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| ~General Information~ Name:Kamak Mirokie Nickname/Alias:The Dark Star Weight:170 lbs Height:6'3" Age:23 Gender:Male Appearance:- Spoiler:
Kamak is a very well built man, standing at six feet three inches and weighing a hundred and seventy pounds. After many years of training and working out his body has hit its peak of perfection, being toned well enough that he can sustain several hours of physical activity. His skin is a very deep tan, spending most of his time outside in the sun he has a sun baked skin tone, that is often hidden under his robes. His hair and eyes often stick out amongst his deep dark skin and large body type. Kamak has a very dark blue hair hue, almost seeming black when looked at in the dark, however when the sun sits just right on his head the blue will stand out almost perfect. His eyes match his hair, being dark blue like a deep pool of water. Many have claimed that when they stare into his eyes they are looking down a deep abyss that seems to entrance them. Clothing:As far as clothing go's he is found of two types of clothing, skinny form fitting clothing, and thick baggy clothing. He always has on a pitch black body suit, form fitting to his body that covers his torso, upper arms and legs. Around his legs are bands that hold secret things, like hidden weapons, scrolls and so on. His head band, that bares the leaf symbol, no longer sits on his for head but his sown into his robe that he wears over the body suit. A massive black and purple cloak that drap's over his body and appears to swallow him whole. The cloak makes him look much bigger than he is, fooling those who have never seen him before. A new look he has accepted is a straw hat, that rest on his head and covers his eyes. This is used for many reasons, the two most popular are keeping the sun out of his ever wandering eyes and keeping those he do not want to see him unknown of his prescence. However in battle Kamak will make a dramatic change in dress. His robe will be shed, most times along with his straw hat, and a layered set of purple samurai armor will cloak his body. This is sealed in a seal on his back, made by a former jounin of his village. When released the armor will cover his entire body, fit with a helmet, arm and leg guards and a plated suit that protects from many small weapons and blades. Personality:Kamak is a very quiet down to earth man. He keeps to himself and tries not to be seen in most cases. This is for two reasons. One he likes to try and see if he can remain hidden even when he’s not trying to, and it helps to build his stealth skills for when he starts battle. He also controls his breathing and stepping. But like other ninjas his age he has seen his fair share of death and suffering, so sometimes he is quiet for a good reason. He won’t talk out and blurt out stuff unless he feels he needs to. Kamak will keep most thoughts and opinions to himself. When someone does something he doesn’t like however he has no problem standing up and saying something. He does not take to back stabbers and liars to well. He respects honor and as a Shinobi feels that if you are going to be a ninja you should respect its code. He has no mercy for criminals and missing ninja and will not stop hunting them no matter the cost. He threats all his friends as family, keeping them close. But if any of them were to turn on his or backstab him it would be over. Kamak threats honor and respect like a personal assault, so it would be best not to break those. When it comes to team work Kamak will never give up. If it means protecting a team mate or a friend he will risk his life for their safety. Personal threats against his team are threats against him, and if anyone has a problem with his village they have one with Kamak. He doesn’t try to be the best ninja because he knows he is not, but he tries to do his best and will never give up. ~Clan Information~ Clan Name:Mirokie Kekei Genkai:The Miroki clan has a unique talent for chakra shaping and forming. All members specialize in the Fire and Earth elements, however they do not mix these for the advance of Lava styles. Instead they have learned how to use the crystalline structures in the Earth to form with the Heat, cooling and shaping properties of Fire to form the glass style. Using this style members create mirror like substances using chakra fused into them. They are unlike normal mirrors being they are harder to break, although not impossible. And they can be manipulated by the wielder of the chakra. The Mirrors are covered with a thin layer of chakra making them very unique in means of jutsu and fighting. Members can control these mirrors as will by forming them in air, or out of materials such as Dirt and crystal like substances. Clan Symbol:The symbol of the Miroki clan is a large triangle with a diamond in side of it. Clan History:As a former police force, the original members of the Miroki clan were top Shinobi. They were known as the best in Fire and Earth style, almost perfecting the most deadly combos. However that’s all they were capable of, basic nature control of those two elements. But they were still respected and honored as great ninja. Then among the line of birth came a genius, he was able to muster his chakra and shape it accordily to create brand new forms of attacks. Using the crystal like substances that both elements had, he bypassed the Lava element and went for something new. Mixing the elements he created a reflective like surface that enabled the user to see his reflection, but it was solid to the point where a normal punch would not break it. Fusing chakra into the substance he created a weapon like none has seen before. Upon realizing the power the clan began to train in this style, perfecting its arts and soon it became a birth right. Although some did not see this as a gift, they