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| Subject: Yair Oerba Yun Devia Mon 13 Feb 2012, 1:36 am | |
| ~General Information~Name: Yair Oerba Yun Devia Nickname/Alias: Kira Kitsuren Weight: 153 lbs Height: 6'1 ft Age: 24 Gender: Male Appearance: Clothing: //Refer to Above// Personality: - Spoiler:
Kira: Welcome Kira, We took an analysist of your brain and well-
Yair: - I prefer if you call me Yair...
Kira: Is it because you are ashamed of your name? Kira is the name you are birthed with. It is a title given to you when you emerged into this world, or do you want to abandon your roots. You can't fun away from your past forever... Yair.
Yair: Heh... If I told you that, then it would be confirmed that you are correct and I'm not gonna give you the luxury. Even though by me saying this, it already does confirm that you are correct. Yet if I give you a good enough reason which is not your assumed conclusion then would that throw off your analyzation of me? Would that question your results about me? Go on and read me back your... "opinions" about me. Oh, and if it helps. You can call me Yair.
Kira: Aw, you are slowly proving me right on my results. Let's see if you can connect the actions you preformed with the conclusions I gathered from my analysist of you.
Yair: Proceed...
Kira: In terms of personality, you're quick to hide what you really are ~ Behind a mask of confidence and sometimes arrogance, you're scared of yourself and you're even more scared of letting others in, in case they end up getting you in trouble or hurting you. You're really quite timid, but you believe that if you at least act confident you might gain some real confidence in time. Well, I'm not as confident about the rest as I was about what I just said, but I think it's fairly accurate.
Your over-analysis stems from a fear of not knowing things. You hate being uncertain, and thats why you tried to keep a distance from me for so long. You like knowing everything there is to know about a situation and if you don't know something you feel the need to dig and dig so you can feel secure. Your interests in darker areas such as satanism and such that you've recently acquired is a desire to seem more occult and mysterious. My guess is that you want to be this way because most girls fall at the feet of the brooding, mysterious guys in stories and folklore. You take a liking into writing to because of the fact that you feel the need to let out all of your emotions and mental thoughts of ideas and discoveries which emerge from emotional breakthroughs that you find in yourself often in your life because you are obsessed with over analyzing who you are deep down inside to the very tip but what you don't understand is people change over time and I understand that you wish to grasp the basics of yourself but it is impossible. So you come up with these new ideas for different identities for yourself and base them off a template and place what you know about yourself as the basics or the goal of the false identity and then you fuse it with what you dream to be. Whatever appeals to the public because of your fears of not fitting in or looking stupid yet at the same time you wish to stand out from the crowd.
Unlike other people, your philosophy on partaking the image of the 'bad guy' or at least the 'bad boy' not only comes from my theory of the opposing sex but as well as the fact that you see without a villain, their will not be a hero and also for the simple fact that it appears that the heroes only get their rightful respect during the time when all seems lost and every counts upon the hero to put forth the effort to save the day during it's final hours. To you it seems a bit... "much like bullshxt." to you and I also understand that as well. Thus you put on this mysterious act to already appear agaisnt the public so if they turn agaisnt you, it appears that it doesn't phase you when it does deep down inside. Giving off vague and esoteric information in an occult-like manner to keep yourself from being harmed. Trufully you are kind hearted and just want someone you can calm you head around during tough emotional times like this. You put on this mask of confidence and arrogance around people you feel somewhat secure about. For people to completely know the real you, it's obvious that they must go under serious 'Trust Trials' for them to finally be able to know the real you. You seem to have a nice ability of Over-Analyzation which allows you to read people from their body language, actions, tone of voice, shift of eyes or other bodily movements, and other things. By doing such a thing, you conjure up conclusions or assumptions about people or situations to get a general idea until you.
You take interest into odd fashions and color combinations that would stand out agaisnt the public which also comes from your desire to stand out from the crowd. Your artistic ways comes from your deep mental and emotional concentration that you have which needs to be expressed through artistic visuals of nature and people in beautiful natural sceneries and touching poetry all based on your emotions during that point in time. You challenge yourself by keeping promises to people and pushing yourself to never give up on those people and those promises, but most importantly, to never give up on yourself, ever. Which is slightly tough for you seeing as competition somewhat thwarts your plans of never giving up because then your desire to know everything kicks in. You have a desire to know the best possible outcome of who would be the best victor; the fear of competition throws off your over-analyzation skills during the mental comparison and sometimes off your analyzations of either yourself or the competitor and those you lose focus of what really matters or you analyze good but you start to doubt your results which throws off your focus. (Note: When he means competition he doesn't mean opponents in combat, it's more like races, games, mostly competiting for someone's love.) Now your love life and relationship concerns -
Yair: - That's all correct... great analyzation skills. However, That's enough.
Kira: - But I haven't finished with your love life, attractions, fears and attitude during batt -
Yair: - I said that's enough. If they wanna know the rest tell them to come to me themselves.
Kira: Your mysterious attitude is making a bold appearance suddenly... Why?
Yair: ... It's certain things you should not know about me. I am more focused on my work and that is how it shall appear. I can't be seen arguing with myself... who I was and who I am now are just figures of how far I came. I want peace for the world and I know how to accomplish it.
Kira: -and how do you plan on doing that Yair?... Complete ignorant bliss?
