Laws Jutsu

Kouasshuku - High Pressure
Rank: A - S
Element: Water
Description: After handseals, water will start to spin around Laws hand to form a drill around his forearm to thrust and pierce opponents. The S ranked will be extremely hot, and will be able to penetrate through most defenses of its type. The water spins at about 6000 rpms' and the point is about 5 inchs from the tip of the fingers.

Disclosed Barrier
Rank: A
Element: All
Description: When the needed handseals are formed, the user can make a barrier of elemental chakra from the surronding area. Either from the opponent or from the Law himself, the barrier is extremely duriable and flexible, making it very hard to break. It can only make barriers up to B rank.

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Approved.

Exploding Earth Sharks
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: Law will do handseals, and sharks made of earth will swim towards the opponent at high speeds. The sharks can explode on impact. There can be up to 10 sharks.

5 Sharks Eating
Rank: B
Element: Water
Description: Law will do handseals, and sharks made from water will swim towards the opponent at high speeds. The sharks can explode on impact.

Approved.

Unapproved..it clearly says 5 sharks, and you also need a body of water to complete that technique, at least get the actual definition. Please edit, and its approved. And also I saw at the top that your second jutsu has all for elements, please chance that too. You don't have all elements..feel me?

It takes any element and makes a barrier out of that element. I edited

Noushi - Brain Dead
Element: None
Rank: S
Description: Once the user reachs the 6th, 7th, or 8th gate, he will be able to move at speeds that lead the opponent to double take his moves. This combo of punchs and kicks are extremely hard to dodge, and the assualt will begin with a punch to the gut or a kick to any part of the body. Once started, a lethal amount of punchs and kicks will be thrown at the opponent like Morning Peacock, leaving them helpless. After 5 seconds of punchs and kicks so fast that they cannot be read, the user will grab hold of the neck. Using the Air Drop technique, he will seem to appear in the air and throw the victim into the ground, shattering bones on impact and travel. The Kaihi'gan's affect to make after images will further confuse the opponent aswell. The move puts the user under extreme strain, making it only usable 1 time in a battle.

That makes no sense Law, how can you take any element and make a barrier if you have no affinity to specific ones. Also, you're Brain Dead move needs a side effect and its approved.

I meant it takes the chakra and reforms it, making a barrier. Its like that pain that could absorb chakra, once it hits a certain point, it can be re-arranged to make a barrier in that spot. So its like a leech, but it just makes a barrier and it doesnt use the chakra in any other way. Alright i'll put a side affect.

You need to make a limit on that jutsu then, it can only do it up to B rank.

Ok

Brain Dead Approved as well as barrier

Rinkai - Critical Pressure
Rank: A
Element: Water
Description: Law will do handseals, and a large drill like body of water will burst from the ground and attack the user. The drill is about 8ft wide can go up to 45 yards. This uses alot of chakra.

Kiatsu - Atmosphereric Pressure
Rank: B
Element: Water
Description: Law will do handseals, and will be able to throw small bodies of water at the opponent. The water will be like a Teppoudama, but in drill form. He can throw multiple drills before having to do handseals again.

Atsuryokuha - Pressure Wave
Rank: A
Element: Water
Description: After doing the needed handseals, Law will emit a large amount of water from his stomach. There will be enough water to cover the whole field. But the water will pressurize into a small blast like drill, covering a large amount of area and doing major damage to anything in its way.

Eigakantoku - Movie Director
Rank: B
Element: none
Description: Law will be able to act out whole moments of a battle field. Using his Kaihi'gan, he will be able to form out whole situations. With his ability to make after images of himself, he will be able to throw his image out for long periods of time, and be able to act out large portions of talking or fights. If the image is hit, the trick would be up.

Nirenjuu - Double Barrel Gun
Rank: B
Element: All
Description: At the end of any technique that is thrusted by hand, or engulfs a person, two large blasts of that element will come from either side of the opponent. The two blasts would be smaller then the attack itself, but the two blasts are strong enough to do more damage then before.

Sensuikan - Submarine
Rank: D
Element: Water
Description: After handseals, the user will be able to move extremely fast underwater. The way a ninja is able to hold himself ontop of water is exactly how this jutsu works. Chakra will be stored at the feet to propel instead of stabilize and stand.

Can I use the Hydration Technique?

