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| Subject: Daisuke Tenma Sun 20 Jun 2010, 2:01 am | |
| ~General Information~Name: Daisuke Tenma Nickname/Alias: -Terror of Death- Weight: 103lb Height: 5'8" Age: 16 Gender: Male Appearance: Daisuke looks like an ordinary 16 year old ninja. He has a well build body structure, a flat stomach with abs that are just beginning to form. All over his body are various red tattoo markings that represent his clan. They change depending on what Trigger is activated, though under his armor and clothing, they will always be there. Under his eyes, are two red lines that come in from the side of his face. One right above the other, and the one on bottom has another red line that extends down from the center of the line. On his shoulders, he has circular, lightning bolt like pattern. On the bottom of his shoulder designs, extend a jagged line down each of his arms, but only reach his elbows. There are no markings on his back, and on his chest, and partially the top of his stomach is a much larger mark. It is half of a circle, with many gaps inside the line the circle is made out of, and a single line extends from the top center of the circle, down to the direct middle of the half of circle, and a small red dot is at the tip. On each top corner of the half circle, there is a red line that extends up and connects with his shoulder markings. On the top of the half circle, is a full round circle that is connected to the half circle's marking, with a sharp design lining the outside of the smaller circle. Above that is another marking that goes up his chest, and onto his neck, spiking on each side of his neck. (To see his stomach markings, see Trigger: Oblivion's Reaper Appearance) - Spoiler:
Clothing: Daisuke's outfit all depends on what type of weapon he is using from his arsenal, but only main weapons. His clothing and armor adjusts itself to allow the best defense, as well as flexibility for what type of weapon he has chosen. His most common, and main outfit he wears is shown in the picture above, but only when he has his Trigger: Eye Of Oblivion activated, which is also known as his normal appearance, and must commonly used weapon. Personality: Daisuke is a kind, yet straight forward type of person, who can be easily feared by many ninja. He is more of a powerful comrade, instead of a full on leader. He finds it hard to get close to people at times, and due to his shy exterior, has little friends. Though behind the powerful, yet quiet outer shell of this ninja, lies a soft and caring heart for those he likes. As many people say that revenge can be bad, Daisuke has always been the person to accept revenge, and get revenge if revenge is needed. Outside of battle, Daisuke simply hangs around areas, slipping through the shadows, or just out in public wandering around. When it comes to battle, fear has never been a feeling to Daisuke. Ready to charge into any battle if needed, Daisuke puts all his skill into what he does, being sure there is only one survivor. Whether it is him, or the opponent, to him, there is always something to fight for. Be it peace, or war, whichever there is to fight for, he will fight that battle. Never being the jealous type, Daisuke hides his feelings from the public, and rarely shows signs of weakness. Daisuke is a ninja that will get the job done, no matter what needs to be done. Straight forward and to the point. Though Daisuke is a powerful ninja for his rank, he never lets his power get to his head, though he will do just about whatever is needed, or whatever he wants. Being perfect is something he knows he is not, though to make up for his lack in a few areas, he has risen what he is capable to a high point, farther then most of those his rank. ~Clan Information~Clan Name: Tenma Kekei Genkai: Though Tenma means demon, the true reason why the clan is named Tenma was never told to Daisuke. Tenma is the mastery of multiple skills, that an ordinary ninja would only be able to accomplish through at least a lifetime of training. The first ability is known as Trigger forms that only those who have noble blood in the Tenma family are able to use. Trigger forms are almost instant changes in weapons, as well as body clothing and armor, to match what the Trigger form does. For instance, if someone were to activate a trigger form, a black looking aura will immediately cover them, then absorb into them. When the person is visible again, their armor set, as well as weapon will be changed, modified by that Trigger. With such a large KKG, this allows them to have a very large arsenal of weapon skills, and Jutsu to match each weaponry skill. Unlike transformation Jutsu, to change between Trigger forms, it only costs a small portion of chakra, only once. The forms do not require a constant chakra supply, and can be activated until deactivated without blowing constant chakra. The triggers have a 2 post wait time before switching from one, to another. Trigger: Oblivion's Eye- Spoiler:
Appearance Specialty: Kaijutsu Weapon: Oblivion's Eye. A massive, spiked sword with a strange structure, and long handle. There are multiple spikes on each side of the blade, that are slightly bent in the opposite direction as the other side. If a small line of chakra is focused into the sword, the spikes will begin spinning around the two sides of the blade like a chainsaw, moving up, going under the fold at the end of the blade, then going down the opposite end of the blade, then going into the large guard of the blade, only to be brought out the opposite side once again. It spins with enough speed to easily slice through a tree, and slowly through a rock. Despite it;s large structure, the sword is fairly light, and easy to use, until the blades begin to rotate. When they rotate, the sword itself can feel a little wobbly, unless you are skilled enough with it. Armor/Clothing: His armor will have many different plated armor pieces all over his body, and a thick leathery like fabric covering all of his body, and is mostly noticeable. Effects: The user's skill in Kaijutsu will rise an incredible amount, but the users skill in other Trigger weaponry skills will drop an incredible amount. 20% strength increase, 5% speed decrease. Trigger: Oblivion's Reaper- Spoiler:
Appearance Specialty: Scyjutsu Weapon: Oblivion's Reaper. A massive scythe with an odd structure, and set of abilities. The scythe has a long handle, with a spike on the bottom, and a larger spike on the top, with a third spike going off the side of the top of the handle area. On the opposite side of the spike is where a black metal extends out, and the blade is formed. Despite the size of the scythe, it is the most easy to use of the Trigger weapons, and is very light. If a small chain of chakra is focused into the scythe, it will allow the user to connect a string made of chakra into the back of the scythe's handle, for long range attacks, as well as short range. Armor/Clothing: Daisuke's armor in this form, will become more dark, and plated. Much higher defense, as well as flexibility, and speed. Each one of his fingers will have large spikes at the end like claws. Effects: The users Scyjutsu will increase an incredible amount, but the users other Trigger specialties will drop an incredible amount as well. 20% speed increase, 15% flexibility increase, 5% strength decrease. Trigger: Oblivion's Contract (Unlock At Chuunin+) - Spoiler:
Appearance Specialty: Dualjutsu Weapon: A more advanced version of the previous Triggers, Oblivion's Contract focuses completely around offense, and speed. Oblivion's Contract uses two dual wield weapons, that each have two purposes. One, long range. Two, close range. The yellow blades in front of the weapon are meant for close range, while the barrel of the weapon is for long range. If chakra is focused into the weapon, depending on what the userneeds will happen. For close range, the yellow blades will extend, and become more sharp. For long range, the chakra will be focused into the barrel, then will shatter into small solid pieces, then each piece will be shot out one at a time similar to how a gun works. Armor/Clothing: When this trigger is activated, the users armor will turn into complete cloth. With a huge drop in defense, though it gives the perfect balance between flexibility, speed, and offensive attacks. Unlike the previous triggers, this Triggers armor has no plate on it, and is a lighter color instead of the same dark colors the previous Triggers have. Effects: While in this Trigger, the users skill in Dualjutsu will rise an incredible amount, but the skill in the other Trigger's will drop an incredible amount as well. 35% speed increase, 10% strength decrease, 25% flexibility increase. 10% attack speed increase. Trigger: Oblivion (Unlock At Jounin+) (Unknown Trigger) - Spoiler:
Appearance Specialty: Kaijutsu (Said to be the true Kaijutsu, and the true form of the Tenma) Weapon: Unlike the previous Triggers, this Trigger has never been shown before in the clan. This Trigger is the specific reason why the clan name is Tenma. The only weapon this Trigger uses is a long sword, that holds an odd design to it. Decorated with metal black wings forming different parts of the blade, as well as two long red scythe like blades that stand tall off the end of the sword. As well as 3 spikes on the tip of the blade, and a red spike cross like simbol on the back, right behind the two red scythe blades. On the back of the handle hangs a small chain, with a symbol connected to it, for unknown reasons. Armor/Clothing: When this Trigger is activated, or if it ever activated itself, when the user does not have control over it, they will be engulfed in a solid flame, from head to toe, then once they become visible, their appearance will be changed. They will have no Iris in their eyes, and it will be completely white, even without a pupil. Their armor will be incredibly thick, with a evil demonic looking design to it, as well as long claws on both the fingertips, and feet. They will have 3 long tails behind them, giving off a "Bijuu" presence. Effects: When this form is first introduced, it is as if a demon has completely taken over their body, and is on a destructive rampage. The actual user will be in the mind of the demon, chained up to a large rock, with searing flames below them. The only way to take control of this form, and use it as a regular Trigger is to break free of those chains, and allow yourself to fall, and be engulfed y the flames below in your mind. 50% strength Increase, 10% speed increase, 25% defense increase. Info: This form has never been shown to the Tenma clan, and has never been activated for some strange reason. The Tenma knew of this form, though they knew better then to activate it, for they knew that chaos will reign if this form got the better of them. So, due to that, it has forever been banned from the Tenma clan, and only told to those who are capable of reaching such a level, of activating the form. After using this form, upon exiting it, the user will feel completely stressed, and as if they had been battling for days. Clan Symbol: There is no true symbol of this clan, though the members