saw it as a curse. Jutsu should not be messed with and tampered like it was. So a rebellion started. Many of the members took revolt, and rose against the leaders who choose to accept the mirror like element. Being under classed and under skilled, most were killed, wiping out almost half of the clan. Seeing how this was a downfall for the clan they decided to pact together and begin to use this new found power for good and the better of life’s. But some still have the thought that they are better and should be respected in that way. Ability Summary:Members can create, shape and use mirrors by infusing chakra into earth and fire elements. ~Rank/Village Information~Classification:Jounin Letter Rank:A Village:Konoha ~Skill Information~Skill Specialty:Ninjutsu, Genjutsu Elemental Affinity:Fire, Earth Special Characteristics:Name:Controlled Breathing Rank:C Range:N/A Description:Kamak has studied the art of stealth moving and has learned how to controle his breathing. He can become as silent as he wants, almost impossable to detect if the other has little training in tracker ninja arts. He can hold his breath for five minuets and when he does breath can controle his chest so that it does not rise at all. Name:Controlled Walking Rank:C Range:N/A Description:Kamak has studied the art fo stealth moving and has learned how to walk, run and jump as silent as he can. His body movements make no noise, no joint popping or snapping, and his body can move around, nomatter what kind fo clothing he has on, and still make no noise. Name:Genjutsu Awareness Rank:A Range:N/A Description:Being a skilled master of genjutsu Kamak can pick up on traces of genjutsu, if it is used on him or anyone else. He is not immune to genjutus, but in most cases can tell if genjutsu is being used. At S rank he must focus and try hard to tell, but at any other rank he can pick up on the useage of the style. Name:One Handed Seals Rank:B Range:N/A Description:Kamak has trained in the art of one handed seals up to S rank, allowing him to complete any jutsu of S rank or lower by using only one hand to complete the seals required to activate the jutsu. Name:Dark Star flames Rank:C-S Range:Body Description: Kamak has utilized his chakra to form a special type of fire that takes on a purple color. This fire acts as normal fire except for the fact that it will also freeze opponents chakra systems for the duration of the jutsu that is used. ~Jutsu~ Ninjutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Mirror Wall Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Range: Fifteen feet from user to target. Twenty feet tall, fifteen feet wide, and less than an inch thick. Element: N/A Description: A wall of reflective surface will form. The wall can reflect anything in its view and both sides are reflective. Once the targets reflection is captured in the wall they become motionless and under zamaz control. The target will copy any movment zamaz makes until the wall is destroyed or their reflection is released. The mirror takes thirty seconds to fully form, and a reflection can only be caught in th emirror after it has fully formed.
Name: Mirror Dome Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Range: Anywhere up to thirty feet in diameter and fifty feet tall. Element: N/A Description: A dome will arise from the ground and enclose all ninja in the area. It is a closed dome made of Reflective glass on the inside. From the outside the dome can not be broken easily. The inside is plated with the glass and reflects everything in the dome a hunded times. The user can make the dome spin and move to distort the vision and images. The dome can only be broken by jutsu and weapons of equal or higher rank. Kuni and fist will just bounce off.
Name: Glass clone Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: Piles of reflective glass will form and take the exact form of zamaz. These clones can attack and move away from zamaz but they can not speak or do advanced thinking. Once the clones are destryoed glass shards will fly everywhere, up to five feet.
Name: Image clones Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: Using past images zamaz has saved in the reflection he will create clones of exact people and there voices. These pople will look exactly like the original ones the day he saw them. They can attack physically only and speak using the same voice. Once the clone is destroyed glass will fly everywhere, up to five feet.
Name: Instant Mirror Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Range: Within twenty feet from the user Element: N/A Description: This jutsu does not need hand signs. Zamaz can make mirrors made of chakra fused reflective chakra form in locations next to him. These mirrors are two feet taller and wider than him and can be used instantly.
Name: Mirror transfer Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Range: Within the boundaries of the mirrors Element: N/A Description: This jutsu does not requie hand seals. Zamaz can step thorugh any mirror that he has summoned and walk between mirrors in different loctions. He is only transfering between reflections that he has setup in the mirrors. He can only move Ten feet from Mirror to mirror. And if the Mirror is destroyed while transfer he is sent back to the one he came from. Same rules apply as to the shunshin.
Name: Glass Destruction Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: Zamaz will cup his hands and focus his chakra in the mirrors. Any form of glass in the area will instantly shatter sending glass shards flying everywhere.
Name: Dai Endan - Great Fireball Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Range: Up to ten feet Element: Fire Description: Dai Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. Jiraiya will first gather the fire into his mouth and then spew a giant breath of fire constantly at his opponent.
