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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
Posts : 225 Points : 413 Join date : 2009-08-31
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| Subject: The Death Bringer Sun 22 Nov 2009, 11:13 pm | |
| Name: The Death Bringer Rank: S Owner: Mezuki Appearance: - Spoiler:
Length: 15 feet Width: 2 feet Material: Unknown Weight: 25 pounds Abilities: This massive blade has the ability to drain the chakra from anything it touches and from there the blade can mold the chakra and turn it into chakra for mezuki or power itself with the chakra. The blade only has the ability to drain up to 5% of chakra when it hits a enemy using the spikes on each side to drain the chakra from the enemy and drain into the blade. As it drains more and more chakra the blade can use the chakra to create more and more barbs all over the blade to make it much easier to drain chakra. The blade only drains chakra when it hits the skin but drains 5% chakra each strike every 5% of chakra put into the sword adding a section of spines on the sword. The blade is only able to drain chakra from normal ninja a ninja that don't have their bijuu forms activated un like the samehada Info: The death bringer was said to be the long lost brother of the samehada being able to drain only normal ninja instead of bijuu like the samehada. The weapon was said to belong to a person who was very close to kisame almost like a brother but died the blade being hidden to prevent its power from being abused. A lone swordsman came across the sword but the power from the sword had to be sealed to prevent it from destroying the owner. The blade is actually weaker then the samehada being almost as a little brother as it lacks the draining abilities and livelyness of the samehada. As the swordsman adventured mezuki attacked the man and slayed him for his sword and now uses it to combat enemies at a close range. Name: Full Release: The god of death Rank: S Element: N/A Requirement: Blood Sacrifice Description: Mezuki cuts both his hands on the blade on each side the blood traveling all around the blade making a lining of blood. After the blood reaches the very end of the sword which takes a post the blade compeltely transforms a long with Mezuki. The blade then morphs and molds into a much different looking sword that seems to have a large blinking eye in the center. The blade itself is very large and seems almost like flesh now as the blade has come a live. Mezuki also completely transforms from his original small appearance becoming a large demon standing at 7 feet tall. The demon has a large wingspan as well each wing being 9 feet allowing him to fly and manuver in the air with ease. Mezuki's body becomes covered in fur his hands and feet growing rapidly and sprouting large claws. Mezuki has almost a wolf like appearance in thie form and can use only kenjutsu and genjutsu in this form. The chakra draining ability of the sword also jumps to 15% and his strength goes to its full potential allowing him to cause large fissures in the earth with only a flick of his finger his speed however staying the same. His endurance also becomes almost god like allowing him to take even the most powerful strikes and as long as they aren't death blows he is able to take the hit without even seeming like he was hit.
Last edited by The Moth man on Fri 27 Nov 2009, 3:29 pm; edited 10 times in total | |
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Kamoku Willow
Posts : 2830 Points : 383 Join date : 2008-06-07 Age : 32 Location : taking a nap
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| Subject: Re: The Death Bringer Mon 23 Nov 2009, 12:49 am | |
| approved, though its name is a bit unorthodox. | |
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Naiko Aburame Chuunin
Posts : 94 Points : 154 Join date : 2009-10-09
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| Subject: Re: The Death Bringer Mon 23 Nov 2009, 7:41 am | |
| UNAPPROVED-
Totally Samehada(Kisame's Sword) RIPOFF.
He just changed the name and added some abilities. | |
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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
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| Subject: Re: The Death Bringer Mon 23 Nov 2009, 7:31 pm | |
| this blade isnt the samehada it isnt a live or it doesnt fuse with my body just because it drains chakra doesnt mean its the samehada another sword that can drain chakra can be made eventually besides the draining ability is weaker then the samehada | |
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Revy Izumi Missing-Nin
Posts : 1364 Points : 1849 Join date : 2009-07-27
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| Subject: Re: The Death Bringer Mon 23 Nov 2009, 10:11 pm | |
| How would a blade that large only weigh 5 pounds? | |
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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
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| Subject: Re: The Death Bringer Mon 23 Nov 2009, 11:22 pm | |
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Naiko Aburame Chuunin
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| Subject: Re: The Death Bringer Tue 24 Nov 2009, 7:49 am | |
| Actually you just editted, but before that it said that it can drain upto 5tails at a time. Wow not really Samehada eh, ...
You say its weaker?
In the INFO part:
It says there it is as strong as Samehada, wow I'm not that stupid to be fool.
Still my mind doesnt change.
Complete Samehada rip-off.
Were not talking about whos stronger Samehada or this sword.
If your sword is weaker than Samehada, that doesnt mean its not a RIP-OFF.
DENIED, | |
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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
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| Subject: Re: The Death Bringer Tue 24 Nov 2009, 7:33 pm | |
| yes i have weakened it now and i forgot the edit the history from before and ITS NOT A SAMEHADA RIP OFF since when does it turn kisame into a human and alter his powers? | |
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Naiko Aburame Chuunin
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| Subject: Re: The Death Bringer Wed 25 Nov 2009, 7:11 am | |
| - The Moth man wrote:
- yes i have weakened it now and i forgot the edit the history from before and ITS NOT A SAMEHADA RIP OFF since when does it turn kisame into a human and alter his powers?
The issue isnt how strong its abilities is, the thing is its a completely ALTERED SAMEHADA RIP-OFF. Yes you have a different ability. But you just did the inverse of Samehada's power. Comparison~ Samehada: Drains chakra When combined with Kisame turns him into a much more sharklike appearance. Death Bringer: Drains chakra When used turns you into a human AGAIN. Wow you just did the other thing. Still hadn't changed my mind, no matter how you weaken it... the problem is.. Its a Samehada Ripoff. | |
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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
Posts : 225 Points : 413 Join date : 2009-08-31
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| Subject: Re: The Death Bringer Wed 25 Nov 2009, 6:26 pm | |
| i wasen't even thinking about the shark transformation when i made this sword and in his shark form the water follows him and he is still able to use all his jutsu. When i go back into my human form i lose all my jutsu types besides kenjutsu and i lose ALL of my chakra after. And a long with that i don't fuse with my sword it reverts my character back to its human form and i still keep the sword so how is that a samehada rip off? | |
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The Fallen Angel Legendary Swordsman
Posts : 225 Points : 413 Join date : 2009-08-31
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| Subject: Re: The Death Bringer Fri 27 Nov 2009, 12:26 am | |
| i see what you mean by its a rip off well now i removed the ability of it being able to drain bijuu so it can only drain normal ninja is that what you wanted removed? | |
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Naiko Aburame Chuunin
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| Subject: Re: The Death Bringer Fri 27 Nov 2009, 7:13 am | |
| APPROVED
You do know how I work. I'm not badass, I just want everything to be fair. | |
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