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Are you serious..3 times on the Brain Dead tech..its S ranked. The 2nd should make you immovable. S ranks are supposed to be like one hit things..they take coniderable amount of chakra. And I mean alot. Make it 1 time.

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What about the rest of my jutsu?

I thought opening the 8th Gate would totally kill you?


And about your other jutsus,

Rinkai - Critical Pressure
Rank: A
Element: Water
Description: Law will do handseals, and a large drill like body of water will burst from the ground and attack the user. The drill is about 8ft wide can go up to 45 yards.

This should have a drawback. likewise from your chakra pool, jutsus that pops out from nowhere takes a lot of chakra.

Kiatsu - Atmosphereric Pressure
Rank: B
Element: Water
Description: Law will do handseals, and will be able to throw small bodies of water at the opponent. The water will be like a Teppoudama, but in drill form. He can throw multiple drills before having to do handseals again.

APPROVED

Atsuryokuha - Pressure Wave
Rank: A
Element: Water
Description: After doing the needed handseals, Law will emit a large amount of water from his stomach. There will be enough water to cover the whole field. But the water will pressurize into a small blast like drill, covering a large amount of area and doing major damage to anything in its way.

This would surely hit you too, you say covering the whole field, and this should be S-Rank and takes a lot of chakra to release that kind of water, only Kisame was able to do that in the anime(I think).


Atsuryokunabe - Pressure Cooker
Rank: A
Element: Water and Earth
Description: The user will capture the opponent in water like Water Prison no Jutsu that can come from nowhere. After the needed handseals, earth will break from the ground and cover the opponent, then spin around in all directions to leave the opponent in shreads. The earth can consume the body riddled trap, and leave no trace of the victim.

DENIED(Will cause instant death)


Eigakantoku - Movie Director
Rank: B
Element: none
Description: Law will be able to act out whole moments of a battle field. Using his Kaihi'gan, he will be able to form out whole situations.

Explain further

Nirenjuu - Double Barrel Gun
Rank: B
Element: All
Description: At the end of any technique that is thrusted by hand, or engulfs a person, two large blasts of that element will come from either side of the opponent. Doing extra damage.

Explain further,

Sensuikan - Submarine
Rank: D
Element: Water
Description: After handseals, the user will be able to move extremely fast underwater.

Explain how can use move extremely fast underwater.

It does after you do it. For the Pressure Wave, Law has large chakra pools for that too, and he would just ride the waves like Kisame lol. I dont think it should be S ranked, seeing as the Kisame techinque isn't. Edit on all of them except that one.

Rinkai - Critical Pressure
Rank: A
Element: Water
Description: Law will do handseals, and a large drill like body of water will burst from the ground and attack the user. The drill is about 8ft wide can go up to 45 yards. This uses alot of chakra.

APPROVED

Atsuryokuha - Pressure Wave
Rank: A
Element: Water
Description: After doing the needed handseals, Law will emit a large amount of water from his stomach. There will be enough water to cover the whole field. But the water will pressurize into a small blast like drill, covering a large amount of area and doing major damage to anything in its way.

I know its not S-Rank, but Kisame wouldn't be able to do it without his massive ( I mean MASSIVE ) chakra pool which can be compared to a jinchuuriki. Still it would quickly drain your chakra faster than you cant think, covering the whole field is a large area. So please add the drawback.

Eigakantoku - Movie Director
Rank: B
Element: none
Description: Law will be able to act out whole moments of a battle field. Using his Kaihi'gan, he will be able to form out whole situations. With his ability to make after images of himself, he will be able to throw his image out for long periods of time, and be able to act out large portions of talking or fights. If the image is hit, the trick would be up.

Is the image like Kage Bunshins?

Nirenjuu - Double Barrel Gun
Rank: B
Element: All
Description: At the end of any technique that is thrusted by hand, or engulfs a person, two large blasts of that element will come from either side of the opponent. The two blasts would be smaller then the attack itself, but the two blasts are strong enough to do more damage then before.

APPROVED

Sensuikan - Submarine
Rank: D
Element: Water
Description: After handseals, the user will be able to move extremely fast underwater. The way a ninja is able to hold himself ontop of water is exactly how this jutsu works. Chakra will be stored at the feet to propel instead of stabilize and stand.

APPROVED

Just noticed his app is not even approved yet. This is on lockdown till its approved. I mean whats the purpose if it not even approved yet.