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Nocturne
Missing-Nin
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| Subject: Plot feedback  Thu 01 Dec 2011, 3:16 pm | |
| Hey everyone, Here is half of the rubbish Kitsuke and I put together. It starts off from the Kage Summit that had taken place back in late '09. The main idea was to turn NX's successful events into a story or whatever for the site (it isn't official yet, though). The second half will be added later on, along with more depth. Soon I will post our timeline and elect event mods. Feel free to post all your positives and negatives. - Spoiler:
Due to the recent activities of Akatsuki, and two other minor groups, a Kage Summit was called upon by the Mizukage (Naizu Nimakee) to discuss about these threats to the Five Nations. Shortly after the meeting began, it was abruply interrupted by the Akatsuki as they targeted the Tsuchikage (Talis), host of the Seven-Tails. It was made known that Kyogi Domo, Konogakure's Third Hokage, was the Akatsuki's leader. While the other Kages left, the Raikage was also attacked and soon came to believe that the other Kages had abandoned him and escaped. An alliance was soon formed between four of the Nations, Kumo keeping its status as a neutral force. Five years after the Kage Summit, now the world plunged into a short state of peacefulness. The Akatsuki suddenly banished into the void, leaving no trace of its once evil and destructive plans. But the whole world is about to get shaken again by a new villain who will threaten the peaceful state maintained by the Shinobi alliance. A person who hid in the shadows for a long time, planning for his evil plans. Only the Raikage who chose to place himself far from the shinobi alliance knows who this man is.
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Naizu Nimakee
Mizukage
Posts : 1040
Points : 1613
Join date : 2009-07-05
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Ninja Rank: X Rank
Village: Hidden in the Mist
| | Subject: Re: Plot feedback Thu 01 Dec 2011, 9:39 pm | |
| Whenever/After I get approved, will I resume my former position of Mizukage? | |
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Nocturne
Missing-Nin
Posts : 465
Points : 153
Join date : 2009-12-29
Age : 30
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Village: N/A
| | Subject: Re: Plot feedback Thu 01 Dec 2011, 9:47 pm | |
| Yes, if you still want the position. | |
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Masahiro Yukina
Hokage
Posts : 1017
Points : 110
Join date : 2008-10-17
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Ninja Rank: S Rank
Village: Konohagakure
| | Subject: Re: Plot feedback Fri 02 Dec 2011, 2:52 am | |
| Likewise, as this is plot pertinent, what of the other main villages being closed? Could I fill the role of the as of yet unnamed Raikage? Are the villages opening up with the release of the plot? Answers... | |
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Naizu Nimakee
Mizukage
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Village: Hidden in the Mist
| | Subject: Re: Plot feedback Fri 02 Dec 2011, 7:52 am | |
| Honestly, it'd probably be a good idea to list voids that you all feel are absolutely essential to being filled so we know where things stand. | |
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Nocturne
Missing-Nin
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| | Subject: Re: Plot feedback Fri 02 Dec 2011, 8:43 am | |
| No the closed villages will not be opened, this includes Kumo. I'm only focused on Konoha and Kiri. | |
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Masahiro Yukina
Hokage
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Village: Konohagakure
| | Subject: Re: Plot feedback Fri 02 Dec 2011, 9:23 pm | |
| You should change that. If anything, Kiri should be introduced last, due to it's distance from the other villages. Kumo and Konoha first, then work west wards and down. Not to mention, it makes more sense to have equal opposing forces. As it stands, you'll have two villages, vs. the ten nin that are apart of akatsuki. Makes more sense balance and plotwise to introduce Kumo now, especially if they've ties to akatsuki. | |
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Tarnish
Hokage
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Points : 87
Join date : 2010-11-25
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Ninja Rank: A Rank
Village: Konohagakure
| | Subject: Re: Plot feedback Fri 02 Dec 2011, 11:16 pm | |
| Well, we seem rather shorthanded with the Akatsuki. to my knowledge, theres only my character, Shinobu, and I assume a character of Kitty's design, since he's Akat leader | |
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Nocturne
Missing-Nin
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| | Subject: Re: Plot feedback Mon 05 Dec 2011, 3:55 pm | |
| What you say is true and I agree, though Naizu also plays an important role as well. Kumo may be closed, but the country itself is open for RP (Raikage and Kumo nin are NPCs). | |
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Naizu Nimakee
Mizukage
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Village: Hidden in the Mist
| | Subject: Re: Plot feedback Tue 06 Dec 2011, 4:45 am | |
| Can you list off all the people who've been approved to Rp now? | |
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Tarnish
Hokage
Posts : 136
Points : 87
Join date : 2010-11-25
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Ninja Rank: A Rank
Village: Konohagakure
| | Subject: Re: Plot feedback Tue 06 Dec 2011, 9:41 am | |
| *raises hand* both my chars! woo! | |
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Kamoku Willow
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| | Subject: Re: Plot feedback Tue 06 Dec 2011, 10:44 am | |
| o.o The History is great.
-By the way. I realized that the willow clan is now out-of-date. So I'm closing it and converting Kamoku into a guujin, losing all of his willow-ey powers in exchange to see shapes. Though I'd still like to keep the willow clan in Naruto-x history bank due to how long it's been here. | |
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Masahiro Yukina
Hokage
Posts : 1017
Points : 110
Join date : 2008-10-17
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Ninja Rank: S Rank
Village: Konohagakure
| | Subject: Re: Plot feedback Tue 06 Dec 2011, 5:26 pm | |
| My character's good to go too. | |
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Nocturne
Missing-Nin
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| | Subject: Re: Plot feedback Mon 19 Dec 2011, 11:17 am | |
| We have been discussing about the plot and decided that we don't really need an actual plot type of thing. I'm working on a site timeline which would describe village history and everything, basically what has taken place here on NX. This includes certain canon events as well. The NX News Area was brought back (as everyone can see) to support our storyline, there will be a system for this too. Please post your thoughts. | |
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