Costum Jutsu's

Jinsoku Hone Senpuu (Rapid Bone Whirlwind)
Rank -
Involving a high speed dancing motion, and hardly imitating a Rock-Lee like whirlwind attack, Hybris will spin on her hands in circles, while bones shoot out of her body, sending piercing bullets in every direction doing a somewhat large amount of damage. Although the technique is powerful, it also bears a burden. The longer Hybris spins, the more heavy her entire body comes - making it harder to move and continue her jutsu, even after the ability is finished. After she is done; over time she will regain her speed as it was before.

Hybris wrote:

Jinsoku Hone Senpuu (Rapid Bone Whirlwind)
Rank C
Involving a high speed dancing motion, and hardly imitating a Rock-Lee like whirlwind attack, Hybris will spin on her hands in circles, while bones shoot out of her body, sending piercing bullets in every direction doing a somewhat large amount of damage. Although the technique is powerful, it also bears a burden. The longer Hybris spins, the more heavy her entire body comes - making it harder to move and continue her jutsu, even after the ability is finished. After she is done; over time she will regain her speed as it was before.

I made it C. And Approved

Kaguya, Hybris
Bone Manipulation Abilities.






Sawarabi no Mai - Dance of the Young Ferns-

-Sawarabi no Mai is the fifth of five dance forms. After activating the level two cursed seal form, Kimimaro quickly grows a multitude of tall spikes from his body to create a large forest of bone. While in this form he himself can merge into the bone trees to attack his target from whichever spike he wants.

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Teshi Sendan - Ten Finger Drilling Bullets-

-Teshi Sendan is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Sound ninja Kimimaro. Using his bloodline abilities unique Shikotsu Myaku (Corpse Bone Pathways) ability, Kimimaro will use his fingers to fire his distal phalange bones as bullets. As the bones fly through the air, they will rotate and drill into their target once they make contact.

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Tessenka no Mai - Dance of the Clematis

-Tessenka no Mai is a form of Taijutsu developed by Kimimaro to take advantage of his cursed seal and bloodline ability. It is the fourth of five dance forms. He performs it after activating his level two cursed seal form.

Tessenka no Mai • Hana - Dance of the Clematis • Flower

Using this dance Kimimaro will also form a large flowering bone spear which he can also use to pierce any shield his opponent raises. The spear is said to be nearly indestructible, but Kimimaro's failing health makes such a statement questionable.

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Tsubaki no Mai - Dance of the Camellia-

-Tsubaki no Mai is a form of Taijutsu developed by Kimimaro to take advantange of his cursed seal and bloodline ability. It is the second of five dance forms. Using his ability to manipulate his bone structure, Kimimaro will remove a long bone in the form of a sword from his shoulder. Because of the bloodline, the density of the bone can be increased many times so that it is as hard as steel. Using fluid and precise movements, he will then cut through any opponent within striking distance.

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Yanagi no Mai - Dance of the Willows-

-Yanagi no Mai is a form of Taijutsu developed by Kimimaro to take advantange of his cursed seal and bloodline ability. It is the first of five dance forms. Using his ability to manipulate his bone structure, Kimimaro will grow and extend a forearm bone through the palm of his hand to form a stabbing instrument. Using fluid and precise movements, he will then impale his opponents.

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Karamatsu no Mai- Dance of the Larch-

-Karamatsu no Mai is a form of Taijutsu developed to be used in conjunction with the Kaguya bloodline. Kujohone will begin to extend multiple bones from his body. Both from his rib cage and his radius and ulna. Because they are hard as steel, these bones can act as a strong defensive mechanism against incoming strikes. Due to this they will also serve as an offensive attack to allow Kimimaro to move with little effort to impale his opponent.

Hybris wrote:

Kaguya, Hybris
Bone Manipulation Abilities.






Sawarabi no Mai - Dance of the Young Ferns-

-Sawarabi no Mai is the fifth of five dance forms. After activating the level two cursed seal form, Kimimaro quickly grows a multitude of tall spikes from his body to create a large forest of bone. While in this form he himself can merge into the bone trees to attack his target from whichever spike he wants.

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Teshi Sendan - Ten Finger Drilling Bullets-

-Teshi Sendan is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Sound ninja Kimimaro. Using his bloodline abilities unique Shikotsu Myaku (Corpse Bone Pathways) ability, Kimimaro will use his fingers to fire his distal phalange bones as bullets. As the bones fly through the air, they will rotate and drill into their target once they make contact.

