then used these on the heart and on the forearm of the man. Then he used a normal kunai to cut the arm open to see his work. The muscles inside were severed and the user would not be able to use those at all. Next he opened up the body and called a medical ninja over to examine the chakra stabbed heart. It was determined that soon after the chakra touched it the heart would have shut down and been completely useless. That was a successful stab and a completely well driven in point as far as Lan was concerned. He had all but mastered this technique. Now as for how it could be used to better the mist villiage was a different story. After a short amount of thinking he decided that if anyone were fool enough to get close enough to him he would miss on purpose and destroy them with this technique elminate one arm was all it took and then he wins. So then Lan turned another chakra technique learned well.

Infinate Darkness. The idea of the never ending void haunts the back of human minds. In darkness of the pure kind no one can see anything and no one can know anything. Fear of the unknown at its full height. Can you fear the unknown in a combat situation? Yes you can. More than in any other situation and that is why Lan had decided to take on this jutsu and this technique. With this technique Lan can instill the fear of unknown into anyone. It may be genjutsu and not his specialty or a subject of training in any of his previous skills however it would make every technique he ever made more effective. From chakra techniques that are non elemental to ninjutsu techniques involving elements [water] he could make them unknown to the enemy and therefore kill with more efficiency all in the end for 1 purpose. The lord Mizukage Tsao Nara. He is the one reason that Lan keeps moving. The only purpose Lan has in his life anymore. The only reason that Lan can survive day by day and the reason that he has a purpose to pursue. So that is why Lan would press so hard to perfect this technique as with all others. For the Mizukage. So Lan turned his mind inside out trying to figure out how to work his chakra then he remembered back in the academy how genjutsu works. You infect the enemies mind with airborne chakra based by a handseal. So Lan made the simple handseal that he had heard is the beginning to work the chakra flow for the infinate darkness jutsu technique. He did this on a prisoner and from that the prisoner who had a weak mind was easily affected. It was here that Lan focused his chakra into darkness and infected and tapped using all the intelligence he could muster for this occassion and wishing that he was smarter and could figure this out easier. He did this and as he did the prisoner began to see blackness everywhere around him and get afraid. As he saw nothing Lan moved in behind him and waving his hands in front of his face. No one could detect him in this state so Lan just kept walking. He got right up behind him and he felt Lan's breath as Lan focused on maintaining this state. He would remain in it until he could move normally within this state. So Lan began training in it. He took his kunai out and began to move like he would in strength training or in endurance/stamine training or in meditation and made every movement of martial art patterns that he could think of. He continued doing sword fighting techniques and practicing kinds of sword manuevers acting as if he had a blade. Began fist fighting with nothing but the trees and stabbing at small blocks in the training area leaving the man to his own fears. The fear of the unknown that was the demise of so many people in the world. The people in the world that people could not deal with. Excellent technique. Lan aimed a shuriken device at the man's leg and threw it once he felt that he was at about 99% of his ability. The rest of that 1% of his lacking ability in this state was mainly him being nervous about being in a genjutsu state and about his opponents breaking out of this manuever. So in order to do that he would have to kill someone in this state completely affected by the technique. He began to do so. First grabbing the man's leg and tieing him to a tree upside down. Now he had to do this graphically or he would never be able to say that his mind worked the same in both the outside infinate and the inside infinate darkness jutsu and darkness jutsu. Punching together his fists he began to think on how the best way was there to kill this man terribly and make an example of him as the first death in this state. He was too afraid to move so Lan walked over to him and told put a cinderblock in his weak hands and he almost dropped it. Lan handed him a rope and told him to tie the cinderblock to his penis. He then walked over and picked the man up and the cinderblock and put it on top of a tree. He then tied the center of the rope to his kunai knife and picked it up and threw it into the tree. Lan then set up the remainder of his kunai in the ground tied together ready to go up his ass when it fell. Lan let go and the cinderblock pulled his dick off as it fell on one side and he fell and the kunai came through his body up through his ass and he never knew what happened other than his last scream was one of pure terror and fear and exileration. Though that last bit was just Lan's emotion as he got 100% into the jutsu.

I apologize for it taking up two posts...Bump for approval besides please accept the apology.

The basics,

Tone down the KKG effects, too powerful.

Master Swordsmanship Specialist:

If you want to be a Master Swordsman, you need Kenjutsu as a specialty. You already have two, remove this.

Master Hand-to-Hand Combatant:

Same explanation as Swordsmanship.

Speed/Agility Master:

This should be allowed only to Taijutsu users, or unless your a Kage which is not a surprise. Please remove.

Enhanced Strength:

Same explanation as the Speed/Agility, but this one can get a vote from an admin if you'll be allowed to. But to me, enchancers like this should be ought to Taijutsu users only. And why's there a Ichigo name?


