New Naizu Jutsu

Name: Steam Style: Stealth steel prison
Rank:A
Element:Water/Fire
Description: (only availibale during stealth clone jutsu) Three steam clones surround the
opponent.Chakra is emitted between the three and the steam solidifies as solid as steal
Range is 30 meters.

Name: Steam Style: Delusion Fog Jutsu
Rank:B
Element:Water/Fire (Genjutsu)
Description:(only availible during stealth clone jutsu) The steam creates an illusion Of the
land around the enemey becoming distorted and fellow alies become enemies in there mind.

Name: Steam Style: Hound Jutsu
Rank:C
Element:Water/Fire
Description: chakra sensing steamed form hounds are created and dispatched to search for
opposition. Upon finding them, the disperse instanly giving the location to Naizu

Name: Hells Clones
Rank:A
Element:Fire
Description: (Only During Oakegan-Piering Mind or higher) Naizu can create clones that are
walking flames. The clones have accelerated speed, can detatch and launch their arms at the
foe. Upon both arms bein detatched, the clone immediately takes chase insue of the enemey and
will explode upon contact or will detinate 10 seconds post sprint

Name: Infinte Range
Rank:?
Element:Water,Fire,Steam,Genjutsu
Description:(Only During Oakegan-Heavens Vision and gathers chakra for 5 post) Utilizing only one hand, Naizu summons two of each of his creations using minimal chakra( Two: Hounds, Water Wolves, Steam Clones, Shadow clones, Hells Clones). Naizu can see all that his creations see and should one catch glempse of the enemey, they will all know its location and upon demand will go to that destination. Should the enemey look one of these creations in the eyes, Wolves Savage Feast will activate

Name: Wolves Savage Feast
Rank:S
Element:Genjutsu
Description:(Only During Oakegan-Heavens Vision and takes three post to gather enough chakra)
Upon touch or eye contact with Naizu's eye or hands, an enemey is instantly trapped in this
near inenscapeable genjutsu in which a pack of wolves bite, chew and tear flesh from bone.Will
power is a neccessity as to wheather or not the will just bite and chew, tear fleash as well,
or go for the juggular and kill them. Damage done to the body in the genjutsu will be seen and
felt as piercing minds effects are enhanced with heavens vision. Upon usage, the user can not use
genjutsu for 3 post as a strain has been put on their mind as well.

(mods will decide how many post or battles untill Naizu can learn these Jutsu)

Name:Defined Apprehension
Rank:-
Element:-
Description:The Alphamega of the Oakegan. The holder of this increases their chakra, strength, speed and wisdom 8 fold. Any genjutsu used while in this final stage will be near impossible to break. But its said that the maximum time you can maintain this stage is 5 minutes. If one tries to use this for more time, their chakra will start to drain rapidly or death can occurr.(5 minutes is equal 10 post)

Name:Refined Perception
Rank:-
Element:-
Description:The fourth stage of the Oakegan thought to be but a legend. Its said to give the holder unfathomed wisdome and 3 fold over The Heavens Vision power.It is unknown how many jutsu this stage of the clans doujutsu hold but its said there are atleast two. Along with increasing the strength of the nin and genjutsus of the holder 3 fold its sad that the holders chakra is is Doubled

Name:Inferno of Saphire
Rank:A
Element:Fire
Description:(Can only be used during Defined Apprehension) One can use via vision or hands as blue saphire colored flames can instantly engulf a foe on demand within 10 meters.The flames are so intense that in 3 seconds it wil cover the foe. If not extinguished in five death will occurr.(If used by had, you can not use hand based ninjutsu for 2 post, If by eye, the user wont have vision for 2 post)

Name:Crimson Flood
Rank:?
Element:Water
Description:(Can only be used during Defined Apprehension) Chakra Based red water will flood the souroundings the user can control the calm and fierceness of it. Beyond having the Defined Apprehension,there is no way to protect yourself from this water for it is flesh eating.These eyes alone protect the user from this water.(Therefore if times up with the Doujutsu, the user is no longer safe from it anylonger either. If the foe is submergerged completely, he will die.
(The water will receed after 5 post)

Name:Cognitive
Rank:?
Element:-
Description:(Can only be active during Refined Perception and take 2 post to generate enough chakra)The User brings fourth two chakra sensing clones with excessive speed. These clones search for the enemey and upon seeing them, the user instantly knows. In order for this to be successful, the clones must grab and hold them.Post aquistition, the clones disperse and the user is teleported there with grip of the enemey.Afterwards, the user will look to grab the head of the foe with intent of retreiving knowledge of jutsu, skills, secrets(possibly of the clan, village,country or all) .Both user and enemy are paraylized for 1 post for the duratiton of this jutsu.(Can only be uset 2 times per battle, jutsu removal last 5 post)

Name:Conative
Rank:?
Element:-
Description:(Can only be active during Refined Perception and takes 2 post to generate enough chakra) This jutsu heightens the users instincts,will power,increases chakra and if Conitive was activated prior to this and was successful, any jutsu knowledge from the enemey can be used for 5 post.