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Tessenka no Mai - Dance of the Clematis

-Tessenka no Mai is a form of Taijutsu developed by Kimimaro to take advantage of his cursed seal and bloodline ability. It is the fourth of five dance forms. He performs it after activating his level two cursed seal form.

Tessenka no Mai • Hana - Dance of the Clematis • Flower

Using this dance Kimimaro will also form a large flowering bone spear which he can also use to pierce any shield his opponent raises. The spear is said to be nearly indestructible, but Kimimaro's failing health makes such a statement questionable.

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Tsubaki no Mai - Dance of the Camellia-

-Tsubaki no Mai is a form of Taijutsu developed by Kimimaro to take advantange of his cursed seal and bloodline ability. It is the second of five dance forms. Using his ability to manipulate his bone structure, Kimimaro will remove a long bone in the form of a sword from his shoulder. Because of the bloodline, the density of the bone can be increased many times so that it is as hard as steel. Using fluid and precise movements, he will then cut through any opponent within striking distance.

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Yanagi no Mai - Dance of the Willows-

-Yanagi no Mai is a form of Taijutsu developed by Kimimaro to take advantange of his cursed seal and bloodline ability. It is the first of five dance forms. Using his ability to manipulate his bone structure, Kimimaro will grow and extend a forearm bone through the palm of his hand to form a stabbing instrument. Using fluid and precise movements, he will then impale his opponents.

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Karamatsu no Mai- Dance of the Larch-

-Karamatsu no Mai is a form of Taijutsu developed to be used in conjunction with the Kaguya bloodline. Kujohone will begin to extend multiple bones from his body. Both from his rib cage and his radius and ulna. Because they are hard as steel, these bones can act as a strong defensive mechanism against incoming strikes. Due to this they will also serve as an offensive attack to allow Kimimaro to move with little effort to impale his opponent.

Approved

-Kichigai Gaikotsu Kuro no Jutsu (Disgruntled Skeletal Clone Jutsu)

-Rank C

-Using the Shikotsu Myaku Kekkei Genkai ability, Hybris has discovered a new form of her bone technique. She quickly performs the needed handsigns to use disposed or broken bones inside of her body to make lesser bone-like skeleton clones. These clones hit hard, but are very poor in their defensive abilities.

Hybris wrote:

-Kichigai Gaikotsu Kuro no Jutsu (Disgruntled Skeletal Clone Jutsu)

-Rank C

-Using the Shikotsu Myaku Kekkei Genkai ability, Hybris has discovered a new form of her bone technique. She quickly performs the needed handsigns to use disposed or broken bones inside of her body to make lesser bone-like skeleton clones. These clones hit hard, but are very poor in their defensive abilities.

Approved

-Kago Gaikotsu Joumae (Caged Skeletal Lock)

-Rank B

-By performing the handsigns needed, Hybris disposes of bones in her body to create an enclosed area around her, covering the sides, front, bottom, and top, each bone wall to be about half an inch apart, allowing her to breathe. The bones are as hard as steel - As for making this technique nearly impenetrable, although there is a downside. The longer she keeps the wall up, the more immense amounts of chakra are used to keep said wall up.

Hybris wrote:

-Kago Gaikotsu Joumae (Caged Skeletal Lock)

-Rank C

-By performing the handsigns needed, Hybris disposes of bones in her body to create an enclosed area around her, covering the sides, front, bottom, and top, each bone wall to be about half an inch apart, allowing her to breathe. The bones are as hard as steel - As for making this technique nearly impenetrable, although there is a downside. The longer she keeps the wall up, the more immense amounts of chakra are used to keep said wall up.

Approved...though it seems a bit strong.
Maybe change it to B?

Name: Jissen Kenbu (Actual Battle Sword-Dance)
Type: Taijutsu/Genjutsu
Rank: Chuunin+ (B-Rank)
Requirements: Must have strength in speed and power, Taijutsu specialist, ability to use Kempo fighting style. (Can be taught to another)
Description: Using his speed and power to his advantage over his target,Syra will move with the fluidity and movements that will confuse the opponent, making it seem like he's in defferent places at once. While using this, he sets up his target to use the "Kaiten Kenbu".