Yair:... Exactly. Voice: Liam O'Brien ~Rank/Village Information~Classification: Leader of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist Letter Rank: S-Rank Village: Kirigakure No Sato ~Skill Information~Skill Specialty: Kenjutsu // Fuinjutsu // Taijutsu Elemental Affinity: Katon // <-- Never actually trained elemental abilities. Special Characteristics: Name: Master Chakra control Rank:A Type: Chakra Requirements:: Requires Med specialty Dominate and no increase Chakra SC And Advence chakra control Description: You have a understanding about the amount of chakra now you truly are a master, ou have a complete understanding on chakra, able to perform techniques with little to no fatigue. The lower the technique the more control you have over it. With naturally given talents to command the spiritual energies within you are now able to grasp the better concept of using your jutsu. As a result you can use less chakra then other for the same effect, B rank cost off of S rank jutsu and below Name: High summoner Rank: S Type: Chakra Description: You understand your creatures entirely well where they have more respect now then when you first started. Near all your summons are under your complete control and are very easy to use in tandem in battle. Your summons have become so close to you they acutally share your power, truly becoming a symbolic relationship as you gain 15% bonus to your abilities and stats as you fight along side your summon as well as your summon is 35% stronger then other summons of that rank. Requires Experienced summoner Name: Greater hand coordination Rank: B Type: Physical Description: The user is even better at hand seals now, slowly perfecting their skills to the point of faster than ninja of their rank when casting jutsu. You have smoother movements with your handseals, they are becoming more fluid, more natural to you and it is almost second nature to perform. The speed increase is 35% faster than the average shinobi(Must have Improved hand control first) ~Jutsu~Kenjutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Ko-hibana Rank: B Element: -- Description: Yair concentrates sufficient amounts of chakra in which he borrows from Jakutai-ka and swings his sword in the direction of his target fiercely and a wave of focused solid energy emits from the sword. The wave darts through the air at the speed of how fast Yair swings the sword. The wave is strong enough to pierce through trees and rock however it cannot go through earth. It is powerful enough to leave a mark in the earth if aimed in that direction. Harm to flesh will cause the a target to be seriously injured but not killed.
Name: Bakuha Nami Rank: B Element: -- Description: Yair concentrates sufficient amounts of chakra within Jakutai-ka and stabs the ground beneath him. In the direction that Yair stabs the ground, a ravaging, vicious wave of rising chakra energy that rips through the ground toward the target at great speed. This technique is similar to Water Release: Rising Water Slicer.
Name: Dou Rank: A Element: -- Description: Usually done In a defensive method to protect it's owner. Jakutai-ka coats it's owner in a veil of light bubble gum pink-with a purple tint colored chakra. This ability has two abilities, first; This chakra is strong enough to endure brute and blunt attacks of weak weapons and attacks. Second; Jakutai-ka will use his chakra to that is coating the body of Yair to also feel areas of damage and sinks inside of the wounds, enhancing the natural healing of the human body and making things faster. (Serious wounds takes 7 posts to fully heal, medium damage wounds take 6 & regular wounds take 5 wounds). Somewhat similar to Lightning Release Armor in how it defends but doesn't have physical boosting attributes, only defensive methods against C-Rank and lower techniques. This technique can be activated by Yair at will as well.
Name: Kontan Rank: C Element: -- Description: This technique allows Yair to 'focus' by using the influence of Jakutai-ka. Jakutai-ka is able to influence the mind of Yair, allowing his physical attacks(Sword & Hand-to-hand) to be slightly enhanced(35-40%) in which they can inflict greater damage upon the target.
Name: Suriru Rank: C Element: -- Description: This technique allows Yair to 'enjoy' by using the influence of Jakutai-ka. Jakutai-ka is able to influience the mind of Yair, allowing his thirst for battle to increase and have a bloodthirst for attacking and killing. THis can also be a downfall because sometimes Yair can't control his actions and may endanger plans or people or even cause him to die for making rash decisions and rushing and relentlessly attacking.
Name: Genshuku Rank: B Element: -- Description: This technique allows Yair to conjure up an orb of dark matter which was borrowed darkened chakra from Jakutai-ka with a white glowing outline. Yair would intentionally use this attack at airbourne targets because the impact is very satisfying for Yair, but he does this at grounded and airbourne targets. Once the orb hits the target, it quickly shrinks then instantly combusts with a blast that would send whatever within a 20 foot radius to fly or be knocked back from the impact.
Name: Giga-Genshuku Rank: A Element: -- Description: The same as Genshuku but the impact is much greater and the damage is most worse. Also the speed of the orb being thrown is slightly faster.
