Hitori Hatake (W.I.P.)

~General Information~

Name:
Hitori Hatake

Nickname/Alias:
None

Weight:
50 kg/110.23 lb

Height:
1.68/5 feet 6.1 inches

Age:
14

Gender:
Female

Appearance:
Her hair is silver and her eyes are light blue.

Clothing:
She wears a gray baggy T-shirt.Her T-shirt reaches until her navel and under it she wears fish-strings.Her headband is tied across her waist.She wears light blue tights and gray shocks which go up her legs.Her ninja shoes are gray and she wears fish-string gloves!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Personality:
She is immature.She has a quick temper and is easily annoyed.She isn't naive and sensitive at all...She can be very stabborn at times but she is a good and loyal friend.She only cares about people who are close to her and who she thinks are interesting.She is spontaneous and always shows her emotions.She is brave and is not afraid to speak her mind.She could be a good leader if she wanted to , but she doesn't.She is very rebellious and creative.She generally is optimistic and trustworthy.She supports her loved ones and is very imaginative.She tends to be sarcastic and respectful.Last but not least she is very curious

~Clan Information~

Clan Name:
Hatake

Kekei Genkai:
None

Clan Symbol:

Clan History:
Ichiro is Hitori's dad and Sakumo Hatake's older brother. He was thrown out of the village but he never talks about it and it is forbidden to talk about it in Konoha so noone knows the truth.He moved to Iwagakure and the Tsuchikage accepted him. There he found his wife ,Eiko, who was too a stranger in Iwagakure. She and her brother, Yuudai, moved to Iwa in order to become Ninja since they were born in a none-Ninja village.She is currently Chuunin and Yuudai is ANBU. Ichiro is a Jounin.

Ability Summary:
Eiko has a Kekkei Genkai which is called Tetsu no Hone. With it the user can pour out of their body ferrum and harden it.They can pour it out of every part of their body.Then it becomes iron. They have to eat ferrum rich food in order to have enough in their body to perform the Kekkei Genkai.Their Kekkei Genkai is easily recognised by the black circles that appear around their eyes.The more advanced users can even change the ferrum's shape. The less advanced users pour out a straight and sharp piece of ferrum which they usually use as a sword. The clan members are usually lightning natured and because of this they can combine their Kekkei Genkai with their elemental affinity.They are impressively skilled in Ninjutsu but , unfortunately, they dont have any talent whatsoever in Genjutsu. Their Taijutsu is above average.

~Rank/Village Information~

Classification:
Genin

Letter Rank:
C

Village:
Iwagakure

~Skill Information~

Skill Specialty:
MAIN:Ninjutsu
SUB:Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Lightning

Special Characteristics:

~Jutsu~

Ninjutsu

E-Rank

Name:Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu (Escaping Skill)
Rank: E
Element: N/A
Description: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Replacement Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu (Cloak of Invisibility Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.

D-Rank

Name: Kai (Release)
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed hand seals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker)
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.


Name:Kage Shuriken no Jutsu (Technique of the Shadow Shuriken)
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description:The Ninja throws with two consecutive Shuriken at the enemy, so that one of the thrown weapons is in the shadow of the other. The aim of this technique is to draw the attention of the opponent on the first Shuriken, so that the enemy only notices the second Shuriken when it is too late for an evasive maneuver.

Name:Kanashibari no Jutsu (Technique of sleep paralysis)
Rank:D
Element: N/A
Description: It is a basic art, where the enemy is paralyzed. After the shaping of the right finger sign, opponents can be captured from a medium to close distance away from that Jutsu. If a teammate is in trouble this Jutsu can be extremely useful.

Name: Sō Shuriken no Jutsu (Shuriken manipulation technique)
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: It is a technique in which the user throws very quickly two giant shuriken on the opponent.

Name:Raiton: Kage Bunshin ("Flash release: Shadow Doppelganger)
Rank: D
Element: Lightning
Description: The user creates a shadow double, who is charged with Raitonchakra. It is therefore like a normal shadow doppelganger but it is not only a visual copy, but it can move.Through the destruction of the clone, the attacker gets into touch with the Raitonchakra and gets paralyzed.

~History/RP Sample~

History/Background Story:
Birth arc
Hitori was born on the 23rd August in Iwagakure. She liked drawing like every other kid in her age but she was blessed with talent.

Acedemy arc
In the Academy she was popular among the boys but hated among the girls.The reason she was hated was because she was always playing pranks on the girls, which is also why the boys liked her. She once saw a brown-blond haired girl sitting all alone on a bench and she just approached her. This was the first and last time that Hitori was nice to another girl.They became friends and the brown blond haired girl,Miya Shizuka, was being accepted and liked by the boys.Hitori wasn't feeling any envy for Miya but she was happy for her.

Genin arc
She passed the exam easily, since she was training like a maniac the night before. She is currently training every day in order to become stronger and surpass her uncle,Yuudai.

Roleplay Sample:
Eiko left Hitori at her brothers house because she had to do some preparings for the Academy since Hitori was going to enroll there in two days.Hitori was sitting in the backyard looking at her uncle who was training very hard in order to perfect a jutsu that she didn't know the name of.
''Hey Yuu,why are you training so hard?You do everything perfect,so why?''Hitori asked confused. Yuudai looked like he wanted to tell her something. Then he decided to tell her and sighed.
''You know Hitori, our family is not from this country,we are strangers. Thats because people don't trust us and tend to avoid us. Because of the appearance of our Kekkei Genkai we are distrusted even more and we are considered freaks .To behave like this is natural for people who are faced with something strange and unique.Back to your original question. You asked why I am training so hard?. Thats because when you are considered a freak in order for others to respect and accept you is to be the best of the best.You are giong to face hard days Hitori.I want you to be strong.'' Hitori's uncle said with a serious expression.
''Wh-''was all Hitori could say because she was cut off by her mother rushing into the backyard.
''Hey honey, I am back! What did you do? Did you have a good time?''Eiko asked her daughter. Hitori was about to respond to her mother but she was cut off by her uncle.
''I was training and she was just sitting there watching me''he said pointing at the chair where Hitori was sitting a few seconds ago.
''Ehh....ok,come on lets go Hitori it's late.Say goodbye to your uncle''she said looking at her brother with a what-did-you-tell-her expression.Hitori ran towards her uncle,hugging him.
''Bye Yuu!!!''While Hitori was hugging Yuudai, he was looking at Eiko with an innocent expression. Eiko grasped Hitori's hand and thy started walking towards their home.
Mhmm...I will be considered a freak, ha? Well, we will see about that...

Much longer history. Full paragraphs in each arc. That's really all I'll say for now

Including appearance, lengthen it.

And about the Clan, if your going to from the Hatake Clan, that isnt they're KKG.

I know that this isn't the Hatake-clan's KKG.
It's Eikos, Hitori's mom who is NOT a Hatake.
Hitori inherited it from her mom (just like hakku)

About the appearance what else should I write? I mean I put a picture and I described her clothes.

Actually Haku (if your talking the NaruCharacter from the series) that guy does have the Kekkai Genkai from the clan itself not just his mother side.

About yours, your last name would be the name of your father. But if your Kekkai Genkai is from your mother, you should put the name of your Mother's name since they have the KKG.

And uhmm, you need a paragraph for appearance even with a picture is must. But for a genin app, adding a 3rd sentence would be enough.

Lastly, please fix the spelling and punctation of words in your app, its also a must.

P.S I haven't checked the KKG itself.

Thank You, Kit.