Name: Kaiten Kenbu (Literally "Dance of the Wheeling Sword")
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: Chuunin+ (B-Rank)
Requirements: Ability to use Kempo fighting style, one or more Katanas, strength in speed and power, Taijutsu specialist, must know "Jissen Kenbu". (Can be taught to another)
Description: Using one, or both, of his Katana, along with the "Jissen Kenbu" technique,Syra will get to a point of the target, usually behind them, then twist around in three quick circles, cutting the target three times close together.

Name: Ryusui no Ugoki (Flowing-Water Movement)
Type: Taijutsu/Genjutsu
Rank: Jounin+ (A-Rank)
Requirements: Must know "Jissen Kenbu", Taijutsu specialist, ability to use Kempo fighting style, strength in speed and power. (Can be taught to another)
Description: A more powerful version of the "Jissen Kenbu", this is a moving technique where Syra moves around fast and silently, confusing the opponent due to the fluid motion & continuously changing speed. This sets his opponent up for one of his strongest attacks: "Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren".Making her a little bit tired.

Name: Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren (Literally "Dance of the Wheeling Sword Six Successions")
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: Jounin+ Rank A
Requirements: Must know "Jissen Kenbu", must know "Kaiten Kenbu", ability to use Kempo fighting style, strength and speed and power, Taijutsu specialist, two or more Katana. (Can be taught to another)
Description: The attack involves Syra gripping his Katana backhand, then slashing the opponent six times in rapid succession, from both sides (it relies on confusing the opponent on the direction from which each subsequent strike is going to come). This is one of his strongest attacks, and he uses both of his Katana.Other muscles of syra making it injured because of tiredness. Can be use at once.

Name: Onmyou Kousa (Ying-Yang Cross)
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: Jounin+ (A-Rank)
Requirements: Two or more Katana, Taijutsu specialist, strength in power. (Can be taught to another)
Description: Syra blocks an enemies striking weapon with one Katana, then strikes it with the second Katana, thrusting the first one through. This won't destroy ALL weapons (like Custom Weapons and the such), but will destroy a normal weapon.

Name: Onmyou Hasshi (Dusk to Dawn Strike)
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: Jounin+ (A-Rank)
Requirements: Two or more Katana, Taijutsu specialist, strength in power and speed. (Can be taught to another)
Description: Syra throws both Katana at the opponent, hitting the end of the first one with the second one for an extra boost. The second Katana is hidden directly behind the first, so the opponent would only see one Katanai heading for them in their line of sight. Though this will leave
Syra defenseless, in terms of not having his weapons, he'll immediately try to retrieve his weapons before the target can get to him.Other muscles of syra making it injured because of tiredness. Can be use at once.


Name: Gokou Juuji (Shadow-Light Cross)
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: Jounin+ (A-Rank)
Requirements: Two or more Katana, Taijutsu specialist, strength in power ans speed. (Can be taught to another)
Description: Syra crosses the two Katana and moves them outwards in a scissor-like cut.Other muscles of syra making it injured because of tiredness. Can be use at once.


Name: Kaiten Nibai Kenbu (Literally "Dance of the Double Wheeling Sword")
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: Jounin+ Rank A
Requirements: Ability to use Kempo fighting style, two or more Katana, strength in speed and power, Taijutsu specialist, must know "Jissen Kenbu". (Can be taught to another)
Description: This is an advanced version of the original "Kaiten Kenbu". Using both, of his Katana, along with the "Jissen Kenbu" technique, Syra will get to a point of the target, usually behind them, then twist around in three quick circles,
cutting the target three times close together with both Katana, for a total of six strikes.Other muscles of syra making it injured because of tiredness. Can be use at once.

Remove, " In the Blink of an Eye " and " Almost in the Blink of an eye ". You are a Jounin, not a Saanin. Only a Sannin can do this. You can keep it but you must mention, " But people of the same rank can dodge this " Also such quick movements are not so simple to use. They would put a lot of stress on the muscles There must be a small lapse between using this and the next jutsu as well as leave you tired.

Kidate Gyouan wrote:

Name:Fuuton~ Houmen - Wind Style~Release
Rank:C
Type:Supplementary
Effect: This is the basis of all wind techniques. A user who masters this skill is able to summon wind chakra at any time with ease. The basic gist of this jutsu is that they can now use wind-based jutsu. But they can also use this seperately to create gusts of wind out of nowhere.

Name-Kuchiyose~ Kaze Hogosha - Spiritualism~ Wind Guardians
Rank:-
Type:Summoning
Effect: This technique is utilized by the shinobi Kidate. After giving blood, he rubs it on the earing in his left cat ear. Then, he weaves handseals and gives chakra. This technique can summon one of four beasts made of wind.