do have strange red marks on their body. Often on the stomach, shoulders, face, and sometimes legs or feet. Clan History: The Tenma was a clan of weaponry specialists that had an outrageous skill with weapons. They had traveled the countrysides for as long as one can remember, though what is not known of most current day Tenma, is that during those travels, they had stopped at a strange village hidden in the shadows. The village gave off an evil aura, though it had the ability to attract those who spot it for some odd reason. The Tenma had no choice to investigate this village, because it wasn't a village marked on their map, and the village's evil presence attracted few of the members into it. Upon entering the village, they encountered many strange creatures that attempted to attack them, but were no match for their skill in weapons. The more creatures they slayed, the closer they got to the center of the village. Upon reaching the center of the village, they encountered a much larger creature, that had the appearance of a black shadow with red eyes. In an attempt to slay it, the clan members, all but the leader charged it, though they were easily swiped away by a powerful blast of power from the being. Knowing he was no match for the demon, the Tenma stood his grounds, and questioned the demon as to what this village is, what these creatures are, and what exactly is going on. The dark being kept it's mouth closed, though after a while of quietness, it finally began to speak. In a strange demonic language that he, nor the other clan members could understand. After the being finished talking, it flashed before the clan members very eyes. When the Tenma came to, there was only one left, who held strange abilities that matched each of the Tenma clans members abilities. What had happened, was the demon fused all the Tenma clan members into one, as well as itself with them. When the only member awoke, the village was gone, as well as all the creatures that inhabited it. Continuing the travels of the previous Tenma, everything had seemed as if nothing had really happened, like it was all a dream. Though the only thing that remained true was that only one tenma was left standing. From there on out, the Tenma clan expanded, learning how to use the powers they were given, and learning that the powers passed down through birth as well. There are very few members of the Tenma Clan now. Ability Summary: Trigger Forms, high skill in weapons. ~Rank/Village Information~Classification: Chuunin Letter Rank: B Village: Konoha ~Skill Information~Skill Specialty: Weaponry, Ninjutsu (Kaijutsu, Scyjutsu, Dualjutsu) Elemental Affinity: Lightning, Earth Special Characteristics: Flaming chakra that can appear as an array of colors. (See appearance for a view of what it looks like) ~History/RP Sample~History/Background Story:Birth ArkDaisuke was born as a regular child of the Tenma Clan, during one of the groups yearly travels. Though he is a regular child, he is a direct son of the current leader of the Tenma group, giving him noble blood in the family. After 4 years, Daisuke grew up to be a very skilled ninja with the Tenma clan, and quickly earned all of the clans respect at such a young age. At the year of 5, the clan began one of the yearly travels once again. Stopping at random villages, taking short breaks in some places. Though this year was the year to widely expand the Tenma group. They would leave one member of their group, in a random village they passed by, in hopes for the group to expand there. Genin ArkDaisuke, though he was royal blood, was left at the village hidden in the leaves. Konoha. Royal blood would be the best way to expand the family directly, or so they thought. Daisuke did not want to leave them, for it was hard for him to make friends, and adjust to others rules and areas. As much as he tried to stay with the group, they had no choice but to abandon him in Konoha, and leave as fast as they could one night. Though he was accepted into the village, he never seemed to like it, or the people there, and always separated himself from the others. Being at the age of 5, and with his current knowledge, and skill level, he was promoted directly to Genin. After being a normal Genin for a while, doing team missions, he began to lighten up about the village, and began getting use to everything that was going on around him. He was an incredibly skilled ninja, and even led multiple groups of Genin through missions. Chuunin ArkAfter passing the Chuunin Exams with flying colors, Daisuke was personally graduated to the rank of Chuunin by the Kage's themselves. He did an outstanding performance, in using his born abilities, as well as what he had learned through his years of being in the leaf village. He became more friendly with others, though he still feels as if his clan abandoned him, as if they didn't want him. Daisuke had remained a Chuunin for years, not worrying about becoming a Jounin. His skill rose to a point where, if he wanted to, he could be approved of becoming a Jounin, though at this point he never really worried about it.
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| | | Hitogoroshi Chuunin
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Sun 20 Jun 2010, 7:16 pm | |
| = =''' no such thing as a high B. only B-C. please change that. where are your jutsus? | |
| | | Revy Izumi Missing-Nin
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Sun 20 Jun 2010, 7:25 pm | |
| It is B rank, he;s just slightly better then an average B rank Chuunin. Ryusaki said it was alright, since I'm in the Leaf VIllage to.
