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PostSubject: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 18 Oct 2009, 3:24 pm


General Information:

Name:

Naito Sousha Kumori

Nickname/Alias:

The Unholy One

Weight:

198

Height:

6'1

Age:


23

Gender:

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Kumori Naito has black hair about 6 inches long, and has eyes colored blue. He ranges exactly five feet tall in height, and about 155 lbs. in weight. He wears a black colored shirt, with separated sleeves running down both arms, which are black colored as well. He wears a pair of black colored pants that are fastened tightly by black colored bandages to the lower portion of each leg; this helps prevent his pants from having too much slack. As for footwear, Naito wears the common pair of shoes; his are colored black, with the top part cut out revealing his toes. On the back of his waist, he wears a white colored weapon pouch, which inside of it he stores; kunai knifes, shuriken, paper bombs, metallic coil, and bandages for injuries. He wears a white and blue cloack around his waist and always has a grin on his face.

Hanging on his back, with the handle baring over his left shoulder, he carries his sword. This sword was entirely customized by Naito when his father created it at a younger age. Using certain minerals, he made this weapon to where it is now practically indestructible, thus making it an ideal weapon for a Kumori. Unique to most other swords, inside of this lives the spirit of a demonic bird. While on a mission, Naito fused the spirit of the bird with the sword, in order to save a small village from certain destruction because of the creature. when his father passed away he was given this has a reminder of his father. After a short time had passed, Naito discovered that because of the bird’s spirit, his spiritually possessed sword was able to return to his hand on his command. Naito later named his sword, “Onitori”, which meant, “Demon Bird.”



Personality:
Naito is mosty an introvert, keeping to himself. He rarely speaks, opting more to just give the occasional 'Hn'. He can often be seen staring off into space, daydreaming as some call it. He seems to focus solely on the mission when he is on one, not going off course to save a civilian that is being harassed by thugs, saying, "There is no hero's among ninja's." In battle, he is ruthless, using any underhanded tricks he can to win. Some would say is what ninja's are suppose to be, unlike most ninja's who now believe in honor.

Most don't know it, but he opens up around children, becoming nicer, and even gaining some humor. He laughs and smiles, and does things most would never dream of him doing. This is due to his own childhood, where he rarely was happy at all, and he believes no children should be unhappy at this time in their lives.

Clan Information

Clan Name:

Kumori

Kekei Genkai:

Tenraigan

Clan Symbol:

Two Snakes Rapped Around A Sword

Clan History:

The Kumori Clan was one of the first clans to reside in Kumogakure. During the early years of the village, the Kumori Clan was considered to be the most powerful clan in Kumogakure. The clan was superior to every other clan residing within the village in strength, as well as the amount living members. Unfortunately, as generations passed, the clan gradually lost its superiority. There were exactly fourteen living members of the clan once Naito was born, making Naito the last member to ever have been born into the clan.

When Kumogakure was still young, the clan owned a small residential district. As was needed for the clan, the district had many houses. However, as Kumogakure grew in population, the Kumori Clan was reducing in members. During the time of Sandaime Raikage, the clan downsized, selling off their district to Kumogakure, and used some of that money to build a residential building for the clan’s inhabitants.

Elder Hanjibo, who was Kazaharku’s father, was once the leader of the Kumori Clan. But when his son Kazaharku inherited Tenraigan, he stepped down, placing Kazaharku as the new leader of the clan. As his last decision before he passed on his authority, he ordered that no one was permitted to discuss Tenraigan, unless in a clan meeting, or with the current leader of the clan’s permission. This rule was created to protect the secrets of Tenraigan from becoming well known throughout the world. When Kazaharku died, Elder Hanjibo reclaimed authority of the clan. When Kiseido Yuto killed everyone in the clan, with the exceptions of Ikazuchi and Naito who were both sent away into the care of another village. Naito would become the new leader.

