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~General Information~

Name: Ryuku Gama

Nickname/Alias: The Forgoten swordsman

Weight: 143lb

Height: 6"4

Age: 16

Gender: male

Appearance: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen 267714 Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Talent
Ryuku on normal days wears a black suit with a red rose out of his shirt pocket and his buttons are blood red and usually has black fingernails he has broad shoulders and green eyes and sparkly white teeth. he has a black wristwatch and the hour and minute hands on it are all red. Then when he goes in to his armored outfit he has half of his face covered just like in the photo and black under his armor with cloth then over it. He looks like he could be a emo and looks like he could be a vampire but looks can be deceiving (LOL I have always wanted to say that) because he can be very funny and serious. ryuku usually has his sword on his back and he usually is very nicely dressed. his favorite suit is his black once lined with thin red lines. sometimes he puts in these fake fangs to scare people and also fake claws but he also has real claws that he can equip to his fingernails so you will never know.

Ryuku has broad shoulders and a strong look. he is very skinny and he has pretty tone mussels. he has a spiky belt with a emblem of his clan inside of it. he sometimes has his grayish black hair over one eye he kind of has the itachi lines under his eyes but his face would be more like ^/_\^ then -/_\- he usually has a happy face on his and he sometimes wears just casual clothes like baggy shorts and a tight shirt any color or a mix of colors. He does copy off of neji's bandaged arm and yes both of his arms are covered up. His bandages however are multi colored they are black and white. and also he usually wears the black ninja shoes.

Clothing: Armored and spandex and cloth

Personality:
Ryuku is a nice person who is a little hyper and spunky and does not care about anything even the akatsuki. Ryuku loves food and he likes to be around people but what he can not stand is when people wont fucking shut up. Ryuku likes to sleep and he is a leader not a follower. He is a fighter who will never give up. He does not like to work on papers much he likes to be outside in the open air. Ryuku does have a dark side but this does not happen often he is just is very quiet sometimes. He is really laid back but his attitude changes alot and sometimes he gets very pissed and also he is serious at some times but always has some since of humor.Ryuku also has one other side of his personality he is quiet and non responsive and will never move. he just sands there and moves and started you to death this usually happens if he was drinking last night or he was fighting really really hard all night. He can get out of this easily but when he is in this stage he usually does not want to get out because he is technically not conscious. But there is one more personality that ryuku is having a lot. He gets a little emo. usually when he is just walking around that is what he acts like because it is usually morning and he hates mornings. anyway while he is in that personality he gets really wuiet and moves alot more smart and thinks more about what he is doing but still in away looks lifeless. )

~Clan Information~

Clan Name: Gama

Kekei Genkai: Art of explosion

Clan Symbol:Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Triplezix2 Without HACKED

Clan History: Unknown

Ability Summary: This clan uses explosive chakra as a variant of fire chakra. The fire chakra transfers into explosive like abilities similar to those used by Deidara and his explosive chakra bombs. The other ability also similar to Deidara is to control most malleable substances like grass water clay paper etc. Using ingestions of the soon to explain C0 substance the clan member will gain explosive chakra.

C0- The user will ingest this form and suffer heart burn for a moment because of the burning fire like chakra. In this state the user will have increase familiarity with fire chakra and techniques.

C1- The user will gain explosive abilities and will be able to create small detonations without techniques and use explosive chakra to enhance fire techniques with explosive chakra.

C2- The user will gain the ability to light things on fire by touch and create small detonations without techniques and with increased fire chakra techniques.

C3- The user will gain the ability to expel small amounts of fire from his body and create 5 square foot explosions with techniques with fire techniques increased in power by one letter rank.

C4- The user loses the ability to use other elements is lost. The user can expel large amounts of fire from any body part. The user can create explosions that are 15 square feet from his body. Fire techniques are increased above one letter rank.

~Rank/Village Information~

Classification: chuunin

Letter Rank: B

Village: Mist

~Skill Information~

Skill Specialty: Nin tie

Elemental Affinity: Water, Fire

Special Characteristics: ...