Name: Jakutai-ka: Summoning Medium Rank: -- Element: -- Description: This allows Yair to summon his summons through Jakutai-ka, allowing his summons to be influenced by the demonic chakra the Jakutai-ka displays and boosts their attributes, coating the summons in a purple flame chakra and automatically giving them Dou, Kontan, & Suriru for the first 5 posts. ~History/RP Sample~History/Background Story: - Spoiler:
Kira was always an odd child from the beginning, unlike other children that will play and horse around. He would sit alone and read his family ancient books and texts on weaponry. Sitting alone as he got lost within the ancient words his ancestors woke and written. Reading almost immediately the ancient language they spoke. He was intrigued by his family and their past. He was intrigued by what's out their in other words. He trained to get stronger to find those place. Locate those answers on his own. In a flash he was gaining stronger by the instant physically. Training hand to hand combat, disarms and purely focused on strategy and quick thinking. As the children laughed and played around. Giggling as they played games with each other, bonding and making a relationship with each other. A true friendship. Something Kira never really experienced. Kira's friend was his mind and his books. His hard work and dedication were his buddies and his goals were his pals until he reached the academy. The ninja academy that is. He was young like all the other kids, inexperienced as a ninja but truly experienced as a thinker, a strategist and was evolving in physical combat. Debating wasn't much of an option with Kira for he won arguments using logical terms and philosophy of course. Even though his intellegence on philosophy was still inexperienced, he knew more about it than average kids. During the academy as they took field trips around the village, playing laughing and having fun. Their was two female children who were truly best friends, they stuck by each other all the time through thick and then which taught Kira about teamwork and cooperation, something he read within his clan ancient books. The girls were walking beside Kira one day on the academy's field trip to the Kage building and one of the girls really liked Kira. She had a crush on him while the other one was devolping true feelings for Kira. For some reason they were attracted to the mysterious and non-talkative type of person. Both of those girls decided to make a pact that whoever gets him first gets to be with him without the other being jealous. As they made their wager, that day Kira got really popular and more involved with the children around him unwanted of course. The two girls smothered him with love and compasion by giving him flowers and hugs infront of other kids which he didn't really like because they were children and he didn't really care for women at the time. He was getting embarrassed and he didn't want to be mean so he tried to tell one of the girls that he didn't feel the same way infront of the class. It just so happens she took the news the wrong way and punched Kira out of his seat which led to him being mocked by his classmates. Engulfed in total embarrassment, Kira ran home angered to no end. He knew he oculdn't show his face at the academy again. He had one choice and that was to conceal his face from the academy. The next day, right before school he went to a clothing store and bought a mask for his face. It was to keep the kids from knowing who he is which was a stupid idea know that he thinks about it. Seeing as the children has assigned seats, he will have to sit where Kira sits. No this is not a personality shift when he dawns the mask on his face, he just feels comfortable with the mask on and he can express himself more. One day he was sitting agaisnt a tree when three guys came over to him, blocking the very sunlight he needed to finish writting his poetry. The guys looked like they mean buisness. The guys were around Kira's age and the setting was the Academy's park were all the other children played. At first the children were afraid of Kira wearing the mask but they grown to like him and thought he was cool and unique. Three guys didn't like the publicity and popularity Kira was getting, they were jealous and wanted to beat him up. Kira showed his hand to hand combat skills he learned and trained that day. The children that watched the three guys get beat up were amazed and officially made Kira the most popular guy in the academy. They were afraid but respected him. Over time things didn't change and he felt the need to always wear the mask to feel important. He graduated the exams of course as he went on to become an official ninja. Kira emerged on to an official ninja of the village. Their were many girls, more so than guys which had Kira to be put on a Genin squad with two girls. Which he really wouldn't mind but the two girls were the best friends, one of which that had the crush on him, punched him out of his seat which caused him to wear this mask. The girl that punched him was named Nami Katamari and her best friend was the one that was falling in love with Kira and his mysterious ways. Her name was Akemi Katamari. That's right, they were best friends because they were sisters. They acted more so like twins however. Seeing as how Nami dislikes Kira and Akemi adores him, they usually got into an argument about the situation. During training with their sensei who was known as Katsu Yoshida. The purpose of the training was to train teamwork and cooperation. Kira knew the sisters had great cooperation, all he had to do was join in on it. Nami absolutely refused to work with Kira most of the time and when she was force to, she didn't give Kira a heads up on incoming attacks or try to get him out of harm's way. The sensei was fed up with thier actions and told them to put aside their petty differences and past for the success of the mission, village and so on. Kira nodded and turned to Nami who was still not sure about the idea as it was shown in her facial expression and folded arms. It was no use trying to convert her decision so Kira had to make a move on his own. He suggested a handshake. She was still very skeptical about it and decided that she won't take the handshake. She want something more. Akemi had a bad feeling about what devious thoughts was stiring up in her head. Nami suggested a kiss. Akemi was fed up with the idea and decided that Kira shouldn't go through with the kiss. Kira believed that if thats what it took to get this team functioning again he had to do it. He lifted his mask up slightly to reveal his lips, the rest of his face was shadowed by the mask. Akemi was heart broken on