Name: Earth Spear Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Range: N/A Element: Earth Description: Doton • Domu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Akatsuki member Kakuzu. After forming the needed Snake hand seal, Kakuzu will harden his body using the Earth Element. This provides greater defense against attack and will also strengthen his arm to increase his striking ability. Like other Doton based jutsu, it is weak against Raiton attacks.
Name: Mud Over turn Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Range: Five feet Element: Earth Description: Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.
Name: Earth style Wall Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Range: Five feet Element: Earth Description: Doton • Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack.
Name: Earth Style Split Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Range: twenty feet Element: Earth Description: Doton • Doryuu Katsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals, then place their hand to the ground. This will cause the earth to rise up and split apart. Once the ninja removes their hand from the ground, the earth parting will end.
Name: Earth Rising Spears Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Range: N/A Element: Earth Description: Doton • Doryuusou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, spears of stone will raise from the ground to pierce the target. The technique can be countered by an opponent who hardens their body with a stronger Earth Element jutsu.
Name: Mausoleum Earth Dumpling Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Range: Up to twenty feet Element: Earth Description: Doton • Doryou Dango is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with his hands, Jiroubou is able to overturn the earth into a large dumpling shape chunk of earth the size of a mausoleum. Using his immense strength, he can lift up the ball and hurl it at his opponent, flattening all in its path.
Name: Rock Pillar Prison Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Range: thirty feet Element: Earth Description: Doton • Ganchuurou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Fudou will generate pillars of rock which will rise from the ground around his target. These pillars will act as prison bars to contain his opponent.
Name: Great Dragon Fire Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Range: N/A Element: Fire Description: Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.
Name: Burning Ash Accumulation Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Range: Twenty feet Element: Fire Description: Katon • Haisekishou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Asuma will expel an ash from his mouth. This large cloud begin to envelope his foe and when Asuma clicks his teeth, the cloud will ignite in an explosion.
Name: Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Range: N/A Element: Fire Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.
Name: Rock Hiding Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Range: N/A Element: Earth Description: Doton • Iwagakure is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This jutsu allows the user to change their appearance by blending and merging with the surrounding rock. This allows the ninja to move unseen, which assists in attack and escape.
Name: Weighted Rock Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Range: N/A Element: Earth Description: Doton • Kajuugan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Tsuchikage will turn an object touching him into stone. This process increases the weight of the object and can also be used against organic material. When he is elevated, the petrifaction process will cause the material to fall away and crash into the floor below.
Name: Mist Waltz Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Range: ten feet Element: Fire Description: Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and then proceeds to blow a large combustible mist at the target. When the mist hits flame, it will ignite in an explosion of fire.
Name: Camouflage Concealment Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: Meisai Gakure no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used by Rock ninja. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja can grant them self near invisibility. So far only the Sharingan eye and its revelation abilities has been shown to pierce the veil and see the hidden ninja. It is unknown if the Byakugan can penetrate the jutsu and see the user's chakra circulatory system.
Name: Clay Clone Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Range: N/A Element: Earth Description: Akatsuki member Deidara is an artist at heart, and he uses his modeling clay to fashion objects which help him in combat. This includes using his clay to create a clone. Should his opponent become intertwined with the clone, they will be held in place and unable to maneuver. Because the clay is related to the Earth Element, it is weak to Raiton based attacks. This provides a means of release from the clay.
Name: Clone Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: E Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.
Name: Swamp of the Underworld Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Range: twenty feet Element: Earth Description: Doton • Yomi Numa is a Ninjutsu technique used by the Sannin Jiraiya utilizing the Earth element. After forming the needed hand seals, a vast swamp can appear beneath his target to sink and kill it.
Name: Body Flicker Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Name: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Range: N/A Element: Earth Description: Doton • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized.
Name: Glass skin Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Range: N/A Element: N/A Description:A very thin malleable layer of glass will form on the users body like armor. It will cover the entire body and camouflage itself to look like that person. When attacked or harmed the glass will break, protecting the user and instead will shatter outwards, sticking out to stab what attacked him.
Name: Shower of Shards Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Range: Thirty feet Element: N/A Description: Glass will form in the air above the target. After one post the shards will fly at the target and try to stab into them or pin them to the ground.
