Costum Jutsu's

Aohigi: Gokouin no Hayashi [Green Secret Technique: Five Descendants of the Forest]
Rank: A
Gokouin no Hayashi is a technique developed by Daedalus in order to control the five puppets of the forest, also created by himself. To use the puppets, he must first summon them from a scroll, then use a special style for controlling them, such as this one.

APPROVED

Your puppets were as well

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Lightning Static Clones
Element: Lightning
Rank: C/B
Effect: 3 clones shows up and the clones are full of lightning static, clones won't disappear unless there is an element to beat lightning.

Needs to be S rank. The Normal shadow clone is b rank... this one creates real clones that can only be killed by a certain element.

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name:White Light Expansion
Element: Lightning
Rank: C
Effect: the white light is to distract the enemy's eyes, its like when you can't look at the sun for a long period of time.

Needs more detail.

-Type: ninjutsu
Name; Sprouting Fire Flower
Element: Fire
Rank; A
Effect: When the ground is heated up, even the enemy can'y=y=t feel it, hear, smell, or see it. It will soon come out of the ground and holds the enemy in place so the enemy can't move. (Just like the Shadow Jutsus that shikamaru uses in the manga series.)

Can't have a technique similar to the Naras without being a Nara. Additionally, you can't say the enemy won't feel the ground heating up... because they probably will.

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Fire tsunamis
Element: Fire
Rank: A
Effect: A large falt land/ground changes into waves that is made out of fire and makes large tsunamis at the enemy

S rank.

-Type; Ninjutsu
name: Fire prison Jutsu
Element: Fire
Rank: A
Effect: Makes a sherical fire ball with the enemy inside it of the prison. (just like Zabuza's water prison Jutsu but this one is fire.)

I don't think so. The water prison olds people in place and allows them to breathe. A fire prison cts off oxygen and would burn them to death. Needs to be S rank.

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Firebolt Storm Technique
Element; Fire and Lightning
Rank: A
Effect: A storm comes over head of the battlefield that is full of fire and lightning, fire goes down from the storm clouds to the ground to burn everything down below the area and lightning can cause more damage

This needs to be an S too, unless you weaken it. Generally any kind of fire storm/twister is a pretty crazy technique. Also, your using more then one element at a time, which is extremely hard to do.

Mhhhph, I edited most of them. I deleted like 2 or three that i dont need and now i am at my limit for S-ranks.

...

Well, this is fine to me...

APPROVED

Uhmmm, what about mine? I edited it though. >.<

Bug communication - Ninjutsu - Rank C - Bloodline Ability
Aburame clan are able to communicate with bugs with telepathy.

APPROVED

Kunkato Yoru Uchiha wrote:

Lightning jutsus-

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Blazing Lightning-Bolt jutsu
Element: Lightning
Rank: B
Effect: creates few lightning-balls and attacks the enemy front-on randomly

I'm the mod who is topping the list of disapproved jutsus. So you are unlucky that I'm checking these jutsus out ^^
However, here we go: This one is Approved. ^^
[quote="jutsu]
-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Lightning Vines
Element: Lightning
Rank: B
Effect: with long vines of lightning goes to the enemy and the ends' of the vines sticks to the enemy's head and absorbs little-bit of chakra and puts the enemy into sleep. [/quote]
Absorbing chakra? I have only seen in the manga that earth elemental has been able to do that or bloodline ability. Not approved.

jutsu wrote:

-Type:Ninjutsu
Name: Lightning Cells Trapdoor
Element: Lightning
Rank: A
Effect: a trapdoor/cage of lightning surrounds the enemy so that the enemy is stuck inside the cage.

Approved

jutsu wrote:

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name:White Light Expansion
Element: Lightning
Rank: C
Effect: the white light is to distract the enemy's eyes, its like when you can't look at the sun for a long period of time. Makes the enemy easier to be targetted with attacks.

I think light or darkness manipulation bloodline is needed. Not approved.

jutsu wrote:

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Black Lightning Wolf
Element: Lightning
Rank: A
Effect: a 14 feet tall and 26 feet wide wolf full of lightning of the color black, the large wolf rapidly attacks the enemy and tries to swllows the enemy whole, alive. Then knock the enemy out/into unconscious.

Approved

jutsu wrote:

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Rapid Blue Thunder Whip
Element: Lightning
Rank: A
Effect: 7 long blue lightning vines comes out of user's hands, the 5 vines which holds the enemy in place- the right arm, right leg, left arm, left leg, and the neck. The 5 vines starts to absorbs chakra to the user's body and the other 2 vines can rapidly whips the enemy to unconscious.

Not approved because of the property to chakra absorb.

jutsu wrote:

Fire jutsus:
-Type:Ninjutsu
Name: Fire Style: Blazing Fire Cut
Element: Fire
Rank:B
Effect: small fireballs flys around the enemy fast enough to make it look full of fire around the enemy position and randomly hits the enemy from above, right-side,left-side,front, and behind.