the inside and was pissed at her sister, it seems like Nami schemed this to from the very beginning. As their lips were about to meet, Akemi pushed Kira out of the way resulting in Nami kissing her sister's cheek instead. Kira fell to the wet grass ground and started to stand back up. He knew exactly what happened and was glad Akemi done what she did. He wasn't ready to kiss anyone yet. Katsu realized what kind of relationship the three squad members have and used it to his advantage as they went on missions together. It seem like Kira would be partnering up with Katsu during missions while the sisters repair their relationship with each other. Thus letting Kira step back in. Katsu's plan was a success. During the chuunin exams, Kira aced the written exam without cheating and went on with his squadmates. Akemi and Nami made it to the forest of death exam. As they entered the Forest of Death. Kira readied himself and so did his squadmates. As they entered the forest of death. Nami held one of the scrolls in her hands. Kira and Akemi was there to guard her from being endangered while recovering the other scroll and making it to the destination. Kira couldn't go out alone, he will surely be defeated so it was best to use teamwork. Well teamwork all came crashing down. Ninja from the Hidden Rock village really didn't play around. One of the members on the squad from Iwagakure was a Nobunaga from the Taiyo Branch. He was quite fierce and skilled as a ninja. He and his squad members easily defeated Kira's squad. As they attempted to take the scroll from Name, the Nobunaga killed her. Struck her down with no remorse and injured Akemi. That was the last and final straw. He already ticked Kira off by killing Nami right before her sister's eyes and now this? Injuring her right after for no reason? It awakened Kira's powers as he, with ease, killed his opponent using elemental techniques. He took both the scroll they took from Kira's squad and the scroll they had. Akemi was too devastated to see her own sister killed and her leg was injured so she couldn't walk. Kira striped the weaponry from the attacking Nobunaga and took the necklace Nami was wearing and put it on Akemi. Kira then carried Nami's lifeless body on his shoulders and Akemi in his arms to the destination. The ninja were shocked to see Nami's dead body and Kira with the strength and will to carry body bodies to such a distance. Ever since that day, Akemi realized how much of a great person Kira is and only loved him more by doing this for her sister. Nami's body was sent to the hospitol while Kira and Akemi went on with the exams, holding her sister's necklace around her neck. As she watched from above the names being drawn. It was Kira vs Utsui. Before he went into battle, Akemi lifted his mask half way and gave him a kiss unexpectedly. Everyone was surprised to see it and even Kira was surprised but he didn't say he didn't like it and gave her a kiss back. Leaping onto the battleground. Utsui was a puppet user and attacked from far range but it was nothing agaisnt Kira's strategy and techniques. He easily defeated his opponent and moved on to the second part of the final exam. Giving a thumbs up to Akemi who watched from above. As the fights went on, Akemi advanced to the second part of the final exam aswell. The two went on and won the following battles aswell, progressing along as Chuunin. After the exams they paid tribute to Akemi's fallen sister by going to her funeral and leaving flowers. After that day, Akemi and Kira, whatever relationship they had grew stronger. Kira moved on with his single teammate as the trained and spent more time together. It was more of a romantic time within his life. He and her got closer together and he felt comfortable around her truly. They talked, had fun, giggled, played around and more stuff they did together. They went on dates together and completed many missions using teamwork and cooperative strategies, duo strategies and their feelings for each other always kept them going. Kira gained many side jobs to raise many. Jobs such as bodyguarding the Kage, protecting rich and wealthy people. Guarding stores at night and missions were a piece of cake for Kira. Kira and Akemi's relationship grew so strong they were thinking of marriage in the near future. Something they both looked forward too. Engagement came soon after. Kira and Kitsuru grew a much stronger bond with each other. Thus to the point where they attempted to get married right after their departure from Chuunin rank to Jounin rank. So they did, as they graduated the ranks and expanded their abilities and powers. They were official jounin of the hidden cloud village. Kira and Kitsuru didn't need a sensei afterwards. They lived their lives as fellow Jounin lovers with a few side jobs aswell. Kira was a volunteer Kage bodyguard, he was getting paid an extensive amount of money in which he would spend on Kitsuru such as gifts and romantic evenings at expensive and wonderful places. When they showed affection to each other. Kitsuru would lift his mask half way, only revealing his lips and lay a kiss on his lips which she descibes as tasty or lucious. Kira took note of those compliments, she taught him how to love and how to feel. Something that he liked to do when he was around her. Kira and Kitsuru, along with two other jounin were sent on a mission to the hidden grass village. They were their to kill ninja who posed as cloud ninja and attack the hidden grass village. Kira was the leader of the four ninja group of course with following members, Kitsuru Katamari as the medic Ninja. Omi Inuzuka the sensor ninja and the genjutsu specialist, Gizuru Nara. Together they made a working and functional squad. Doing their departure on the mission and leaving, heading towards the hidden grass village. Kira was walking by Gizuru Nara while Kitsuru was walking by the arrogant and self proclaimed ladies man Inuzuka. Kira really disliked Omi alot. Omi was walking by Kitsuru, basically flirting her, smothering her with affection like hugs which she knew disturbed Kira alot. She really couldn't help the fact that Omi was funny and adorable and got caught up in his ways, even though she didn't want to give Kira the wrong idea. They were walking through the rainforest at night, they were definately tired and suggested to take a rest. Kira accepted and they all took a rest, Kitsuru sleeping by Kira who was sitting agaisnt a tree while the others had their own places to sleep. Omi was in a tree while Gizuru was within the shadows somewhere. Kira tapped Kitsuru and told her that he needed to talk to her. She awaken from her slumber, rubbing her eyes and kinda annoyed by the