~Jutsu~


Name: Water bomb
Rank: A
Element: water
Description: this makes any one drop of water blow up and then if another one is close by it blows up to and so on and so on. The explosion are about half of a paper bomb explosion. Or if there was a whole puddle of water they can make it blow up or even a pool of water. all depends on how bog the water source is that blows up first.

Name: Pool
Rank: B
Element:water
Description: Marked the whole playing feild covered in clear water

Name: Black water
Rank: c
Element: water
Description: simply makes black flammable. water form out of the earth and wet the ground.

Name: Breath
Rank: B
Element: water
Description: Makes gills on his neck and they work perfectly.

Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current Technique
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Anime Only
Suiton • Daibakuryuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.

Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.


Mizu Kawarimi - Water Replacement
Rank: B
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Special Note: Movie Four Only
Ninpou: Mizu Kawarimi is a Ninjutsu technique used by Shizuku under the influence of Yomi's evil medically enhanced chakra. While in his enhanced form, Shizuku can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks.


Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Suiton • Baku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Kisame will expel water from his gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water. Being from the Water Country, Kisame is at home with this type of jutsu. He can control the water by riding on top of the waves.

Doku Kiri - Poison Mist
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Ninpou: Doku Kiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Shizune. This technique allows Shizune to expel poision gas from her body. This can serve as cover to escape and as an offensive technique against her opponent.

Haran Banshou - Stormy Upheaval
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Haran Banshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Fuuka will create a waterfall to slam into her opponent.


Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Supplementary
Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Izumo will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows Izumo or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.

izu Kamikiri - Rising Water Cutter
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Movie Four Only
Suiton • Mizu Kamikiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. To utilize this technique, Shizuku will first be under the influence of Yomi's evil medically enhanced chakra. This will grant him Water chakra. He will then slam his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.

Moguragakure no Jutsu - Mole Hiding Technique
Rank: C
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Doton • Moguragakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to burrow into the ground and hide out of sight. This allows them to avoid attack or travel underground. Tobi used this jutsu to place Deidara's C2 Doragon spheres underground.

Oiroke no Jutsu • Onna no Ko Doushi & Otoko no Ko Doushi - Sexy Technique • Girl Companions & Guy Companions
Rank: D
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Oiroke no Jutsu • Onna no Ko Doushi no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Konohamaru. After learning Kage Bunshin, Konohamaru further refined his Oiroke no Jutsu. Konohamaru will first create a Kage Bunshin, and then each will transform into a voluptuous young woman who will press their bodies together seductively. Konohamaru claims the jutsu is used to distract his target, giving it a worthwhile purpose. Sakura claimed that only perverts like Konohamaru and Naruto would fall for the jutsu. So he used another variation "Otoko no Ko Doushi" involving a naked Sai and Sasuke, which revealed Sakura's true perverted colors as well.

Oiroke no Jutsu - Sexy Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Oiroke no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Uzumaki Naruto. This technique is a variation of the Henge technique. Naruto changes his form into that of a nude, sexually appealing young woman. This technique is normally used to titillate and knock unconscious perverted adults or get Naruto's sensei Jiraiya to do what Naruto wants.

Suigadan - Water Fang Projectile
Rank: Unknown
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Suigadan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals to cause a nearby body of water to form a spinning drill.


Suihashu - Water Wave Hand
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Special note: Anime Only
Suiton • Suihashu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. Yamato will raise his hand into the air and emit a continuous jet of water to disrupt his opponent's attacks. Due to the nature of water, this attack works especially well against smoke based jutsu.


Suijinheki - Water Encampment Wall
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Defense
Suiton • Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack.


Suikoudan no Jutsu - Water Shark Projectile Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Suikoudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals which then causes a column of water to rise from the water and then strike their target.

Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.


Suiryuuben - Water Dragon Whip
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Suiryuuben is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. To utilize this technique, Shizuku will first be under the influence of Yomi's evil medically enhanced chakra. This will grant him Water chakra, which he will use to generate a whirling sphere of water. This sphere can then emit whips of water, which can seek out and impale his target.




Suiryuudan no Jutsu - Water Dragon Projectile Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Suiryuudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then strike their target.


Suishouha - Water Collision Destruction
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Special note: Anime Only
Suiton • Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. Nidaime Hokage does a string of hand seals which then causes a large volume of water to materialize out of nowhere. The water can then be directed at his target.






