Costum Jutsu's

Suruki wrote:

I'm making sun and moon jutsus for me.

name:Dance of the Moon
rank:c
effect:allows the user to use the power and movement of the moon.

name:Dance of the Sun
rank:c
effect allows the user to use the power and movement of the sun.

name:Sun and Moon Destuction Beam
rank:s
effect:The user moves the Sun and Moon together to shoot a powerful beam but uses half there chakra.

name:Sun blades
rank:c
effect:The user uses chakra to create two blades of fire that is as hot as the Sun.

name:Moon blades
rank:c
effect:The user uses chakra to create two blades of ice as cold as the Moon.

Ok here is my problem with these jutsu.

1. The Dances: You do not say what these jutsu do. You say gives the user the power of the sun/moon but what is that power?
2. Sun Blades: If you had a blade that hot it would melt your hand. Be realistic. Even with the handle cool it would still be to hot.
3. Moon Blades: Same as above.
4. Sun and Moon Destruction Beam: Ummmm. I really just don't get this one.

Name: volcanic erruption
what class are these
Element:magma
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: causes a sprout of magma to erupt from the ground under targets wich are auto selected for chackra points
Downside: posible splater on self or allies causing intense burns


Name: lava gun
Element:magma
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: causes a sprout of magma to erupt from users finger tips


Name: lava sword
Element:magma
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: a sword of magma will erupt from hand in the form of a sword


Name: tiger sumoning
Element: none
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: summons a tiger to fight at dae's side is normal size end of tail is a blade is a great fighter can talk
Downside:chackra usage

i dont no what ranks these are

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dae hemphill wrote:

Name: volcanic erruption
what class are these
Element:magma
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: causes a sprout of magma to erupt from the ground under target
Downside: posible splater on self or allies causing intense burns


Name: lava gun
Element:magma
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: causes a sprout of magma to erupt from users finger tips


Name: lava sword
Element:magma
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: a sword of magma will erupt from hand in the form of a sword


Name: tiger sumoning
Element: none
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: summons a tiger to fight at dae's side is normal size end of tail is a blade is a great fighter can talk
Downside:chackra usage

i dont no what ranks these are

Here's a list of what you need to edit:

1. there is no such element called Magma

2. when you summon animals, its downside isn't just chakra, but also a small amount of blood

3. your jutsu's rank needs to be added

what about my jutsus and my new weapon?

Name: volcanic erruption
Element:fire,and earth
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: causes a sprout of magma to erupt from the ground under targets wich are auto selected for chackra points
Downside: posible splater on self or allies causing intense burns


Name: lava gun
Element:fire,and earth
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: causes a sprout of magma to erupt from users finger tips


Name: lava sword
Element:fire,and earth
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: a sword of magma will erupt from hand in the form of a sword


Name: tiger sumoning
Element: none
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: summons a tiger to fight at dae's side is normal size end of tail is a blade is a great fighter can talk
Downside:chackra usage blood little

I dont know what raks these should be

dae hemphill wrote:

Name: volcanic erruption
Element:fire,and earth
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: causes a sprout of magma to erupt from the ground under target
Downside: posible splater on self or allies causing intense burns


Name: lava gun
Element:fire,and earth
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: causes a sprout of magma to erupt from users finger tips


Name: lava sword
Element:fire,and earth
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: a sword of magma will erupt from hand in the form of a sword


Name: tiger sumoning
Element: none
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: summons a tiger to fight at dae's side is normal size end of tail is a blade is a great fighter can talk
Downside:chackra usage blood little

I dont know what raks these should be

They look like A-Rank jutsu. approved.

Suruki wrote:

I'm making sun and moon jutsus for me.

name:Dance of the Moon
rank:c
effect:allows the user to use the power to use theof the moon and movement of the it.

name:Dance of the Sun
rank:c
effect allows the user to use the power to use the sun and movement of the it.

name:Sun and Moon Destuction Beam
rank:s
effect:The user moves the Sun and Moon together to shoot a powerful beam but uses half there chakra.(the sun move towards the moon and they meet.it after the dances.)

name:Sun blades
rank:c
effect:The user uses chakra to create two blades of fire that is as hot as the Sun when it is thrown.

name:Moon blades
rank:c
effect:The user uses chakra to create two blades of ice as cold as the Moon when it is thrown.

Ok heres the deal.

1. To say it is as hot as the son or as cold as the moon would be impossible. If something were as hot as the sun then the whole earth would burn. Change it to very very hot. Or hotter than normal fire.

2. I kinda understand the Sun and Moon Destruction Beam jutsu now. How about you add in there that it uses the suns rays to burn stuff.

3. I still have no idea what using the power and the movement of the sun/moon does. I mean does it make you faster or stonger or something else. You need to go into more detail.

