Marubeni Torajiro [finished]

~General Information~

Name: Torajiro Marubeni

Nickname/Alias: Beni

Weight: 132.4 lbs.

Height: 5'6"

Age: 13

Gender: male

Appearance:

Spoiler:

Clothing: shown in picture

Personality: Beni can be a very playful kid, especially when he hangs out with girls. Although he is small for his age, he does know how to do tremendous things. He is very charming, and yet, childish. When it comes to fighting he is very serious, and never takes something for granted.

~Clan Information~

Clan Name:

Kekei Genkai: Crystal Release

Clan Symbol:

Clan History:

Ability Summary:

~Rank/Village Information~

Classification: Chuunin

Letter Rank: C

Village: Konohagakure

~Skill Information~

Skill Specialty: Genjutsu, Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinity: Earth/Crystal release

Special Characteristics: none

~Jutsu~

Name: Jade Crystal Labryinth
Rank:
Element: Crystal
Description: his technique is solely used by Guren, and is possibly one of her strongest attacks. First she creates a number of crystal flowers. Then she grows these flowers into a gigantic labyrinth consisting of red crystals, confusing all enemies inside of it. The enemies will mostly be lost because of the fact that the red crystals reflect their personal image as well as generates mirror images of the routes, paths, and details within the labyrinth, confusing and intimidating them. It is even capable of confusing the Byakugan.

Because of the crystal's stable molecular structure, a simple attack focused at one point is rendered useless, as its wide surface will evenly disperse the force of the attack, reducing the attacks effectiveness. To overcome this technique, an attack thats impact force is already both wide and powerful is required to smash through it.

Name: Crystal Release: Shuriken Wild Dance
Rank: none
Element: Crystal
Description:The user surrounds them self in crystal particles and then condenses them all into numerous shuriken which are then launched at the opponent.

Name:Crystal Release: Divine pathway jutsu
Rank: none
Element: crystal
Description This jutsu will create a long stream of sharp crystals to bind or pierce a target

Name:Crystal Release: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon
Rank:none
Element: crystal
Description: The user crystallizes a material in the area, and then turns it into a dragon. It can be used as a means to travel or to attack a target. Several dragons can also be made and manipulated at once.

Name: Sly Mind Affect Technique
Rank:C
Element:Genjutsu
Description:This jutsu causes the enemy to walk around in circles for hours by making it seem as if they're walking straight to their desired destination. The enemy eventually becomes exhausted after traveling the same path over and over

Name:Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique
Rank: C
Element: Genjutsu
Description: This jutsu changes the appearance of a nearby object or area in order to disorient the opponent.


~History/RP Sample~

History/Background Story:
Sealed on the Inside:
When the monstrous demon fox, Kyuubi, attacked konoha many years before, the great shinobi village fought hard against it while little newborns slept safely in their nurserys. But when the fox was not defeated, the two ninja, their names unknown, sealed the demon fox inside of him. The racket they made awoke the children, as on child slept softly in his bed, a glowing seal mark on his stomach, his name, Marubeni Torajiro.
Childhood Arc:
When Beni, a young boy was about the age of four, he noticed he was looked upon differently than the other children. This puzzled him and in a way depressed him for a while.
When he was seven, he entered the ninja acdemy, failiing nie time and taking the classes over and over again. Until on day, when he was fourteen, he passed.
Genin Arc
When Beni was a Genin, he was dispatched on his first D rank missions. These missions were fairly hard, and he decided right away to train for the chuunin exams.
Chuunin
When Beni was a chhuunin after taking the mind battering exams and barely making it out alive. He decided he would stay that way for a while. He had no idea he was the host of the nine tailed fox yet, until he was facing three akatsuki and he was only able to defeat them all by releasing his tails. When he defeated them, he went unconcience only to wake up in the hospital.

Roleplay Sample:

As Beni walked in the field, the green and beautiful grass just reaching his waist level, he could smell the great scent of pine not too far off in the forest ahead of him. He was there to find the man, the man who allowed the nine tailed fox free, the man who sealed the demon fox inside of him.
As he neared the forest's edge, its shadow blocked most of its light. He took a deep breath, and stared into the darkness ahead, to see if there was any such movement that seemed hostile.
He suddenly felt a different chakra presence from behind, that of taijutsu.
He slowly turned his head so only his left eye peeked from under the hodd he had on, he saw the distant figure closing in from a mile away. He sighed, why couldn't people just leave himself alone? He pivoted on one foot and faced the figure from the other direction, apparently the hunter had just became the hunted, he noticed the black cloak and cloud paattern on it, he knew instantly it was an akatsuki. "Oh joy..." he muttered to himself.
he prepared his hands to do some fast handseals and a jutsu off the top of his mind.
As the figure got closer, he noticed the byakugan eye from under the bangs of hair had shown, this put a shiver through his body and spine.
He did some handseals, and yelled "Crystal style: Jade Crystal Labryinth!" and a a labryinth was trapped in a labryinth, not even his byakugan would work now...

Clan name? History? Need all of that.

You will need a much bigger history then that. And add ranks to those rankless Jutsu, also fix what Kyogi said about the Kekkei Genkai. For crystal, you most likely need wind, and earth as main elements, and Crystal would come in as your sub element

Remove the Bijuu history. You can not have the Nine Tailed Fox.