According to legend, the Kumori Clan was chosen by, God of Shadows to be the absolute masters above all at performing Manipulation techniques. It is also said, that when a Kumori proves himself worthy to the God Of Shadows by becoming incredibly strong, he will bless that Kumori by granting him the powers of, “Tenraigan” (Literally meaning, “Havenly Eye”). This is the extremely rare Kekkei Genkai of the clan. Throughout history, only three Kumori Clan members have ever possessed it. Kumori Gendurai, who was the first to have this power, lived when Shodai Raikage served. He inherited these eyes at the age of Thirty-One years and mastered all of its abilities by age Thirty-Three. When he was the age of Thirty-Five years.

The second to ever inherit these eyes was Ikazuchi & Naito’s father, Kumori Kazaharku who lived when Sandaime Raikage and Yondaime Raikage served. He inherited these same eyes at the age of Twenty-Three years old. By age Twenty-Five, he mastered all of its abilities. Naito was sent to Iwagakure as a present from the Kumo Raikage at the age of five, so all the figthning could end. Naito who was the last to inherit these eyes, inherited them at the young age of 12 years. Naito had mastered all of Tenraigan’s abilities a year later at the age of 15 years. Because of this, Naito is definitely the strongest Kumori to ever arise from the clan.What Naito didn't know is that he had a elder brother who was born before him. Ikazuchi was left in the Konoha village during a trip with his family. Naito and his brother were sepreated. Ikazuchi also inherited the eyes when he was young and know uses them for the sake of good unlike his brother.

Rank Information:

Rank:
Legendary Swordsmen

Village:
Kirigakure

Skill Information:

Skill Specialty:
Main-Ninjutsu
Sub-Kenjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main- Raiton
Sub- Katon/Kaibun

Special Characteristics:
Kekkie Genkai- Because of his kekkei Genkai Ikazuchi is able to learn Lightning Justs at a constant rate making his Lightning Attacks a powerful deal. Ikazuchi is even able to learn A rank lightning jutsu in only 2 days. Thanks to this Kekkei Gnekai Ikazuchi has a rough time with other jutus.

History/RP Sample:

~Bio~

Pre-Academy ARC

Naito was born and raised in his current residence, Iwa. He grew up in a family of mostly non-ninja, meaning he he didn't get a lot of training. Naito didn't is true family routes, so he went with what ever his family told him. His family, the Sousha Kumori's were known throughout Iwa due to their new Kekkei genkai, which is becoming more common in the family. They control the heavens, which some say is making it's way into their hearts.

Acdemey ARC

When Naito was of age, he was entered into Iwa's academy. He got good grades, but never seemed to socialize with the other children, opting to sit by himself near the back. Kid's started seeing him as weird, and never approached him. This greatly decreased his social interaction, making Naito not really care much for other people. Even among his own family he didn't get much interaction, mainly because they too had the same thing happen to them as children.

Naito was great in Ninjutsu and was top in all of his classed. The Iwa council spotted Naito to be a great leader. They watch his every movement for signs of new ways to perfect him. Naito started to enjoy school on the coming days of his graduation. He was happy to finally be leaving that hell hole and was ready to become a really ninja. Naito study for his exams and as usual he passed now it was time for his graduation test.

When he graduated the academy, he had to do what all genin in Iwa had to do at the time. Fight one of his classmate's to the death, sort of of like Kumo's graduation exams, but with their bare hands. Naito had no problem doing this. He felt no regrets at killing his classmate. He didn't enjoy it , but he didn't hate it, either.

Genin ARC


He was put on a genin team with a sensei named Garu, Naju, and two other male genin by the name's of Huru, Hitsu and Gaaju, Namida. These people meant nothing to him, really. He had rarely ever spoke to Hitsu and Namida in the academy, and Hitsu hated his guts, though that was understandable, as the one Naito killed was his brother.

The first mission Naito and his team went on was actually a C-Rank, because Namida and Hitsu were both from well-known clans. It was to hunt down a small band of bandits. Their sensei was not able to accompany them. Once they made it to the place where the bandits were supposed to be camped, they were surprised. There was too many bandits for the three genin. Hitsu, thinking he could take on the bandits due to his lineage, jumped down to attack. As Namida tried to help, Naito held him back. They retreated with the sounds of battle at their backs. They never saw Hitsu again.