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ok i got a list so here goes-


Name: Dark medical ninjustu-Ninja Nanits
rank-S
does- creates vast amount of charka eating nanits that can be sent into an enemys body threw a tube made of charka requires blood summonig

name: Lighting Style-Thunder Cloud Barrage
rank-A
does: by sending a bolt of lighting upward Creats a small thunder/lighting cloud that can send lighting down on comand

Dark Summoning tome: Locus
rank-S
does:by using rucanmaru's demon tome and applying blood to the correct page it summons 1 swam of Locus to attack or confuse the enemy also the blood from the locus is very sticky

Deadsoul Justu
rank-S
does: can temporaly bring a dead body's heart beat for 20 seconds that does what the user wants

Dark summoning tome:Maze of the Dead
rank-S
does: creates a maze of dead bodys that is about half the size of a football field the dead bodys cannot fall but can be destoryed requires blood summoning

name:lighting rod justu
rank: B
does: by sending a metal pole or sword into the ground it creates a barrier of lighting

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i know so what i want to know it

its kinda like edo tensai

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it would be pretty cool having a giant marshmellow

cool yes...useful....no

will some1 approve my stuff :(

Rucanmaru wrote:

ok i got a list so here goes-


name: Lighting Style-Thunder Cloud Barrage
rank-A
does: by sending a bolt of lighting upward Creats a small thunder/lighting cloud that can send lighting down on comand

name:lighting rod justu
rank: B
does: by sending a metal pole or sword into the ground it creates a barrier of lighting

Approved. You may only summon 1 locu at a time, so please edit that, and will be good for approval.

what about my other stuff

i didnt want to double post but more stuff-
Water Style-Water Collection justu
Rank A
does-Collect water from the area around the user that forms a ball of water distance:5 meters

Lighting Style: Lighting Sound
rank-B
does:by using a Guitar this drowns out any sound based justu( if someone trys to control the sound the lighting justu will cancel it out)

Summoning:Guitar
rank-D
does: Summons a normal guitar just a NORMAL guitar :lol!: (its really just a normal guitar if you didnt believe me)

Rucanmaru wrote:

what about my other stuff

i didnt want to double post but more stuff-
Water Style-Water Collection justu
Rank A
does-Collect water from the area around the user that forms a ball of water distance:5 meters

Lighting Style: Lighting Sound
rank-B
does:by using a Guitar this drowns out any sound based justu

Summoning:Guitar
rank-D
does: Summons a normal guitar just a NORMAL guitar :lol!: (its really just a normal guitar if you didnt believe me)

Ok here is what i think.

1. The amount of water should depend on where you are.
2. The guitar is impossible...and would do no good. The sound the guitar made would have to be so loud to drown out everything else. Also any smart sound ninja would just use the sound from the guitar in their jutsu and since the guitar can't drown out itself it would backfire. I'm not saying this just because i'm a sound ninja but 1. I can not aprove this and 2. it would not help
3. The guitar summoning is approved.

edit everything else

RasenDoKiirin ( S-Rank)
Minato adds Lightning to a Rasengan by using Chidori Nagashi, and then,uses Susasnoo to create a storm. Once that is done he follows the same process of kiirin but instead of using a Chidori to channel the lightning, he attracts the lightning to his hand using the newly formed orb of spiraling lightning a.k.a RasenDori. As the lightning hits his hand, he launches it towards his opponent in a spiraling motion. This attack also damages him. He suffers major damage to his hand and minor damage's to his body. but RasenDoKiirin is strong enough to break through the shield of Susanoo, as its is as fast and strong as natural lightning.

Minato Uchiha wrote:

RasenDoKiirin ( S-Rank)
Minato adds Lightning to a Rasengan by using Chidori Nagashi, and then,uses Susasnoo to create a storm. Once that is done he follows the same process of kiirin but instead of using a Chidori to channel the lightning, he attracts the lightning to his hand using the newly formed orb of spiraling lightning a.k.a RasenDori. As the lightning hits his hand, he launches it towards his opponent in a spiraling motion. This attack also damages him. He suffers major damage to his hand and minor damage's to his body. but RasenDoKiirin is strong enough to break through the shield of Susanoo, as its is as fast and strong as natural lightning.

hmmm....ummm...i'm going to have to call on an admin to decide on this...thats a lot of jutsu to put together...and it might not be possible...wait until an admin says

ntohing likfe that. See Kiirin is Chidori + Natural lightning, where Nat lighning is the weapon n chidori is usde to channel it. In RasenDoKiirin, he uses a Rasendori instead of a Chidori. So, he sends out an even more powerfull bolt that spirals while attacking the enemy making it faster and stronger

Oshiroku wrote:

Minato Uchiha wrote:

RasenDoKiirin ( S-Rank)
Minato adds Lightning to a Rasengan by using Chidori Nagashi, and then,uses Susasnoo to create a storm. Once that is done he follows the same process of kiirin but instead of using a Chidori to channel the lightning, he attracts the lightning to his hand using the newly formed orb of spiraling lightning a.k.a RasenDori. As the lightning hits his hand, he launches it towards his opponent in a spiraling motion. This attack also damages him. He suffers major damage to his hand and minor damage's to his body. but RasenDoKiirin is strong enough to break through the shield of Susanoo, as its is as fast and strong as natural lightning.

hmmm....ummm...i'm going to have to call on an admin to decide on this...thats a lot of jutsu to put together...and it might not be possible...wait until an admin says

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Who's side are you on?
Anyway, its his trumph card like the Ura Renge is for Rock Lee. It Damages his hand. So he can use it max 2 times till his hand heals.