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Hakaisha Akatsuki
Posts : 253 Points : 299 Join date : 2009-08-30 Location : O_O
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: Village:
| Subject: mandibles blade Tue 01 Sep 2009, 8:15 pm | |
| Name: Mandibles Blade Rank: A Element: Earth, and wind. Requirements: Chakra Weight: 6 Pounds Length: 5ft long Abilities of Weapon: When Null swings the blade the opponent gets knocked back if null misses , if he hits, the blades on the side of this weapon also stab the opponent making it more aganizingly painful. Description of Weapon Appearance: The handle of weapon is longer then the blade itself, though the weapon is very big, it's fairly light. Null must have chakra to unsheath it. Or else its just a blade. Info: Null weapon was crafted by a legendary black smith. Null trained every day with it and started developing its effects of stabbing and swinging. - Spoiler:
Last edited by Null Abarada on Fri 04 Sep 2009, 10:42 pm; edited 3 times in total | |
| | | Shishika no Hyuuga Chuunin
Posts : 231 Points : 439 Join date : 2009-07-28
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: S rank Village: Konohagakure
| Subject: Re: mandibles blade Wed 02 Sep 2009, 3:20 am | |
| I dont really understand the ability of the blade. Perhaps explain it alittle more clearly? | |
| | | Hakaisha Akatsuki
Posts : 253 Points : 299 Join date : 2009-08-30 Location : O_O
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: Village:
| Subject: Re: mandibles blade Wed 02 Sep 2009, 10:50 pm | |
| umm how does that look itami?? | |
| | | .Death Missing-Nin
Posts : 1601 Points : 939 Join date : 2008-07-28 Age : 32 Location : Nishihiroshima, JP.
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: S Rank Village: None
| Subject: Re: mandibles blade Wed 02 Sep 2009, 11:40 pm | |
| No.
This would be Fuuton-attributed. And, taking someone's breath away? Go to a play that'll make you cry, that'll do it. >> | |
| | | Hakaisha Akatsuki
Posts : 253 Points : 299 Join date : 2009-08-30 Location : O_O
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: Village:
| Subject: Re: mandibles blade Fri 04 Sep 2009, 7:59 am | |
| there i changed the effect of the blade tio make it sound more reasonable, instead of suffocating the opponent, it will just knock them back with wind. And the blade doesent clench them and stay there, it will just suck for the opponent when the blade is pulled out of them after the stabbing XD | |
| | | Kostas Retired
Posts : 290 Points : 430 Join date : 2009-06-27 Age : 31 Location : Around the corner...getting beaten up by Ryusaki.
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: X Rank Village: Hidden Sand Village, Sunagakure
| Subject: Re: mandibles blade Fri 04 Sep 2009, 10:44 pm | |
| I see nothing wrong with this weapon.It has its own unique appearance,and it's own "unique abilities".However i would like this weapon be ranked as an A.Change this and I will approve. | |
| | | Kostas Retired
Posts : 290 Points : 430 Join date : 2009-06-27 Age : 31 Location : Around the corner...getting beaten up by Ryusaki.
Shinobi Info Ninja Rank: X Rank Village: Hidden Sand Village, Sunagakure
| Subject: Re: mandibles blade Fri 04 Sep 2009, 10:58 pm | |
| APPROVED.
[NOTE:Saruno's approval counts way more than mine :S ] | |
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