Sora:
Sora is a massive crow, made of black wind. It is the most powerfu known, and would be classified as an A-ranked summoning. He can control wind, and create solid weapons out of the wind he breathes. Sora can teleport him and his summoner by turning them into clear wind, and traveling along the breeze.

Kaze:
Kaze is the second strongest known, a B-ranked summoning. He takes the form of a massive snake made of green wind. Kaze has the ability to use any wind/poison-based jutsu he sees. This ability is extremely useful against wind shinobi and medical ninja. However, the jutsu is about 25% weaker than the original would be if it had it in it's arsenal already. Kaze already has all of Kidate's wind-based jutsu in it's arsenal.

Kumo: Kumo is the weakest known. He is a C-ranked summoning. Taking the form of a blue squirrel, he is extremely fast. His ability lies in his eyes. While he can't mimic jutsu, he can see through genjutsu, and even cancel them for Kidate. He will also give Kidate advice on the opponent, being able to read the opponent a little better than a shinobi could.

The fourth and final summoning is unknown to Kidate. It is presumably an S-ranked summoning, and extremely powerful. According to legend, he would take the form of a dragon. While the size, and abilities are unknown, Kidate does know that it would be a force he couldn't even think of controlling unless he had full mastery over his own power first. Kidate must grow a lot more before he can summon this beast.

Could someone check these out?

DONE updated!!

Ozanaru Syra wrote:

Name: Jissen Kenbu (Actual Battle Sword-Dance)
Type: Taijutsu/Genjutsu
Rank: Chuunin+ (B-Rank)
Requirements: Must have strength in speed and power, Taijutsu specialist, ability to use Kempo fighting style. (Can be taught to another)
Description: Using his speed and power to his advantage over his target,Syra will move with the fluidity and movements that will confuse the opponent, making it seem like he's in defferent places at once. While using this, he sets up his target to use the "Kaiten Kenbu".

Name: Kaiten Kenbu (Literally "Dance of the Wheeling Sword")
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: Chuunin+ (B-Rank)
Requirements: Ability to use Kempo fighting style, one or more Katanas, strength in speed and power, Taijutsu specialist, must know "Jissen Kenbu". (Can be taught to another)
Description: Using one, or both, of his Katana, along with the "Jissen Kenbu" technique,Syra will get to a point of the target, usually behind them, then twist around in three quick circles, cutting the target three times close together.

Name: Ryusui no Ugoki (Flowing-Water Movement)
Type: Taijutsu/Genjutsu
Rank: Jounin+ (A-Rank)
Requirements: Must know "Jissen Kenbu", Taijutsu specialist, ability to use Kempo fighting style, strength in speed and power. (Can be taught to another)
Description: A more powerful version of the "Jissen Kenbu", this is a moving technique where Syra moves around fast and silently, confusing the opponent due to the fluid motion & continuously changing speed. This sets his opponent up for one of his strongest attacks: "Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren".

Name: Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren (Literally "Dance of the Wheeling Sword Six Successions")
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: Jounin+ Rank A
Requirements: Must know "Jissen Kenbu", must know "Kaiten Kenbu", ability to use Kempo fighting style, strength and speed and power, Taijutsu specialist, two or more Katana. (Can be taught to another)
Description: The attack involves Syra gripping his Katana backhand, then slashing the opponent six times in rapid succession, from both sides (it relies on confusing the opponent on the direction from which each subsequent strike is going to come). This is one of his strongest attacks, and he uses both of his Katana.

Name: Onmyou Kousa (Ying-Yang Cross)
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: Jounin+ (A-Rank)
Requirements: Two or more Katana, Taijutsu specialist, strength in power. (Can be taught to another)
Description: Syra blocks an enemies striking weapon with one Katana, then strikes it with the second Katana, thrusting the first one through. This won't destroy ALL weapons (like Custom Weapons and the such), but will destroy a normal weapon.

Name: Onmyou Hasshi (Dusk to Dawn Strike)
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: Jounin+ (A-Rank)
Requirements: Two or more Katana, Taijutsu specialist, strength in power and speed. (Can be taught to another)
Description: Syra throws both Katana at the opponent, hitting the end of the first one with the second one for an extra boost. The second Katana is hidden directly behind the first, so the opponent would only see one Katanai heading for them in their line of sight. Though this will leave
Syra defenseless, in terms of not having his weapons, he'll immediately try to retrieve his weapons before the target can get to him.