They decided they would go to the chuunin exams, which at the time were being held in Konoha. They got a new teammate by the name of Raigo. As soon as they got to Konoha, they knew they were not welcome. All the civilians looked down on them, whispering that scum like them should not be allowed in Konoha's exam. In Iwa, it would be the same for Konoha ninja, since their coddling of their genin disgusted most Iwa ninja. They had arrived late, and the chuunin exam would be commencing in about an hour, so they high-tailed it there.

Once they reached the room they had the first exam in, they had 5 minutes left. Naito took notice that they were the only Iwa team there. The first exam was a test, apparently. But the examiner talked too much, emphasizing cheating a little too much. He realized the point of the exam, and so did his teammates. Naito used his kekkei genkai to follow the movements of a persons pencil's. His teammates cheated their own way.

After the exam, there was to be a final question. It would decide his life as a shinobi. Namida didn't and almost raised his hand, till a look from Naito stopped him. Raigo didn't even think of raising his hand. They passed the first portion of the exam.

The second portion of the exam was a survival test. They had to wander a forest for five days, and get a scroll in the process. They received a earth scroll, which was kinda funny. They went to their gate, and when the exam started, they were off like shots. They first encountered a team from leaf. They quickly killed off these pest, though they all received injury, and were lucky to get a heaven scroll. They made it to the tower with little resistance, being able to hide from other groups.

The third part of the exams is what Naito hated. He first had to fight Raigo. If he won, and Namida won, they would have to fight each other in the second round. Kaibutsu sighed. They had purposely put the Iwa genin against each other. His fight with Raigo was first, so he jumped down into the arena.

Raigo was beaten by Kaibutsu, who had much more experience. Namida also won his match, meaning he would have to fight him as well. He watched the rest of the fights go by as if it was a blur, and in no time, he had to fight Namida. He once again jumped down into the arena.

He beat Namida, but lost his round to a kid who just wouldn't give the hell up. He had neon yellow hair and yelled how he was gonna be the Yondaime. The kid had too much speed, and too much stamina, and just kept getting back up. He was surprised when he got back to Iwa and recieved a chuunin vest.

Chuunin ARC

Its been 1 year since Naito recived his chuunin vest, and he was starting to become a sillful ninja. With his missions pilling up for th weeks to come he decided to take one off day and take time to enhance his skills. Naito now 14 was the youngest ever to graduate from his academy and the youngest to ever recive a vest. He was to become a great shinobi in the Iwa village. Naitos tenraigan were starting to become know around the Iwa as his tools of death. Naito started to keep his eyes to himself only using it in an emergency.

One day naito was summoned to the kages office fore an a rank mission if successful naito would become a Jounin an opportunity Naito was not will to miss. His mission was to infiltrate a Kumo hideout and report all there findings. Naito was put on a team were he would have to be Captain something Naito was ok with, but this time he felt as if his life depened on this mission. The team consisted of 4 chuunin Naito, Sisuke, Laura, and Tobi. Sisuke being the cocky one and Lauara neging and a great medical ninja. Tobi was the shy and annoying one. Naito looked at his team to be failures and was happy this mission was considerably easy.

The team headed out the next day on a 3 mile journey. Ounce at the base naito and the others felt a disturbed feeling coming from the base. You could here the souls of ninja crying out from the base. Laura was to scared to go in so Naito left Tobi and her outside to keep watch. Sisuke willingly went in with naito and they recored every thing they found. It was time for them to leave the base and Naito called out to Sisuke he didnt get a reply. He called out agin no reply. naito followed Sisukes chakra flow and found Sisuke staring at a locked gate. Sisuke with a smile on his faced looked towards Naito and threw a kunia at him.

