Battle with ruka

i walk in the forest, while waiting for ruka to be approved

still i wait for ruka to come and fight.

I walk up and sit on a rock take out a apple and eat it

i say to ruka "so, youve come."

yep now be ready to die

"Kuchiyose no jutsu! The art of summoning!" Atama summons up a huge fire dragon!

ooc: i know

that's sad already ruka said

then he does handsigns and you start falling in to a black relm then land on sand and 18 o me come up

Name: flash depth
Type: genjutsu
Rank:B
Description:a genjutsu that when your put in to it every thing goes black and you fall in t a sea of lava then it turns to sand and 18 of me come up and you are immobilized and we take turns hitting you with fire balls
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the dragon flys kayutsa away from the lava.

you are suddenly imobilized and I come up and put your dragon in to the fire while the 18 mes crush you with fire balls

"u forgot" i say "mydragon is a fire dragon!" the dragon flys out of the fire and rescues me!

you cant be moved

i said, the dragon rescues me! first he destroys your doppelgangers and then scratches a hole around me to get me out!

Alright, I'm sorry for interrupting, but you're acting like four year olds. (You know, the whole, "I'm invincible. No I'm Invincible" crap.) Maybe if the two of you put more in your posts, and removed the autohitting, as well as stopped referring to yourself in the first person, you wouldn't have ran into this argument.

ooc: YOU ARE FROZEN IN THE AIR


they come back and kill you

I win you where in my genjutsu to long any way

Ruka wrote:

ooc: YOU ARE FROZEN IN THE AIR


they come back and kill you

That is an autohit... and you just killed him with it. If you two won't smarten up and listen to me (believe it or not, I'm still a staff member) there will be consequences.

remember, the dragon rescued me!

Stop, arguing. The match is over, listen to me.

Both of your RP skills, are absolutely horrendous. From you structure and bickering alone, I'd have to guess that the two of you are probably about eight years old. If you are, that's fine, we can work with you, help you become a decent RPer. If you're not, and more around the teenage era, you should be ashamed of yourselves right now.

well you can help me

Yes, I will help you. Here we go.

1. Write more then one sentence. Other people have to read what you write, and they can't always understand what you mean (Even though it might make sense in your head, it might not in theirs). Another thing is one sentence is boring, not everybody RPs just to fight, some people just like to have fun.

2. Use your character's name. Using I repeatedly gets confusing, and try to use the past tense. Here's an example: Eki jumped on top of the building. Now, doesn't that look better then this: I jump on the building.

3. NO AUTOHITTING. You never, ever, hit another player without giving them a chance to react, it's not fair. Another thing, is you never ever control another character. Don't say what he's doing or what he's thinking, that's the character's owners job. Look at it this way, if me and you are fighting and I do this: Eki jumped down from the top of the building, stabbing Ruka in the head with a kunai, killing him instantly. How fair was that? I just killed you before you posted, and now what do you have to do, go make a new character. Learn to play fair, learn to only play your own characters, they're the only thing that you own on this site.

Those, are the three biggest rules here.

ok thx ^_^

Your welcome.