fact that she had to wake up. Kira wanted to talk in private so they got up and walked a good distance from the rest of the teammates. Kira told her that he was fed up with her actions towards Omi, letting him touch and hold on to her. Flirt with her and quite frankly Kira wanted to beat Omi into the afterlife. She was flattered that he felt jealousy about the situation even though he won't admit it but was also insulted by the way he said things. Making it seem like she is an untrustworthy person and unfaithful. She told him it was alittle harmless flirting and Kira didn't see it that way. He was even more angry at the thought of Omi taking Kitsuru away from him and so he ended the conversation and walked away from her. Kitsuru was angry and sad. She walked back to the other teammates to see if Kira was their but he was nowhere to be found. She hoped that Kira was okay and went to sleep in the spot that Kira layed. As she fell asleep, Kira returned to the camp site and covered her up with a blanket, that way she won't be sick when she wakes up. He then got up and went on ahead without his teammates. The next morning, Kira returned to the campsite with valuable information for the squad to only find Kitsuru sleeping within the arms of Omi in the very same spot. He stood over the two, blocking the light from the sun watching as the two woke from their slumber. Both Omi and Kitsuru caught the masked man in their vision. Kira walked away towards Gizuru, Kira and Gizuru were readying their weapons and equipment seeing as Kira brought back the news. Kitsuru knew Kira got the wrong idea, she don't even know how she was sleeping in Omi's arms. She jerked himself from Omi's grip and ran over to Kira and tried to explain. Kira quickly told her to drop it and he don't want to hear it. He told them to get ready because their mission just turned around. Varying from the Cloud village posers fighting and attacking hidden grass village to the Cloud village poser fighting Kira's squad. Kitsuru and Omi readied themselves and heard a rumbling within the surrounding trees. Kira told his squad that they have arrived and to ready them. Gizuru standing on the left side of Kira and Omi on the left side of Gizuru while Kitsuru stood on the right. Suddenly a barrage of Kunai knives flung outwards towards Kitsuru which Kira reacted by quickly blocking all of them. The plan was set, Gizuru kneeled down on one knee and used his clan technique to maniplate the shadows within the surrounding rainforest. Killing some of the opponents and drawing the rest of them out of their hiding spots giving Kira and Kitsuru their chance to attack them and Omi was their to guard the vulnerable Nara. One of the cloud village posers was infact a Mori from Iwagakure. Infact he was the younger brother of the Mori, Kira murdered in the exams. The Mori attacked Kitsuru and Kira, defeating them bother with ease. He was a very experienced Jounin so combat came easy to him. The Mori dashed towards Kitsuru and gripped his hands around her neck. The Mori gave Kira an option of choosing her and her squadmates of the cost of the mission. Kitsuru told him to choose the mission and he definately wasn't gonna choose that. He chose her and the Mori smirked, igniting her in devastating Heat that burned her flesh leaving her dead on the cold wet grass. Kira's rage ignited the rain forest literally as the elemental fire heat emitted from his chakra and set the place ablaze. Which killed the Mori and his gang of cloud village posers. He placed Kitsuru's dead body on the back of Omi's companion as the traveled back to the village with the news. The villagers were happy that the mission was a success, not even caring about the loss of Kitsuru. Only people that cared were her family members and they disliked Kira because it seems Nami and Kitsuru only died while being around Kira. Kira was ashamed, he loved her and never had the chance to marry her. Kira was a lonely, heart-torn man who wandered about the village with a lingering aura of despair and a nag of a depressing odor that seemed to draw people away from him. His thick, jet black hair suddenly thinned for lack of care and over time, he appeared to be a chaotic man from first sight if you hadn't already known him. Fellow friends and family members were threatened by his sudden change and none seemed to really care enough to be there for him despite that fact that his dramatic turn of events upon his life seemed to have made him a very intimidating person of character. Kira took a very life-changing turn for himself as he descended into a life of relying on shinobi health medicine to get a certain type of 'high'. Yup, that's right. Great ol' boring life Kira became extremely addicted to mental health shinobi pills to help him cope with the lost of someone so dear to him and his descent into the blissful darkness of world that surrounds him. With each passing day, Kira would have little conversations with himself as he sat on the floor staring at the ceiling. He would converse with himself on a philosophical, intellectual way and answer himself in his head. It doesn't seem that weird does it? The pills he was taking were pills which helped Kira boost mental thinking capacity as well as numb your body and make you feel 'good' as you relax. Designed for shinobi who are overly stressed to the point where they can't carry out simple tasks and help them relax their muscles and think while releasing hormones and such to give the shinobi a relaxing and calm feeling as they intellegently thought their situations through while they rested in a medical bed for a few hours or days for those who are seriously stressing. Kira was one of those people however, he was a person who didn't just focus on one small issues that was big to him. He branched out into areas connecting to his issue and thought about those. Eventually, Kira thought about a factor known as life and how he views things. He would have philosophical conversations with "himself" on what he should do with his life, how should he push on, what is his motivation now and more. One fateful night, Kira was on the floor across from his bed. It was 6:12 in the morning and he had already drifted off in the land of thought. His body filled with a couple pills and water - breakfast hasn't even passed his mind this night. At the foot of his bed layed Jakutai-ka which stared Kira in the face as he sat agaisnt the wall across from the bed. Kira's eyes lowered noticably, you can tell he was either having extreme lack of sleep or something of the obvious if not lack of sleep. Villagers hadn't seen Kira in weeks, they assumed he was surely dead from his sudden disappearance however, that