Name: Inferno Vortex Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Range: Is a close range Jutsu, formed in the hand and used while postioned in the palm. Stays in the hand and reaches up to as far as the user can extend their arm and move. Element: Fire Description:After the three needed seals Fire chakra will spill into the users hand and begin to spin around. The fire will create a small orb with a indented funnel in the center. As the funnel spins the fire will churn inside creating a flaming vortex. Extreme heat will spill forth from the funnel but will only cause significant damage when the vortex actually hits the target. If touched the vortex will burn clothing and most objects, will singe the flesh and upper layer of meat on the body. This will cause extreme burning and massive amounts of pain. If a weapon or form of metal is caught it will be heated up and can cause burning damage also just by touching someone. The vortex will last for one post if not already used on the target. However the fire will not destroy anything of equal or higher rank, although the heat will still heat it up it will not be effected in any other way. Also a water attack of equal or higher rank aimed for his hand may put out the vortex.
Name:Hells Divine: Heat wave Rank:C Type:Ninjutsu Element:Fire Range:0ft-30ft Description:A simple fire ninjutsu that does not need hand signs or seals to use. Heat will radiate from the body, making the area get hotter by twenty degrees. this jutsu can be stacked so if it is used back to back the area will heat up by forty degrees. This can become deadly to both ninja because of the heat treshold a body is able to withstand. The air will become humid and hot, making it hard to breath and will fatigue the people in side it much faster. This jutsu will last for five post.
Name:Hells Divine: Combust Rank:A Type:Ninjutsu Element:Fire Range:0ft-30ft Description:This jutsu can only be used while Hells divine: heat wave is active an dhas been stacked three times. This jutsu will use the heat patricles in the air and mix chakra into it to create a deadly combustion of fire and flame. By useing the three sign jutsu the user can cause anything standing in the heat wave to instantly catch fire. Of course this fire will not kill instantly, but will cause severe burning and pain. If the target is on fire for three post they should consider themselves dead. However drenching themselves in water can prevent long term damage to their bodies.
Name:Shooting Star Rank:C Type:Ninjutsu Element:Fire Range:Is charged in the hand. Can reach up to 15 feet. Description:A large purple ball of fire, about the size of the users hand, forms around there fist. The purple flames will not hurt The user, but will burn whoever they touch. Also if the flames touch someone there chakra network will pause and freeze for one post. Only a S rank fire user or a Hoshi ninja will not be effected by chakra freeze.
Name:Barrage of stars Rank:B Type:Ninjutsu Element:Fire Range:Forms around the body, can only go five feet from the body. But when luanced out they can go up to twenty feet. Description:Small balls of purple fire will form floating around the users body. These will act as a small defense since they clutter around the body. Anywhere from ten to twenty of these balls can be formed. If they touch an enemy they will burn and freeze the chakra system for two post. Only S rank fire users and Hoshi ninja are immune.
Name:Star Dust Rank:A Type:Ninjutsu Element:Fire Range:Can reach up to twenty feet, and is not seen until it gets three inchs from the target. Description:Tiny ashs of purple fire is blown into the air. These ash's are made of the purple fire and are hard to see until they are right up on the target. If not careful these ash's can be breath in or catch the clothing or something on fire. if the sparks touch the target they will pause the chakra system for one post, also when the ash touches something that thing is engulfed in purple fire that is not easily pt out. Fire users are not immune to this jutsu, and only a A ranked water jutsu will destroy the flames completly.
Name:Hands of the earth Rank:A Type:Ninjutsu Element:Earth Range:height-thirty feet, can go out from the body up to forty feet. Description:Two large earthern hands will rise from the ground. after the seals are completed these hands can be controlled by kamak. They are strong against all elements except raiton, and can not be cut or harmed by a weapon. These hands are an extension of kamaks, so when used hsi hands can not do other jutsu or such. However he can do things liek grab, squeeze, rip and tear at things with these hands. They are ten feet wide, can reach up to thirty feet.
Name:Terra Creation Rank:S Type:Ninjutsu Element:Earth Range:100,000 yards high, 100,000 yards in diameter, Kamak being the center point. Description:A advanced earth jutsu that consist of manipulation of earth. This jutsu harnesses the raw power of earth, and connects Kamak's chakra system to the earth. This allows him to have basic control over the earth. He can control the earth up to a thousand yards high and a thousand yards in diameter in relation to him. This allows him to create natural form such as mountains, craters, crevices, hills and other natural formations in the earth. He can not create objects like a sword of earth, but he can create natural foundations from the earth. Things included are minor earth quakes, sink holes, cave creations and etc. By forming these creations Kamak can alter the battle field and change the lay out of the terran. Uses a D rank amount of chakra everytime something is created.
Genjutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Kamira's Genjutsu (Unnamed) Type: Genjutsu Rank: B Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This unnamed Genjutsu is a technique used by Kamira. Kamira will cause the area around the target to be enveloped by darkness. Once inside the black space, the target will see grotesque figures said to be tortured criminals, the previous victims of the technique. These grotesqueries will reach out and grab a hold of the target. They will then be thrown into the void to the mercy of a spectral dragon. The horrifying oni can even extend from the targets own body to attack them. All aimed at transfixing the victim with fear and shock while Kamira herself chokes and kills the target.
Name: False Place Technique Type: Genjutsu Rank: C Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object.
Name: Journey into Black Darkness Technique Type: Genjutsu Rank: A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: Kokuangyou no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the ninja's opponent to be enveloped in total darkness. While in the black void, the ninja will be unable to see any incoming attack or threat.
Name: Sly Mind Affect Technique Type: Genjutsu Rank: C Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.
Name: Demonic Illusion • Hell Fire Technique Type: Genjutsu Rank: C Range: N/A Element: Fire Description: Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a vision of fire. After Yoroi forms the needed hand seals, a huge ball of fire will descend from the sky to envelope his target. The victims of the Genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety.
Name: Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique Type: Genjutsu Rank: D Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.
Name: Temple of Nirvana Technique Type: Genjutsu Rank: A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: Nehan Shouja no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that allows the caster to place a large body of people into a unconscious state. The target can avoid the spell by forming and using the dispel skill.
Name: Ephemeral Type: Genjutsu Rank: B Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: Utakata is a Genjutsu technique utilized by Akatsuki member Uchiha Itachi. Itachi will start this technique by using only one finger on his right hand. His target does not have to look into his eyes, a glance at the hand itself will be enough. Once inside the illusion, he can control the visions the ninja sees. This illusion can also be used to play on the fears of the target, causing them to see and hear those who they care about degrade them.
Name: Mutilation Phase Type: Genjutsu Rank: B Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: The target will begin to think that their body is being mutilated by a unseen force. Their skin and flesh will appear to be ripping, blood will appear to gush all over their body. Shock and pain will enter their mind even though nothing is really physically happening.
Name: Eternal Hell Type: Genjutsu Rank: A Range: N/A Element: Fire Description:The target will be transported to a realm full of fire and death in their mind. All over the place fire will be burning, bodies will be ablaze and screams echo out nonstop. Fire will begin to engulf the body, burns and scratches will form on the skin causing pain in both their mind and body. The longer they are trapped the hotter it will get and the more instable their mind becomes.
Name: Reverse Reversal Type: Genjutsu Rank: A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description:A Genjutsu that alters the position of the users body in relation to where they really are. If he punches with his right arm, the target will not see the right arm but instead see his left arm punching. If a ninja runs to the right the affected will see them running left, and vice versa. This helps in confusing and distracting them and allows set ups for more jutsu to preformed.
Name:Eye of the Beholder Rank:A Type:Genjutsu Element:N/A Range:If the intended target looks at the users eyes the justu will activate. Description:A special type of genjutsu that does not create an illusion but controls the function of the mind. After it is activated if the target looks at any part of the user of the jutsu then it take effect. Once the jutsu takes effect the targets eyes will stay open for two turns and be forced to stare at the users eyes. They can not blink, close their eyes and their eyes will not water or burn. After two post there eyes will close for a moment then regain control. They will not know it is a genjutsu and have no control of their eyes for those two post. The target must look directly into his eyes, the use of reflections will not activate this jutsu.
Name: False Step Type: Genjutsu Rank: A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This jutsu is used to trick and confuse the target. After activation the jutsu will make the user seem invisable while they are moving, running jumping etc. This does not include small movment like breathing and such. When they stop or come to a stop they reappear, making it look as if they teleported. Of course they are always phyiscal there and seen by anyone not inthe genjutsu. However it gives off the illusion that they are teleporting, and gets rid of any chance of a pattern being seen. Name: Mind Shackle Type: Genjutsu Rank: S Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: After activation Kamak must touch the back of the targets head for the jutsu to take effect. Once the targets head is touched kamak will take control of their mind. He can feel their feelings, tap into their mind and basically control their brain functions. for four post what ever kamak tells the target to do they must obey. However kamak can not preform other jutsu while this one is in place, if so the jutsu will end and the target will regain control of their mind. Either his left or right hand must touch the back of their head, this activates the jutsu transfering part of his chakra into their mental flow, taking control of it. He can use theml ike a puppet, making them think it is their brain doing all of this. they will no tknow they are in genjutsu. It can only be broken by an outside force such as another jutsu, or someone helping. After it activates its almost impossiable to break out yourself.
