more jutsu approve please

Name: Exploding earth jutsu
Rank: C
Element: earth
Description: the user draw an explosive element to the surface of the earth.
The user can direct the sustains up to ten feed away from himself. Once it has been drawn to the top of the earth the explosive ground can be triggered by a spark or letter bomb or any thing with fire in it.

Name: energy Life line
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: with this jutsu the user can create as many clones as he wants. And dose not have to expend any energy sustaining them. They attach a cord of energy from the clone to another living object. A human can cut the cord easy.

i not sure about the energy life line

if it needs work tell me.

life line is declined for the fact that you are a genin, ther fore you seriously need growth to have somethin even resembling that.

exploding earth needs better description for one can not just draw explosive earth. You can create or mold it into explosive earth through chakra though.

Meh comments,

Energy life line~

DENIED~ Even if you we're a chuunin/jounin it would be DISAPPROVED~ that jutsu would only be used to GOD MOD.





Exploding earth jutsu,

Just like a copy of Deidara's jutsu or mere like it. Needs work

what what wrong with it
the clone just sustain them self.
i just use some energy to conect them to a tree or something. and they can go to far from it.

Name: Exploding earth jutsu
Rank: C
Element: earth
Description: the user draw an explosive element to the surface of the earth. like sulfur
The user can direct the substance up to ten feed away from himself. Once it has been drawn to the top of the earth the explosive ground can be triggered by a spark or letter bomb or any thing with fire in it.

komosu kaga wrote:

what what wrong with it
the clone just sustain them self.
i just use some energy to conect them to a tree or something. and they can go to far from it.

Are you even reading your jutsus?


That say's UNLIMITED CLONES,

You'll just GODMOD with it.

I say don't start an arguing situation.

Its DENIED

komosu kaga wrote:

Name: Exploding earth jutsu
Rank: C
Element: earth
Description: the user draw an explosive element to the surface of the earth. like sulfur
The user can direct the substance up to ten feed away from himself. Once it has been drawn to the top of the earth the explosive ground can be triggered by a spark or letter bomb or any thing with fire in it.

APPROVED.

But I'm telling you, not every surface of the earth has a explosive element. Do not try to GOD MOD with this jutsu.

okay thank you sorry.

that not what i meant and usually i just wright them and post the jutsu a day after.

Name: energy Life line
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: with this jutsu the user can create clone and attack a cord of energy to another living subject And dose not have to expend any energy sustaining them. . a tree for exampled. They attach a cord of energy from the clone to another living object. A human can cut the cord easy.

it takes energy to make them right.
i guessing its still to complecated for me to learn