That is crazy good chakra control. If not anyone else will disapprove this. This will be counted as approved .

jutsu wrote:

-Type; Ninjutsu
Name; Fire Style Blast Firebal technique
Element: Fire
Rank: A
Effect: When you start to blow the fire, it goes at top speed of 75 miles per hour at the enemy.

I don't know anything about speed regulations ^^ Someone else needs to ook at this.

jutsu wrote:

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Fire Winds Target
Element: Fire
Rank: A
Effect: Long strips of fire that goes through air like the fast winds and gathered in circles around the enemy and tights the fire strips around the enemy to trap the enemy.

I don't understand the description.

jutsu wrote:

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Firebolt Storm Technique
Element; Fire and Lightning
Rank: S
Effect: A storm comes over head of the battlefield that is full of fire and lightning, fire goes down from the storm clouds to the ground to burn everything down below the area and lightning can cause more damage

Well, since it's S rank. I guess anything is alright then ^^
Approved.

jutsu wrote:

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Swaying Fireball Twister
Element: Fire
Rank: B
Effect: A narrow line of fire that twists around clockwise for more force and stregth and hits the enemy

It grows stronger because it goes in circles? Are you sure you are not trying to steal a property from wind elemental?

jutsu wrote:

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Fire tsunamis
Element: Fire
Rank: S
Effect: A large falt land/ground changes into waves that is made out of fire and makes large tsunamis at the enemy

approved =)
phew I'm getting tired. Soon done... soon done... gottta keep on going

jutsu wrote:

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name; Firebolt Dragon Attack
Element: Fire
Rank: B
Effect: A very large alie fire dragon form and randomly attacks the enemy and the surroundings around the enemy

I guess you are trying to copy the water dragon technique to the fire elemental. But fire elemental is a lot diffrent than water.

If Naito is topping the disapprove I wont do that I'll just go let you fix it

Kunkato Yoru Uchiha wrote:

Lightning jutsus-

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Blazing Lightning-Bolt jutsu
Element: Lightning
Rank: B
Effect: creates few lightning-balls and attacks the enemy front-on randomly

Range and size

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Lightning Vines
Element: Lightning
Rank: B
Effect: with long vines of lightning goes to the enemy and the ends' of the vines sticks to the enemy's head and absorbs little-bit of chakra and puts the enemy into sleep.

Could you explain how does the vines absorb chakra ad puts the enemy into sleep?

-Type:Ninjutsu
Name: Lightning Cells Trapdoor
Element: Lightning
Rank: A
Effect: a trapdoor/cage of lightning surrounds the enemy so that the enemy is stuck inside the cage.

Where did the trapdoor or cage came? and size

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name:White Light Expansion
Element: Lightning
Rank: C
Effect: the white light is to distract the enemy's eyes, its like when you can't look at the sun for a long period of time. Makes the enemy easier to be targetted with attacks.

Maybe change the description on you make a large lightning ball that it can blind all who look at it.(But seriously there are other person who doesn't rely on eye sight0

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Black Lightning Wolf
Element: Lightning
Rank: A
Effect: a 14 feet tall and 26 feet wide wolf full of lightning of the color black, the large wolf rapidly attacks the enemy and tries to swllows the enemy whole, alive. Then knock the enemy out/into unconscious.

Maybe this is a summon

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Rapid Blue Thunder Whip
Element: Lightning
Rank: A
Effect: 7 long blue lightning vines comes out of user's hands, the 5 vines which holds the enemy in place- the right arm, right leg, left arm, left leg, and the neck. The 5 vines starts to absorbs chakra to the user's body and the other 2 vines can rapidly whips the enemy to unconscious.

Are you the one who absorbs chakra and you just channel it to the vines

Fire jutsus:
-Type:Ninjutsu
Name: Fire Style: Blazing Fire Cut
Element: Fire
Rank:B
Effect: small fireballs flys around the enemy fast enough to make it look full of fire around the enemy position and randomly hits the enemy from above, right-side,left-side,front, and behind.

The direction is deadly yet needs to be tone down in the direction you cant be in all direction in one time (unless you make a clone)

-Type; Ninjutsu
Name; Fire Style Blast Firebal technique
Element: Fire
Rank: A
Effect: When you start to blow the fire, it goes at top speed of 75 miles per hour at the enemy.

APPROVED

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Fire Winds Target
Element: Fire
Rank: A
Effect: Long strips of fire that goes through air like the fast winds and gathered in circles around the enemy and tights the fire strips around the enemy to trap the enemy.

APPROVED

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Firebolt Storm Technique
Element; Fire and Lightning
Rank: S
Effect: A storm comes over head of the battlefield that is full of fire and lightning, fire goes down from the storm clouds to the ground to burn everything down below the area and lightning can cause more damage

APPROVED

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Swaying Fireball Twister
Element: Fire
Rank: B
Effect: A narrow line of fire that twists around clockwise for more force and stregth and hits the enemy

APPROVED

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name: Fire tsunamis
Element: Fire
Rank: S
Effect: A large falt land/ground changes into waves that is made out of fire and makes large tsunamis at the enemy

APPROVED

-Type: Ninjutsu
Name; Firebolt Dragon Attack
Element: Fire
Rank: B
Effect: A very large alie fire dragon form and randomly attacks the enemy and the surroundings around the enemy

Fumito's right a little look like Zabuza's jutsu

Tenshin Uchiha wrote:

Jutsu Name: Chidori Eisou
Rank: A
Element: Lightning
Description: Chidori Eisou is a Lightning Element technique developed by Uchiha Sasuke. Sasuke is able to shape the Lightning Element to form an extending blade of lightning. Though unstated, this blade probably takes on Chidori's characteristics, including it's ability to cut through anything which stands in its path, allowing the sword to strike its target with ease. This attack may also be similar to Chidori Nagashi, causing the target to go numb from the electrical charge.

