Owww

Dawn plopped on the bed.

As Revy laid there Altier who was fully supplied with chakra now appeard sitting on the bed next to Revy

Altier: What is it about that girl thats makeing you like this?

"I dont know...." Revy said, she burried her head into the pillow on the bead

Altier dissapears afterwerds

"Its going to be fun here know it."

Altier appeard bowing down to Dawn

Altier: I was orderd to serve your every command..do you need enything?

"Ummm some juice would be great."

Kyubo was in the kitchen holding a bottle of juice in his hand, he was right about to open it. Altier dissapeard and reapeard infront of dawn is a second, it was like he never left, he was holding a bottle of joice, he handed it to Dawn

Kyubo puts his hand to his mouth as if he was holding a invisable bottle, Kyubo began to look around

Kyubo: Hey..whered my juice go??? i swore i was just holding it

Altier kneels back down

Altier: Is there enything else you need?

"No but thank you and don't kneel in front of me your not my slave."

Altier: I was orderd by Revy herself to tend to your every needs...this is the way i was tought to serve someone..

Kyubo enters the room

Kyubo: Hey Altier, did you see what happend to my......

Kyubo looks at Dawn and what she has in her hand

Kyubo: YYYYYYYYOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kyubo screamed as he pointed at her, he then walked away mumbling something

"...Ummm okay then." She watched Kyubo and sighed.
"Fine if that is the way you were trained I can't force you. Thanks for the juice."
she finished half of it quickly.

Altier sat next to Dawnpaw on the bed

Altier: What do you see in Revy?

"Hmm what do you mean?"

"Oh Umm Well a mentor and a really cool person."

"ohh I see. Maybe I remind her of somebody she used to know."

Altier: Now that i think of it...you look just like someone from her past..Revy has had a horrible past...

"Ohh..."

"Yeah sure if she doesn't mind." She sat up.

Revy was born into the Seichuu clan, she was more of an expiriment no one cared about, she was incredibly weak in doll controleing, she was known as the incomplete doll mystress, she often got beat up by the tougher kids and bullied a lot, her parents had died soon after she was born so she was lone most of the time, the origional leader had a kind heart and tried to help Revy in eny way he could, but the people would not allow it, they continued to experiment on her sending her through pain and everything, the only expiriment that kind of helped her is the potion they had tested on her, the potion showed nothing happening so the Seichuu scientists just gave up on it, but it actualy gave her liquids in her body healing abilities. The Seichuu doll creators were working on a very special strong doll...wich was me..as they were makeing me the project went out of control and i killed about a quarter of the Seichuu sucking in all of theyre chakra..i was out of control as a wild beast, the leader stepped up and sacrifised himself to seal that power and make me calm, he forged his soul into a crystal wich is inside of me, it seald all the power. The seichuu leader died soon afterwerds, i was given to Revy since i was a good for nothing weak doll after the sealing, i lost all my powers and was only about 3 inches tall, all i could do was hide in her bag. The new seichuu was obsessed with power, he slaughterd all of the his own clan, as he was on the rampage no one escaped but Revy, she had 2 friends that were female twins, one with black hair, one with a ivory color hair, they helped Revy escape and get away from the leader, but doing so they were both killed. Revy got away from his grasp but even till today he is still planning to kill her somewhere. Revy wanderd around for a few years liveing on her own, she tried to stay at villages but was always hated for her strange doll manipulation powers, she was called meny names and was kicked out by most villages, she was about 15 when she reached Konoha, she had to steal to survive for a long time, she had stolen a loaf of bread from the bread shop in konoha, she thought it was normal bread..but it wasnt..it actualy contained a scroll of S rank jutsus hidden inside of it that was to be deliverd to the Hokage secretly, Revy was quickly hunted down by the anbu outside of the village and beaten half to death by them, one of the anbu im sure you know is that Nara boy Revy is around sometimes, Revy traveld around a bit longer and met a girl with orange hair, she looked exactly like you in a way..they came very close, close enough that you could say they loved each other (Revy has spent most of her life around girls), The girl was actualy a missing nin and was killed by the ANBU shortly before Revy found the rain village Revy reached the rain village and was finaly accepted in by Pein, shortly after pein brought her in he was killed by Naruto, well from there on im sure you know the rest of the story..

"Oh.. that's terrible." She looked down.
"Its so sad how some people can be so cruel....."

Altier: Yea...it was hard for her because she was so weak and young, and i was powerless to help her

"You would have tried if you could."

Dawn rubbed her sides. ".... i have to be strong...for her.." She whispered.