Naito yelled " What the hell is your problem!" Sisuke exclaimed the he wasn't really a chuunin but a Kumo Jounin in descise. Naito was in shock. Sisuke opened the gate and let out a beast with great strength. Tobi and Laura where waiting outside but the foolishly wandered in and found Naito. the beast appeared in front of them and slashed away at them. Naito shield them with his body, and used his Tenraigan to destroy the beast. Sisuke fainted at the site of Naito's power and was returned back to the Iwa village were he was sent to life imprisonment. Naito, Laura, and Tobi were all promoted to jounin.

Jounin ARC

Naito was just promoted to jounin and he was so very excited. 2 months passed and he was assigned a squad of graduates from the academy. Naito was pissed off to be given this job put he was willing to take in the experience. Naito's squad consisted of Kabuaro Uchiha, a young skilled ninja with a great personality and had As all around in the academy, Naito was excited to be teaching an Uchiha expensively one who was born and raised in Iwa. Another one of his students were Sky Moshiro, she was a spirited and colorful ninja she was often seen holding hands with kabuaro here boy friened and always putting down her other team mate Lee. Lee Hakura, Ah.. really theirs nothing much to say about him he was a flunky in the academy failed on several occasions and had the worst grades. Naito wasn't surprised the he would get someone like Lee. Naito was curious on Lees Kekkie Genkai being from the Hakura clan his kekkie genkai allowed him to use lightning and fire combination.

Naito held a meeting with his team and put them through a series of test Kabuaro and Sky did there best and they exceed but Lee failed miserably. They went on there fisrt mission and naito saw alot of compasion in Lee to protect his team mates and he did. Months later Naito was now 15 and he was starting to like his team. He considered them for the chuunin exams, and he personally trained them to the best of there abilities. Naito finally discovered Lee's true power an found ways Lee could utilize his plasma attacks. Kabuaro's Sharingan had came in he was looking great. Everyone would be shocked to see and uchiha from the iwa village. He use of fire tech. were really remarkable and Naito was impressed at how quickly he could rad someones attacks. Sky trained hard and came out to be a great ninja. Her medical skills were impressive and she was really amazing.

During the chuunin exams his team passed every obstacle with flying colors. When they made it to the last aspect of the exams. Lee was forced to face his long time rival Kabuaro there Kekkie Genkais clashed with intense power. In the end it came out to be a draw. Sky reluctenly was able to beat all here oppents and came out on top at the end of the exams. they were all promoted to chuunin and naito was happy with his students.

S-rank Arc
Months later Naito is now 16. Naito was now know around the world as a great ninja for his age, but Naito wanted to become even more sronger. Naito trained everyday for two weeks and he know came across a new technique in his tenraigan. Naito was willing to do annything to become stronger even if it met leaving the village. Naito had read about an organization of S ranked missingng ninja bent on controling to world. He was sure this is what he would have to do if he wanted more power.

Deep with in the Iwa village there is said to be a race of animal ninja that grow to be large in size. Naito heard of this and saw that this could help him in his quest for power. Naito travled deep into the heart of Iwa and was able to bring forth the land of the gainats and reveal there location. Naito was at static he knew that he was sure to become a stronger man when he returned to his village. The Panda's did not like humans at all thats why the went into hiding years ago. The use to roam free but humans would always find ways to control them. when Naito first met the Race of Gaint Pandas he was brougth to the leader of the pandas Hijibo the 4th. Ounce naito explained what he wanted the quickly rejected him, but Naito wouldn't back down. He persuaded them to let him summon one of themin battle but for the price of having to be there servants for the next 2 months as a payment for all the years they have been hutry by humans.

Naito agreed to the worst job of his life, and after months were up he found himself picking out a panda. Naito wasn't intrested in any of the slackers Hijibo picked out. He was intrested in Rin as soon as he spooted him. Naito thougth he was total bad ass and wanted him to be his new partner. Hijibo denied at his pick. He told Naito that he was his son and his name was Rin. naito didn't care he ran over to Rin and spoke with him for the next 2-3 hours. They became the best of freinds. Naito finally found a new freind and they were off back to the village.