Jutsu Name: Chidori Nagashi
Rank: A
Element: Lightning
Description: Chidori Nagashi is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Uchiha Sasuke out of the original Chidori technique. Instead of merely focusing the electrical force to his body, Sasuke is able to extend it outside of his body and through objects which he is holding. This allows him to create a protective zone around his person. This zone of electricity can shock and immobilize his foes, presumably by attacking their nervous system.

Jutsu Name: Chidori Senbon
Rank: A
Element: Lghtning
Description: Chidori Senbon is a Lightning Element technique developed by Uchiha Sasuke. Sasuke is able to shape the Lightning Element to form senbon. Though unstated, these needles probably takes on Chidori's characteristics, including it's ability to cut through most anything which stands in its path.

Jutsu Name: Raikiri
Rank: S
Element: Lightning
Description: Raikiri is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Hatake Kakashi utilizing the Lightning Element. Raikiri allows him to cut through any foe.. It was given the nickname Raikiri after it was said Kakashi used the technique to cut a lightning bolt in two. Raikiri is used for assassination purposes. Activating the body to focus chakra to the hand, Kakashi's hand become enveloped by an electrical force. This force is their chakra altered in nature to an electrical current. By altering the shape of the force, similar to an electrical discharge, they can decide the power and range of the attack.

Jutsu Name: Kirin
Rank: S
Element: Lightning
Description: Kirin is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Tenshin out of the original Chidori technique. Tenshin will first launch fireballs into the sky above using his Gouryuuka jutsu. These fireballs will warm the atmosphere and create a powerful rising air current, which in turn generates thunderclouds. Tenshin will then form Raikiri and raise his arm to the heavens. This will allow him to channel the lightning down upon his target. Because he is merely channeling the naturally created lightning, he is able to utilize a power greater than what a ninja could create with their own elemental chakra. Because this is also natural lightning, it will travel more quickly than any ninja could dodge. Upon calling down the lightning, it will create a powerful impact with a large amount of destruction. (Tenshin only uses this move one time in every fight do to the ammount of chakra taken away when used.)

Dont say nothing cause i just learn Chidori.

APPROVED!


Except for this

Name: Raikiri(Black flame Style)
Rank: B
Element: Fire
Description: Just like a regular Raikiri this is an advanced version of the Chidori. This move can only be used once per day and consumes a giant amount of chakra. The user gathers chakra and releases it in his hand, instead of electricity a Black and red flame erupts from the users arm. If the user where to merely brush against an enemy with this attack what ever part they touched would either be on fire or burned badly.

Its the advance version of Raikiri but it has lower Rank...does that mean you improved something but you make it a lot worse?

welll i didnt wanna seem over powered so i made it a b rank so like i can roleplay to make it stronger you know

Tenshin Uchiha wrote:

welll i didnt wanna seem over powered so i made it a b rank so like i can roleplay to make it stronger you know

I cant understand ? what do you mean you'll going to RP then make it stronger?

ok thx

Snow
rank S
this jutsu is a dome of solid obsidian reinforced with chakra to increase its power to that of solid diamond. This justu is covered in a lava that pours from the user. This can trap and enemy in which case the lava flows on the inside filling it until the entire inside is covered. This jutsu can also be used on the user flowing the lava on the outside causing all enemy weapons that are weak in material to melt and all things weak in material (including flesh and bone) to melt upon touching it. can only be done when Wes is taping into duskae/dae

How does the lava get inside the dome?

That;s the only thing I think should be cleared up. Because if it pours from you, it then needs to go through the diamond hard substance somehow. In which case, there'd be some sort of weakness. Maybe just have it so that the lava is generated from the walls of the dome.

And oh, I find the name ironically funny.

hmm thx on the name thing ya umm ill change it to that

Snow
rank S
this jutsu is a dome of solid obsidian reinforced with chakra to increase its power to that of solid diamond. This justu is covered in a lava that pours from the walls of the dome upon user comand. This can trap and enemy in which case the lava flows on the inside filling it until the entire inside is covered. This jutsu can also be used on the user flowing the lava on the outside causing all enemy weapons that are weak in material to melt and all things weak in material (including flesh and bone) to melt upon touching it. can only be done when Wes is taping into duskae/dae

Your welcome, APPROVED.

Name: Dynamic entry
rank D
Dynamic Entry is a taijutsu technique used by Maito Gai. Gai will throw a kunai to distract his targets attention, he will then use his speed and agility to quickly approach and attack his opponent from their blind side.