Weapons and Equipment Name: Glass shuriken Appearance: Rank: B Range: Thrown as far as a normal Shuriken by the user. Description:These Shuriken are unique and he always has them on him. They are tipped with the clan’s secret Glass style glass. When thrown they sparkle and twinkle, picking up the surrounding images. This makes them hard to see and they seem to look like glimmers in the sun. When they hit their target the glass will shatter and the thin metal part will stick into its target. Origin: Kamak made these using the clans Glass style Chakra. Forged in his village as a chuunin. Name: Nakuma Appearance: Rank: C Range: Two feet Description:A small thin Katana that belonged to his adopted father. It has a pitch black Sheath and is only about two and a half feet long including handle. It has no secret power or ability, just a normal sword used to fight with. Origin:It belonged to his adopted father. When he graduated from the elite academy it was given to him as a gift to use in his ninja training. Even though it is small he still uses it in remembrance of his father. Name:Glass explosive kuni Appearance: Rank: B Range:Trowing range(explosion has a ten foot blast radius) Special Abilities:Is made of th eMiroki glass so it can be camoflagued. Has ten grams of explosive black powder making it highly explosive. Is attached wiht a explosive note on the handle. Descriptions:These kuni are made out of Kamak's secret style glass. They are hollowed out and fuilled wiht his black explosive powder also. This weighs it down making it able to be thrown with out being blown of course. A bomb note is wrapped around the handle, making it able to go off when kamak releases the seal. This ignites the powder and blows up, sending glass out with the explosion Name:Black powder Appearance: Rank: C Range:It is a simple powder that can be held, thrown about five feet befor eit disperses in the wind. Special Abilities:Can be set on fire and explodes. Descriptions:The black powder is created with a carbon element that when set on fire or touched by flame will ignite. With a very small amount the fire will burn away the powder, moving along a trail until there is no more powder. But if a large concentration of five ounces or more is set on fire it may explode, causing damage based on the amount of Black powder it the collection. The powder sits in a fire proof bag on his waist line. It is behind him and is made to keep the powder from blowing up on his body. The bag can withstand three post of being on fire before it blows up. No matter the rank it will take three post for the bag to burn away. Origin:Is used it the blacksmith for creating weapons and bombs. The powder was taken in a large amount by kamak and used in his fire style attacks. Name:Sarshi Armor Appearance:http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs28/f/2008/110/d/4/Samurai_Armor_by_Humble_Novice.jpg" alt="" /> Is a deep purple and blue hue, with gold lace and details on the armor. It is fit with a helmet that has a giant gold star on the top to symbolize the village Hoshi. The armor fits comfortably to his body and is mobile enough to allow maximum movement in battle and still protect him from attacks. Small weapons such as kuni and shuriken will just bounce off of the armor. It also protects from weak taijutsu attacks like normal punchs and kicks. Rank: C Range:Wears on the body, Is sealed away on his body. Special Abilities:Does nothing other than protect the body in battle. Descriptions:A set of plated purple and blue armor. This armor was crafted just for Kamak after becoming the Hoshikage. Their is a seal placed on his back that one of the master fuuinjutsu user's placed on his back to contain the armor. It is sealed in his back so that when he does not need it it can be stored on his person. When it is needed he will unseal it using chakra. Then armor will cloth its self on Kamak its self. Origin:The armor was crafted by the Village's master crafts men as a gift to Kamak for becoming Hoshikage. To allow better use of the armor a master sealer created a self using seal on his back to contain the armor. ~History/RP Sample~History/Background Story:- Spoiler:
Pre birth- Kamak’s family was in a tight spot before he was born. They had a six year old son who had just graduated from the academy and was becoming a ninja. They were also in money problems and had issues with other mercenaries trying to collect money from past relations. His father had worked with a band of machineries murdering and collecting for a living. But when he met his wife he gave that life up and moved to Konoha to start a family. There their son Zamaz was born and raised. But they could not afford another son. Too much was going on in their life to keep and raise a second son who was inevitable headed into the path of Shinobi hood also. So as his mother got pregnant they prepared to find another family for him to live with. Fortunately his father knew a very well rounded family who would keep him and teach him.
Birth- When Kamak was born he was instantly taken to the family By his father. Under the travel of night they made it and dropped him off, the last time he would ever see his father or mother. His new parents, Rozi and Kuzak, took him in and raised him as if he was their own. They never had any kids so it was a little rough at the start, but soon they all got the hang of it and life went on as it should have. They promised his father that they would not let Kamak join the local academy and become a ninja. They did not want that life style for their son. So as he got older he was taught how to be a recorder, taking notes and documenting things that took place. But he felt like his life was worth more than that. He always felt like his life was a lie.