Suishuu Gorugon - Water Attack Strong Current Torrential Rain
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Movie Four Only
Suiton • Suishuu Gorugon is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. To utilize this technique, Shizuku will first be under the influence of Yomi's evil medically enhanced chakra. This will grant him Water chakra, which he will use to generate a mass of water. This can then be sent towards his target as a biting serpent.


Suitenhoufutsu - Sky and Water Convergence
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Special Note: Anime Only
Suiton • Suitenhoufutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes water to rise from the ground and surround the target. Ruiga can then use this water to drown his target or as a medium to call forth his fish summons. Because Ruiga uses groundwater to create the jutsu, if he is in a rocky area, he will have difficulty utilizing this technique.


Suiun Suishi no Jutsu - Water Transport Dispatch Formation Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Supplementary
Special Note: Anime Only
Suiton • Suiun Suishi no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes a column of water to rise from a nearby water source. This jutsu was the preferred method of fighting a nearby fire by Chuunin.


Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
Katon jutsu such as this are seen as a rite of passage into adulthood for Uchiha clan members. Once the member can manipulate fire, they are finally recognized as no longer being a child.

Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.


Haisekishou - Burning Ash Accumulation
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Haisekishou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed handseals, Asuma will expel an ash from his mouth. This large cloud begin to envelope his foe and when Asuma clicks his teeth, the cloud will ignite in an explosion.


Hibashiri - Running Fire
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Movie Four Only
Katon Ninpou • Hibashiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. To utilize this technique, Gitai will first be under the influence of Yomi's evil medically enhanced chakra. This will grant him Fire chakra, which he will use to generate jets of fire which will race towards his target and surround them. This fire can be made more powerful with the introduction of wind from a wind element attack.
In Shizuku's usage, he will spin and generate a rotating ring of fire, which he will launch towards his target.

Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Character Use: Uchiha Sasuke, Uchiha Itachi
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.


Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Range: Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.




~History/RP Sample~

History/Background Story:


Academy Arc
Ryuku was just a boy and he was soon seeing things in two different worlds and he then started to wonder about this new world. He lived in the mist village and he was just a kid who carried around a sword. he did not know he had any power or anything but he decided to go to the academy to try to find info about this other world he was seeing. His parents where never around and he soon just ran away from them and now he wish he didn't. Once he joined the academy he started to do research and he found about this second world how was seeing and he then found out it was written by his great great great grandfather- Vixas gama. His book talked about the second worlds and when Ryuku left the book after 9 hours he truly understood what power he had. He was in the academy but now he really wanted to be in it once he started actually trying to pass it he learned all the basic stuff and passed it easily but once he graduated he then suddenly went in to the spirit world and saw the spirits of everything around him. he touched the spirit of the girl he had a crush on and then suddenly he was in the spirit world with her and they where looking at each other and she asked what was going on and then ryuku said to let go of your spirit for just a second. Once she did Ryuku found himself looking out of her eyes and in her body and then he exited back in to the spirit world then each of them back in to there own body's. Ryuku then just walked away and to his house and he freaked out but it seemed so awesome. that day a leaf village spy entered the village and got in to the academy and then burnt up the hole academy and then he killed about 5 and one of them was the Girl ryuku liked. He was promoted to Genin as the rest where who survived.

Gennin Arc
Ryuku lived his gennin life in depression and that is how he developed his emo attitude he was just walking around in black and red and sometimes in a suit. He went in the CE and then resisted the urge to kill the gennin form the leaf in there. He then started to do the missions assigned in the CE of course it was hard and he learned many new stuff but being in his emo mood he sometimes did not learn as much as he should have. He had his big fight at the end he used a cupel of jutus and he almost got beaten. ryuku then pulled out his sword and he thrusted it at his enemy who was form the leaf village. he dodged it but then he threw hit sword at him and as it was about to hit him he then ran up to him in rage and angry and grabbed his leg and as he tried to get him off the sword smashed through his skull killing him and leaving the book stained on Ryuku. He stood up over him and looked at him and said in a pissed off voice. "oops i thought you where supposed to dodge that." he walked away and he grabbed his bloody sword and walked out of the CE stadium as a chuunin. He did not look back and he laughed as he went home and cleaned his blade and suddenly he started to become less emo at the days went by. and want back to his normal self. but the Kages kept a close watch on his after killing someone in the CE but they stopped soon because he did not do anything bad for a while.