was just a rumor. Kira's eyes lowered more and more as each passing second went by before they were surely shut tight. As his eyes were closing, he started to hear a strange but familiar voice surrounding him, giggling and moaning and echoing greatly in his head. He was so lost in thought that none of that seemed to disturb him at all. Once he closed his eyes, moments later he woke up in an all black room. The sound of a feminine voice that shared many similarities to Kitsuru danced about the deep abyss black room but it wasn't quite her voice. The voice was hollow and although it was very similar to her, it had a demonic, echo-like undertone. This frightened Kira a bit but it didn't stop him from trying to find out who it was. He screamed, "Who's there! Come out!... I'm not afraid of you." and as he did so, flashes of Kitsuru danced before his eyes as if it was teasing him until one flashing image touched him... and he felt it. His heart jumped as he stared Kitsuru in the eyes and started crying, "Kitsuru!... Oh my god I've missed you so damn much! I'm... I-I'm so sorry I couldn't protect you but you're here now and I'll definately make it up to you, I promise.... I'll Protect you." Kitsuru could only smile and nod and Kira didn't care, as long as they were together. He held her in his arms tightly as a tear fell from his eyes. All these emotions building up inside of him. He pulled her back from him to looker her in her eyes but he couldn't. It was too much for him as he looked down to say something he has been wanting to say to her for a long time. "Kitsuru, I love you... and I wanna be with you for as long as I am alive." he said but in reply, only heard awkward silence. After awhile he sighed and looked up in fustration, "I know I was wr-" He stopped as his heart dropped and noticed that Kitsuru's face disappeared. He was mind blown at it and stepped back. The ominous voice echoed again of demonic laughter as her face conjured up a black hole in which a solid black, humanoid shaped figured emerged from her face. However, he couldn't see it. The figured placed his palms over Kira's face and Kira's surrounding black area became him floating in mid-air and purple aura that is very similar to chakra surrounded the area. Making it a bit lighting in the room. Kitsuru's face returned as she ran to Kira, "Help me Kira! You said you loved me... Protect me!" she said as she attempted to wrap her arms around him. The figure gripped her by the back of the head right infront of Kira. Kira's eyes widened as he wondered what was going on infront of him. In rage, he reached for Kitsuru but before they could connect. Kitsuru was suddenly ignited on fire right infront of him. Kira's heart drowned back into the sorrow from which he submerged into this place with. His high hopes of being with his true love was crushed before his eyes.... twice. Kira fell to his knees, his eyes shut tight as he cried his heart out. Something that didn't seem possible since he has done it before the first time. After a while of crying and raging as he screamed at her burnt ashes. He slowly opened his eyes as a vibrant white color engulfed his vision. When he fully opened his eyes, it was a vibrant white room and the black figure stood in front of him. The black figure slowly took shape of Kira except his eyes were ignited with a red glowing tint. - Quote :
Kira: Who are you? What is going on? ???: ... You know what's going on. You own me now. Kira: I own you?.. Who the fuck are you!? ???: I am you, you and I... are... together.... we are one and I share your experiences, just like you share my power. Kira: Power? What fucking power?... ???: Do you remember the sword you confiscated that night?... The sword you keep in your bedroom? Kira: Ye- ???: Did you really think that sword was an antique or something? You own a very powerful wea-... being and for two months you have just been letting it collect dust. Kira: Who the fuck are you and how do you know this? ???: Cussing doesn't make you any tougher. It only makes you appear to be a ***** in a situation you are intimidated by. Kira: Tsk- ???: You don't want to test me. Kira: I can kill you right now. ???: I doubt it. You have been out of work for over two months now. You're skills have depreciated and since we are in your mind, the fact that you can feel the touch of your precious Kitsuru is enough to tell me that the influence the drugs on you is amplifying my ability. In other words, If I ignite you on fire. You're body may not feel the pain of you being ignited on fire because of the affects of the pills but it will surely react as if it was being burned. Kira: Wait, what are you saying? ???: If I decided to kill you here. You will die in real life... at least in the current condition you are in. Kira: .... ???: It's alright. If I did kill you, which I did consider, I doubt anyone will find me anytime soon because of the public display you have been presenting. People either think you're already dead and obviously don't care since they haven't bothered to make sure or they are afraid that you're some type of local maniac, which in fact, I like that a lot. However, the is really played out lately. You need a new image. The image of a hero to the eyes of the ignorant and a threat to the eyes of the intelligent. Kira:.. What do you want from me? ???: I want what you want... Happiness. Kira: ... How do you plan to go about that in a pitiful world as this!? This world is full of bullshit that take your happiness right from under you. ???: No, you are wrong. Happiness cannot be lost. It can be misplaced but not lost. For example, weren;t you happy to see Kitsuru again? Kira: You Fucke- ???: Weren't you? Kira: That doesn't count, she wasn't real and- ???: Who said she had to be real? You don't need for things to be real to be happy. Also she was real to you if you felt her skin so obviously she is still alive in your mind. Kira: What are you getting at?! ???: I am Jakutai-ka, That is the name of the sword you have in your room. I am your sword and because of the fact that you own me. We are now one. I can access your mind and you can access my power. You still have your will power, I cannot change that, however, I can speak to you whenever I want. Now that you own me, we are partners and we need to act like it. Normally I kill off my owners but I see... "potential" in you. Kira: Potential?... Jakutai-ka: Yes. I wish to help you achieve true happiness because it is the very same thing I want. The world is filled with misery so why not give people hope? My plan is for you to be the hero of the people. Save people and show them that bliss is the right way to go... Eternal Ignorant Bliss...