Way too many S-ranked. You may only have two.
Also, in the final form of the Kekkei take out the 5 elements, your doujutsu revolved around genjutsu not elements?

I'm gonna let the mods and admins make the decisons on ranks with the ? marks. The other change has been made though.

Name:Cognitive
Rank:?
Element:-
Description:(Can only be active during Refined Perception and take 2 post to generate enough chakra)The User brings fourth two chakra sensing clones with excessive speed. These clones search for the enemey and upon seeing them, the user instantly knows. Upon to touching or retrieving them, the clones disperse and the user is teleported there with grip of the enemies head retreiving knowledge of jutsu, skills, secrets(possibly of the clan, village,country or all) as well as temporary removal of up to 4 jutsu.Both user and enemy are paraylized for 1 post for the duratiton of this jutsu.(Can only be uset 2 times per battle, jutsu removal last 5 post)


To OP, also thats auto hit, you cant block enyones jutsu unless you can seal theyre chakra gates, and for you to touch theyre head like that is auto hit, you can easily attack from grabing theyre head, i will not allow it.

I believe a genjutsu only works through the users eyes, not a pet or clone. im not sure about that.

Name:Defined Apprehension
Rank:-
Element:-
Description:The Alphamega of the Oakegan. The holder of this increases their chakra, strength, speed and wisdom 8 fold. Any genjutsu used while in this final stage will not be broken. But its said that the maximum time you can maintain this stage is 5 minutes. If one tries to use this for more time, their chakra will start to drain rapidly or death can occurr.(5 minutes is equal 10 post)


All genjutsu is possible to break out of as long as they have a Bijuu or a shit load of chakra.

Name:Conative
Rank:?
Element:-
Description:(Can only be active during Refined Perception and takes 2 post to generate enough chakra) This jutsu heightens the users instincts,will power,increases chakra and if Conitive was activated prior to this and was successful, any jutsu removed from the enemey can be used for 5 post.


i do believe nothing can copy a jutsu, even temperarily but Sharingan, i dissapprove of this, but if someone else approves it then its approved

I have made changes to all you have spoke of except the copying of a jutsu. Would it be better if it was only at 3/4 of the mastery of the opposition?

Nope, only Sharingan can copy a jutsu like that (as far as i know, but i do believe im right)

Name: Steam Style: Stealth steel prison
Rank:A
Element:Water/Fire
Description: (only availibale during stealth clone jutsu) Three steam clones surround the
opponent.Chakra is emitted between the three and the steam solidifies as solid as steal
Range is 30 meters.



Name: Steam Style: Delusion Fog Jutsu
Rank:B
Element:Water/Fire (Genjutsu)
Description:(only availible during stealth clone jutsu) The steam creates an illusion Of the
land around the enemey becoming distorted and fellow alies become enemies in there mind.



Name: Steam Style: Hound Jutsu
Rank:C
Element:Water/Fire
Description: chakra sensing steamed form hounds are created and dispatched to search for
opposition. Upon finding them, the disperse instanly giving the location to Naizu

Name: Hells Clones
Rank:A
Element:Fire
Description: (Only During Oakegan-Piering Mind or higher) Naizu can create clones that are
walking flames. The clones have accelerated speed, can detatch and launch their arms at the
foe. Upon both arms bein detatched, the clone immediately takes chase insue of the enemey and
will explode upon contact or will detinate 10 seconds post sprint



APPROVED

Name:Tri-Elemental Dome
Rank:A
Element:Steam, Fire, Water
Description: An epic shield of over laping domes, separated by chakra. This jutsu consist of 3 seperate domes, one overlapping another by 10 meters(Fire dome is largest and enforces the water 9 meters of flames nearing 500 degrees and the water dome,of which holds fierce whirlpools and waves inside the 9 meters of water enforces the steam. The steam dome does one of two things depending on whom it holds. If foe, the fog cast the delusion fog jutsu. If the caster, it divides into 3 steam clones upon the first two domes removal.1 dome is made per post, but has no specific order of which are made.