And I'm gonna add my jutsu later. | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Sun 20 Jun 2010, 7:26 pm | |
| I'm not even going to go on until a full paragraph for a appearance is written, mainly because the only other thing that I may have issue will most likley be power based. | |
| | | Hitogoroshi Chuunin
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Sun 20 Jun 2010, 7:30 pm | |
| the fact that you are better than b rank makes you a rank. so please remove that. B is B. A is A. if you are b rank, you cannot be higher than b | |
| | | Revy Izumi Missing-Nin
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Sun 20 Jun 2010, 7:32 pm | |
| Kamoku, not every B rank is equal, nor is every A rank. There will always be that one that may be slightly better then the others. If what your saying is true, then what is the point in having Chuunin exams? All genin are equal, aren't they? None is more stronger then the other. None is faster then the other.
They are completely equal. | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Sun 20 Jun 2010, 7:38 pm | |
| i know, but when they turn chunnin they are all B rank. the only range of power they have is in their jutsus which makes them different. so please change it. | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Sun 20 Jun 2010, 7:40 pm | |
| No, they also have other advantages over other Chuunin in ranges of speed, and simply pure skill. Jutsu isn't the only thing that makes a ninja different from another one Kamoku.
And i added an appearance | |
| | | Hitogoroshi Chuunin
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Sun 20 Jun 2010, 9:22 pm | |
| are you refusing to change what i ask in order for you to be approved? | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Sun 20 Jun 2010, 9:27 pm | |
| He is B rank. I simply stated that he is better then the average B rank Chuunin. | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Sun 20 Jun 2010, 10:31 pm | |
| = ='' remove high B. just B. you can say then he's better than a b rank in special characteristics. | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Sun 20 Jun 2010, 10:32 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Sun 20 Jun 2010, 10:35 pm | |
| finally. you have my approval | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Sun 20 Jun 2010, 11:58 pm | |
| I say the Tenma things need a drawback. Just those last two. | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Mon 21 Jun 2010, 12:08 am | |
| The Oblivion's Contract does have a drawback..it lacks major defense. It;s all about speed, and offense rather then a perfect balance.
As for the last one, that is similar to a demonic form. I added a drawback to it. | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Mon 21 Jun 2010, 6:18 am | |
| I tried to get away with a high-leveled Chuunin before, but you forced me to change it Revy. Now your trying to get away with it? Saying it is perfectly normal, when you told me the opposite? Hehe....funny.
Oh, but I'm afraid you can't have this character. You have more than 3 characters.
1. Mizure
2. That demon humanoid with the really long name(started with a "Sh").
3. That other Jounin you made, unless I'm mistaking this one with one of Ryu's characters.
4. And Sora, who is still alive. Remember, locking characters is against the rules. | |
| | | Revy Izumi Missing-Nin
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Mon 21 Jun 2010, 4:17 pm | |
| Alright Riku, you wanna play hardball, i will to.
1. The demon girl has been out of the plot for far to long. She is inactive.
2. Mizore is Sora's "Remake"
3. I don't have another Jounin.
Also, how about reading all the posts instead of hoping in with your own post that has nothing to do with where this app is currently at. | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Mon 21 Jun 2010, 4:18 pm | |
| She is your character, so it is your job to make her active. | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Mon 21 Jun 2010, 4:22 pm | |
| ..I already did. So, is this approved or not? | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Mon 21 Jun 2010, 4:31 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Mon 21 Jun 2010, 4:50 pm | |
| Oh wait..he's right..you do have three. You may say shes inactive..but that brings up the point why get another one.
Mizore cant be a remake of Sora...not understanding what your getting with that.. | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Mon 21 Jun 2010, 5:08 pm | |
| We discussed character remakes in the mod section. One remake has no penalties. So, i decided to remake sora into Mizore. Theres nothing against the rules for that, and there is nothing anyone can do to deny that since it WAS allowed.
And Shin is inactive because she doesn't currently fit here anymore. She went inactive a long time ago before there was a rule against locking/making characters inactive. | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Mon 21 Jun 2010, 5:09 pm | |
| Oh..ok I get that much about Sora now your right.
But Shin..shes still your character though. So she still counts. | |
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| Subject: Re: Daisuke Tenma Mon 21 Jun 2010, 5:15 pm | |
| Yes she is my character. But that means i have another character spot open. So is this approved? | |
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