Kayutsa atama update

Name:Kayutsa Atama

Village:hidden leaf

Age:13

Demon:giant fire dragon that is 5000 years old and has 100 less chakra than the basilisk

Jutsu:

transformation jutsu:he can transform into anything.

summoning jutsu(Giant Dragon): he uses a variety of hand symbols and slams his hand onto the ground. also a sacrifice of blood is needed.,

leaf tornado jutsu: he makes lots of hand symbols then waves his hands around which creates a tornado made of leaves.

Shadow clone jutsu:Creates multiple solid clones of himself which then combine their attack power to do a devestating combo.

Appearance:(avatar)

strength:super

speed:Super fast

Rank:legendary swordsman

special features:invented the leaf tornado jutsu

personality:nice and good, with not even a nano-ounce of evil.

rp example: atama kept running. he was being attacked by lord mamba, who had been summoned by orichimaru himself! he then remembered something. He was able to summon a dragon! he then used summoning jutsu to summon it.it won against mamba in
no time. orichimaru cried "No! how could an amatuer beat me?".kayutsa woke. he sighed. he wished he could beat orichimaru. then he remembered that his graduation was soon.
History:his parents died. a ninja sealed a dragon into him.he was 5 years old when he joined the academey. he is now 12 years old and has always known about the fire dragon in him. he got himself a dog about a year ago.

WTF that sucks

but i have the 4 tailed bijuu!

I still sucks

yes u do.

haha, Ruka still sucks.

Ruka, do not post here.

And, please space out so it is readable and a little more organized.

i spaced them out and who deleted the chatbox?

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jutsu:white whale jutsu:conjures up a white whale when near ice,

You need water and wind to make ice. Genin and Chuunin can only have two elements, and ice counts as one. That's three, meaning you can't use this technique.

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transformation jutsu:he can transform into anything,

This is an E rank technique, and keep in mind, you have to transform into something similar to your size, and, you don't actually become what you transform into, you just look like them. If you want to make a technique where you can actually transform into anything... go ahead... it's too OP and isn't going to be approved.

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summoning jutsu(Giant Dragon): he uses a variety of hand symbols and slams his hand onto the ground. also a sacrifice of blood is needed.,

Giant summons, especially a dragon, are normally at least A rank. You're still just a genin, this won't work.

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leaf tornado jutsu: he makes lots of handsymbols then waves his hands around which creates a tornado made of leaves.

Still needs a rank... I'd probably suggest D... a tornado of leaves doesn't seem too damaging.


You also need to use our application template. None of this Speed: Strength: crap. Use our template, do what it tells you to, pick two elements, and a main and sub style of combat. Also, we don't require an RP sample here, which clearly shows you got your template from somewhere else.

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History:his parents died. a ninja sealed a dragon into him.he was 5 years old when he joined the academey. he is now 12 years old and has always known about the fire dragon in him. he got himself a dog about a year ago.

Too vague. You mean to tell me a ninja just decided to seal a dragon in him... without any reason at all. And you can either have a lesser demon, or a bijuu... But a dragon is not the four tails, they're very different. Finally, Naruto (the site owner) has to approve this if you want a Bijuu.

Eki Gisou wrote:

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jutsu:white whale jutsu:conjures up a white whale when near ice,

You need water and wind to make ice. Genin and Chuunin can only have two elements, and ice counts as one. That's three, meaning you can't use this technique.

Ice isn't an element.
Fire, Wind, Lightning, Earth, Water are the only ones counted as elements.

So we're nto considering the compound elements as elements? Because I've unfortunately seen plenty of ice techniques turned down either due to lack of water and wind, or lack of a kekkai genkai...

You need a lot more jutsu than that one dude.

Plus ice is a kekkei-only element, so unless you make a custom clan, or choose Haku's. You can't.

i said in this app that i have four tails and havent u seen the naruto movie about the land of snow? you cant copy a kekkei genkai!

Either be in Haku's clan... and Having he four tails requires the site owner's approval, so if you wan tit, you'll have to wait longer.

id319 wrote:

i said in this app that i have four tails and havent u seen the naruto movie about the land of snow? you cant copy a kekkei genkai!

didnt you here me in this post?

Yes... didn't you here me in mine?

You can clearly just choose to be in Haku's clan, and be able to use her bloodline, nobody said anything about copying a kekkai genkai. And why do you keep saying you have the four tails? Good for you, we get it, you want it. It has nothing to do with anything else. Nobody is questioning the fact you want the four tails, I'm simply stating, that you'll need Naruto (THE SITE OWNER) to approve your profile if you have a Bijuu.

Read what I'm posting VERY CAREFULLY, as you are obviously having difficulties understanding me.

he approved me before and will approve me again

Stupid thing your fight nah I was just joking the 4 tail has been already approved to Hiroki which is Shiyomi's next character and I think I'll unapprove it because Naruto is the only one that can approve Bijuu app.

This is quite true...but even then...Hiro would take priority over your app...mainly because it was done a lot better and with a lot less argument >.> Also because he made his app before you did :P

ive changed my demon

Hmmmm yeah right you can create a demon but it must be lesser the strength and powers of the 9 Bijuu and you gotta explain it further ok?

USE THE TEMPLATE.
I don't know why you are having such a difficult time with this!
We have all stated so many little things that would have you approved by now but all you care about is a Demon you won't be getting unless you get approved!

well, my demon has 100 less chakra than the basilisk.

Again with the effing demon!

Just add details in the actual app, don't discuss it.

And while your at it? DO EVERYTHING ELSE WE HAVE SAID

Thats should do it dont post it here add it to the actual app just like Aku said so it wont be getting confusing.