The two continued to discuss on their plans for the future. They discussed all day, everyday until the plan was in full effect. To the public. Only the two had their own agenda. First thing's first, a new image for a 'hero'. Kira was to change his name and look and personality. He was to evolve into a blissful state. One without sorrow and grief. Kira changed his name to 'Yair' which means, 'He will rise up' and changed his middle and last name as well to 'Oerba Yun Devia'. Yair would next have to alter his image to the world as he dressed in purple tint clothing to emphasize the color of Jakutai-ka's chakra color and influence on how it changed his life from a downward spiral of overdose and suicide. Finally the new image for Kira was complete, he had adopted the ways and attitude of Jakutai-ka and shared the same goals. Days upon days they trained intensely. Missions were tests to them to see how far they came in battle. One thing they can agree on is, "No one is considered an enemy, everyone is considered a 'piece' to their puzzle which slowly comes together with each day passing. After years of intense missions and training, Yair became the leader of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist and now lives his days aiding in S-Rank missions and wandering. For his plan to emerge into the next step, he must branch out from the familiar and gain followers. Roleplay Sample: - Spoiler:
Hikari waved through the moist wildplants on the trail towards Kumogakure. It was his old and former village and affiliation. Where he used to where his forehead protector proudly. Now he despise the fact that he has no sympathy for his former village and all of it's dwellers. Down come the walls of Kumogakure No Sato. Down come the walls of the Hidden Village's society. Plunging towards the deep depths of hell. Down come does the community and civilization of the hidden cloud village. A new dictator awaits to come take what is his and rid the existance of anyone who opposes rather it be internal or external conflict on the village basis. A dictator with an idea of using Martial Law. A Dictator with the idea of using power and forbiddence of the world and of the shinobi law to achieve his goals. There is only a few obstacles within his way but nothing that couldn't be squished easily with little effect. He new the strengths and weaknesses of his village and villagers. Who knew how to infiltrate without the need or use of special skills. Infact, there was no need to infiltrate something when it can be destroyed just as fast. Here it comes Kumogakure, get ready for a new world order and your village is ontop of it's to-do list. A sound was heard throughout Hikari's journey. Naked Snake had already realized he was being tailed by shinobi of some village. Hopefully it was Kumogakure Shinobi. "Hitsugaya Sensei, We have located the Missing-nin from our village. Should we apprehend him while he stands unaware of our presence?" The voice of a shinobi said deep within the shadows of wild plants. "Tomokenzangan.." Hikari said as his eyes shot open with several symbols within his newly bright golden eyes as the surrounds turned into a black and white hue and he seen chakra trails leading to his targets who are trailing him. Hikari smirked as he unsheathed his blades using his thumb and index finger for one and the pinky and ring finger for the other. Once unsheathed, he tosses one blade to his other hand and waited patiently. "No! Do not apprehend, just standby and wait for backup!" Their sensei shouted back. They were speaking through telecoms to each other from fair distances and the reckless one of the team leaped out of the shadows. A chunin from the hidden cloud village with the name of Li Huang. Li Huang taunted Hikari was an arrogant smile on his face and said. "Hitsugaya sensei will be poud of us when we take out this criminal and send him to imprisonment." Li said as the other three leaped out of the trees. the rest were chuunin aswell and one was a female. Stereotypically, Hikari judged her as being the medical ninja of the group. Her name was Kizuna Arochi and she stood on the left of Li while the other two were guys who stood on the right. They were twins and they're names were Niiro and Sanro Nakamura. Kizuna stepped forward from her position by taking a couple of steps from each foot. "Please sir, give up and be taken prisoner. I don't want any trouble." She said hesitantly however trying to show boldness infront of Li Huang who she admired secretly. She didn't want to risk the lives of others by engaging in battle with a missing ninja aswell as neglecting her sensei's orders by doing so. "Hikari Hizaki, Kumo's Naked Snake is it?" She asked, trying to make sure it's the right person but hoping it isn't deep inside. She gulped as she awaited an answer. "At your service.." Hikari said. Awaiting the appraoch of his opponents, he braced himself with a notable stance. Li appeared infront of Kizuna, arms spread across and on each side of her layed the twins Niiro and Sanro who covered his sides. "Watch out, he's bracing himself to fight!" Li shouted as he prepared handseals for an attack while the two twins shouted in response, "RIGHT!" and prepared handseals of their own. Now the battle beginned. For a chuunin, Li's jutsu knowledge was very exceptional as he created the handseals for great fireball jutsu with half the speed required and shot out a fireball towards Hikari. Niiro, using lightning release to aid Li in attacks while Sanro was used to change up the terrain aswell as cause damage.
Hikari leaped back an exceptional length, long enough to sheath his swords once again and preform handseals. The handseals he preformed were handseals that created a fast jet of water that ran underneath the ground heading towards the four at fast speeds. The jet of water is powerful enough to slice through solid rock. The jet of water was used to slice through the fireball, hitting the core and thus dispersing it aswell as still heading towards the four. Niiro leaped to the left while Sanro leaped towards the right. Li grabbed hold of Kizuna and leaped backwards, leaving only a shriek from her voice behind. Hikari then waited for them to try another attack. Currently regrouped in the deep depths of the wild plants and trees, they revise their strategy. "Alright! Sanro, your in charge of underground and ground attacks, use your Earth nature to it's greatest intent and don't hold back. If he can't trust the ground then he has air which is where you come in, Niiro. While you two cover those two, I will be here attacking relentlessly mid range. This will force him to back up or retreat. Kizuna, stay back, alright?" Li demanded, the twins agreeing t his orders while Kizuna still a bit skeptical about the whole situations. Wishing they would just back off and try again when more people are around to help. She nodded in silence, knowing this might be a bad idea. "Alright, GO!" Li shouted as he then leaped out of the plants with his arms covered in flame chakra. It appears to be fire gauntlets on his arms. Li smirked arrogantly as throws a punch towards Hikari and a fireball emited from his flame covered fists shooting towards Hikari. Niiro, from above, was spotted with one handseal being preformed and a bolt of lightning shot out of his opened mouth towards Hikari. A large wall made of earth rose from behind Hikari, cancelling all attempts of escape except one. Hikari leaped towards the side to dodge the simple fire ball attack and barel-rolled forward to evade the lightning bolt attack. "Heh. Go all out boys!" Li screamed as he threw countless of punches towards Hikari which in result, beamed countless of fireballs towards Hikari with exceptional aim. From above came Niiro shooting up to ten lightning bolts which afterwards, put a strain on his body. From far away was Sanro who preformed handseals of earth natured techniques that shot from underground towards Hikari. They were just large blocks of rock those shot upwards from the ground and then rained downwards on Hikari.