Months later his training was complete he was know fit to be called an S class ninja. In his time he fougth of some of the most dangerous ninja. 2 he is most proud of his clash with Kakashi of the Sharingan and his clash with Jiraya one of the Sannin. If he was able to hold his own with them he would be able to join the Akatsuki. Naito was out on a mission when he sensed the presnce of a powerful ninja. It was one oof the Akatsuki members in search of the buijuu. Naito thougth this day would never come now it was his time to face someone of his own calibur. naito quickly stopped the two members and he was able to defeat one the other returned to the Akatsuki.


Rp Sample:

~The Invasion~
The Bijuu's power evaded the surface of the battle field devouring the box. Smoke erupted from the scene and Shukaku saw through the smoke glancing at his nemesis. Evading all current attacks that opposed him, Shukaku's true appearance appeared. The ounce teal chakra tail, became a harden figure. His figure ounce small and weak was now large and muscular. Ounce the smoke cleared the true appearance was unleashed on the sight of his enemies. On all fours his body mimicked that of the Nine Tailed Fox. Standing up Right he looked over the open battle field. His eyes perfected with black and a yellow pupil. With blue markings covering his body. Ancient and mysterious. The battle field crumbled as he opened his mouth in aw...

~Roar Of the Bijuu~
A large chakra force destroyed trees and crumbled the earth. He opened his mouth and a harsh wind blew from his mouth. "I'm Free My Will in under No Human Control. Your Demise Is Unstoppable For Your Crimes Of Injustice, You Will Die In My Cold Fury." With a turbulent laugh trees where knocked over hurdling down on the enemies. Ikazuchi was forced into an unconscious state of mind which had no end. The seal on his body close to begging broken, his body almost consumed by the Bijuu hope for him surving was useless. Outside the inner specimen called Shukaku, he raised his arm to the sky. Watching carefully the lady enemy as she has now air borne. Shukaku roared with massive screeches, which disrupted the hearing and caused massive damage to the are. The charged blast of pure chakra shoot out in a linear path from Shukaku's mouth. The effect of the destructive ray shooting through anything it comes in contact with, causing massive damage.

~Shukaku's Defense~
Ikazuchi on the inside of the beast mimicked its physical battle style, as if he were controlling it, still unconscious to the devouring of his body and the unleashed power of the Shukaku demon he was opposed no threat to Shukaku. This meant the demon inside had better chances of escaping the seal and ounce becoming free. With his armed raised he swirled it in a circular motion. creating a dark cyclone of chakra and wind. This begging the only know attack of Shukaku he has firmed control over all of its power. This attack slowly develops unlike other attacks used by Shukaku, so his iron body works as the perfect defense against any potential threats. Yet if the enemy is able to pierce the build of the demon, he quickly uses his regenerative powers to make his former status.

~Tornadic!: EF0 - EF5~
Maintaining a tornadic cyclone he infused more chakra. Abusive you might say, but to a demon its sheer control and chaotic destruction. He manipulated the cyclone send of harsh winds towards his enemy, blowing them back. The cyclone turned vortex, EF5 - S - 200 - Described as 'Explosive Damage'. Literally lifts structures off foundation and removed them from the area, clearing the area under the vortex of all structures. Deadly flying debree can fly about along the column of the tornado, however so powerful and large, it moves at a crawling speed. Sending it towards his enemy he planned to launch them miles away. Ikazuchi awoke as the massive chakra source was launched. The vortex was under no ones grasp as Shukaku put down his arm.

~Ikazuhci's Escape~
Ikazuchi rejects the power, he wouldn't stand for it any longer. "I won’t allow you to have my body." Regaining conscious he stopped the seal from begining broken. The gates in which the Shukaku was locked was ounce again filled with its body. "You've had your fun, know you need to stop." In anguish Shukaku's laugh turned in to a cry. "Ah......Ah.....Ah..." His teal chakra remained but his features where gone. Ikazuchi replenished his own chakra, before the Bijuu chakra evaporated into thin air. To late for him to stop the destructive vortex which was launched towards his enemies. There only hope was to escape before the slow moving death trap caught them in its grasp.