Name:Kyukou
Rank:-
Element:Doujutsu
Description:(Only availible during piercing mind or higher oakegan) Almost as if a gloss were coated onto Naizus eyes, they become protecting mechanizms. Naizu's eyes reflect a genjutsu cast instantly but becomes blind for 1 post following. This can only be used once per 4 post.


Name:Pin Drop
Rank:B
Element:Steam/Water
Description:Naizu creates a large steam high above the field that hovers for 5 posts and at will, can release a massive amount of mist and solidifies them into tiny pins aimed at the opposition. Naizu can also use this from falling rain, or produce rain or mist from natural storm clouds.


Name: Heat Hounds
Rank: B
Element:Fire
Description: The user composes 5 hounds which are composed of fire and chakra. They sense body heat and search for the foe. Upon sighting the hounds will sorround them and take consecutively leap towards the toward the enemey, raining fire upon them.

Understanding that this would take some time to prepare...speaking for the Tri-dome

Spoiler:

Name: Infinte Range
Rank:?
Element:Water,Fire,Steam,Genjutsu
Description:(Only During Oakegan-Heavens Vision and gathers chakra for 5 post) Utilizing only one hand, Naizu summons two of each of his creations using minimal chakra( Two: Hounds, Water Wolves, Steam Clones, Shadow clones, Hells Clones). Naizu can see all that his creations see and should one catch glempse of the enemy, they will all know its location and upon demand will go to that destination. Should the enemy look one of these creations in the eyes, Wolves Savage Feast will activate

I don't see how its genjutsu... But make it an A and its approved

Wolves Savage Feast should be an S-rank and have a drawback to the user

Name:Inferno of Saphire
Rank:?
Element:Fire
Description:(Can only be used during Defined Apprehension) One can use via vision or hands as blue saphire colored flames can instantly engulf a foe on demand within 10 meters.The flames are so intense that in 3 seconds it wil cover the foe. If not extinguished in five death will occurr.(If used by had, you can not use hand based ninjutsu for 2 post, If by eye, the user wont have vision for 2 post)
A and It's approved

Name:Crimson Flood
Rank:?
Element:Water
Description:(Can only be used during Defined Apprehension) Chakra Based red water will flood the souroundings the user can control the calm and fierceness of it. Beyond having the Defined Apprehension,there is no way to protect yourself from this water for it is flesh eating.These eyes alone protect the user from this water.(Therefore if times up with the Doujutsu, the user is no longer safe from it anylonger either. If the foe is submergerged completely, he will die.
(The water will receed after 5 post)
If the user stands on the water is he safe, since he wouldn't be touching the water?

For crimson flood, yes, both would be safe standing on the water just not if say knocked onto or into it. And whats wanted to be known about tri-dome?

It needs to take a bit of time to prepare.
And if crimson flood is made another S-rank then its approved, since I assume it takes a lot of chakra

ok, but i as i first posted, Defined Apprehension and Refined Preception stages I want Naizu to learn through an amount of battles or story, the jutsu could and would be learned along with them. What would be a good way to do that? And how many post would be suffecient for the Tri-Elemental Dome? Also I added to my jutsus on the Tri ele post.

Tri- Make it one post per barrier.

Learning The Jutsu- That's easy, is your clan still thriving?

Other jutsu, all approved

Yes, I was gonna make Naizu's brother a character but didn't know if we could have multi-characters on here. And i'll make that ajustment

No, you can't. But you can RP his brother out as an NPC and make him your backup fer later

NPC?

Yeah, a non-person character. RP as him teaching you the jutsu

Name: Oakegon
Rank: Ranges from B-S depending on stage (awakening sight:B Piercing Mind:A Heavens Vision:S)
Element:Water
Description: Oakegan: genjutsu(3 stages have been noted in the clans history but there is a legend that 2 more exist. The possessors genjutsu is based on fear and elemental nature) 1st: Awakening Sight 2nd: Piercing Mind and 3rd: Heavens Vision

hence the problem with that, also, i made the adjustments to the Tri-Element Dome

Its already approved

And that doesn't mean that he can't have them and have hidden them ^-^
Be creative

True,ty man.
Wow, I really need to make a list of all the approvals of my jutsu lol. And wolf savage feast has been changed to s rank and has a 3 post non genjutsu effect.