Name: Gokou Juuji (Shadow-Light Cross)
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: Jounin+ (A-Rank)
Requirements: Two or more Katana, Taijutsu specialist, strength in power ans speed. (Can be taught to another)
Description: Syra crosses the two Katana and moves them outwards in a scissor-like cut.

Name: Kaiten Nibai Kenbu (Literally "Dance of the Double Wheeling Sword")
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: Jounin+ Rank A
Requirements: Ability to use Kempo fighting style, two or more Katana, strength in speed and power, Taijutsu specialist, must know "Jissen Kenbu". (Can be taught to another)
Description: This is an advanced version of the original "Kaiten Kenbu". Using both, of his Katana, along with the "Jissen Kenbu" technique, Syra will get to a point of the target, usually behind them, then twist around in three quick circles,
cutting the target three times close together with both Katana, for a total of six strikes.

You still havn't mentioned which jutsu's will leave you tired. or a little injured. The A ranks should cause you to get really tired.

As for Kidate, You can't have the S rank summon as a Chuunin.

A Rank Summon
NO TELEPORTING. Just No. It doesn't matter how you do it but its not allowed.

The B-Ranked summon cannot have all your jutsu's.There is a limit to how many jutsu's it may have. Also, i may only have your B-Ranked Jutsu's

As for the C-ranked Summon
Either remove the Genjutsu removal or the mimicry. Can't have both.

Name:Fuuton~ Houmen - Wind Style~Release
Rank:C
Type:Supplementary
Effect: This is the basis of all wind techniques. A user who masters this skill is able to summon wind chakra at any time with ease. The basic gist of this jutsu is that they can now use wind-based jutsu. But they can also use this seperately to create gusts of wind out of nowhere.

Name-Kuchiyose~ Kaze Hogosha - Spiritualism~ Wind Guardians
Rank:-
Type:Summoning
Effect: This technique is utilized by the shinobi Kidate. After giving blood, he rubs it on the earing in his left cat ear. Then, he weaves handseals and gives chakra. This technique can summon one of four beasts made of wind.

Sora:
Sora is a massive crow, made of black wind. It is the most powerfu known, and would be classified as an A-ranked summoning. He can control wind, and create solid weapons out of the wind he breathes. Sora can break up it's body into the breeze and travel that way. While this doesn't increase it's speed at all, it makes it so that physical attacks won't harm it.

Kaze:
Kaze is the second strongest known, a B-ranked summoning. He takes the form of a massive snake made of green wind. Kaze has the ability to use any wind/poison-based jutsu he sees. This ability is extremely useful against wind shinobi and medical ninja. However, the jutsu is about 25% weaker than the original would be.

Kumo: Kumo is the weakest known. He is a C-ranked summoning. Taking the form of a blue squirrel, he is extremely fast. His ability lies in his eyes. While he can't mimic jutsu, he can see through genjutsu, and even cancel them for Kidate. He will also give Kidate advice on the opponent, being able to read the opponent a little better than a shinobi could.

The fourth and final summoning is unknown to Kidate. It is presumably an S-ranked summoning, and extremely powerful. According to legend, he would take the form of a dragon. While the size, and abilities are unknown, Kidate does know that it would be a force he couldn't even think of controlling unless he had full mastery over his own power first. Kidate must grow a lot more before he can summon this beast.

((The S-Ranked doesn't exist yet. I am going to create it when I get a higher rank. I was just letting you know that it does exist. Also, Kumo cannot mimic, it said so.))

Otherwise, edited

Earth Jutsu

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Solid Siol Muscle
Element: Earth
Rank: A/S
Effect: Forming a Earth Seal with paint/ink/blood on user's right palm of your hand and you can run up close to the enemy and when you grabs them of any their limb(s), it will be turned into solid rock that you cant movie it where its solid. Limbs action:
Right Arm- whole right arm from the tips of you fingers all the way to yout shoulder would be solid rock.
Left Arm- same as above about the right arm but only just on the LEFT arm side.
Right Leg- whole leg from tips of your toes to the hip.
Left Leg- same as above but only on the LEFT leg side.
Chest or Back- whole BODY from your head, including your head to the tips of your toes will be hardens solid rock.

Special Note about this jutsu: This can be very deadly dangerous because if the user hardens a limb of an enmy body, the user may break the solid rock on that limb, when it does, you will have no limb for that time unless you get stiyched or a jutsu to block this.

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