Roleplay Sample:
{From the CE}
Zein smiled in agreement because he also liked hiding and he loved the quiet approach. Zein then followed behind him walk-in straight up and not making a noise after all he was a master at stealth. Zein followed behind him listening to the walls but heard nothing. Ok this is kind of bogus and he did not mean to be rude just that he was getting very board and also annoyed. Come on there has to be someone around here. Zein then looked around once more and too the lead in-front of Gen happy he had the byakugan (don't know hot to spell that.) because he could lat him to the finding and if needed he could to the assassination. Zein thought about the earth scroll one more time. then he shook his head. no it should not be in the rocks. ein chuckled and tapped gens shoulder and whispered Use you bayakugan in the walls also. Zein said but he didn't believe himself even there. He looked at gen. and thought once more. I wonder how this guy fights. hmmmm Zein then stopped as he thought he heard something. but soon kept walking extra alert. He did not need to be it just felt better being extra alert. Zein then closed his fist and bent his wrist slightly so the slightest agitation would cause his hidden blade to come out. He was also walking more stealthy even though he did not know it he just looked around waiting fro gens answer.


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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeFri 08 Jan 2010, 4:52 pm

how does it look so far
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeFri 08 Jan 2010, 5:24 pm

I don't understand that kkg, explain it more
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeFri 08 Jan 2010, 9:01 pm

Plus you cannot have 3 specialties until Jounin or until you train for one.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeFri 08 Jan 2010, 9:37 pm

Fixed
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeFri 08 Jan 2010, 10:16 pm

Even though Genkou allowed you to have a chuunin app, it doesnt mean your going to get chuunin even though you have this quality of app.

More on appearance and personality.

~Kit-Kun thanks~
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeSun 10 Jan 2010, 4:12 pm

fixed how it look
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeMon 11 Jan 2010, 7:44 am

Good Personality but still lacks the apperance. So yeah improve more and where's the History and RP sample?
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeTue 12 Jan 2010, 7:02 pm

I will add that once all this is good
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how it look now
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeTue 12 Jan 2010, 8:12 pm

Umm try two paragraphs for appearance and explain it a little more.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeTue 12 Jan 2010, 10:51 pm

T.T you could not have picked a worse thing to make me write on more. i am very bad on that but ok ill try.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeTue 12 Jan 2010, 10:55 pm

Two paragraphs? one should be fine.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeTue 12 Jan 2010, 10:59 pm

At least be a bit more discriptive then..
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeTue 12 Jan 2010, 11:05 pm

how that
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeWed 13 Jan 2010, 8:50 am

Good Job Ryuku on the appearance.

Now can you explain the KKG more better?
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeWed 13 Jan 2010, 8:55 am

whaaaa... ok
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeWed 13 Jan 2010, 8:56 am

what should i exsplain
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Put more detail on what that Kekkei Genkai allows you to do, and stuff like that. You can control things in the spirit world..in what way?
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Yeah its a complicated KKG.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeWed 13 Jan 2010, 6:43 pm

hows that
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeThu 14 Jan 2010, 6:30 pm

The summoning of the dead souls has to go, but to me, all it looks like is one really strong, strange Genjutsu.

So, unless anyone else sees any problems with it, you have my approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeThu 14 Jan 2010, 6:38 pm

Ryuku wrote:

Name: Black rain
Rank: c
Element: water
Description: simply makes it rain black flammable rain but this is still water not oil.

Aren't Rain Ninja only Allowed the Rain Release?
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeThu 14 Jan 2010, 6:45 pm

The KKG is unbelievable for me, Soul Connection is a thing that is very hard to do in Naruto.

So please remake the clan into a new KKG.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen   Ryuku chuunin app. Permission given by gen Icon_minitimeThu 14 Jan 2010, 6:46 pm

Oh, yes, right, Remove any rain Jutsu.
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