Academy Arc- As he grew older he started meeting other kids who were joining the Ninja academy. And he wanted to also. It always looked fun watching to kids play and practice with their weapons, jumping around attacking each other. He wanted this life. And even though his parents did not want him becoming a ninja they allowed him to play with the other kids. Eventually they wore off on him, he was dedicated to become a ninja no matter what anyone said. But he needed the permission of his family to even be accepted as a student. He was never going to get that. So he snuck in one day, sitting at the back of the class and watching. It was so amazing that he never wanted to leave. But as the class ended the Chuunin instructor saw him, and wondered why he was not on the class roster. After speaking he found out about Kamak’s situation and headed off to his home. Kamak sulked home, taking as long as he could for he knew the instructor told his parents and he was in trouble. But he had a surprise waiting him at home. When he got home the instructor was sitting with his parents, talking and smiling. He took a seat and they discussed him joining the academy for several hours.
The next day he was enrolled and was now an academy student. He trained every day, working hard to be the best that he could be. The same chuunin took him under his wing, teaching him how to do basic jutsu and use the ninja skills all of them could do. He was on his way to becoming a ninja. But something weird was happening. Mirrors began sprouting up in his room one day, scaring the mess out of him. He told his parents and with a solemn face they knew what had to be done. So they sat him down and told him about his past. His family, his clan and everything that had brought him here. Most would have been sad at something like this, but he was not. He loved his family and his village, and was actually glad to have found a new technique to use. But no one could help him train it.
Genin arc- Kamak finally graduated a Genin, making his teacher and his parents proud. He was awarded his headband and that day left the village to explore. A team was assigned to him under the protection of a jounin named Ruaxle. He could help train Kamak in fire and earth Ninjutsu, but was still unable to help with the mirrors. Most people had never seen a style like that and had no idea how to use it. But he grew stronger anyway. Going on missions and working with his team to get better. Most of the missions they went on were C and B ranked, normal ones that had no real danger and did not test him well. He was getting better and better every day that it seemed he would reach Chuunin in no time. But for now he needed more work as a team. This was tested one day when an A ranked mission was assigned, to protect a very important man from a group of assassins. The mission went well, they delivered the man without any problems. But it was a set up. A local group wanted the jounin dead so they used the escort as a trap to lure him in. Once they arrived the assassins ambushed them. Both of his team mates were killed and his sensai was kidnapped, never to be seen again. He was able to escape using his well trained stealth and tracker ninja skills. After arriving at the village he told of the mission and how it was a set up. So a cell of Jounin were sent out to take out the group and get the jounin back. And in this cell Kamak went with. They arrived at the location and eradicated the killers, but their man was not there. Because of his outstanding work in the mission he was awarded rank of chuunin.
Chuunin Arc- As a chuunin he spent most of his time mastering his Fire and Earth Ninjutsu, also finding an adept skill with Genjutsu. He used both of these styles in his tracking and was officially granted the title of the village tracker ninja. He was able to hide his scent and sound so good that he could sneak up on unaware ninja and scare them right out of their shoes. So most of his missions were recon stealth missions. But he was having a problem with his clan abilities. He had been able to master the easy ones like using the glass but he could never get the advanced ones. Then one day while on a mission in the Iron country he heard of a man who was using these mirrors like crazy. So he followed him through the mountains trying to find him. Eventually they came to a small village and Kamak caught him. He said his name was Zamaz and that he was his older brother. So for about a week they took time to get to know each other and train. Zamaz thought him everything and even shared with him about his real parents, and how they were dead now. But this was a short visit. For his brother Zamaz was soon roped into affairs with other villages and killed. Kamak was pissed for he barely knew of his brother and now he was dead. He vowed to use the skills Zamaz taught him to become a masterful ninja.
Roleplay Sample:- Spoiler:
Kamak was not quick to hand out his trust, dealing with shady people was a common thing in his walk of life, and to often had he been subject to back stabbers, liers and cheaters. So sure he wasnt one hundred percent ready to give full trust to this man, but so far there was no reason not to atleast trust him a little. However as they sprinted through the waters his mind was always on the fact that maybe he was being led into a trap. So vigilance was always a must.
The clear blue sky soon began to disappear into a thick grey mist, blocking his view for most of the distance ahead of him, and hiding both him and Juushon from anyone wanting to take a peek at their trip. He knew it was going to be long and would require most of his energy, so as Juushon spoke he only listened and continued to run, all the while thinking what sort of task was he needed for out in the middle of the ocean.