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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 18 Oct 2009, 3:45 pm

Regular Jutsu

Kekkie Genkai

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Basic Jutsu

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Raiton Jutsu

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Advance Jutsu

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Summoning Jutus

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Katon Jutsu/ Un-Favored Jutsu

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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 18 Oct 2009, 6:07 pm

-dragon summonings are not allowed, you must have one species of summonings.
-Please tone down your KKG, no auto hits.
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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 18 Oct 2009, 6:10 pm

Senjutsu is banned.
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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 18 Oct 2009, 6:19 pm

Ok

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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 18 Oct 2009, 6:35 pm

Also you are allowed to have two S-rank jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 18 Oct 2009, 6:46 pm

kay. let me check what S ranks I have

Does That Include My Giant Panda's S rank Jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 18 Oct 2009, 6:48 pm

Ok I checked It

I have

KKG - 2 S Ranked

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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 18 Oct 2009, 7:20 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 18 Oct 2009, 8:37 pm

Ok Approved. Just need another.
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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 18 Oct 2009, 10:06 pm

Disapproved with a 'Zane' level disapproval. Until this app is thoroughly checked by me. No one is to approve it but me. =3
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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeMon 19 Oct 2009, 1:18 am

You idiot Zane he needs Two approvals monkey, Read.
So judge his app then Approve it, Got it good.
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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeMon 19 Oct 2009, 6:46 am

Remove:
Spoiler:
-Can't seal someone's spirit like this. It's far too much like that S rank the third used. =3
-And it would be considered Fuuinjutsu. ~

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-Sorry, Summonings can only have one element. Wood is perfect for a panda, it's like, uber epicness. =D
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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeMon 19 Oct 2009, 7:20 pm

ok removed
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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeTue 20 Oct 2009, 4:21 pm

Looks good, so far. Lightning Jutsu's are okay. Make sure to put drawbacks on all Jutsu B and above. From Minor to Major drawbacks please. :)
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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 24 Jan 2010, 6:27 pm

Okay Approved or Not
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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 24 Jan 2010, 6:34 pm

Hold up.

-Lightning Tentacle is far too much like my Ranmyaku Shitsunen. Remove it.

-Your Ace Jutsu, Destroying molecules? Hell no. We banned a clan like that for manipulating molecules, Remove it or change it.

-Will look it over.
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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 24 Jan 2010, 6:50 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 24 Jan 2010, 7:24 pm

Ok Bump going for Kaguya's Group
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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 24 Jan 2010, 7:51 pm

We're not accepting Missing Nin.


Chakra Restoration Seal: Activation [Fukkatsu Gokuin no Chakra: Akutibe-shon]:
Rank: A
Element: -
Skill: Ninjutsu
Description:
This technique activates the inner chakra seal placed inside of Naito's chakra network, which was given to him by Juuko Anma. When the seal is activated, it will release a large amount of chakra through Naito's entire body, replenishing all lost chakra. If no chakra has been used prior to the activation of the inner seal, the user's body will overflow with chakra. Thus, it can be seen as an aura of chakra emitted by the user. This technique is very resourceful, however, once the seal has been activated, it will not close until all of the chakra it stores is released into the body. Also, the user's body must first replenish the chakra inside of the seal, before his normal chakra will start to rebuild. In Naito’s case, it takes him twice as long to replenish all of his chakra.

---Also remove this.
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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 24 Jan 2010, 11:10 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 24 Jan 2010, 11:18 pm

Wood is KKG element. Remove that from the Panda. And you still have Missing Nin.
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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 24 Jan 2010, 11:19 pm

Its Karyuudo Now You Happy!

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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 24 Jan 2010, 11:36 pm

Name: Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Element:water
Skill: Ninjutsu
Description: This jutsu is a highly effective cover technique. It blankets an area in a thick fog, confusing the senses of the enemy.

Remove.

And Blaze element is not allowed here. No one starts out as S rank..so you would just be A ranked.
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PostSubject: Re: Naito Kumori   Naito Kumori Icon_minitimeSun 24 Jan 2010, 11:40 pm

Ok Changed

A-Rank Is Good Enough
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