Things were getting heated up and Hikari needed to show them he wasn't playing anymore. Hikari preformed handseals quickly, "Swift Release: Holy" Hikari whispered, Swift Release: Holy was a technique invented by the Hero of his clan, Lord Strife Hizaki. After all of the chaos of fireballs burning the raining chunks of rock and lightning strikes. A large dust took the after effect . Believing that Hikari is no more, Li's fire guantlets dispersed and Niiro landed towards the ground, barely. Sanro walking from hiding towards the two. "Heh! So who wanna go check to see if he's still alive?" Li joked, figuring after a barrage of attacks like that, he would definately be dead. "Hm, What should we tell Htsugaya Sensei?" Sanro asked questionably. "We will tell him that we just killed our first missing nin! I guess we are better than Kirigakure's Hunter-nin, right?" He joked once again, letting his guard down and by still joking around, he lowered the others aswell. "Or we could-" Niiro was cut off by a warning shriek, "Watch out!" Kizuna shouted as she attempted to run towards the three. The three boys were distracted by her shrieking warning to notice where the danger would be coming from but it was too late. From behind a large hand attached to a long arm that was dispersed from the rib cage of Hikari slammed downwards onto Niiro, squishing him and breaking most of his bones, causing internal damage and bleeding. Gripping the dying man, Hikari lifted the body into the air. Amazed to see such a thing being taked placed. Sanro and Li were in shock. Tossed towards the heavens with no remorse at all. The large hand, long arm detachment limb returned into Hikari's body and Sanro, in tears screamed, "BROTHER!! I'm Coming!" Sanro preformed handseals for the levitating rock chunks and danced upon them, going higher and higher into the air to catch his now falling brother, the pressure from the fall, even while in mid air killed him due to the height of the fall. Still, dead or alive, Sanro was going after his brother. Kizuna, amazed by the situation and falls to her knees in tears. Li's mouth dropped at the cruelty displayed for such a death. It was as if he didn't care and gave him an dishonorable death. Hikari leaped out of the shadows of the trees and plants and back onto the battlefield where Li turned to face him. "I will not stop with him, I'm going after all of you. Do not try to run for it is useless." Kizuna ran towards the side of Li. "I told you to hide!" Li shouted towards her. Ignoring Li's orders and words currently, she addressed Hikari. "Please, I beg of you! Theres no need to continue, we give up!" She begged and pleaded. Unknown to the fact that they are talking to a genjutsu clone.
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| Subject: Re: Yair Oerba Yun Devia Fri 17 Feb 2012, 2:14 am | |
| Few problems i see..
-If you're trying to apply for an S rank leader position, you gotta add detail on your characters appearance. A picture alone really isn't enough. Describe his attire, as well as his body beneath the attire. Any scars, his muscle, skin tone, etc. Stuff like that is needed for such a high position.
-How do you have Master Chakra Control, without having Ninjutsu? Or even the medical specialty?
-That High Summoner thing needs to go. It looks like you ripped a lot of that stuff directly out of a video game. Kuchiyose is simply a Jutsu that brings the intended summon into the human world. That is all. How good you are with that Jutsu doesn't change anything about the summon. The summonings ability and power all depends on the summon itself, not on the way you summon it.
-Greater Hand Coordination, once again, this leads back to not having Ninjutsu. Kenjutsu does improve hand and finger movements quite a lot, but not exactly in this way. You can be fast with your hands, but your skill in performing hand seals wouldn't improve if you don't do them often.
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Jutsu Problems~
-Ko-hibana
What is Jakutai-ka? And how do you borrow Chakra from it for this ability, rather then using your own? Lastly for this, how is that solid energy created? And what is that solid energy?
-Bakuha Nami
Judging by this description, i take it Jakutai-Ka is the name of your sword? This needs a length and width. How wide is the wave, and how far can that wave extend? Also, it may be a good idea to describe what the wave of chakra would do if it were to connect with it's target.
-Dou
This leads back to a previous question. How does Jakutai-Ka have his own pool of chakra? It also need a limit on how long it can stay up, seeing as a technique like this would probably have to be channeled, and constantly fed chakra(Possibly even more chakra in order to heal the wounds). It also need a limit on what it's capable of defending against. Up to what rank jutsu can it defend against? Those are the only problems i can currently see with it, though an ability like that, I'm not sure of. Especially without the medical specialty. Healing through pure chakra alone. Look for an approval on that by a different staff member.
-Kontan
Once again leading back to your sword. You probably should have made that before putting the app up for approval, honestly. Something like this needs to be limited a little more. How long can he continue to influence your mind? And 35% - 40% is a little to much for a C rank jutsu. This also lacks detail on what kind of enhancement it is..is it just like a boost in total strength? Speed? Yea, you can do more damage with it, but what's enhanced that gives you such an edge in combat?
-Suriru
Don't see many problems with this, aside from a duration on how long that influence remains. Since this doesn't exactly give you any benefits, aside from making you bloodthirsty. It'd make your actions more reckless, and possibly get you killed for acting in such a way. It would be fine without a duration, but explain how Yair can resist this influence, or break free from it.
-Genshuku
Dark Matter is just a no. Change it's substance to fire if you must. I don't see how it would be possibly for you to create dark matter like this.
-Giga-Genshuku
The same goes for this. Though you need to explain exactly what this technique does, and how much it is improved, compared to the original.
-Jakutai-ka: Summoning Medium
This doesn't really make much sense at all. Though once again, i need to see what this sword is before i can judge a technique like this.
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It may have been a much better idea to create your sword before readying your app for approval. | |
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