-Time skip-
The duo had been running for quite some time, much longer than any regular person would have committed to. Whatever was out here must have been extremely important to Juushon, for this was not a trip to take lightly. But the former kage continued to run, keeping pace and always running thoughts through his mind. suddenly Juushon stopped, and claimed they had arrived at the destination. Kamak stopped and sighed, looking around to see nothing but vast waters and thick mist. Was this a joke?
"Here. This is where it is. As you said much earlier, there is no land here. However, there is something much more important than that here. Under us, at this very moment, is an extremely dense and rugged land - a large concentration of land that has rendered this location a no travel zone for years upon years. No ships ever come here for fear that they will be destroyed by the shallow waters that lurk here. Because of this truth, falsehoods have also sprung up, saying that this area is haunted by some kind of demon of the waters that lurks and waits for passing ships to come before it swallows them whole."
So it was not an island, or object they were after, but the ocean itself. Apparently this was a key location and Juushon wanted it for something.
"Here is the spot that I will have the first of numerous safe houses and bases built for the Nai'Ouza. Rumor has a way of traveling faster than the rumored. In other words, I know about the basics of your jutsu. I have heard and verified the truth of a jutsu, a power, that you possess that allows you to life the land itself from this ocean in order to create something new, right? Show me the extent of this power that I have heard about, Kamak-san."
A small smile spread across his face, it had been such a long time since he had used this jutsu, and loved using it every time. He was slightly surprised to hear that Juushon knew of this, but that was beside the point. As he motioned to the spot he wanted, kamak walked over and closed his eyes, focusing his chakra. You might want to brace your self Said kamak through closed lips, trying to keep his focus and stay calm. Standing on the surface of the water, he became motionless, everything went silent, like a omnious stillness haunting the sea.
Then like lightning his hands began to weave the correct seals, fingers and palms moving in unison like a rythem was being played for them. As they finale seal was formed, kamak bent his knees and prepared for what was to come. A few seconds of nothing passed by, silence and stillness, then out of no where the water under his feet began to churn, as if it was boiling underneath. Then a small patch of dark earth could be seen rising up, like the very earth commanding it to shift.
As if the gods commanded it the earth below both Kamak and Juushon bursted from the waters below, meeting there feet, but not stopping. It continued upward, and out, forming what looked like a massive island. Water poured from its edges creating small waterfalls back into the ocean, the stone covered in sea plants and dyeing sea life that had been unfortunate to get trapped on its course upward. The earth rose, up into the mist, the solid mass of earth extended up and out at about 50,000 yards. It was surly a sight to behold.
As the earth finished its rise into the sky, kamaks face turned from a focus grin to a cold pain, he gritted his teeth and fell to a knee. Taking in a massive breath he opened his eyes and looked up to Juushon. And this is only half of it, i can make it twice as big as this if you would like. It was already a massive sized island, big enough to wreck any ship that ventured there, or large enough to build a base of operations while still remaining hidden in the mist. The former kage placed both hands, opened palmed to the earth and smiled. He loved the feel of solid stone, and relished in his ability to not only move it, but command it, as if he was a god himself.
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| | | Revy Izumi Missing-Nin
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| Subject: Re: Kamak Fri 17 Feb 2012, 8:46 pm | |
| This isn't a full review, but is just the first few problems i saw. I'll look at the rest later, have another staff member check it to if you can.
-Name:Controlled Walking
This doesn't make any sense. The noise clothing makes when you move is out of your control. The only way to keep your clothes from making noise when you move, is to wear clothing that doesn't make noise, usually something tight.
-Name:Genjutsu Awareness
The thing with most Genjutsu, is it plays with your mind. You can be more aware of Genjutsu, but you wouldn't be able to instantly tell you're in one.
-Name:One Handed Seals
This i don't know about. You'd technically only be molding half of the chakra needed when doing that, unless you have incredible chakra control maybe. Another staff member should check this.
-Name:Dark Star flames
This doesn't make any sense. And this seems more like a Jutsu rather then a special characteristic. Explain it more.
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| | | Masahiro Yukina Hokage
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| Subject: Re: Kamak Fri 17 Feb 2012, 11:46 pm | |
| - Quote :
- Name:One Handed Seals
This i don't know about. You'd technically only be molding half of the chakra needed when doing that, unless you have incredible chakra control maybe. Another staff member should check this. My Masahiro character uses this, but it counts as an actual technique. As a requirement, the user needs to have a great level of chakra control (the technique itself not accessible to A ranks and below, not that that matters here) and requires an extra amount of chakra to be poured into the technique in question, so that even through imprecise molding, you can still perform the task at hand. If you really wanted to have this, I suggest simply taking a look at my Masahiro app, and grabbing the technique from there. You have my permission. | |
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