Name: Solo Seal
Rank: A
Element: None
Description: Solo seal is a technique created by Lan that requires a short string of handseals immediatly followed by slamming the open palm of the right hand on the ground. At this point a large black marking will be made on the ground in the shape of an S written on top of an A with a circle expanding 20 meters out from that mark. If someone were to step into this 20 meter area they would move at half speed as their usual.

Lower the AOE/Area of Effect.

Name: Lions charging Roar
Rank: A
Element: None
Description:Fuuinjutsu • Shishi Heikou is created by one of the ten Chikamatsu puppets. This seal prevents the one sealed from manipulating chakra. There are two methods for this seal.

In the first, the puppet will expel a hazy orb from its mouth which can be thrown. While flying through the air, the orb will lose it's haze and grow in size to a huge gaping beast-like head. The large teeth can grab ahold of the person it hits and pin them to a wall. Once the it impacts the wall, it will immediately release the seal onto the surface.

In the second form, the main puppet will expel the seal from its mouth onto a surface it is touching.

Remove this, for puppet users only.


Name: Chakra Absorbtion
Rank: B
Element: None
Description: Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu is a special Ninjutsu techinque used by the Leaf ninja Yoroi. After activitating the technique, Yoroi's hand will glow with chakra. When he touches his palm on his opponents body, he can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases his advantage over his opponent.

Name: Chakra Threads
Rank: B
Element: None
Description: Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu is a special Ninjutsu techinque used by the Leaf ninja Yoroi. After activitating the technique, Yoroi's hand will glow with chakra. When he touches his palm on his opponents body, he can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases his advantage over his opponent.

Remove this two, special techniques.

Name: Chakra Scalpel
Rank: B
Element: None
Description: Chakra no Mesu is a special Ninjutsu technique used by medical ninjas. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja will focus chakra to their hands. When their charged hands reach the body of their target, they can extend the chakra internally into the targets body to cut and neatly slice their muscles and blood vessels without harming the surface skin. This technique can be used in battle, but because of its hectic nature, the fine precision required for an instant kill is not feasible. Damage can still be done to the vital organs, but the technique should be used carefully in battle.

For Medical Users only. Please remove.


Name: Doton Kekkai Doruodomu
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: A skill on which the ninja uses the surrounding earth in order to capture the nearby enemies within a prison. The prison is infused with chakra, so that when it it attacked the chakra instantly begins to repair the earth through materialization. Within the dome, all chakra used becomes unfocused. Making pure chakra techniques, and the ability to create other elements useless. However, techniques where chakra is charged internally can be used.

Is this the cannon tech used by Jiribou in the anime? please clarify.

Lastly, please fix your history. There are several names which are not connected to your character used.

I apologize for the mess but I don't have the effort within me to change all of that. Sorry for the trouble.

If you dont want to change those, this application will never be approved.

Ok thanks for the time. Im sorry I have wasted your effort in reading it.

Okay...reading through this, I realized somethings

It seems all the masters are more that proficiencies, meaning he can sue them at an adequate level, as expected by an A rank.


Name: Solo Seal
Rank: A
Element: None
Description: Solo seal is a technique created by Lan that requires a short string of handseals immediatly followed by slamming the open palm of the right hand on the ground. At this point a large black marking will be made on the ground in the shape of an S written on top of an A with a circle expanding 20 meters out from that mark. If someone were to step into this 20 meter area they would move at half speed as their usual.

If this effects everyone, including you and is extremely draining the range will suffice, but at a cost.



Name: Doton Kekkai Doruodomu
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: A skill on which the ninja uses the surrounding earth in order to capture the nearby enemies within a prison. The prison is infused with chakra, so that when it it attacked the chakra instantly begins to repair the earth through materialization. Within the dome, all chakra used becomes unfocused. Making pure chakra techniques, and the ability to create other elements useless. However, techniques where chakra is charged internally can be used.

This doesn't seem like the cannon tech, considering the chakra isn't being absorbed, you may want to add a range.

My only other concern besides the few jutsu Kit touched would be the last paragraph of your history which makes a clear reference to your character with a different, name.

I apologize for taking so, long but I'd hate to see work like this go to waste.

I think that should suffice. I got together the will to make the edits. I apologize for resisting in the beginning I am a fairly lazy man.

I see no issues, and it would be good to have one or two active missing, nins.

You have my approval.

Ok I assume that those masteries only works against a person of the same rank or below. He cannot, and I mean cannot be faster and stronger in physical prowess against someone of a higher rank.

And if you allow those, I will second you except for the Swordmanship. Allowing him to have it, is the same as having Kenjutsu without being listed as one of the specialties. Just take that out and you'll have my approval.

I agree. No master swordsmen without Kenjutsu as a specialty.