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PostSubject: mandibles blade   mandibles blade Icon_minitimeTue 01 Sep 2009, 8:15 pm

Name: Mandibles Blade
Rank: A
Element: Earth, and wind.
Requirements: Chakra
Weight: 6 Pounds
Length: 5ft long
Abilities of Weapon: When Null swings the blade the opponent gets knocked back if null misses , if he hits, the blades on the side of this weapon also stab the opponent making it more aganizingly painful.
Description of Weapon Appearance: The handle of weapon is longer then the blade itself, though the weapon is very big, it's fairly light. Null must have chakra to unsheath it. Or else its just a blade.
Info: Null weapon was crafted by a legendary black smith. Null trained every day with it and started developing its effects of stabbing and swinging.

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PostSubject: Re: mandibles blade   mandibles blade Icon_minitimeWed 02 Sep 2009, 3:20 am

I dont really understand the ability of the blade. Perhaps explain it alittle more clearly?
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PostSubject: Re: mandibles blade   mandibles blade Icon_minitimeWed 02 Sep 2009, 10:50 pm

umm how does that look itami??
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PostSubject: Re: mandibles blade   mandibles blade Icon_minitimeWed 02 Sep 2009, 11:40 pm

No.

This would be Fuuton-attributed. And, taking someone's breath away? Go to a play that'll make you cry, that'll do it. >>
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PostSubject: Re: mandibles blade   mandibles blade Icon_minitimeFri 04 Sep 2009, 7:59 am

there i changed the effect of the blade tio make it sound more reasonable, instead of suffocating the opponent, it will just knock them back with wind. And the blade doesent clench them and stay there, it will just suck for the opponent when the blade is pulled out of them after the stabbing XD
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PostSubject: Re: mandibles blade   mandibles blade Icon_minitimeFri 04 Sep 2009, 10:44 pm

I see nothing wrong with this weapon.It has its own unique appearance,and it's own "unique abilities".However i would like this weapon be ranked as an A.Change this and I will approve.
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PostSubject: Re: mandibles blade   mandibles blade Icon_minitimeFri 04 Sep 2009, 10:58 pm

APPROVED.


[NOTE:Saruno's approval counts way more than mine :S ]
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